Maslow's hierarchy of needs #2 part 35 pg 147 - Page 101

hey, it was great part. not much AR but had all the other characters so it was great to see friends together again.

will be back after reading the part

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sam!!! yes indeed, that was very much in time, or much before the expected, i may as well add :)

i think the AR-RM scene for me, will be one of the favorites in this fic... i loved them, from the start of RM alone to the AR showing up and being observed bit, to RM teaming up against AR, ridhima caught like an unaware wide eyed fish and armaan refusing as you say, 'to rise to the bait' :D yes! loved it all... had me grinning more than i can say...

RM... the sudden break in their paradise this way... was indeed unexpected. however, with that in agreement to your apprehension, i stop. cause im certain, that i like the way you took it.... armaan, in his simple playful intent giving that impetus RM stress upon as need by them, AR only was neat... it wasnt exactly a direct impetus, but in the not so long run im guessing its going to show a lull after the storm :D and a quickie, i thought of muskaan's predicament... and i think, whimsical as it sounds, i'd be it, if i was her :) in a very subtle way, a consequential fact!

the seniors were the gathering lose ends part, and im guessing the coffee after hospital will see some action, atleast verbal... and the AR in the rear was ... well.. just the only bit of the udate im going to not quite comment about... in my wait for the next!... whenevr that will be ... its evident the work is having you tied down, so take it in your own pace... the updates are always a delight, but your convenience definitely matters!

cheers!

nj

fab parts, sam!! I just got caught up on like 4 of them. sorry for not commenting on those, i've just been quite busy with school and everything else.

Hey Sam,

Finally I managed to read all your updates, I don't even remember the last part of yours that I read; my mistake, as usual. I guess you could call it a bad habit, but when there are things bothering me, I like to stay away from things that make me ponder over stuff. I don't think I am making any sense with my statement. Anyways forget my blabbering, I loved the way you handled the whole situation with Ridz's dad in the hospital, it managed to revive some memories. I don't know if I was surprised or at lost for words with the ease with which you broke the ice between the two (AR). It felt as if there was never any friction to begin with, but then I guess that is the beauty of friendship. In friendship; one can find love, but not the other way around. I liked the scene with Padma and the gang; mothers are always the pillar of strength in any household. Muskaan reminds me of a talking parrot who ends up opening her mouth at the wrong time or may be the right time in this case.

The part that followed has to be the most, urmm..I can't seem to find the right word but I guess it was just mesmerising, and it somewhat made me really nostalgic; not that I have gone through a confession of my own. It just reminded me of a time between me and a very good friend of mine at the Southbank; it's one of those memories that will remain as a very important part of my life. Hence while reading, I could only picture the tower bridge and the setting sun, instead of band stand. The confession was overdue, and I was so glad that Ridz was the first one to reciprocate her feelings, even if it was indirectly. While reading the part, I was grinning from ear to ear, for more than one reason.

The next part was full of AR, not that I am complaining. The follow up after the confession was great; it was not over the top soppy. The whole conversation seemed as if it was taking place between two friends, rather than two lovers who had just confessed. I guess that is the beauty between friends when they become lovers, the relationship of friendship between the two, would always remain the first priority. Hearing those three words from the one you want to, makes a big difference, so I can imagine Armaan's relief on hearing them.

The Rahul and Muskaan conversation was like as always good to read. Muskaan and Rahul act like a catalyst in the AR reaction.

Have I told you Sam, that Anjali by far is my favourite character in this fic for some unknown reason, I always await her part. I guess may be the point being, that she somewhat reminds me of a good friend of mine. I guess Anjali will not be very pleased, when she doesn't see the disappointment in Armaan's reaction of not going to Delhi.

I liked the words of exchange between A and R, Ridz's insecurities was anticipated after the inner turmoil the girl had been through in the past few days. I liked the way you handled Armaan's initial urgings for her to understand, later the agitations and then finally the acceptance of a possibility that may be there is some truth that he has been completely avoiding. Like I mentioned previously too, that all the characters in your FF are very real, hence none of them are selfless and born with a halo. That is why I liked Armaan's persistent about being right and his irritation towards her, it shows that he is not self righteous.

Armaan's thoughts following the beach talk in the previous part was written magnificently. I liked this whole chapter, coz it tied up many loose ends; Armaan's self analysis about himself, and his relationship with Anjali. It was an absolute treat to read the way you penned his thoughts; you really are a gem of a writer. Padma's thoughts were even more of a pleasure to read, I am glad you gave her some screen time too. The whole thought process reminded me of my mum for an unknown yet known reason, especially a recent conversation that I shared with her.

For me, the highlight of this part was the Ankit and Anjali portion, nothing else matched up to this conversation. The two lost souls who just want some attention from their respective object of affection were seen to be finding comfort with each others words. I am glad that Ankit was the one to try and put forth the obvious to Anjali, even though Atul had tried to do it subtly before, but being frank is the honest policy and it sometimes manages to do the needful. Though I am still not sure that the obvious has sunk in to Anjali, or if it has, then she is trying her level best to avoid it as much and for as log as she can. This is going to lead to a terrible heart break, but I think she will show strong courage and pull herself through it all.

Anjali's firm response towards Ankit's predicament did not come as a surprise, coz her character has always been of a go-getter and one who does not seem to let herself be overwhelmed by emotions. Though Ankit's response was sure shot a revelation to me. I had mentioned previously that I was not very fond of Ankit, but I think I might have to take my words back; I actually really liked him in this part.

The mother- daughter conversation was a very nice read it's hard to get away from mother's scrutiny; there is not a trick in the book that they miss. Can I say that I am missing Atul and his reverend ways. (Sorry bad joke.)

Now coming to the recent part, I liked the Rahul and Muskaan teasing session. Poor Ridz everyone having a hearty laugh at her expense, and Armaan too joining the two devils. How conveniently did Armaan turn the table away from him, clever ploy to stay away from the firing line, but have to give it to Muskaan to pull it back just before the target escaped, now that's how you do it.

The conversation between Armaan, Anjali, Ankit and Atul was just so aptly written, there were many things spoken, and many unspoken, yet it was the unspoken that was registered in the case of Ankit and Armaan. I do hope for the sake of Anjali, that Armaan is able to have that dreaded conversation soon, and put her out of misery. At first I thought Atul seemed more of the observant one within the group, though Ankit seems to be taking up his position..jokes apart, he really does care a lot about Anjali.

I really hope Armaan manages to sort his priorities out sooner rather than later, especially after Ankit's minor outburst. Atul as usual our in house reverend to the rescue, though I have a complaint, why don't we get more of him Sam. (Just kidding, I know how difficult it must get to fulfil everyone's demands, so I take my complaint back.😳)

Sam, you better not be thinking about sending Ridz away to Delhi, now that would be pure evil. I am awaiting the time when Armaan will spill the beans to Atul, the guy needs to know before the others, though I have a feeling that you might actually get him to admit in front of everyone. Or I might be completely wrong, will wait for it.

Rahul and Muskaan's conversation was nothing short than interesting, I use that precise word just because I guess 'love does make a fool out of a man'. We witnessed a similar yet different scenario with Armaan and Ridz leading to an acceptance of their feelings. I hope a similar outcome is our way with these two as well. Neither of the two was at fault at the start of the argument, yet at the end Rahul got irritated and in that rash moment he let his anger rule his tongue. Love is an act of endless forgiveness, so hopefully Muskaan will forgive him.

The AR part was sweet, I liked the cute banter between the two and I am glad that they both acknowledged Anjali's feelings. I must mention though I am a fan of Shakespeare, the taming of the shrew is one book that I have avoided reading for some odd reason.

I am terribly sorry for the delay in my commenting, my heartiest apologies again, but I do hope this comment makes up for the lack of it on the previous parts. I hope I made even the slightest of sense, it is early morning here, but I could not leave it impending any longer.

Cairo sounds wonderful, I do hope you have settled in well at your new house and office and country. The cruise on the Nile with your hubby sounded really romantic, hope you had a delightful ride.😳

Sam, Arab men have ways of getting their work done, or in your case not done.. so don't fall for their delightful smiles. I didn't do a bukra and finally wrote down a comment, which was long over due. I remember you mentioning that 'Gimme hope Jo'anna' by Eddy Grant being your favourite song, I just heard him sing that song in the IPL final, and I understand why it is your favourite.

Thank you for all the PMs, I hope it wasn't of a hassle to you.

Tc

Luv

Huma

wow i can honestly say i wasnt expecting such a quick update from you sam, so i am pleasantly surprised!
awwww you really broke my heart with RM today :( i was really sad to see their spat, it was quite a distressing argument! muskaan misjudging rahul and rahul misjudging muskaan...i guess they are in a similar situation as AR were in a few updates back! but at least their feelings were presented! and rahul regretted it by the end! i have full faith in them resolving this! i hope they patch up soon....and im really looking forward to a confession :D
RM pulling ARs leg was sooo much fun! i was thoroughly entertained! and armaan was able to get in a gab as well! hehe poor ridz, i can imagine her embarrassment! but i guess thats what she gets for wanting to hide their relationship!
anjali was a bit clueless as to why armaan was cool with staying in bombay! either she really didnt catch on or she was chosing to ignore the obvious! but ankit picked up on it, and also voices his concern with losing freindships! i would like to see ankit confront armaan or riddhima!
awww man AR are tooo cute! its really great that riddhima understood armaan without him having to say anything! he is very lucky to have such a suportive girl! i loved the "shrew" bit! was quite fitting! cant say im a fan of that one tho, didnt quite enjoy the idea behind it.
im looking forward to armaan confronting anjali...its going to be quite interesting! ohh and i wonder if they will take one of the musketeers on the volunteering program with them!
continue soon :)

p.s hows 'surviving egyptian arabic' going for ya? hope the workmen are doing a good job!

hi.. sam
actually i have my exams upto 10th june....
its a hectic schedule..
i am sorry my reply is gonna be small..
it was a wonderful epi
the way rahula nd mushlaan pulled the leg od ridz
then the blowdown bet. rahul and muskaan was great...
at least the emotions are out in the open..
and last the convo bet. armaan and ridz was cute...

thanks for the pm

sorry again as i wont be able to reply to u in the future epi...

take care..
bye!!!

hey great update sam...loved it

hey sam not reading ffs nw cz of exms..will comment onc exms get over..tkcr