&time stood still:MayUr FF(Last Pt Upted ,pg.31)

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

OMG sunita.........awesome update yaar

the situation is quite difficult for both mayank and nupur

i am happy that mayank is not playaing on nups......but i thnk mayank is gonna get a terrified rxn fro nups........

gr8 work,awesome update......do continue as soon as possible

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Kiran1018

@Kiran1018

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

absolutely great detail of each emotion...keep writing!

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Ananya

@ananya_s

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

AMAZING sunita!!!! u rock.......seriously i cud FEEL wat nupz was feeling....everything abt dis update was pure nd sincere dat well....ughh i dnt knw wat 2 say........nd yes mayu has to tell her d truth.....plz continue soon

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#164

superb part yaar.i wish he tell her or else he suffer afterwards.update soon.pm me.😊

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@MoccoLatte

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#165

sunita i could actually imagine the kiss between Mayur! Gosh its soo cutee!!😳

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Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

sunita i dont hv words 2 say... u r a really blessed wruter... i had tears in my eyes in da cute mayur scenes... this is a proof of ur realistic writings... thanx 4 givin us such cool updates.... actually keep updatin

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Sunita

@whatsername

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#167

Thanks A Million Everyone ... i myself feel so sorry for Mayank. dnt wanna make him suffer :( .. i'll keep updating , as long as u guys want me to :):)

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Ayesha

@ayeshaD

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Posted: 16 years ago

#168

Sunita. This update has left me speechless. I can completely relate to Mayank's emotions...been through something like this myself. Love the way you expressed each and every emotion. You're tooo goood at this! Thanks a million. Love ya 🤗 and do try to update sooonnn.... p.s. thanks for pming me! 😊