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Posted: 16 years ago
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ROCKING PART SREEJOYEE...
PLEASE CONTINUE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE...
OMG... I CAN NOT WAIT YAAR... SERIOUSLY....
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART...
U R WRITING AMAZINGLY...
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON...
LUV
DEEPU :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part - 7

Shilpa:Hi guys..kaise ho??? Atul: Main to thik-shik hoon and tum batao..tumhare tabiyat ko kya hua? Shilpa:Kuch nahi ..bas thoda sa bukhaar hai..dats all.. Atul:Pagal ho kya??bukhaar aur woh bhi tumhe???bukhaar tumhare paas aake nbolenge ki sry wrong number.. Abhi:Humen bhi dekho yaar hum bhi yahan aae hai.. Shilpa:Atul..tum is Abhi ke bache ko kyun le aae ho??Nahi yaar mazak kar rahi thi..waise kaise ho Abhi..Modi..hehhe Abhi:Main bhi fyn-shyn hoon and tum batao..suna ki tum thik nahi ho??waise hua kya hai?? Shilpa:Bas thoda fever hai..dats all yaar Abhi:Yaar bimaar tumko dekhkar ...daar ke mare bhaag jaega.. Shilpa:Ok..baba..so tum log yahan wait karo main do minute mainn aati hoon
Abhi & Atul:Par jaldi aana.ok..
Abhi..shilpa ke ghar ke books ko dekhta hai..tab use Ek diary militi hai..
Abhi:Yeh diary kiska hai..??
Atul:Shilpa ka hi hoga..
Abhi":Personal diary lagta hai..mujhe nahi padhna cahiye..
Atul:Oyyeee Shilpa diary maintain nahi karti..
Abhi:phir bhi..kisi ke permission ke bagaer diary ko haath tak nahi lagana cahiye..
Atul:Haan baat to sahi hai..
Shilpa enters the room..
Shilpa:so aaj humari yaar aapko kaise aae?
Abhi:Kya kahe..aaj subah se kisi ne jhagda bhi to nahi kiya na islia..
Shilpa:Iska matlab tum mujhe nahi tum mere fighting ko miss kar rahe the..
Abhi:Nahi..(in slow voice)
Shilpa:So tum, books ke wahan pe diary kya padh rahe ho??
Abhi:Tumhari diary padh raha tha.......nahi yaar maine tumhari diary nahi padhi..
Atul:Haan haan tum dono hi baten karo..mujhe to sab yahan bhool hi gae hai na..
Shilpa and Abhi:Nahi yaar
(Dono dono ki aur dekhte hai)
Shilpa sar neecha kar leti hai..
Abhi:Waise ek baat kahoon..tum jeans main bahut sunder lagti hoo
Shilpa:thanx ...
Shilpa in very slow voice:yeh agar koi aur kehta to mujhe acha lagta..chodo..yeh sab..
Abhi heard wat shilpa said..bt he pretended as if nthng happened.
Atul:So...shilpu..abhi hum chalte hai ghar okk..
Abhi:Haan mujhe bhi jana hai..
Shilpa :Ok bye..yaar and thanx aane ke lia..
Atul:Kal clg nahi aae to dekhlena main tumse kabhi baat nahi karonga...
Shilpa:Ok baba..
Abhi:smiles and goes..
Both reached home..
Abhi:Shilpa ko kuch to hua hai..woh bahut different behave kar rahi thi..cahe jo bhi ko mujhe pata karna padega ki usse hua kya hai..
Armaan goes for shopping with sukriti..and den drops her home..
Sukriti:ek baat kahon?
Armaan:haan jaan
Sukriti:Pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai..ki tumhare and shilpa ke gehri dosti ke peeche pyaar chupa hai..
Armaan:Woh pyaar nahi..woh to dosti hai..pyaar main sirf aur sirf tumse karta hoon..
Sukriti:phir bhi...ujhe aisa lagta hai..
Armaan:apne yeh soch kisi aur kaam main use karna..Waise bye,...miss u...luv u...aaj raat ko main call kartonga sona nahi okk..
Sukriti:Ok bye..luv u too..
Armaan reaches home...and says:yeh sukriti bilkul pagal hai..pata nahi dosti ko kya samajh rahi hai..main kal clg jakar shilpa ko sab sach sach bata donga mere and sukriti ke rishte ke baren main..'
Kya Abhi jaan pata hai..shilpa ke upset hone ka reason??
Kya Armaan ko pata chalega usse shilpa ke pyaar ke baren main???
Kya sukriti apna galat faimi mita paegi?
Kya atul dhoon paega apne lia koi ladki??
Kya Abhi pyaar karega shilpa se???
Janne ke lia wait for part 8..
plz do comment
luv
$reejoyee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey sreejoyee,
great part yaar....
waiting for the next part...
continue as soon as possible....
hope armaan n shilpa are together...
y is sukriti doing all this when she knows that shilpa loves armaan...
hmmm.. have to wait n see...
ok then...
kal mere liye school hain...
abhi jaake so jaoongi...
luv
deepu :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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pART -8

Next day every1 goes to da clg..

Sukriti:Hii..atul..howz u yaar??

Atul:Hii..kaise ho?Armaan kahan hai?

Sukriti:Mujhse zyada tumhe pata hona cahiye na uske baren main

Atul:Araay yeh baat to mujhe kehni cahiye thi..

Sukriti:Woh dekho Mr.Abhimayu Modi aa raha hai..

Atul:Hii..dude..kaise ho yaar??

Abhi:Rocking as always..WAT ABT U GUYS?

Atul:Main bhi mast hoon..waise shilpa dikhae nahi de rahi hai..hai kahan woh..

Abhi:Subah se abhi tak nahi dekha maine use..

Sukriti:waise yeh armaan bhi to nahi aaya abhi tak.

Atul:woh aa jaega bt yeh shilpa;..

Bell Rang dat tym..atul waited 4 shilpa bt she didnt come..

So he went to the class room..

Abhi:Mrs.Anjum..ka class hai and shilpa abhi tak nahi aae..aaj bahut daat padegi ussee....abhi chalo atul nahi to humen bhi uske wajah se daat padegi..

Atul:Chalo

Mrs.Anjum enters the class

Mrs.Anjum:Good morning students..Are all present today?

All of them:yes mam

Bahar se aawaj aae:sry mam..i am late 2day..

All saw dat whop da 1 so late 2day..dat was none other then humari shilpa.

Shilpa:Mam..kya karon..aaj subah subah neend se dere se uthi..den khana khane baithi to khana dress pe lag gaya..den dress change ki..then bus pakdi..den..den...den..den..den..den..................she goes on..

Every1 laughs.,..

Mrs Anjum:silence class..ok shilpa jao baith jaon apne seat poar and tumhari yeh roz roz ke excuses se main tang aa gae hoon..next tym se no bahana..

Shilpa:mam main bahana nahi maar rahi thi..actually na....

Mrs.Anjum:bas bas phir se shuru mat ho jana..

Shilpa:mam aap itna insist kar hi rahe ho to..main chup hi ho jati hoon

Mrs.Anjum:Ok shilpa..Ab plz chuppi..saadh lo..

Atul:Kya mast entry mari yaar tumne..

Shilpa:Waise main hoon hi lakhon main ek..Koi shak..

Atul:Nahi..

(did ny1 notice dat shilpa was laughing..2day..after such a incident she was laughing..bt how did she control her self..)

Atul:waise aaj tum itna khush kyun ho?

Shilpa:Kya..aise hi has nahi sakti kya?

Abhi:Says:shhhhhh..shhh..mam ne sun lia to tum logon ki watt lag jaegi..

Shilpa:laughs:Hhehhee..ok baba..

Shilpa in slow voice:Waise...main khush islia hoon kyunki..main Armaan ko khush dekh rahi hoon..yu kehte hai na..jab aap kisi se sachha pyaar karte ho to ..uske khushi ke lia kuch bhi kar sakte ho..bas islia..And ab mujhe yeh raaz chupana hoga ki main kabhi Armaan se pyaar kiya karti thi....

Class wAs over..mam padha ke chali jaati hai..

Sukriti:Hi shilpa ...kaise ho..??aaj tum itna has kyun rahi ho??is khushi ka koi wajah???

Shilpa:Main islia hass rahi hoon kyunki maine tumhe ulllu banaya..main Armaan se pyaar -vyaar nahi kuch karti..Woh bas ek silly prank tha..Tum sach main yehi soch rahi thi na ki main and armaan....main pagal hoon kya????armaan ke saath 2 min raho to pagal ho jati hoon and poori zindegi bhar...tab to main mental hospital main pahuch jaongi..hehhe

Sukriti:Tum sach to keh rahi ho na?

Shilpa:Nahi jhoot.............araay yaar sach hi bol rahi hoon..

Abhi:Hiii..shilpa..kaise hai tumhari tabiyat..

Shilpa:main to cool hoon..and tum kaise ho??

Abhi..in slow voice:tum thik ho to main bhi thik hi rahonga na..

Shilpa:Yu dheere dheere kya keh rahe ho??

Abhi:Main keh raha tha ki main bhi thik hi hoon..

Shilpa:Atul Kahan gaya??

Atul:Main yahin hoon..bas clg main ek new ladki aane wali hai...bas dekh raha tha ki woh aae ki nahi..

Kya Atul ko koi milega???

Armaan ko pata chalege shilpa ke baren main??

Sukriti ke doubts kya clear hote hai??

Shilpa:kya apna pyaar chupa pati hai sabse..???

Abhi kya shilpa se pyaar karte hai??

yeh janne ke lia wait for part 9..

Plzd comment on it.,.

Luv

sreejoyee

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sree,
awesome dear.........i loved it.....so abhi is starting to fall for shilpa and awww.....shilpa trying to hide her feelings for armaan..sooo sad..hope armaan realises it soon.........do continue soon!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ammy yaar i hv jst caught up wth ur ff nd it ws seriously superb yaar i jst lvd it yaar shilpa ws awwwwwwwwww sacrificed her luv bcz he ws happy wth sukriti nd i dnt think yaar sukriti seriously luv him nd abhi also start falling for shilpa nd ar luvs her i hope son he wll realize tht its nt only friendship lts see nd now shilpa also get bck to normal bubbly nd atul hahaha kuch nahi ho sakta cnt wait cont soooooooooon nd plzzz pm me whn u gonna nxt update
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello sreejoyee,
Waiting eagerly yaar...
Can not wait anymore...
Please post the next part as soon as possible....
Ur story is amazing...
Good to see shilpa back into laughing codition....
Continue soon...
Luv
Deepu :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART-9

KAHANI MAIN TWIST..

Entry of a new gal in the clg....

Every1 boys ..gals both looking @ her..

Atul:Oh my god..shez so preety

Shilpa:Chal abhi shayad tumhe koi mill jaega

Abhi:Yaar..she so beautiful..Atul ..very bad.,...koi apne bhabhi ko aisa aakhen faad faad ke thodi na dekhta hai..very bad..

Atul:Araat tum galat bol rahga hai..yeh teri bhabhi hai..meri nahi..

Abhi:mera

Atul:mera

Abhi:mera

Atul:mera

Shilpa:shouts: Baap re baap..chup karo tum dono..kya mera mera laga rakha hai..Pagal ho kya..ek ladki ke lia aise baat kar rahe ho???This is too much ..Ek ladki dekhi nahi ki uske peeche padh gae,,tumlog kya samjho pyaar kya hota hai.tum log ke lia to ladki tympass hai..Main atul ko blame nahi karti kyunki wah pehle aisa nahi tha..Abhi woh tumhare saath milkar aisa ban gaya hai..Kisi ko agar achi baat nahi sikha sakte..to atleast bura baten to mat sikhaon..tum pagal ho..kyun aae tum yahan...tumhare aane ke baad hi mere lyf main aisa hua..

Abhi:Bas itni se baat pe itna kyun bhadak rahi ho?

Shilpa:Bas itni se baat????tum isse bas itni se baat kehte ho???

Atul:Shilpa..plz 4 god's sake chup ho jaon..plz sab yahan dekh rahe hai..plz shilpa...

Abhi:Shilpa enough is enough..tumne aaj bahut kuch keh dia..but main islia chup baitha hoon kyunki....Main..

Shilpa:Chup kyun ho gae???jaldi se kuch bahana dhoondo and bata do..Tum..u r just impossible..plz get lost frm here..

Shilpa Armaan ka gussa Abhi pe jhadti hai..

Abhi feels very bad and just goes away frm Shilpa's eyes..

Shilpa:Rote rote chali jaati hai...

Atul:sab mere wajah se hua..na hi main us new student ke peeche padhta na hi aisa hota..

Shilpa:Roti hai..Armaan and sukriti ke woh baaton ko yaad karke..

FLASH BACK:armaan:i luv u sukriti........................sukriti:i luv u armaan..

Shilpa:Oh my god..aaj maine kya kar dia..pehle to armaan ab ek ache dost ko bhi kho dia..why did i do diz...oh god wat to do..main pagal ho jaongi..why did i do diz..abhi kitna acha hai..mujhe kitna help karta hai and maine uspar armaan ka gussa dikhaya..Why did i do diz..???why why why..ab main kya karon..shilpa's eyes becomes red..and nose red aswell..she waz crying dats why...

Abhi:kya thi meri galti??shilpa ne mujhe aise kyun kahan..i think aise koi baat hai jo uske ander hi ander khae ja rahi hai..kuch to aisa hai jo woh mujhe nahi bata cahti... hai..mujhe pata lagana hi hoga...

Abhi:Goes to the class...he goes to his bench...dere he finds shilpa's personal diary..

Abhi:Kya mujhe yeh padhna cahiye????shayad nahi..yeh shilpa ki hai and mujhe uske permisasion ke bagair nahi padhna cahiye

Atul:Sry Abhi..tumhe mere wajah se shilpa se daat padi..

Abhi:Araay kya kahoon..Bina wajh hi shilpa se daat padi..araay araay shilpa aa rahi hai..dekh lena maafi mangegi..abhi..main thoda acting karongo ok bt usse batanahi ok..plz..

Atul:kabhi acting kiya hai tune??

Abhi:haan..school main kiya tha julius caesar act main kiya tha acting..

Atul:overacting mat karna ok..and best of luck..

Shilpa:Atul..suno..Ek bata poochoon??Abhi mujhse bahut naraz hai na???

Atul:Naraz..kya naraz..bilkul nahi..waise bhi woh narz hai ya nahi mujhe kaise pata chalega??

Shilpa:baat to sahi keh rahhe ho..main usse sry bolkar aati hoon ok..

Shilpa..goin 2wards Abhi..

Shilpa:Abhii..actually baat yeh hai ki.....main..ne galti se..main hosh main nahi thi tab..matlab..ki..

Abhi:Excuse me..main kya koi public property hoon..jisse jab man kiya gali dia and jab man kiya sry bolne chale aae..

Shilpa:I am really sry..Actually i can explain..

Abhi:mujhe koi explanation ki zarurat nahi..mujhe bas pata hai ki mujhe tumse dosti nahi rakhna..jisse dosti ka matlab nahi pata..main aise ladki ka dost rehna pasand nahi karonga....Araay chodo tum kya jano dosti kya hai..tumhe to itna bhi nahi pata ki pyaar kya hai..dsoton ke becch kaise pyaar se rehte hai..tumne kabhi kisiko pyaar nahi kiya na islia..Pyaar..haan pyaar shilpa...tumhe kya poata agar kabhi koi kisi ko chod deta hai to kaisa lagta hai..

Abhi to all other studens in the class:tum log yahan kya tamasha dekh rahe ho???jhagda nahi dekha kya kabhi ???

In ka jhagda dekh kar class khaali ho jata hai..

Shilpa:tum mujhse poochte ho pyaar kta hota hai?? mujhse???jisnehud kisi se pyaar kiya tha..jisko pyaar ke badle sirf aur sirf dukh mila...

Abhi:stunned..kya??kya kahan tumne??tumne pyaar ................kisse??

Shilpa:Armaan se..

Abhi Bilkul chup.......ho gaya..wat??shilpa tumne armaan ko pyaar kiya???tumne bataya nahi kabhi..

Shilpa:yeh maine kya keh dia??i am sry..actually mujhe yeh sab nahi kehna tha..

.shilpa falls in the ground....and Abhi..usse uthata hai..Shilpa was crying and saying..why did i say diz..Abhi usse gale laga leta hai..

Abhi:i am sry shilpa..mujhe yeh sab nahi poochna tha..

Shilpa:Sry to mujhe kehna cahiye..

Shilpa Abhi ke bahon main..Shilpa crying and Abhi saying plz dont cry shilpa....

To be continued...

Plz do tell me dat howz it/..and dont 4get to commnt on it

Luv

sreejoyee

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww emotional update yaar armaan ko kyu nahi dikhta tht she luv him soo mch nd abhi nic guy make a cute couple hm cnt wait cont sooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: yachna

awwwwwwwwwww emotional update yaar armaan ko kyu nahi dikhta tht she luv him soo mch nd abhi nic guy make a cute couple hm cnt wait cont sooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

Thanx for the commnts Yachna.. I am glad dat u lyked it.. Luv
sreejoyee

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