RM FF: Tu Zindagi Hai..updated pg47(30/05/11) - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: cute gauri

awesome concept!!! Fabulous starting.........waiting 4 Rahul n Muskaan meeting!!!!!
do update soon!!!

thank u soo very much,cute gauri for the comments.........will continue soon,definitely!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: muskaan_ankita

awww... That was so short and sweet! Thanks a lot for the pm! 😊

thank u ankita....... and ur most welcome,dear!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Haiye haiye haiye meri jaan! yarr idhar teri ff ki baat chal rahi hai. meri tareefein chod de. tune sach mein mujhe top pe daal diya! lol. how sweet!

hahahah!!!!!!!!kar diya teri farmaaish puri.....aakhir farmaaish ki kisne thi!!!😉
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Kaha tha naa. idk what to expect. seriously mindblowing part! i toh loved it to the max! it's very different... unique. update soon. thanx for the PM.

love you!
Komz

thanks komal for the comments.........will update soon and ur most welcome,dear!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

As promised here is the other part of the chapter:

Chapter 1B:

continued from last half......

Salaam namaste doston main hoon Moushmi.....Moushmi Basu.....is kahani ki dusri writer......hayraan pareshaan na ho jaana......is kahani ke do writers hai....ek se to aapne mulaqaat kar li hai ab mujhse miliye aur dekhiye ki ye do kahaniyaan kaise ek ho jaati hai.......Raj aur meri mulaqaat ek conference mein hui thi.......u know hum writers thode paagal hote hai.....well atleast i can say that abt me and him......actually there was this 'best writers conference' in Australia aur uske liye i had pleaded to my parents atleast 20 times..aur aakhir mein i didnt eat anything for 3 days....and since i was their only child they had to agree......lekin is shart ke saath ki main unhe har din kam se kam teen bar phone karo.....*phew*..dont ask me abt the phone bill i paid at the hotel i was staying in......ok..enough abt myself...now lets get down to the idea of this story.......so,me and raj met there since he too is a writer.....a great writer....no...actually a brilliant writer.......and since we both were the only indians there....our bonding grew strong and we became very good friends.......and coincidentally all the writers participating in this conference were staying at the same hotel....'Park Hyatt Hotel' in sydeny....a magnificent and huge place with beautiful decorations and paintings........So,one day...i guess...no no.....it was 21st December 2007 when me and raj got the idea of writing this story.......story of Muskaan....Muskaan Ghosh.....my best friend!!!!!

*Flashback*

It was 21st december 2007 and i was sitting in the restaurant of Park Hyatt Hotel sipping my hot coffee and looking out at the wonderful capital of Australia....Sydeny......It was different than calcutta......quite peaceful and pristine.......na zyaada shoor na zyaada traffic........ya phir mujhe aisa lag raha tha because i was very happy that day since my best friend had fallen in love......Gosh!!!!!!i felt like heaven had poured his blessings on me when i heard my friend's voice screaming in happiness,in joy,in excitement.............my bestest friend got what i call 'God's most precious gift'......the feeling of being in love.......i was soo happy for her......so contended that finally she had found that special person with whom she could share all her griefs,pain and suffering she had gone through.......it felt as if i was complete now.......i was full of happiness that day when she told me this good news........i came out of my thoughts when i heard my name;

Moushmi.....

I turned and i saw raj waving at me.......i smiled......he walked towards me and sat beside me.......

R- hi

M-hi...

R-kaha khoyi thi...kabse awaaz de raha tha??

M-ohh.....sorry raj...maine suna nahi......

Raj noticed that something was there which i wanted to share with him as i wasnt looking normal today....because i had heard the most mindblowing news today........wo news jiska main pata nahi kabse wait kar rahi thi......kabse intezaar tha is pal ka.......aur is raj ka na mujhe nahi pata kya hai.......jabhi main pareshaan hoti ho ya phir khush hoti ho ya phir normal nahi hoti isse sab pata chal jaata hai...pata nahi kaise........jaise my friend Muskaan knows.....obviously yaar psychologist jo hai..........i was jolted away by my thoughts when i felt raj saying something.......i looked at him and smiled.......

R(while sipping his coffee)-to madam....poochna padega...??

M(confused)-kya??

R-(rolls his eyes)-ki Ms.Moushmi Basu pareshaan kyun hai??

M(smiles)-muskaan ko pyaar ho gaya hai.....aur uski sagai 3 hafte baad hai......

I remember his look when i told him this thing....he spitted his coffee and looked at me with open-mouthed.......clearly shocked and surprised by this news........and i burst out laughing.......

R(till in a shock)-kya??????????????

M(giggles)-ha........

R(happily)-sachi??

M-arre main jhoot kyun bolungi......

R-naam kya hai uska?

M-kiska??

R-arre us ladke ka jisse muskaan pyaar karti hai.......

M-wohi to usne nahi bataya ab tak.........kaha ki baad mein phone karke.......she stops when she hears her phone ringing........

R(excited)-shayad usika hoga!!!!!!

I picked up the phone and guess what raj was right.....it was actually muskaan calling.......i spoke to her and she was laughing......yes,my muskaan was laughing.....i think i have heard her laughing after 6 yrs......6 yrs..i sighed.......and with a slight hesistation she told me his name.....Rahul.....Rahul Khanna......this name echoed in my ears and i tried remembering where did i hear this name before.........my thoughts were jolted again by muskaan's excitement to meet rahul today for shopping...as they were going to get engaged in a month.........and they couldnt meet after the engagement........she was sounding soo happy...it felt as if all her sorrows just flew away and was filled with love.........after 10 minutes of her talking and me listening quietly and smiling in between i cut the call.......and smiled to myslef......and turned to find raj staring at me......

M-kya??aise kya dekh rahe ho??

R-tumhe!!

M-huh??

R-tumhare pyaar ko.......kitna pyaar karti ho tum muskaan se......

M(smiles)-oh.......a tear rolled down my eyes and dropped to raj's hand......

M-ohh....sorry.....i was about to clean it away when raj took hold of my hand and said.....

R-Moushmi???tum theek to ho......??

M-ha...bas aise hi apni dost ki awaaz mein itna sukoon aur chain sunkar aankh bhar aayi.......kabse ye sukoon aur shanti dekhna chahti thi apni dost ki zindagi mein....

R(remembered rahul)-samjhta hoon.....main bhi to.......He stopped mid-way......and i looked at him to find him silently sobbing and i placed my hand on his as i understood what he felt that moment....

Then,to lighten up the mood he said.....

R(wiping away his tears)-so us khush naseeb ladke ka naam kya hai??

M-oh ha!! Rahul......Rahul Khanna.......

R(shocked)-Rahul Khanna??

M-ha koi painter hai delhi....... i stopped mid-way and looked at raj.....raj looked at me...... we both were equally shocked and surprised........

R-to wo ladki Muskaan hai jisse rahul pyaar karta hai......

M-to wo ladka Rahul hai jisse muskaan pyaar karti hai......

Both of us screamed in excitement and happiness causing everyone in the restaurant to stare at us.......as we noticed that we quietly sat down on our respective chairs.......still shocked and couldnt believe at such a sweet coincidence.......

M-lekin tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi ki Rahul ko bhi pyaar ho gaya hai??

R-wohi batane to yaha aaya tha tumhe.......

M-Oh my God,raj........rahul aur muskaan ek dusre se pyaar karte hai.......humhare bestest doston ne ek dusre ko pasand kiya is zindagi ki rah par chalne ke liye.....is zindagi ko khulkar jeene ke liye........ek dusre ke humsafar banke.....haathon mein haath leker.......har kadam pe saath chalke........

R(sighes)-hmmmmm.....

M-i cant believe this......

R-mujhe bhi nahi yakeen hota.........

Suddenly out of the blue moon raj got an idea.......

R-moushmi....mere solid dimaag mein ek zabardast idea aaya hai.....??

M(raised eyebrows)-aur wo kya hai??

R-kyun na hum inki dastaan sabko bataye??

M-matlab?main samjhi nahi.......

R-arre....hum kya hai??

M-writers!!/??

R-aur hum kya karte hai?

M-kahaniyaan likhte hai.......to??

R-to humhe in dono ki zindagi ke wo saare pal,wo saari yaadein,wo saare lamhein...inki zindagi ke baare mein wo saari baatein humhe duniya ko batana chahiye.......inhi ki kahani likh kar.........

At first i was reluctant but then after a thought at this idea.....i liked it.......

M-ha yaar...bahut acha idea hai......aur jab ye kitaab khatam ho jaayegi......to phir hum unhe wo gift kar denge.....

R-excellent!!

M-to theek hai tum rahul ke side ki kahani likho......main muskaan ki.....

R-aur phir hum in dono kahaniyun ko jood denge.....taake ye rahul aur muskaan ki kahani ke naam se jaani jaaye.......

We both loved the fact that now apart from us.....the whole world would come to know about this sweet yet painful love-story..................

*End of Flashback*

So friends aise hui thi meri aur raj ki mulaaqaat......ab hum dono aapke saamne do alag alag kahaniyaan pesh karenge with which maybe u would try to link urslef in some or the other way..............ab dekhte hai ye Rahul-Muskaan ki kahani aap sab ko kaisi lagti hai................................

Hope u all liked it!!Plzz post ur comments and suggestions.........

-surbhi😊

Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
Wow..dis was soo beautiful!! I can really understand..how it feels ur best frnds are in love..Surbhi ur awsome!! Continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Wow..dis was soo beautiful!! I can really understand..how it feels ur best frnds are in love..Surbhi ur awsome!! Continue soon!!

thanks mansi for ur comments.......so sweet of u.......will continue soon!!
-surbhi😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
wow it was an awesome part as well as well very original....totally loved it...and would also love to read many more parts:P thank u for the pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WHOA!!

This is SO beautiful !!! No words for this !!!!!!!!
Continue continue !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is such a different story... and such a lovely part! truly awesome! 😊

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