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Firstly, I would like to apologise for the terrible delay in updating another part...I wanted to last weekend, but my cousins had come, plus I had an assignment due on Monday...and I had a MAJOR science test...well you could say like an exam...today!....so I had been studying like MAD for the past week, trying to finish everything...and on top of that, keep it in my head!....I am really sorry for not replying to your comments, or updating...the only time I would come on IF would be to read some stories, to keep my mind cool...and during those times, my brain was not functioning enough to post another part...

So...I would be updating a part this Friday...or hopefully tomorrow...I actually have a Physics test tomorrow...so I really need to study for that....but promise I will have it up by the weekend!😊
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Its absolutely fine Sweetie... take ur time and get back with a superb part.. will wait for u.... ALL THE BEST!!!

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Part 13
Enjoy guys!...thanks for waiting...sorry for the delay!
Yawning, Ridhima opened her eyes, and turned around to shut the alarm clock next on her bedside table.

Rubbing her eyes, she slowly got up from her bed and yawning, she made her way to the bathroom.

It had been a week since Armaan and her had become friends.

A small smile rested on her lips as she thought about him.

Quickly having a shower, Ridhima made her way downstairs to have breakfast.

"Good morning papa, good morning nani...good morning di" Ridhima said, cheerfully as she slipped next to Anjali and picked a toast.

"Good morning beta...so what's planned for today?" Shashank asked as he looked at Ridhima.

"I don't know...Hit- I mean Dr. Keerti will tell us what we will do" Ridhima mumbled and bit her lip for almost telling her father what their intern group called Dr. Keerti.

Shashank bent his head, and hid his smile, pretending he hadn't heard the name slip.

"good, good" Shashank said finally, beaming at his two daughters.

"Ridzi...hurry up and finish your breakfast...we are going to be late otherwise." Anjali said as she got up, and fetched for her car keys.

"haan di" Ridhima said, as she stuffed a big piece of toast in her mouth.

"arey Ridhima beta....araam se" Shashank said, as he watched her stuff down the toast.

"mmm..yeh...bhye...pupa" Ridhima said through her mouthful of toast.

Ridhima quickly grabbed her stuff and rushed outside to get into Anjali's car, before she drove off without her.


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Armaan found himself looking towards the entrance of the locker room for the 5th time.

No sign of her.

Sighing her went back to fiddling with his locker.

Suddenly he heard the sound of payal, and he turned towards the door.

Smiling he left the locker, and crossed his arms, with a smirk, ready to greet Ridhima.

The payal sound got closer.

And he smirked some more.

it got closer...and closer.

Closing his eyes, he opened them slowly...only to see Muskaan walking towards him with a smile on her face.

"Hey, Hero!...kaisa hai tu?" Muskaan said, as she went to her locker.

"Muskaan?...tu?" Armaan asked in disbelief and disappointment.

"nahin...mein Muskaan ka bhooth hoon!...kya hua, subah subah naashte mein kya khaya tha" Muskaan asked, rolling her eyes.

"nahin..woh kuch nahin" Armaan said, as he went back to fiddling with his locker.

"ek minute!...tum payal pehenti ho?" Armaan asked, surprised.

"umm...yeah...woh..uh, mujhe present mila tha..." Muskaan said, flustered.

Armaan smirked, and went closer towards Muskaan.

Standing next to her, he leaned into the locker next to hers and crossed his arms.

"really...kisne diya?" Armaan asked, smirking.

"w-woh...umm...uh...woh, actually....Rahul ne nahi diya" Muskaan said, looking anywhere but at him.

"accha?...par mein ne Rahul kab kaha?" Armaan asked, smiling.

Muskaan paled, and then her eyes darted around, nervously.

Taking in a deep breath, she slowly turned towards him.

"w-woh....Armaan, mujhe Rahul ki mummy ne diya tha" Muskaan said, blushing and looking down.

Grinning, he straightened and asked,

"kyun?" raising his eyebrows.

"Armaan...tu doctor hain ya detective...subah subah chaaloo ho gaya" Muskaan said, glaring at him.

"kaun chaalo ho gaya"

His eyes darted towards the entrance of the locker room, and saw Ridhima entering followed by Anjali.

Completely forgetting about Muskaan, he tuned towards her, and lifted up his hand,

"hi basket" Armaan grinned at her, waving his hand.

"Hey Armaan" She said, with a small smile.

Sabhi interns, Nurse Station report karein

Sighing all the interns grabbed their things and went to the nurse station to get their duties announced.

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Another part coming up in 5 mins,,,
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Part 14

RidhimaArmaanRajeev


all the interns waited for Dr. Keerti to come and announce their duties.

"Interns...most of your duties today are going to be the same, except that Dr. Ridhima and Dr. Atul are going to be working in the children's ward...Dr. Armaan and Dr. Rahul are going to be working in the general ward, and Dr. Anjali and Dr. Muskaan are going to be working in the PATH lab...after those rounds have finished, all of you can go back to your cases that have been assigned to you....any problems?" Dr. Keerti asked.

Everyone shook their head.

"good...now, get to work" Dr. Keerti said and went from there to do her own work.

"Hey Ridz...chalein?" Atul asked.

Ridhima smiled and nodded.

Walking into the children's ward, Ridhima could feel the colour drain from her face.

It was a chaos....the kids were everywhere....they were on the floor, crying and shouting, they were jumping up and down on the bed....and the one's trying to sleep, could not, due to the racket in the room.

She looked sideways expecting to see the same look of horror on Atul's face, but she was surprised to see the look of joy and happiness on his face.

"YEAH!...HELLO KIDS!...LOOK WHO'S HERE!" Atul shouted, opening his arms.

All the kids looked at the door and then broke into a smile.

"Atul Bhaiya!" They shouted, and came and hugged him hard.

Ridhima couldn't help but laugh at the sight in front of her...this was going to be a long day



Armaan finished checking a patient and walked towards Rahul.

"so...when are you going to tell her?" Armaan asked.

Rahul spun around and saw Armaan standing behind him. Rolliing his eyes, he turned back towards the patient.

"tell who?" He asked.

Armaan rolled his eyes, and put a hand on Rahul's shoulder.

"dekh...mein jaanta hoon ki tu eik bohot bara idiot hain....I mean I still don't know how you became a doctor...but still how can you be so thick-headed?" Armaan asked, with a smirk.

Rahul pursed his lips and turned.

"tu kehna kya cha raha hai?" He asked

"dekh...Rahool....you and I work together...and you know, we have to talk someday...if not now...then when?" Armaan said, demonstrating with his hands as he spoke.

"Abey, yaar, tu bol kya raha hai?...seedhe point pe kyun nahi aata" Rahul said, irritated.

"dekh...as your friend I am ready to give you my tips on how to get any girl you want" Armaan said, with a grin.

The moment Rahul heard that, he doubled over in laughter.

"good...one" Rahul said while laughing.

"dude, I am not kidding...I am serious...look I know you have a thing for Muskaan and I am going to help you win her!" Armaan said, smiling proudly.

Rahul looked disbelievingly at Armaan,

"me...have a thing for...Muskaan....that churail?...that....jungli billi?...are you out of your mind?" Rahul asked, coming towards Armaan and putting a hand on his forehead.

"Nah...bookhaar toh nahin hain...then what happened...what did you eat for breakfast?" Rahul asked, looking at him strangely.

"nothing...so you don't like Muskaan?" Armaan asked, confused.

then why did Rahul's mom give Muskaan the payal? He wondered.

"nahin yaar...dimaag kharab hain kya?...mein usse...chii!" Rahul exclaimed as he shuddered.

"oh...I thought you liked Muskaan" Armaan said, still confused.

"dude, that's like saying you like Ridhima....the way you guys fight, you give me and Muskaan hard competition" Rahul said,, winking at Armaan.

Armaan rolled his eyes, and punched Rahul on the shoulder.

"Shut up yaar...me and basket?...no way!" Armaan said, chuckling.

However as he said that, he wasn't sure if he was telling the whole truth.


"Atul!!..I need your help NOW!!" Ridhima screamed. A kid was not leaving her alone....she was begging to have a chocolate, and had wrapped her arms and legs around her leg, refusing to let go until Ridhima gave her a chocolate.

"dekho...please, mujhe chod do...I promise I will give you a chocolate if you let me go" Ridhima said, trying to get the child to loosen her arms.

"Nahi, mujhe abhi chahiya" the child whined.

Ridhima looked around for help and saw Atul was still busy laughing with the kids.

"Atul!...help me, please!" Ridhima begged.

"h-haan...mein abhi aaya Ridz....accha I will be right back kids...and then form a line, and we will see who has been a good kid, and who hasn't!" Atul said, as he made his way towards Ridhima.

"Hey Ridz...kya hua?" Atul asked.

Ridhima pointed towards the kid stuck to her leg and said,

"she refuses to let me go unless I give her a chocolate...and well, I am not allowed to" Ridhima whispered to Atul.

Atul chuckled, and kneeled down next to the girl.

"Sonia...what are you doing" Atul asked.

"didi mujhe chocolate nahin de rahi...toh mein unki leg pe chipak gayi" Sonia giggled.

Atul smiled, and said,

"oh really?...par didi aapko chocolate kaise dengi, agar aap unki leg par ho?" Atul asked, raising his eyebrows.

Sonia looked at her arms wrapped around Ridhima's legs, then at Atul, then at Ridhima, and finally let her arms and legs loosen.

Atul smiled, and pulled Sonia towards him, making her sit on his knee, he tickled her stomach and said,

"par doctor ne toh kaha tha ki aapko chocolate mana hai" Atul said

Sonia made a face and said,

"doctor logon ko kuch nahin pata hota"

Atul stiffled a laugh and said,

"Sonia...aapka stomach mein ek monster hain...aur usko khatam karne ke liye aapko yeh diwaai khaani parti hai" Atul said, as he indicated to the medicines lying beside Sonia's bed.

"par woh kadwi hai" Sonia pouted.

"par jaise hi aapka stomach better hoyega...I promise mein aapko ek chocolate khud laake doonga!" Atul said.

"Promise?" Sonia asked.

"pakka promise" He said, pinching his neck.

Sonia giggled and hopped off his knee and made her way to the line that had formed.

Ridhima was staring at him with her mouth open.

"how do you do that?" Ridhima asked, as she watched in amazement at how well the kids were behaving whenever Atul was around.

Atul shrugged his shoulders and said, "you just have to understand them, I guess...I don't know, but I love kids, and they seem to like me as well" He said as they walked towards the kids.

Giving them their injections, they put the kids back into bed and gave a sigh of relief.

"finally that is over...now we have our cases to go to" Ridhima said.

"Yeah...chal I'll see you later....bye Ridz!" Atul said, as he walked in the opposite direction.

Ridhima walked towards Rajeev's room, and looked inside through the door to see if Armaan was there or not...sadly he wasn't.
Sighing Rajeev looked around.

There wasn't anything to do, and he was getting frustrated....his boss had said that he could take as long as he wanted to get well.

In other words it meant, be back soon, or you will be on a holiday forever.

Sighing his thoughts drifted to Ridhima...or Doctor Ridhima as she liked to be called.

Smirking he thought about how uncomfortable and annoyed she had been when she had said that.

Looking at the clock he saw it was time for one of the doctors to come and check him.

He wished it would be Ridhima...it had been a while since he had seen her...saw her looking at the report with a slight frown of concentration on her face....the pen leaning against her cheek......her biting her lip as she read the reports.

Groaning he rolled over in his bed and stared out the window...he was going off plan.

He had to stick to the plan...it had been a miracle that he had landed in this hospital...it had been quicker than he had planned...but all he had to do now was make Ridhima believe he was a good man...

Sighing Ridhima walked into the room, and looked at Rajeev, he was sitting on the bed facing the door and his face lit up into the smile the moment she walked in.

"Hey doctor Ridhima it has been a while since I have seen you...heard you were unwell...how are you now?" Rajeev asked, sounding as though he was sincerely concerned.

Taken aback for a second because he had actually referred to her as Doctor Ridhima instead of doc...she quickly looked at him and gave him a confused look.

Slightly frowning, she said, "better now, thanks"

Turning around, she quickly took out Rajeev's reports and looked at them.

Checking the reports, she made sure she didn't make any eye contact with him.

"um...I think that the sooner we get your operation done...the better." Ridhima muttered.

She didn't hear anything...so she continued studying the reports.

"The reports aren't looking that good...I will have to discuss with my senior doctor about this" Ridhima said, her eyes still fixed on the report.

She frowned when she didn't hear a response...still.

Sighing, she turned around to face him and saw him staring at her, with a smirk on his face.

Uncomfortable under his gaze, she put the reports back, and decided to walk out of the room, before he said or did anything to make her uncomfortable.

She had started to walk out, when she felt a hand grab her wrist..


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hey

thanx sooo much for the pm!!!! i was dieing 2 read a part for soo long and yayyyy!!! today you updated!!!!

that was really good!!

so does rahul like mskaan or not??? im soo confused.. really like how armaan and ridhima are friends again

lastly awwww atul is sooo cute with kids!!!!

~anjie

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Awesome parts! Love how Atul is so good with kids. And the conversation between Armaan and Rahul was cute and funny. This Rajeev is really starting to scare me. I hope Armaan will save Ridz from him.
Continue soon!

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