RM FF-Pyaar Main Kabhi Kabhi UPD pt 19-pg 59 18/4 - Page 29

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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely part!! loved how everyone supported muskaaannn!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey i was l8 in catching up but last 2 parts were gr8!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Hey nice part RM FE scene was really cute ....waiting for the next update .....

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Thanks Saba,lol yeah well the scene wasn't romantic haha different use of the FE
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey.. just read ur entire ff.. i absolutely love this concept.. this is how i wish dmg would turn out.. love rahul muskaan.. and so hope he comes back and their love story continues.. i also adore the abhi-nikki relatiosnhip.. hope she lvoes him soon too.. cant wait to read more.. please update soon.. and if u send pms.. please add me to the list.. thank you.. take care
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dipi_dipu

lovely part!! loved how everyone supported muskaaannn!!!

Thanx Deepali,lol yepp I loved writing that bit!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

hey.. just read ur entire ff.. i absolutely love this concept.. this is how i wish dmg would turn out.. love rahul muskaan.. and so hope he comes back and their love story continues.. i also adore the abhi-nikki relatiosnhip.. hope she lvoes him soon too.. cant wait to read more.. please update soon.. and if u send pms.. please add me to the list.. thank you.. take care

Thanks for reading,yes I do send PM"s so will add you to my PM list.Will be updating soon lol
Glad you like it.Yeah I love Rahul and Muskaan 2 they're just awesome!
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Posted: 16 years ago
great part.. okay so iwas wayy off but u on why, cuz iwatch too many dramas and u write differently..lol! great part!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

great part.. okay so iwas wayy off but u on why, cuz iwatch too many dramas and u write differently..lol! great part!!

Haha well I strive to be different.,hehe will update with the next part soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Pyaar Main Kabhi Kabhi

Part 13

Recap: Everyone finds out about Muskaan's brother; Ranvir, being a drug addict.The intern gang tells Muskaan that even if they would have known earlier,they would have still supported her.

It was morning and the sun streaded into the room.It was a Saturday,a day that was off for them.It was tonight that Armaan and Ridz's sangeet was going to be held at the Gupta household.The interns had all been excited,to sing and dance together again.

Muskaan woke up,she glanced around the room and smiled.It was her day off,she glanced at the clock to notice that it was only 7:30 in the morning.She decided to go back to sleep.

Rahul meanwhile was wide awake.He tossed his blanket off him and got up,stretching his arms and yawning.He opened his door and went outside to see whether anyone else was awake.He went to the bathroom to get refreshed and popped out with a brush in his mouth.He quickly made himself some coffee and went into his Mom's room to see whether she was awake.

Rahul-Ma

His mother was sitting in a rocking chair,staring into space.He went up to her and rested his head on her lap.Making her stop swinging.

Rahul's Mom-Hmm.Rahul,tu yaha?Kya hua?

Rahul-Ma,tu badi udaas lag rahi hai.

Rahul's Mom-Rahul,main udas thodi hi hoon.Bas yaad aa rah thi,tumhari papa ki.

Rahul-Ma,mujhe bhi unki yaad aa rahi hai.

Rahul's Mom-Beta,tu ek acha successful doctor ban jaye yahi unki khwaish thi.

Rahul-Mujhe pata hai Ma.

Rahul's Mom-(stroked his head) Chal beta,main tumhe kuch khaane ke liye bana doon?

Rahul- Nahi,nahi main khud bana doonga.

Rahul's Mom-Acha theek hain.

Rahul-Maa ,tum kahi nahi jaogi na?

Rahul's Mom-Tumhari aur Muskaan ke shaadi hone ke pehle hargiz nahi.

Rahul-Us ke baad bhi nahin.

Rahul's Mom-Who dekhenge.

Rahul-(laughs)Waise kya tum wapas Punjab jaana chahti ho?

Rahul's Mom-Haan aur na bhi,waha bohot saari yaadein hai beta jo main bhool nahin sakti,par wapas jaongi to unki kaami aur bhi mehsoos hogi.

Rahul-(nods)

Rahul's Mom-Tu ja,breakfast bana le.Main thodi hi der main aati hoon.

Rahul made his way out of the room,whilst his mom sat rocking in the chair,rekindling al those glorious memories that she kept so close to her heart.Rahul shut the door behind him and decided to have some fun with Muskaan.He crept up the stairs and made his way into her room.He shut the door behind him,and closed the blinds.He went and sat on the bed next to Muskaan,staring dreamily at her face.

He grabbed her hand close to him,putting it to rest on his heart.Muskaan suddenly woke up to notice a figure holding her hand right in front of her.She screamed her lungs out as in the dark she couldn't make out who it was.Rahul started cracking up laughing,upon seeing Muskaan like this.Muskaan unlocked her hand from his grasp.She got up from her bed angrily.

Muskaan-Ye kya Rahul?

Rahul-Kya?

Muskaan-Dara diya na.Waise tu mera haath aise kyun pakad raha tha.

Rahul-Yuhi,koi problem?Kya main tera haath bhi nahin pakad sakta?Afterall tera boyfriend hoon.

Muskaan-Oh really?Mr Garewal.Boyfriend hoon (imitates him)Jao yaha se,main achi khasi so rahi thi,aur tumne aake meri peaceful sleep disturb kiyi.

Rahul-Disturb thodi hi ki,waise bhi tum sirf mere hi sapne dekh ti ho.Ab tum wohi sapne reality main complete karo.Main to thumhare saath hi hoon.

Muskaan-Well mujhe wo sapnon main jo aata hai na,wohi Rahul pasand hai.(turns away from him)

Rahul-Really,theek hain main wapas America jaata hoon.(walking towards the door)

Muskaan-Rahul! Ruko,main sirf mazaak kar rahi thi.

Rahul-Main bhi.Waise tum sote hue baadi soni lagti ho.

Muskaan-(blushes,as Rahul pulls her in closer to him)

Rahul-Muskaan,chalo mujhe bohot bhook lagi hain.Kuch breakfast baana do na.

Muskaan-So isilye yaha aye the.Mujhe jagaane ke liye,taaki main breakfast baana saku.Wow great job Dr Rahul,mujhe laga tha ki tum cooking jaan te ho.

Rahul-(laughs)Please,bohot bhook lagi hain.

Muskaan-Theek hain,parathe banati hoon.Chalo ek second mujhe brush karne do.Fresh hoke aati hoon.

Rahul-Theek hain.

Muskaan-Ja aur Ranvir ko jagayo.

Rahul-Kya Muskaan,yaha mujhe beht ne bhi nahin deti.

Muskaan-Bye,main 2 minute main aati hoon.

Muskaan closed the door behind Rahul,she went into the bathroom to brush her teeth.She blushed upon thinking of the two incidents in the previous days.She shook her head and exited the bathroomafter brushing her teeth,to grab a change of clothes.She quickly changed her clothes and made her way downstairs.Skipping merrily as she usually did,stacking it on the last two steps.She sat on the floor,holding her ankle as Rahul and Ranvir were laughing uncontrollably.She looked at them two and shot them an angry look,to her amazement they cracked up even more.Finally,Rahul went to the stairs and helped her get up from her awkward position.

Muskaan-Bohot haasi aa rahi hain rite?

Rahul-(laughing uncontrollably)Sorry Muskaan,par kyan karoon,it was hilarious.

Ranvir was in peals of laughter on the floor.Muskaan looked at them two and folded her arms.

Muskaan-Jao main koi parathe nahin baanati.

Rahul-Muskaan,ab boora maan gayi.Dekho agar main aise gira hota,toh phir tum bohot haas ti rite?

Muskaan-Maybe.Actually haan,bohot haasi aati.(starts laughing she smacks her forehead and along the way slaps Ranvir on the back.)

She resumes starting to cook some parathas for Rahul and Ranvir.Within 15 minutes she had served both of them,Muskaan made some for Nikki,Rahul's mom and herself.She went and then sat on the table.Bringing a glass of juice along.Rahul decided that he would take the plate of parathas up to his mom.He excused himself and made his way up the stairs.

Ranvir-Muskaan,maine tumhe bohot gum diye hai na?

Muskaan-Ranvir,achanak itne serious.Dekho main is bare main baat nahi karna chahti.Agar tumhari jagah main hoti,toh tumne bhi meri madad kiyi hoti.

Ranvir-Muskaan main tumse thank you kehna chahta hoon.

Muskaan-Kis liye?

Ranvir-Muskaan,tum ne hamesha mera saahara bana hain,maine tumhari liye kabhi kuch kiya hi nahin.Ulta main tum pe kitna baada bhoj tha.Muskaan main thak gaya hoon,is guilt ko handle karke.

Muskaan-Ranvir,tumhe guilty feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.Tum mere bhai ho,aur hum ek doosre ke help nahi karenge,toh phir kaun karega?

Ranvir-Muskaan,tum seriously you are the best!(hugs her)

Muskaan-Ranvir tum theek ho gaye,I am happy.

Ranvir-Chalo ,tumhe mujhe wapas centre bhejna hai na?

Muskaan-Haan par agle week se tum yaha ghar pe,permanent.

Ranvir-Haan pata hai.Can't wait!

Muskaan went out with Ranvir and dropped him back of at the rehabilitation centre.She profusely answered the questions of the doctor and came back home,happy that he brother would be back with her.After all that she had been through,it had been worth it.She came inside the house and shut the door behind her,she turned to see Rahul staring at her.

Rahul-Muskaan tumne itni der laga di?

Muskaan-Kyun,time to lagage hi na.

Rahul-Ok whatever,chalo tumhe who saari dikhani thi.

Muskaan-Abhi,Rahul mujhe laga ki who toh ek surprise hai.

Rahul-Haan,par I can't hold it in any longer.

Muskaan-(laughs)Rahul! Uff chalo.

Rahul-Theek hain,by the way tumne lunch kar liya?

Muskaan-Haan maine raaste main Ranvir ke saath pani puri khayi.

Rahul-Oh!

Muskaan-Kyun kya hua?

Rahul-Who maine actually,jaane do.

Muskaan-Kya Rahul?Tumne kya?

Rahul-Maine tumhari liye,kuch banaya tha.

Muskaan-Kya?

Rahul-Noodles!

Muskaan-(laughs)Noodles,how cute Rahul.(pinches his cheeks,irritating Rahul)Tumne khaya?

Rahul-Nahin tumhara hi wait kar raha tha.

Muskaan-Sorry!Maine already kha liya.

Rahul-No problems chalo,(he grabs a bowl of noodles and takes her into his room.)

Muskaan-Chalo,dikhao.

Rahul gifted the box to her.Muskaan opened the beautiful wrapping,to find a box in it.She opened the box to reveal a thin sheet of wrapping.She undid that to stare at the beautiful turquoise saari.Which looked heavenly.She stared at the intricate work on it and looked up at Rahul.Who was smacking his lips as he eat his noodles.He stopped upon noticing Muskaan staring at him.

Rahul-Pasand ayi?

Muskaan-Bohot pasand ayi.(hugs him)

Rahul-Mujhe bhi.

Muskaan-Rahul,seriously tumhari choice ko daaat dene padegi.Bohot achi hain.

Rahul-Pata hain.

Muskaan-Aneways mujhe jaa ke tayaar hona hai.Sangeet ke liye.Tum bhi tayaar ho jaao.

Precap:Sangeet takes place.

Alright guys that was the update.I had originally planned for the Sangeet to take place in today's part,but then the aprt went on for too long lol lol.Okay so I will not be updating my FF practically everyday now.School is starting again,so I will be less active as itself on the forum.But,I will have 1-2 updates on the weekend.Most probably on Fri and Sat.So dw you guys will still get your RM lol,whislt I enjoy writing it.So do comment and criticise.

Cheers,
Radhika
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWESOME!!....read the last 3 parts now....am so sry for not replying to them.....but u did a great job writing them!!....
am very happy that the gang wasnt mad at Muskaan for hiding the truth...it showed their friendship....
n it was sweet how Rahul made Muskaan lunch......
like how Rahul comforted Nikki....n am glad that Muskaan's brother accepted Rahul
all the parts were too good!!......great job!...
n thanks for all the pm's!
really appreciate it
pls continue soon if possible...the sangeet is gonna be great!
-Simran

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