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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Hey wow...cool rahul trying to jalaofy muskaan....and muskaan ko actually jalan ho rahi hai....interesting part fultoo enjoyed reading it ......i like the way muskaan sighs ..."uff" hehhe...update soon

With Love
Saba

Haha glad you enjoyed reading it,I personally enjoyed writing it.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: coolguy10

hey really good update

keep it up !!!👏 😊

Thanx Ishan for reading my updates!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee as laways

and plzz uodate really soon

Yepp will try and update real soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: princessuma

awww I miss Rahul's music so much!!! thanks for putting it in the fanfic!! great update!!

Yeah I missed him and his music a lot 2 so I put it in.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dipi_dipu

awww it was reallly reallly awesome yaaaarrr!!!!!! to sweeet first muskaan's letter and then rahul making her jalous...fabulous.....!!!!!!👏

Thanx Deepali!Yepp enjoyed writing Rahul making her jealous bit as well.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dmg123

AWESOME!!....both the parts were very well written.....

the towel scene.....whoa!.....Rahul's timing is really something....lol....
n i liked the way Muskaan apoligised to Rahul...it was very sweet.....
pls continue soon!!....it was very very good....n i cant wait to know what happens next!.....
thank u very much for the pm!
-Simran

Thans Simran,glad you like it.
Haha yeah Rahul's timing ko daat dene padegi.
Will update real soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part yaar.....upload soon and hopefully with more romantic scenes!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ritsranveer

nice part yaar.....upload soon and hopefully with more romantic scenes!!

Lol ok Ill try in the next part,hehe this part is kind od dedicated to Armaan and Ridz well there is a little bit on emphasis on them,afterall they are getting married.Hehe
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Posted: 16 years ago
Alrite Here is the next Update.Sorry there is a bit less of Rahul and Muskaan in this one,more of the group coz of the Bachelor and Hens Party..Hope you guys still like it.The next part is more eventful for our favourite couple.

Pyaar Main Kabhi Kabhi

Part 7

Recap: Muskaan apologises to Rahul via a letter,Muskaan tells Rahul that she is busy working so she can't meet him.Rahul decides to make Muskaan jealous by attending to his patient Ankita.

Rahul-Bye Ankita!(pats her head and comes out of the room,closing the door,thinking to himself mission accomplished)

Muskaan-Oye!Baas ho gaye ye tere tata bye bye!woh sirf ek patient hai.

Rahul-(closes the door)Aur tu meri sirf dost!

Muskaan-Rahul!tu abhi tak us baat per hi atka hua hai?Maine sorry kaha na!

Rahul-(smiles)Maine tujhe kab ka maaf kar diya (resting both his hands on her shoulder).

Muskaan-To phir abhi abhi kyun kaha ki main tumhari sirf dost hu?(takes his hands of her shoulder)

Rahul-Kyunki tumhare naak par jab ye gussa aata hai na,toh tum baadi pyaari dikhti ho.

Muskaan-Rahul!(rolls her eyes)aneways mujhe duty per jaana hai.

Rahul(stops her by holding her hand)Ek minute,tumne mujhe kuch promise kiya tha!

Muskaan-Really?Mujhe koi promise yaad nahi hain.

Rahul-Aaj subah hi toh tumne promise kiya tha.

Muskaan-Really Rahul?Tumhare paas koi proof hain.You know koi voice recording?Yaa phir video recording?

Rahul-Nahi!(confused look)

Muskaan-Toh phir yeh waada illegitimate hain,main nahi manti ki maine tumhe kuch promise kiya tha.

Rahul-Muskaan!

Muskaan-(laughs)Bye Rahul!Agli baar zaroor meri signature yaa phir aisa kuch propf lena(winks and sticks her toungue out)

Rahul-Teri toh!(chases after her)

Next Day in the afternoon

Muskaan looked at herself in the mirror.It felt strange to be wearing a dress after a long time.She quickly dabbed on some foundation and then started applying the rest of her makeup.She fixed up her curly locks and looked at herself in the mirror. She grabbed a matching clutch to her beautiful brown dress which had a gold beading on it, and made her way outside the room to see whether Nikita was ready.

She walked into the living room to find Nikita sitting on the sofa wearing a green halter neck dress, watching television with Rahul,who was dressed in a black shirt and black jeans with a white tie.Rahul looked at the door, noticing someone standing at the entrance to the living room. He looked back at the television, and then he realized that it was Muskaan who was at the entrance. He was shocked by what he was looking at; he immediately got up and dragged Muskaan away from the living room into the kitchen.

Muskaan-Rahul!Haath chodo.

Rahul-Muskaan!Tum itno chote kapdo main, kaha jaa rahi ho?

Muskaan-What a question?Rahul aaj hamari Hen's night hain,you know bacholerette party,Ridhimma ke yaha aur tumhari bachelor party hai Armaan ke yaha.

Rahul-Mujhe pata hain,par itna chota dress.Muskaan kuch toh sharam karo.

Muskaan-Rahul!Uff,yeh sirf girls ki party hain,aur dress code western hain,kyunki hum baad main clubbing ja rahe hain.

Rahul-WHAT?Clubbing?Muskaan!tum nahi jaa sakti, its final.

Muskaan-WHAT?Mujhe enjoy karne nahi dete,aur khud tum kissi club main jaa kar maze karoge?Yeah saqt naa insafi hain,hum ladkiyo ke saath.

Rahul-Nahi Muskaan!tum nahi jaa sakti,agar jaana hain toh phir kuch dhang ke kapde pehno.

Muskaan-Rahul yeh dress thodi hi chota hai.Its just above my knees,aur mujhe compliment dene ke begair tum mujh par chila rahe ho?

Rahul-Just above my knees(imitating her)Tumhe aaj kal ke ladke nahi maloom hain,Muskaan who bohot sleazy ,gande kisam ke insane hote hain.

Muskaan-Rahul!main jaa rahi hoon,aur that's final.Hmmph Tum koi mere husband nahi ho jo mujhe aise order around kar sakte ho.Shaadi hone ke baad dekh lenge.

Rahul's mom-(enters and notices Muskaan,hugs her)Muskaan tu kitni pyaari lag rahi hain.(looking at Rahul,Muskaan looks at Rahul and raises her eye brows and gives an angelic smile)dekh tu,meri bahu sabhi outfits main baadi hi pyaari lagti hain.

Muskaan blushes,Rahul quietens down a little.

Rahul-Hmmph

Rahul's mom- waise Muskaan ab chale,waha tumhari party hai ,aur mujhe Padma ko jaake madad bhi karni hain.So lets go.Chalo Nikita beta.

Nikita shuts of the television and starts dragging Muskaan out of the door.Hastily they put on their high heels and make their way outside.Muskaan catches a last glance of Rahul and shuts the door.They park in front of the Gupta house,and enter it,to find Ridhimma and Anjali both waiting for Nikita and Muskaan.

Ridhimma-(hugs Muskaan)Yaar tu aaj kitni sundar lag rahi hai!

Muskaan-Tum se kam Ridzie,waise ab sirf ek hafta reh gaya hai tumhari aur Armaan ke shaadi ke liye.Excited??Thrilled?

Ridhima-Ha,bohot(blushes)

Anjali '(hugs Muskaan)Wow looking awesome as usual.

Muskaan-Thanks Anji!Tum bhi!

Ridhimma-(hugs Nikita)Wow aaj toh tum ekdaam superb lag rahi ho.

Nikita-Really?Thank you!

Anjali-Ya Nikki?Wonder why?(laughs)

Ridhimma-Okay Okay ,chalo kuch drinks lete hai.

Muskaan-Okay,phir baad main clubbing bhi jaana hai.

Ridhimma-I know!How exciting!Ham ladkiyan aakeli.Waise Armaan to mujhse bohot hi naraaz tha.I mean ladkiyaan alone clubbing,par don't worry hum kuch lenge nahi.(winks)

Muskaan-Ok chal drinks lete hai.

They all pour some fruit punch into their glasses.Meanwhile Nikita calls Rahul in order to tell him that they had arranged all the connections and things for the laptop so they could start their game.

Anjali-Chal Ridzie,haamare room main jaake beht te hai.We have a surprise for you.

They all gather around the laptop,which was all set up with the answers to the 5 hard questions that Anjali would ask to Armaan and also to Ridhimma.They switched on the webcam and then started their video conversation.

Anjali-Ok Ok guys,abh ye tumhari test hai,ki tum ek doosre ko afterall kitne achi tarah se jaante ho.You guys ready for it?

Armaan on screen-Ofcourse I am ready for it,main Basket ko bohot achi tarah se jaanta hoon.

Ridhimma-Ok let's start the game.Dekhenge kaun kisse achi tarike se jaanta hai.

Anjali-Ok,Pehla question tumhare liye.Who was Ridhimma's firs t ever friend?

Armaan-(smiles awkwardly)Bohot acha question hai,I don't know,woh toh aapne past ke bare main kuch baat hi nahi karti.

Anjali-Aww poor Armaan,Ridize tumne use aapne pehle friend ke bare main bataya nahi?

Ridhimma-Bola hoga,zaroor bola hoga par ye sune tab na.

Anjali-Okay that's none for you Armaan.

Muskaan-(laughs)Good luck Ridhimma,abh tumhari baari hai.

Ridhimma-Toh Armaan ki favourite color kaunsi hai?

Armaan-Anji this is so unfair!Tumne use easy question kyun diya?

Ridhimma-(sticks her tongue out)Ofcourse Sauce waala lal,I mean lal jo maine abhi pehna hai.

Armaan-Oye Hoyye!

Ridhimma-(blushes)

Anjali-Ok here is an easy one for you Armaan'Ridhimma ne kaunsa dance style seekhi hai?

Armaan-Kathak!I think'.

Ridhimma-Yepp.

Rahul,Atul and Abhimanyu cheered in the background!Their friend had finally got one right.

Anjali-Okay Ridhimma here is one for you.Armaan ka first crush kaun tha?

Ridhimma-That's a very interesting question di,kyunki mujhe lagta hai ke ye paeda hote hi Nurse par line maarna shuru kar deta.So lets say,Armaan cannot remember it himself kyunki wo bohot chota tha.

All the girls hi-5 each other and laugh at the thought of Armaan flirting with his nurse as he was born.

Armaan-Basket!Basket ye sahi nahi hai.Your right ki mujhe mera pehle crush yaad nahi.Par come on yaar Nurse pe line!

Anjali-(stops laughing)Ok Armaan you better catch up,kyunki at this rate Ridhimma zaroor jeetegi.Armaan tum pehli baar Ridhimma se kab mile the?

Armaan-20th August 2007,Basketball court pe.

Ridhimma-Yepp!

Anjali-Ok Ridhimma this one is for you,Tumhari pehli unofficial ya,official date kab hui thi?

Ridhimma-Umm ,Umm mmm I don't remember,bohot confusing hai.

Armaan-Ridhimma!Yeh tumhe yaad nahin.How dare you!Very sad!!

Anjali-Its okay Ridizie,Ab even ho gaya.AlriteArmaan this is your second last question.

Armaan-Shoot Anji!

Anjali-Ok!So Ridhimma ka pehla pyaar kaun tha?

Armaan-Umm main.

Anjali-Correct!Ok Ridzie even karne ke liye,tumhe ye jeet na hi hoga.Name Armaan's favourite hobbies.

Ridhimma-Ok Comics padhna,bike racing,basketball,aur boxing.

Armaan-Tum ek bhool gayi Ridhimma.

Ridhimma-Armaan,Kyan bhool gayi?

Armaan-Yahi ki tumhe manana aur tumse pyaar karna ye mera sabse bada passion hai.

Rahul,Muskaan,Anjali,Atul,Nikita,Abhimanyu all Woot loudly!!Ridhimma blushes at his words and tries to hide the fact that she is blushing.

Ridhimma-Di main do minute main aati, hoon,Ma boola rahi hai.

Anjali and Muskaan make her sit down and they all start laughing as Ridhimma blushes even harder and tells them to stop.

Anjali-Okay Armaan that was a good one.Par ye ab aakhari question hai.Ready?

Armaan-Ready.(sits up)

Anjali-Ok!Ridhimma ka favourite color batao.

Armaan-Ridhimma ka koi favourite color nahi hai.Usse sab rang ache lagte hain.Well par,lets say Pink,kyunki who ek ladki hai.

Anjali-Ofcourse,mujhe kehne ki zaroorat hi nahin hai.Armaan toh tumhe bohot achi tareki se jaanta hai Ridzie.You guys are match made in heaven.Sach main Rab Ne Bana De Jodi.

Muskaan-Oye Hoyye!Ridzie,tumhe pata hai tu bohot lucky hai,ki tumhe Armaan jaisa pati milne waala hai.Agar Rahul nahi hota to main Armaan ke saath shaadi kar leti.

Rahul-Muskaan!Tumhe Armaan pasand hai?

Muskaan-Ullu!joke tha.

Ridhimma-(Blushes deeply)Okay Okay,last question pooch di!

Anjali-Ridhimma agar tum Armaan ko koi gift deti to kya deti?

Ridhimma-Comics!!Usse bohot pasand hai.

Armaan-Not bad Basket,par nahi main yeh gift hargiz nahi accept karta.Kyunki you know what I want.(winks)

Ridhimma-Armaan!!Bohot ho gayi tumharie ye pyaar bhari baatein,ab hum ladkiyon ko peacefully enjoy karne do! (shuts the laptop and turns off the webcam)ok di ho gaya chalo club main paunchna hai.By the way thanks for the organization of the game.

Nikita-Pyar ho to tum dono jaise(laughs and Muskaan gives her a hi-5)

Precap:The girls get drunk!!The guys happen to bump into the girls.

Okay guys that was the update PM you guys later,g2g to dance class.So hope you guys like it.Its different,plus was probably not my best part.It was kind of lame!So please do comment and criticize!
Cheers,
Radhika
P.S Promise to be back with a sizzling update tmrw,better than this one!and more eventful..and romantic!
Edited by luv_dmg_armaan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aiye Haiye dance class? Sambha, yaar tu toh Basanti bann ne ke chakkar mein lag rahi hai. Oye Ankita urf Basanti, zara bachhke rehna. Yeh teri position cheen ne ke chakkar mein hai.
Part toh changa tha. Tujhe kya laga, ki tu PM nahi karegi toh iss Gabbar ko pata nahi chalega? MWAHAHAHAHA! Seriously interesting tha. Eik bat hai... july 20th 2007 nahi August 20th. DMG started in August. lol. good job yaar.
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