Rahul muskaan one-shot~~Unspoken Words...

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hey guys!!!!sakina here!!!!!

i'm here with a new one shot on my favourite jodi ever-rahul muskaan!!!!

i just woke up today morning,and decided to post this topic!!!!!

its really different from what you have been reading and i hope you appreciate it.....come on guys....lets keep the RM magic alive!!!!!

UNSPOKEN WORDS.....

rahul sat on the couch with his laptop in front of him,along with 3 case files.all three of the patients were in critical condition....and one was even in the last stage of brain tumour.rahul had not been able to breathe peacefully for the past one month....such was the pressure of being a senior doctor....sometimes he wished he wasn't a doctor after all.at least he would be able to breathe in peace....

muskaan came down the stairs after a hot bath.rahul looked up at his wife.she was dressed in a white nightgown,and her hair was dripping wet.she was drying her hair with her towel.....he forgot everything for the moment and just immersed himself in his wife's beauty.

muskaan:dr.grewal,main koi bhoot nahi hoon jo aap mujhe aise dekh rahe hain.

rahul snapped out of his thoughts.

rahul:main aise thodi dekh raha tha?i just wanted to say....muskaan...you're looking very beautiful.

muskaan laughed sarcastically.

muskaan:shayad sach mein kuch zyaada hi khoobsurat lag rahi hoon aaj.dr.grewal ne mujhe pehli baar compliment kiya in like...years!!!

rahul sighed,looked away from her and went back to his work.

everything had changed now.seven years ago,when rahul used to to compliment her,she used to blush like hell and simply pounce on him.and when she used to hit on him,he used to get all cutely proud.

but now things had undergone a sea change.rahul and muskaan couldn't even dream of pouncing on each other.

muskaan went over to him.

muskaan:working on mrs.sen's case?

rahul:hmmmm.

muskaan:its really critical,isn't it?

rahul:it is.i'm trying my best.

muskaan put her hands on his shoulders from behind.

muskaan(coldly):try not to work too hard.

rahul:have to.

muskaan sighed and went to the kitchen.

earlier,when rahul used to over-exert himself,muskaan would go to him and hug him and kiss him from behind,giving him the brightest of smiles,to keep him going.

and if muskaan was tired,rahul used to scoop her her up in his arms and carry her up to their room and make her lie on the bed,and give her a sweet kiss.

things were not the same now.....

muskaan returned from the kitchen.

muskaan:main aaj biryani banaaoo kya?

rahul(rudely):mujhe kyun pooch rahi hai?tu toh wahi karegi jo tu karna chahti hai!toh mujhe poochne ki kya zaroorat hai?

muskaan:maine ek simple sawaal kiya tha bas rahul.

rahul(sarcastically):maine bhi koi complicated answer nahi diya,muskaan.

he went back to his case files.muskaan came and sat down on the sofa.

half an hour passed by.

muskaan:i'm getting really bored rahul.

earlier,when she used to get bored,he used to take her shopping,or for a movie or something like that.but now.......he didn't know what to do.their marriage of seven years was disintegrating to pieces.he had got used to it though.....

muskaan:i know.rahul,leave all that stuff and come here.

rahul:why?

muskaan:we'll play a game.each one of us will,in turns,tell the other stuff which we've never said.true stuff,which we've been hiding all these years.

rahul:there isn't anything to say then.

muskaan(narrowing her eyebrows):come on.don't tell me there's nothing you haven't told me!come on....

rahul came forward.both sat down beside each other on the sofa.

rahul:you start.

muskaan:ok.....i cheated from your science paper during the exam in 11th standard.that's why i scored so well..

she turned to look at rahul rahul,as to how he would react.

he had an unreadable expression on his face and an odd,twisted smile.

rahul(smiling):mujhe pata hai.i saw you cheating.

muskaan:phir tumne complain kyun nahi kiya?

rahul:because i was madly in love with you.

muskaan stared at him.both stared.then they snapped out of it.

muskaan:your turn.

rahul:ok..during our internship days,when i used to act all flirty with anjie?

muskaan smiled.

rahul:i used to do do it to make you jealous.but it never worked.

muskaan laughed.

muskaan:it worked.but just about a little.

rahul:a little?

muskaan:haan.pehle pehle i was really jealous.phir baad mein realize kiya ki tujhe mujhse zyaada pyaar toh koi kar bhi nahi sakta.ek din tu mere paas hi laut kar aayega.so i stopped being jealous.

rahul looked at her.wow....she had never told him this!

muskaan:ab main.

rahul:bolo.

muskaan:whenever i see you shirtless,something in my heart starts beating real fast,and i start breathing loud.

rahul laughed.he really laughed.after many years,he laughed.

muskaan:its true!

rahul:haan haan,theek hain.i'm flustered.

muskaan giggled.after many years.

rahul:humaara first date yaad hai?

muskaan nodded.

rahul:tune jo black dress pehna tha.....you looked heavenly.i almost fell off my chair when you arrived.

muskaan:tune mujhse kaha tha ki main bandariya lag rahi hoon.

rahul:woh jhoot tha.

muskaan smiled.

muskaan:thanks.ab main......suhaag raat se pehle i was scared to death.i kept taking tips from anjie.

rahul smiled.

rahul:me too.armaan was fed up of me!

both blushed a little.after years.

rahul:ok...me....maine jo pehla love letter likha tha tujhe....main kaha tha ki main apne khoon se likha tha....actually woh water colour tha.

muskaan laughed.

muskaan:tujhe kya laga?mujhe pata nahi chala?

rahul:you understood?

muskaan:ab tujhe itna toh jaanti hoon main rahul!

again they stared.after years.

muskaan:tumhe apni ex-girlfriend ananya yaad hai?jisne tumhe achanak chod diya?
rahul:haan yaad hai....kyun?
muskaan:maine jaake uske kaan bhar diye the tumhaare baare mein...so that she dumps you...aur taaki hum dono ek ho sake.
wow!,thought rahul.he never knew muskaan had gone to such lengths for him!
rahul:jab tune pehli baar khaana banaaya tha....maine jo teri itni tareef ki thi...
muskaan:woh sab jhoot thi?
rahul(guiltily):haan....actually khaana bohot bura tha....maine dus baar ulti ki thi...
muskaan(laughing):i'm really sorry rahul!!!
rahul smiled.
rahul:haslo....ulti toh maine ki thi na!!!
muskaan laughed even more.rahul again got lost in her smile,but she snapped her fingers in front of him to bring him back.
muskaan:ab meri baari.....shaadi ke baad jab tu delhi gaya tha conference ke ke liye....aur teri mummy aayi thi mere saath rehne ke liye.....woh itna kharaate leti thi..itna kharaate leti thi...rahul!!!!main toh fed up ho gayi...aur raat ko when she used to fall asleep...main chupke se hall mein chali jaati thi aur wahaan so jaati thi...
rahul:saat saal pehle,humaare honeymon pe....uss din jab tum baarish mein dance kar rahi thi....i fell in love with you even more.....
now,both stared at each other for good.they stared with a passion long forgotten.....
muskaan:i think thats enough for tonight...
rahul:wait.i have something else to say.
his voice was determined,but at the same time,shaky.
muskaan:kya?
rahul(softly):paanch saal pehle,jab tera woh accident hua....yaad hai?
muskaan(softly):main kaise bhool sakti hoon rahul?main 7 months pregnant thi....maine apne bachhe ko hamesha ke liye kho diya...
rahul:bachha mara nahi tha muskaan.....
muskaan:kya....to phir???
rahul:dr.keerti was doing your surgery.she said ki ma aur bachhe mein sirf ek ko bacha sakte hain....she asked me to choose......aur maine tujhe chuna....
muskaan was staring at him....it must've been so tough,taking that decision...
rahul:we had a daughter muskaan....and she looked just like me....wahi aankhein...wahi chehra....she was very pink...premature thi na....isliye....and when the nurse took the-the-the-de-de-dead body(muskaan winced)...i..i..
muskaan:stop!!
both were crying.
muskaan:rahul,yeh bachha tere liye kitna important tha....tune kitne sapne dekhe the humaare bachhe ki...
rahul:jaanta hoon muskaan......par main tujhse bohot pyaar karta hoon muskaan....aur tujhe kisi bhi haal mein khona nahi chahta tha.....tere sivay mera aur hai hi kaun muskaan?
muskaan burst out crying.rahul engulfed her in his arms and cried with her.somewhere in his heart,there was a relief...for finally telling her what he had suppressed inside him for years....
he scooped her up in his arms....just like seven years ago....she held on to him tight..just like seven years ago.....he went up to the bed and put her down gently...just like seven years ago.....he lay down next do her...she snuggled up to him and fell asleep after sometime...just like seven years ago.....
so thats it guys....this is something really different...i hope you like it....do comment please!!!!
love...
sakina....❤️

Edited by justluvmayank - 16 years ago

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AshiYuvi4life thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😭 It was beautiful Saku! Sooo beautiful! I loved the idea of the game. Very clever way of getting out one's emotions. Muskaan's confessions... oh my god. I was seriously cracking up half the time. Lekin Rahul's last bit had me heartbroken... and then I felt a sudden amount of pride that I love him so much. He gave up his child for her. That is the purity in R-M's relationship. This is true love. I'm so proud of you jaani. Amazing work. Yaadein was nothing compared to this. Tooooo good! 👏❤️
Komz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

😭 It was beautiful Saku! Sooo beautiful! I loved the idea of the game. Very clever way of getting out one's emotions. Muskaan's confessions... oh my god. I was seriously cracking up half the time. Lekin Rahul's last bit had me heartbroken... and then I felt a sudden amount of pride that I love him so much. He gave up his child for her. That is the purity in R-M's relationship. This is true love. I'm so proud of you jaani. Amazing work. Yaadein was nothing compared to this. Tooooo good! 👏❤️

Komz

shut the hell up komz!!!!!yaadein was awesome!!!!!much better!!!!!!
thanx for liking it yaar....its really special...
yeah i know...the last bit's really sad...
thanx for commenting!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww..Saku that was jus a beautiful piece..wow..simply mind-blowing..Def. a new idea..it bought a smile 2 my face..i just cant express how beautiful it was..it touched my heart..Though whatever happens 2 RM..our love for them will always be alive with these beautiful stories..written from our hearts..
Some people say ...that after marriage life changes..but getting back to the same love..is very difficlut..but RM will never hav problems..
Im gonna read it once more...
I love you..it really cheered me up frm my bad-mood..thanku..thanku so much!!🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Aww..Saku that was jus a beautiful piece..wow..simply mind-blowing..Def. a new idea..it bought a smile 2 my face..i just cant express how beautiful it was..it touched my heart..Though whatever happens 2 RM..our love for them will always be alive with these beautiful stories..written from our hearts..
Some people say ...that after marriage life changes..but getting back to the same love..is very difficlut..but RM will never hav problems..
Im gonna read it once more...
I love you..it really cheered me up frm my bad-mood..thanku..thanku so much!!🤗

you are most welcome mansi!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was too good.. awesome... the game was simply superb!!! just loved the way they felt for each other long time ago...and still continue to love each other for eternity...
Sakina.. thanks so much for giving us this beautiful piece of writing... gr8 going girlie...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its just amazing loved readin it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you so much guys!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Saku Divu here 😃

saku its FAB toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo beautiful👏 but make me little sad FOR RM😭
THXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX for Pm 🤗
will be witating for next part 😃
BRILIEANT WORK👏👏 TOTALLY ROCKING !!!!!
WELLDONE !!!!!!!👍🏼 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i'm glad you guys are liking it!i just woke up today morning with an urge to write this thing down....thanx so much for appreciating it!!!
Edited by justluvmayank - 16 years ago

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