She's My Jannat. PART14 Pg.34 (09/04)

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what a part!!!!!
that was sooo sad!!!!
so emotional!!😭
i hate abhi!! ughhh....
plz don't let them part!!!!
cont soon!!!!...u have to!! lolz....plz cont before the weekend...or something!!
<3333
Mahima

Edited by dmgluver01 - 16 years ago

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Sara

@Sonii_Babii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

Hey! Yep, im gona update tonite oki? Glad yuu all loved it!! x

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gia.khan

@gia.khan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Continue babe I m dying to know wat happens !

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Sara

@Sonii_Babii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

lol okay..il update ina hour! alryt! x

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

ohh...okay....can't wait! cont soon!! =]

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pallavi

@scurvy_kash

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

hey dear very nice updte nd very emotional continue soon

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Sara

@Sonii_Babii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

Part 6!

Next Day..
5.20am.

Armaan hadnt slep all night..the only thing he could think of was ridhima..what must he do? should he stop her or let her go? Armaan opened the door to their bedroom and went to the guest rrom where ridhima was sleeping. He opened the door and watched ridhima sleep..

A: Im so confused! main karo bhji to kya karo..im sorry Ridhima!

7.20am..

Ridhima was in the kitchen making herself a cup of coffee..Armaan's words were still echoing in her ears. She took a sip of cofffee. Ridhima had never thought of leaving Armaan but she had no choice after how he behaved yday. Thinking about this, she burst into tears.
Armaan was standing in the corner watching her cry. His eyes became moist..

11.15am
Sanjeevani
Cafe

Rahul & Atul were sitting talking..
Ra: pata nahi champ, jab kal maine usse poocha toh he denied it aur phir waha se chala gaya.
At: hmm...kuch toh hai..kahi ridzy ke saath uski fight?
Ra: i dnt tink so, but ridhima has been upset too!
At: exactly...Anjali aa rahi hai usse poonch tha hoon.

Anjali came and sat next to Atul.
An:Hey.
At: Anjali, kya armaan ki ridhima se koi fight hi hai?
An: fight? that was last year..ab toh woh dono hamesha romance karte hai..(she laughs)
At: nahi seriously anjali...ridhima thori upset lag rahi thi.
An: oh yeah, woh acturally mom, dad ko bohat miss kar rahi thi. isi liye woh aaj ghar jaa rahi hai.
Ra: oh! dekha bola tha nah!

In The Meantime::
Firescape!

Armaan and Abhi were sitting on the stairs...
Ab: look armaan, im sorry dude..i know
A: sssh! its not ur fault..mujhe kabse shak tha. but you know ridhima ka ghar se jaana..i dont know
Ab: i understand..dude listen to me. Tum jaise ridhima ke towards behave kar rahe ho, thas brilliant! Main agar tumhari jagah hota toh main bhi yahi karta..
A: Abhi, she's my jannat! (he burst into tears) Main iss khabar sun ke kaise ji raha hoon, yeh sirf main jaanta hoon!
Ab: I know..But you've got to be brave. Tumne kissi ko bataya toh nahi na?
A: no (he looked up) Abhi, main sahi hoon na?
Ab: (put his hand on Armaan's shoulder) absoutly. Aur tum fikar mat karo, everythiing will be alrite. Ab main chalta hoon, Nikki se milna hai.
A: okay..thanks
Ab: no problem. tc.

Abhi stood up and left the Firescape!
A: Ridhima, im sorry! I love...I really do love you.

That's It!
Suspence ab tak jaari hai...Lol..
Hope Yuu Guys Liked The Part!
Do.. Comment/Critisize!
Lovee
Soni
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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

Heyy di!!

awesome part!!!!! omg! i hate this abhi!! ughh...why is he ruining AR's lives?? and he is armaan's so called "best friend".....best friends don't do that!!
omgg....still so much suspense!! plzzz plzz cont soon!!

<3333
Mahima

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 16 years ago

#109

woah🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing dear😍 plz continue it soon😛😉

"Zindagi aisi ho jo jine ko majboor kare,
Rahein aisi ho jo chalne ko majboor kare,
Khushboo kabhi dosti ki kam na ho,
Dosti aisi ho jo milne ko majboor kare."

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hydrogurl001

@hydrogurl001

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Posted: 16 years ago

#110

i just started reading your ff and its brilliant! ugh yeh abhi..hate him right now :( plz cont soon! and if possible, could you PM me when you continue?