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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey jst read ur prts nd it ws superb yaar thy are engangd nd goi 2 be married aftr month nd ar haha kitn ki madad kar raha hai shubankar,rahul or shanky wowwwwwwwww he is so popular wow lvd it nd wht happend rahul cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont sooooooooooon
nd plz pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY MITHILA,
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON !!!
WAITING YAAR...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Pre recap
file fall from rahul hand and armaan see it rahul garewal written on it.

armaan: yeh kaunsi file hai aur isme tumara naam kyun likha hai.

rahul: mera naam are nahi yaar mera naam kaha hai yeh to mera ek patient jiska naam rahul

(in between pager of armaan rings and it is sign of relief for rahul.)

armaan: emergency hai jana hoga ha chalo bye baad main milte hai.

rahul: sounding bit relieved haan haan milte hai bye.

canteen everybody is sitting except rahul

muskaan: was looking very sad and not speaking to anbody.

ridhima: muskaan kya hua itni udhas kyun klag rahihai.

anjali: haan yaar sahi kaha yeh aur rahul pata nahi aaj kal khoye khoye se rehte hai koi problem hai kya.

muskan: rahul hi to problem hai

atul: standing kyun kya hua use

muskan: oye phite mu bath na tu itna chila kyun raha hai.

armaan: relax champ haan muskan tu kuch bol rahi thi.

muskan: haan yaar pehle to kaise mere aage peche khuma karta tha aaj kal to mujhse baat bhi nahi karta pata nahi kyun itna khicha khicha sa rehta hai mujhe kuch samajh nahi aah raha.

armaan; tu tention matle yaar sab thik ho jayega ( bt somewhere inside he was really tensed with that file issue and ridhima sensed it.)


( announcement everybody report in nurse station.)



fire escape


armaan sitting was really tensed about rahul and ridhima comes from behind but armaan not realized. ridhima just hold his hand.

armaan: tum kab aaye mujhe to pata hi nahi chala

ridhima: haan haan ab tumhe kyun pata chalega ab to humari sagayi ho gayi hai aur tum to abhi se hi mujhe ignore kar rahe ho pata nahi shadi ke baadkya hoga.

armaan: nahi yaar aisi baat nahi hai.

ridhima: acha agar aise baat nahi hai to mujhe yeh kyun nahi bata raheke tum itne pareshan kyun ho rahul se koi baat hui kya.

armaan: not told anything just looking ib her eyes and thinking. I am so lucky mere bina bole hi mera dil ka haal samajh leti hai.

ridhima: ab maan hi maan meri tareef karna band karo aur batao kya baat hai.

armaan: ok yaar aaj main acahnak rahul se takraya tha and just explaning the whole incident.

ridhima: itne pareshan mat ho I am sure sab thik hoga aur agar nahi hua to tum ho hi thik karne ke liye right.

armaan: oye hoe itna bharosa not bad.

ridhima: kyun na ho mujhe apne aapbhar barsa hai aur tum par bhi tum sab thik kar doge ab chalo.

armaan: abhi nahi pehle just keeping his finger on his lips.

rihima: armaaaaaaaaaaaaan chalo.

armaan: pls pls

ridhima just trying to go bt armaan pulls her back and they were really close about to kiss bt as usual pager rings.


in evening in locker room (muskaan, rahul)

muskaan: rahul mujhe ghar chod dega meri scooty kharab ho gay hai


rahul: are mujhe zarrori kaam se bahar jana hai main nahi chod sakta tu kisi aur se lift lele

muskaan: nahi nahi mujhe tere saath hi jana hai kaam khatam karke mujhe chod dena.

rahul: nahi mere liye raasta ult padh jayega.

muskaan: are samjha kar na kisi aur ke saath kaise jaaoun anjali atul saath saath jaate hai aur armaan aur ridhima ka to tujhe pata hai hi holding his hands.

rahul: just snaching his hand and bit angry maine kaha na main nahi le ja sakta koi aurko dund mera raasta chod and just goes away from there


ar entered and sees muskaan crying

armaan: are kya hua itna ro kyun rahi hai

muskaan: snob snob who rahul again snob who hai na again snob

armaan: irritated and shouted agar itne rote hue baat karogi to humhe samajh main kaise aaega

muskaan: now controlling haan haan ek to who hai hi mujh par chila kar chala gaya par ab tum bhi

ridhima controlling armaan with her eyes and said: acha ab rona band karo aur batao kya baat hai

mu: explanning the whole incident and again started crying loudly.

ridhima: are itni si baat hai yaar tumhe armaan chod dega ek dinki hi to baat hai main di ke saath chali jaungi.

armaan bit angry and sad with wt ridhima said and his expression shows it purely as he get this time and morning time with her which he don't want to loose and ridhima sees it and sensed it.

ridhima: by explaining him from her eyes : kyun armaan thik hai na

armaan: ha I mean haan thik hai.
(in minds kya thik hai yaar shayad mera bad luck hi garab hai.


just then rahul enter in hurry he forgets to take his file.

armaan: trying to speak to him yeh kya kiya yaar rahul dek kitna ro rahi hai


rahul not seems to hear and just take the file and go. armaan was getting some felling again kahi na kahi kuch gadbad hai he just signed ridhima to come to changing room.

changing room

ridhima: armaan yeh kya mu itni serious hai aur tumhe romance sujh raha hai.

armaan: are nahi yaar main to yeh keh raha tha ki muhe rahul ka peecha karma chahiye shayad kuch pata chale and hekissed on his cheeks and run.



armaan was following rahul car and was shocked to see rahul geeting down to another hospital. rahul get inside the doc cabin.

rahul: come in sir

doc: yes come in sit pls

doc dekheye rahul aap jitni late karage aapka tumor utna bada hota jayega iss liye pls aap illaj karan shuru kar dijye.

armaan lisning this was really shocked and worried.


prerecap: armaan trying to convince rahul to stay at Mumbai and get the treatment here will he be successful.
love u karan karan ki dewani mithila
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnks everybody here for supporting me
karan ki dewani mithila
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY MITHILA, CONTINUE SOON...
GREAT PART... WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART TO COME )
LUV
DEEPU :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wow yaar upeb prt nd vry emotional nd sad for rahul omg he has tumour omg nd poor muski so crying nd ar wah been gud detective he found out now wht gonna happen cnt wait cont soooooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy di....

great part!! aww....i feel bad for rahul and muskaan!! i hope everything will be ok!! plzz cont soon and thanx fr the PM!!

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Mahima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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recap( armaan shocked hearing that)
epic 5
armaan listning to the tumour word just shouted whattttttttttttttttttttt

rahul and doc was surprised to see someone else there and rahul was really shocked.

armaan: I guess maine galat suna aap log abhi kya baat kar rahe the


rahul: tu yaha are kuch nahi chal yaha se

armaan: just stop rahul bahut ho chukka I think ab tumhe mujhe sab kuch sach sach bata dena chaiye maine jo suna who sach hai tumhe brain tumour

rahul: are nahi nahi who hum kisis aur ki baat kar rahe the

armaan: oh thik hai mujhe file dikha tu itna dara hua kyun hai just sraching the file from him

rahul was stunned by the sudden act and don't know wt to do he just gone outside of the cabin

armaan: going through the report just saw him going out and run after him ruk ruk rahul jaha hai wahi pe ruk ja

rahul stops.


armaan: to yehi baat isseliye tu muskaan aur hum sab ko chod ke kasauli jana chata haihaan haan hum log tumare hai hi kaun humhe yeh sab kyun bataega par ek bar muskaan ka to soch leta main kuch nahi jaanta tera illaj yehi pain sanjeevni main hoga


rahul: nahi yeh nahi ho sakta main un logon ke samne mar mar ke nahi jee sakta jo log mere itne kareeb hai khazkar muskaan aur mujhse wada kar tu muskaan ko iske bare main kuch nahi batayega.

(the conversation is going bit louder everybody in the hospital where watching them so armaan suggested its better hum log car main baat karte hai.)

in car

rahul: mujhse wada kar tu muskaan ko kuch nahi batayega aur waise bhi main next week tak sanjeevni chod kar ja raha hun

armaan: wt tu pagal to nahi ho gaya kasuli main to itni achi hospital bhi nahi hai jaha tumara illaj achese ho sake tu kahi nahi ja raha

rahul: maine decide kar liya hai main ja raha hoon

armaan: thik hai ja main bi muskaan ko bata doonga


rahul get very frightened: nahi tu yeh nahi kar sakta tujhe mera saath dena hoga tujhe mujhse wada karna hoga tu use nahi bateyega

armaan: ek shart par agar tu apna illaj yaha karayega to

rahul: befkufoo wali baat mat kar yaha illaj hoga to pata chal jayega muskaan ko main yeh nahi kar sakta agar tu meri jagah hota to tu kya karta kya ridhima ko bata deta bol na armaan ab chup kyun hai

meanwhile rahul was saying he has pain on his head and sign ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh armaan got really worried

armaan: hum in sab ke bare main baat baad main karege pehle tu mere ghar chal ab se tu wahi rahega pata nahi kab tabeyat kharab ho jaye koi aur bhi to nahi hai.


rahul: still in pain its ok I will manage

armaan: just shut up aur chup chap mere saath chal

armaan and rahul reached armaan home although rahul pain has gone bt still armaan being extra protective hold him properly and make him lie down on the bed of guest room and said tu aaram kar koi zarrorat ho to bula lena main paas wale room main hi hoon


rahul: just nodded and trying to sleep(thinking yeh mere liye itna kuch kar sakta hai to ridhima se to apni jaan se zada pyar karta hai ridhima u are really lucky.


its 2 oclock in night

armaan was busy going through the case file of rahul and ridhima was very desrperate and afraid she had tried many caals to armaan bt no response she was really worried and also about rahul she was just moving here and there in the room as she is used to talk to armaan at nights now a days. while armaan has just kept the cell phone in silent mode so that he can peacefully read the report. ridhima was really tensed and walking aap anjali


ridhima: di jaldi utho na pls di pls mujhe armaan se abhi milna hai pls

anji: kya hai raat ke do baje so ja aaj who bechara thak gaya hoga issliye phone nahi kya so ja

ridhima: nahi di koi aur baat hai warna mera phone who nahi uhaye yeh nahi ho sakta

anji: pls yaar mujhe sone de kaal kaam par bhi jana hai

ridhima: not just losing patience thik hai nahi jana to mat jao main hi chali jaati hoon phir mat kehna akele gadi kyun le gayi aapko pata hai main jab car chalati hoon to kya hota hai

anji: just say noooooooooooooooo she remembers anji fav car destroyed by ridhima while driving. nahi ruko main chalti hoon just go and change

ridhima: just taking the car keys are iski kya zarrorat hai kaunsa humhe koi aur dekhne wala hai di jaise hai waise hichalo just pulling her out of the room.

anji: isse kehte hai pyaar main pagal

ridhima: dhere di koi uth jayega to gadbad ho jayegi

and slowly they are out of the house and in car ridhima whole way trying to call armaan bt in vain.

armaan house

door bell rings

armaan ws shocked to see at 2: 30 bell rings he just go and open the door and shocked seeing gupta sisters at this time ridhima just hughim tighly and not give him any chanceto say anything

ridhima: hugging him itni baar phone kiya pata hai main kitna dar gayi thi ek bar to phone utha lete.

armaan: just realized he has kept the phone on silent mode oh sorry jaan who phone silent mode par tha aur who main ra then stops

ridhima: just asking tum itne gabraye hue kyun lag rahe ho


armaan: cutting it oye hoye itna gabra gaye ki night gown main bhi yaha aa gayi who bhi aadhi raat ko

ridhima started blushing

anji: agar sara romance yaha par karma hai to main jaaun

armaan: oh oh sorry both of them separate there hug and said aao na ander aao

anji: enter directly to the room and sees rahul file on bed and going to get it


prerecap: will anjie and ridhima come to know about rahul tumorsorry guys for delay bt from now it will be coming everyday so stay tuned

karan ki dewani mithila


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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy di!!

awesome part!!! omg thank god armaan knows!! i hope armaan doesn't let rahul leave!!!! and i hope ridz and anjali find out so that they don't let rahul leave!!! plzz cont soon and plz pm me when u update!!!

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Mahima
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HELLO

ITS ROCKING WAITING FOR NEXT PART PM ME.. BYE LVU
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