AR ff:Dancing to your tunes...smallprt pg94 1/5 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

707

Views

111.4k

Users

141

Likes

616

Frequent Posters

sameera_12 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Hey,
Awesome update👏 i just loved it.plzz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Love,
Sameera😊
kashishk thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Hey Sumedha, Fabulous part yaar, but was quite short, as I was enjoying reading.
Pls continue soon and if possible PM me.

Kashish
Catwoman thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#33
hi honey....
HAPPPPPPY BIRTHDAY>>>>>>>>
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m78l28tcIE0[/YOUTUBE]
Love Kat
will comment later 😳
ashluvdmg thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#34
hiya sumedha!!
luvd dis part..
but kinda short huh!!pls do cont soon.........!!
um in luv wid armis character..!!
thx a ton 4 de pm
cnt wait 2 read more.........!!
awsum update
luv u lts
crazy ashu
n yaa..HAPPY BDAY DEAR..HAV A BLAST...............!!
Edited by ashluvdmg - 16 years ago
bhanu_rekhag thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#35
simply fab., written sooo sweetly!!!!!!!!!1

thoofani enterance of ridz n ammy falling 4 her is sooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!

keep on going dear!!!!!!!!!

continue soooooooooooooon!!!
123abc123 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#36
nice ff really into it already
lkin da title n concpt lkin 4wrd to
readin more
updte sooon
nizma x
chaiti! thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hey nice update ! cont soon n plz pm me!! tc!
~sumedha~ thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#38
HI guys!!!!!!
thank you all sooooo much for all the support its really invalueble....i'm sorry i cant reply 2 you all individually coz all my friends here in chennai are coming home tomorrow and i have soooo much cleaning up to do!!! u see like karan, i happen to be a tremendously disorganised person.....well i'll definitely be back on monday and reply and pm all of u.
AND THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO Much for the bithday wishes,i dint actually expect anyone here 2 remember so i was thrilled to bits!!!! its actually on the 11th.
thanks again for the red rose sameera,
Lots and lots of love to you all,
Sumedha
p.s wen i accessed the page i realised that the font for part 1 was too small for comfort.i'm very very sorry for this but u see this is my first ff and so pls bear with these stupidities of mine.
~sumedha~ thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#39
PART 2
After the performance,
Muskaan and Riddhima in the girl's changing room
R: Muskaan, woh zara tissue pass kar na''Acha bata, how was the show? I mean did anji like it?

M: Yeah anji loved it'she looked quite impressed'.Aaj toh finale ko sirf rabbaji ne bachaya warna toh!

R: Kyun, kya hua?

M: Arrey tune dekha nahi? Woh "AJNABI" ka hero'he was totally talli yaar!Aur who miss Shonali! Tripping all over her heels.Uske designer ki toh aaj waat lagne waali hai.Waise, how was your performance with Armaan Mallik?

R: Pooch mat, bechara itna confused tha tujhe kya bataun'I never got a chance to explain the whole mishap to him.I thought the performance was going to be like a right royal disaster.

M: I know lekin he managed pretty well'Some of those lifts could have gone terribly wrong!Aur who bhi Anji ke saamne'.

Ridzi silently thanks god for helping her sail through the performance with Armaan.With her boss there a single mistake would have cost her a great deal.

Anjali enters the changing room,

An: Congratulations girls, you both did a brilliant job'I'm impressed, lagta hai tum logon ko jaldi bohot saara recognition milega.Keep up the good work!

Interrupting her,

Ra: Sorry to interrupt,but can I speak to Muskaan for a second?

An: Sure, she's all yours.I'm leaving for the after party now.You guys can come if you want to'Otherwise I'll see you at the studio tomorrow morning.Don't be late!
R & M: Yeah, thanks, we'll see you at the studio.
Anji leaves and Muskaan turns to Rahul'

M: RAHUL!!!

Saying so she engulfs him in a tight hug.Rahul is taken aback'

M: Kahaan chala gaya that haan?College ke baad ekdum gayab hi hogaya?

R: Main woh'

M: Sab maloom hai, tu aur tere "keep in touch" messages.Abhi yahaan kya kar raha hai? Main yaad bhi hoon ya nahin?
(And she keeps on talking oblivious to the fact that rahul is staring at her with a small smirk on his face')

Ra: Muskaan, tu bilkul bhi nahi badli na?

M: Kya kaha tune? Jo bhi hai bakhwaas hi hoga. Tu toh college main hamesha se hi bakhwaas karta aa raha hai.(turning to ridz) Oh ho! Main toh completely bhool gayi! Ye hai Riddhima! Meet Rahul

R: Hi, I'm Riddima, main aur Muskaan "Naach" ke liye choreograph karte hain.

Ra:I'm Rahul, I'm a reporter for NDTV
M: Tu reporter ban gaya?matlab teri bakhwaas ab loge sunne lage hain?Hai hai rabbaji, aap duniya ke logon ko aise kyun torture karte ho?
R: Muskaan! So Rahul, see you later.

M: Yeh le mera number, atleast iss baar "keep in touch"

Ra: Yeah I'll give you a call, Nice meeting you Riddhima.

Rahul turns and leaves.

In the autorickshaw on the way back home.

M: Tujhe pata hai mai aur rahul college mein na like ekdum bestfriends the?

R: Haan, dikhta hai.
(She smiled.She had noticed the way Rahul was looking at Muskaan.Though Muskaan had not realized, Ridzi felt that there may be more to this than just plain "dosti"
Throughout the trip back home,Muskaan continued to talk about Rahul and Ridzi kept smiling to herself.)
Armaan and Nikki are driving back to their place'
A: Nikki, woh! ladki kaun thi who performed with me?
N: Arrey woh! Actually Pallavi who was supposed to dance with you had sprained her foot, so this other girl stepped in.
A: Oh! But how come she knew all the steps?
N: She was the one who choreographed the piece and chose the songs.Her name is Riddhima.She's a choreographer for Naach.
A: No wonder she's such a good dancer!...Is she from Bombay?
N: Armaan!(exasperated) Mujhe kaise pata?

A: haan'

CAR STEREO: Aankhon mein teri ajab si ajab si adaayein hain hoo hoo aankhon mein teri'..

Armaan smiled listening to the song that was playing'she had beautiful eyes he thought'Riddhima'She had totally saved the performance tonight, guiding him just the right way while to the audience it looked as though he was guiding her.I should have said a thanks atleast.

N:Armaan'.will you please speed up? Abhi's waiting at home.
A: um, haan'
At Armaan's house:
N: entering'Hi Abhi! Sorry we got late'

Ab: No probs.Bending over and giving her a light peck on the cheek.How was the show?

N: Amazing'

Ab: Chalo ab tum donon, go take a shower and come down jaldi.aap logon ke liye ek surprise hai'

Armaan just shook his head at the two of them and went up to his room.It was almost like they could never get enough of each other.

Downstairs'

N: Abhi, bataon na kya hai?

Ab: No way ma'am'aap jaiyye aur turant waapas aiyye'

Nikki goes to her room, takes a shower and when she comes back abhi has laid out the food on the table.

N: Abhi, tumne khaana banaya???????

Ab: Haan maine socha kyun na mere culinary skills ko bhi polish kiya jaye??

N: That is soo sweet.

A: Tune?? Khaana??? Aaj toh hum sabko pakka food poisioning hone waala hai'.

N: Shut up! Digging into the pasta he had made'its yummmm!!!

She knew that all he had done was to just boil the water and pour out the contents of the packet but it was the thought that counted for her.

A: Abey chup chaap bolde tujhe Nikki se kya chahiye'itna natak karne ki kya zaroorat hai??

N: khud toh kitchen main pair tak nahi rakhte'badi badi baatein'

A: nikki mujhe challenge mat kar'.pachtayegi

N: yeah right!

As they continued to argue Abhi smiled and started eating'this was a regular affair in their place'Armaan pulling his brother's leg and Nikki getting all worked up about it.


So heres part 2 guys.I'm soo sorry for the late update but you see i got my progress report

on friday and so i cudnt upd.Thanks a lot to all of who commented and wished me on the 11th.

all the silent readers pls pls take time to comment and tell me if i should pm you.

And lastly i want to dedicate this not so great part to my best friend on the whole planet

Amana!! coz she's an awesome person and specially coz she gave me a mug wid karan's pic on it for my birthday and i love her for that.


Pls tell me wat you all think and leave a comment.

lots and lots of love,

Sumedha
Edited by ~sumedha~ - 16 years ago
~sumedha~ thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#40
HI SAMEERA,
glad you enjoyed it! pls read prt 2 too!

Originally posted by: sameera_12

Hey,
Awesome update👏 i just loved it.plzz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Love,
Sameera😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".