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Posted: 16 years ago

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wow... you left me speechless... 😭 I had tears in my eyes when muskaan died.... gosh!! This is fantastic!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Komzie...

Let me tell you one thing...I've read a lot of FFs here at IF, but none of them have made me actually feel the characters' pain. This One-Shot, however, is so beautifully written. Right from the first words to the very last sentence, I connected with Rahul's emotions.

I have never ever been touched by a story to the extent that tears come to my eyes, but when Muskaan was hanging on the rope, tears slipped out of my eyes...

Amazing job, Komzie...Love you! And thank you for such a beautiful story!

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luv_dmg_armaan

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey Komal,

Omg!!This was the most touching story that I have ever read.It was so emotional and mann I can't stop crying,Seriously speechless...Fab writing!!
It was so sad..Poor Rahul and I loved the concept really different from your other one off's and your fanfic..It was truly touching and heartwrenching...But wht you wrote was so beautiful!!Love truly can never be lost and it remains with us forever..the person may die but their love for you will never cease and vica versa...
Truly Awesome story!!

Radhika

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Fatima

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Komal, this was totally brilliant yaar! It was soo emotional and so well written, i could truly imagine it all. The atmosphere with the mountains and all and that tense moment when Muskaan was slipping away..man u wrote that tooooo well!! I could feel their feelings and felt sad for Rahul, i can go on and on about how good it was. Really, it was too good!! U have managed to write it so beautifully, that it seems like i am reading a book or something!! Keep it up yaar, and u should never hesitate in posting such great pieces of writing, u know we'll always love it!! 😳

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Komal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: cute_madhu

I don't know how to start coz i ought to tell ya many tins..

well firstly thanx a lot..seriously em thankin u from the bottom of mah heart for the compliment u gav me..em flattered..umm I won't say tis is the first time sumone said so..buh the first time sumone replied the way I do..so..well thanx di..n well if i compare my self wiv moon..I'd compare ya wiv the sun..as for the comment n one shot...

chand ki hasti hi kya..samne jab suraj ho..yahi sajde mein jhuk jane ko ji chahta hai..

well u might not understand how I feel abt tis FF..n mind ya..If I say best it means it is..coz em an avid reader..I love readin n thus I hav read many such stories b4..buh not all stories touch u'r heart n even if they do..not many make u feel the emotions pent up in urself n if still they suceed in doin so..not all stories r to be remembered..buh tis is one story I wud cherish readin 4eva..becoz tis is not jus a story on one of mah most loved couple buh it matches to the real lyf too..

In real lyf not evryone gets whateva they want..atleast not evryone is born lucky in love..sum love stories r doomed from the start..In sum cases the story continues till eternity coz may be there was no chance for the lovers to meet in tis mortal lyf n thus their lovestory becums immortal..coz 4eva n eva they live in the hearts of all, who knew em as those who were the bravo's in the difficult path of love..saath mein ji na sake toh mar gaye humdam..agar yeh bhi mumkin na hua toh..bass yahi kahenge..upar wala itna kathor bhi nahi..yahan humara milan na hua toh kya, darbar-e-mohabbat mein intakaam ke baad hi sahi..humara milan hoga..zarur hoga..

tis is wht happens to most of the normal people..not all r so blessed in love that they get to be together in tis mortal lyf..n mostly I love tis FF as it stirs such a turmoil of emotions in u..that u can't help buh feel ur'self in that vry situation..the message u gav..that for true love..it is not necessary for the u'r partner to be wiv u..it doesn't matter coz as said..A prt of u has grown in me, so we r never apart, may be in place buh neva in heart..

Rahuls Love is wht I wud call true love n Muskaans too..

Rahul cud hav married anyoder gal buh no he didn't..he lived on jus for her..knowin that she was wathcin him always..maybe she was not bodily present wiv him..buh in his heart..she was 4eva alive..she had neva gone from there..she cudn't..coz that is where she belonged...

n Muskaan..shud I say em much like muskaan in u'r FF.....n then wht muskaan did was right..she saved the lives of oders (the child n rahul) even if it meant losin her own lyf..that's wht i call true love..coz jab kissi aur ke liye app apni zindagi kurbaan karne se naa katrao..isey hi toh kehte hai pyaar..jab kissi aur ke liye iss bamushkil milne wali zindagi ko app haste-muskurate tyaag do..isey hi toh kehte hai pyaar...

So tis is why I em so touched by tis FF..it is a true love story..a love story which must hav been true for many lovers..

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DI yes..i'd call ya di..coz em 4yrs younger to ya..em jus 14..n well I am a writer..an FF writer n hav many FF's of my own dear...

kk enuf of mah blabbering..

n thanx once again..em touched...Keep writin jaanu..Hpe to see many mre such beautiful stories from u...

once again..Hats off..Love ya 4eva...

Love ya loads komal di..t.cccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Madhu my dear, I'm not surprised that people have told you before to go into writing. Comparing me with the sun... wow that's an over-statement. I'm very touched that you feel that way, but honestly, one cannot compare another with something so beautiful. I'll tell you a secret though, I'm a very subtle person when it comes to writing. I get most of my writing done under the stars. You see, I'm a night person and I feel I have a strong connection with the moon, so I do a bit of wandering in my thoughts while I sulk in the moonlight and eventually, something pops up. haha.

Quite the contrary sweetheart, I do understand how you feel towards my story because I see the same spirit in you as I see in myself. I understand your emotions and thoughts through your reply to the story itself and to my comment. I feel very honored to know that you feel my story is one to remember. That tells me that I have done my job as a writer. I wanted to write something that wasn't as loud as the actual characters are portrayed. And trust me, I know a Punjabi when I see one seeing as how I am one myself. As I said, I'm subtle only when it comes to writing, otherwise, I'm an offscreen Muskaan. My attempt was only to show the deeper side of both these characters, where they don't always end up fighting over small things. This is an extremely light-hearted couple, and so portraying them in this kind of role needed a lot of tediousness.

I completely agree with you that not everything in life is going to be handed to you in a silver platter, and you're right... some stories are doomed from the start. But what we have to remember is that these love stories are pre-destined. They have already been writen by a higher power. We just meet on earth. If the mortal end to a story is separation, who says it's the actual end. We are but a composite of dirt and water. Our existence is just a limitation on our essence. Our soul is immortal, and we should not underestimate the power of love even if the one closest to our heart is no longer physically with us.

That is precisely why I did not have Rahul marry another girl. He said from the start that only one girl entered his life and she'll always be the only girl. It's not that he had anything to be guilty about regarding the fact that she could see him or that he could see her... it was purely the fact that, he coul never feel that same love for another girl ever. He was bound by anything, but he chose to remain with her spiritually rather than being with someone else physically.

Ah yes... 14. I remember being that age. Worst year of my life. Horrible memories that I do not wish to relive ever again! In that case, you may call me Di. I have no complaints. I will definitely put up more stuff, although I do wish to apologize for the extremely long post. Just trying to match up to yours I guess. I would also like to clear out any confusion regarding my comment, because you see the issue is, sometimes it's difficult to understand what it is I'm saying soully because I'm a health science major planning to go into the medical field, who's minoring in philosophy. So I do a lot of existence vs. essence stuff. Yes, I do get yelled at by a good friend about mixing the physical and philosophical sciences, but what can I do? They're both a part of me. I'm in my first year of college so, I'm trying to tune it down a notch, however judging by the amount I've already written, it doesn't seem like I'm doing to hot am I? lol. I should really stop now, warna tum sar pakad ke behat jaaogi aur kahogi ki maine kyun iss ladki se baat ki? lol.

-Love you hamesha,

Komal Di

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Komal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: I-luv-Mayank
OMG ! This is amazing ! It brought tears to my eyes !

This is completly diffrent frm ur prev one...and tht really shows wht a versatile writer u are....

YOur story is one of the very few that brought tears to my eyes....Its lovely...

I dont have the words to describe this....I will comment again...

Awww. Well I'm sorry I made you cry but at the same time, I relieved in a sense that I got the reaction I was hoping for. thanks so much for commenting Appu.

Originally posted by: ~srk_abhi_apu~

Komal i totally agree with what you wrote & with the way you write i can tell that you deeply feel when you write. I think thats what a lot of writers fail to do...express their own emotions through the way they depict the characters and tell the story. Its easy for a reader to gush and goo by reading romantic dialogues but its a different thing to experience some kind of pain or sorrow for the characters by just "reading"! I think what you've written is commendable. And as a very very pedantic & picky reader i really want to encourage you to come up with more unique ideas such as this one..... 😃

Thanks a lot yaar! Main definitely tumhe PM karoongi jab doosa likhoongi toh. I'm glad you have such deep and positive feelings towards this. I kept the romance to a certain level because I really didn't want to sway off topic...

Originally posted by: tanasha1993
that was written so beautifully
made me cry, I can imagine rahuls

condition after muskaan left

totally heart wrenching...I loved it;)

I cant exactly phrase what i feel

in words...kinda speechless...

do write more of such beautiful

one shots or fanfics;)

love

tanu

thank you so much! I will definitely do more writing like this if you all felt so strongly about it.

Originally posted by: kamx2
Hi Komal! Howz life? Long time na???
Merry Christmas!!!

I have been catching up with 'RM-Dream', and its goin awesome! Havent been able to comment there much...sorry!!!

And now, geting back to this One-shot....to put it in simple and short words:

You Had Me In Tears

Seriously, i LOVED it! Yur gonna think i hav gone mad or smth, but the kind of feeling i got while reading, its...inexplicable.

While reading the intro, i felt a certain grief that made me wanna smile....dunno if that even makes sense, but reli thats wat happened.

While reading abt their story and their journey to Kasauli, it made me smile...it gave me a warm and sweet lovely feeling....

And then reading the accident and how Muskaan saved the child...it made me feel...scared. A certain fear of sumthin.

And then, reading Muskaans final words...tears welled up.

Then reading..actually, listening to Rahul's words, once again, it made me feel tearfully happy...it gave me a feeling of grief that made me want to smile.

Komal, i know how it feels to suddenly change urself and plan ur writings for a change. I always do the same, just hold my pen and write down watever cums to mind. But, there are times, wen i actually want to plan my writings for a change, and those pieces of my work always have sumthin special about them, as if they are a piece of me that i am taking out and placing it on a piece of paper. It makes me feel scared, that maybe this one wont turn out good...i shouldnt do this. I know how it feels.

ANd just to tell u the truth, Komal: This One shot...was ur best yet.

It was absolutely fabulous, to say the least. I dont know how to tell you, but it was reli reli...good. I hav run out of good words. I am sorry but i reli cant explain in words how much i liked...no...loved it.😳

I have already written too much, and reading all that i just wrote, i just realized none of it makes any sense at all, but, i hope u got the mesage. It reli was totally awesome. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Hope you have a wonderful new year.

Kamal

You don't have to explain babes! I understand completely. You were supposed to feel those things. I'm so glad you still keep up with R-M Dream. I'll be updating it soon. I still can't believe that I started that in April and it was the first R-M FF on the forum, and it still has so many avid readers. Life is... meh. same old same old. Teri kaisi hai? Hey yaar, please naa, make a new VM on RM. Your VMs are always lovely. eik toh Shazu bhi ghayab hai aaj kal (shockalot) warna I was going to ask that idiot to make one for this shot. Her Toh Phir Aao VM was sooo beautiful, and perfect for this one shot. Matched completely. Only her thing was about how Muskaan left sanjeevani 4 years back and rahul was seeing her everywhere and remembering their moments. There were scenes from him talking to shahnaaz bi in kasauli and him getting off the train when he came to Kasauli with a sad look, and then he had a slight smile. UGH! I wanted to make a siggy of that, but I'd have to go through all of the tapes to find that episode. I'm on tape number 15 right now. I've been taping every episode since that Heer-Ranjha sequence... so basically since last October. Anyway, that's besides the point. Thanks for the great insight. You're totally right. It did turn out better after i thougt about it. love the avi! Of course you know my weakness for that movie! Saawariya.... masterpiece!

Originally posted by: cool~~gal
Hey

It was really nice...It definately brought tears to my eyes....very emotional..i am so glad you brought out the other side to love...and its so true.....its true that not all stories have a happy ending...i really liked the stry....really nice..

Luv

Tina!!

Hey Tina! Thank you so much for the lovely comment!

Originally posted by: aditisilawat
janni what is this?!😲you literally chocked me!!! i...i dont know--- if i know myself enough to say how it was.or whats the need now to say that loud?tell me. all i could push myself to say now is i loved it truly! i think i should go and torture my dictionary to get a word beyond how beautifully it was written😳😳😛

Adi!!!! My jaani! No need to torture your dictionary or me with your lack of vocabulary. Joking! lol. Pata chala tu mere peeche danda leke bhaag rahi ho. I know i know. U want me to update Darna Mana Hai right? I will meri maa. I still love Ashi-Yuvi. I'm just more into Rahul-Muskaan. I also have to find and update my Atul-Anjali ff. Someone, bless their soul, PMed me yesterday for the link and thank god i found it in the old PMs from my outbox. haven't continued that since my birthday. I choked you? Kyun mujh bechaari bachhi pe itna ghatiya ilzaam lagaa rahi ho? You don't need to say anything. I've known you for what? 2 years now. Itna toh main samajhti hoon tujhe yaar. Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: rabo0

OMGGGG...komziee wat've u doneee yaarr...!!!! Maine kuch nahi kiya I swear! I had nothing to do with it!

goddd am seriouslly outta wordsss...i dun really Hahahaha! Kya joke tha. That's possible? you and outta words? mwhahaha.

think i've eva read sumfin so beautiful n sumfin so soulful..😳 Thank you thank you!

jus can't stop cryingg ritee noww...😭 Warning warning! Flash flood alert!

it made me cryy noot coz it was depressing...buh bcoz of da love rahul has for muskan..

da purity..da honesty..da promises..everythingg seemed soo real and soo genuinee.. Then I have succeeded. You scared me for a minute. I thought you didn't like it. lol.

really komziee..u've alwayz shocked us wid ur write ups buh jaan seriouslyy..dis goot to b ur best write up evaaaa..!!!!...👏 Abbey bas! Itni tareefon ki aadat nahi hai mujhe. Kyun mujhe bholi bachhi ko bigaad rahi ho?

i juss loved each n every bit of itt...n maa gawdd da way u've written diss..ur effort ur emotions our reflecting from each word of dis storyy...😳 Aiye haiye! tujhe bada pata hai mere emotions ke baare mein. lol. joking. thanks yaar. I did my best is all I can say.

noe wat as soon as diss story ended naa..i started listening to da yaadain song from da movie yaadain...😳...n seriously am noot exaggeratingg..da lyrics in dat soong genuinely r so lifeless infront of dis write up by YOUUUU..!!!!...😭😭 wow! now there's something I was not expecting and I'm completely touched by that! Yaadein is one of my favorite songs, and to get such a lovely comment, mashAllah. Thank you Rabia!

awesum..terrific...mind blowing job donee siss...!!

u rockedd itt...👏

luv ya loadzzz..🤗🤗🤗 Luv u toooooooo!

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Komal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: ramusk
hey komal... first of all a huge huge thnks for ur timely PM..otherwise ii wud hav missed this one shot..... You're very welcome my dear!

title ko dekhti hi main samjah gayi ki yeh bahut alag hoga sabse aur mein yeh daawe ke saath keh sakti hoon ki in saare RM FF's meinse mere dil ke sabse kareeb hain yeh yaadein.... Awwww. Really? So sweet! I'm glad you feel that way.

mujhe rahul ka own narration bahut pasand aaya...aur aisi kahiin sari lamhe hain jisne mere dil ko choo liya... I thought you would! It was about time kuch different karne ka.

aaj tumne mere soch hi badal di.... Achha? Yay me! mein RM ke freak hoon phirbhi mujhe lagta tha ki RM ke pyaar mein woh seriousness nahi hain..par aaj nahin...aaj mein un dono ko ek alag nazriye se dekhne lag gayi hoon... Thank god! Never underestimate those kind of characters. mujhe lagta tha ke woh seriousness acche nahin lagega RM ki jodi ke liye par aaj tumhari wajeh se un dono ka woh side be dekh chuki hoon....bahut accha laga... Thank you so much! See problem yeh hai naa ki creatives jo hain, woh kuch over the top nahi karte RM ke liye. Woh A-R ko hi rote rehte hain. Issiliye mujhe A-R shuru din se hi pasand nahi the. I was always an Atul-Anjali fan, aur phir jab R-m ki entry hui toh main hogayee clean-bowled! lol. Actually, it was mostly rahul that made me that way. lol.

tumne un dono ko apne hi andaz mein uss title ka haqdaar banaya...mein ab un dono ko iss nazariye se bhi dekhne lagi hoon

PERFECT SOULMATES ...... Awww.

True Love is always not about the First touch,First hug,First kiss,First romance but True Love is something more than that,something that lasts for eternity,something that cant be given or taken away,something that just happens and something which lasts forever with us in our YAADEIN...

main aur kya kahoon... Beta tum already itna kuch keh chuki ho ke ab mere paas kuch nahi hai kehne ko. tumhari wajeh se humare rahul aur muskaan ko bahut kuch mila...... Yeah... mental aur emotional stress, aur saath mein judaai.

tumne apni lajawab writing ,ghehri jazbaat se apne RM ko ek nayi unchayi tak le gayi ho.... How very sweet! I'm flattered!

Ek pal mein kitna kuch badal jaata hain.....jo sach hain woh yaad ban jaati hain jaise issme hua....life and love are not always the same for all.... Well said!

woh gaana yaad aa raha hain

Baatein Bhool Jaati Hain
Yaadein Yaad Aati Hain
Baatein Bhool Jaati Hain
Yaadein Yaad Aati Hain
Yeh Yaadein Kisi Dil-O-Jaanam Ke
Chale Jaane Ke Baad Aati Hain
Yaadein Yaadein Yaadein

iss duniya mein kkuch log aise hote hain jinke kuch baatein ya chote se ek parichay se apnepar ek accha prabahv chod jate hain...aur tum unmese ek ho.... Oh my god! Ab isske baad main kya kahoon? Mere toh filhaal yeh samajh mein nahi aa raha ki main khushi se naachoon yaa rona shuru kardoon. This is the most beautiful thing anyone has ever said to me.

tumhe mera salaam... Wa alaikum aslaam!

mein aaj tumhari fan ban gayi hoon.... Aur main tumhaari. Kitna achha likhti ho yaar!

thank u once again komal... Thanks toh mujhe kehna chahiye tumhe! Tareefon ke pul baandhne ke baad, thanks bhi mujhe kar rahi ho? Love you yaar!

sri

Originally posted by: dipi_dipu
ohh my god! this was awesome!!!! seriously i have no words to describe it!!!! tooo goood!!! i literally cried while reading it!!!!! too goood yaaaarrrr seriouslyyyyyy!!!!

Thank you so much sweety! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia
Oh Komal! I was not so active this weekend and just came online to check PM's and I get this. Surprise!!!!

First of all, warn me when you are going to make me cry. It was quite embarrassing in front of my family. Itna bhi rulahne ki kya zaroorat thi?Awww. I'm so sorry baby. Actually naa, I was expecting mixed reactions. Lekin yahaan toh mujhe expected reaction hi mila and thank god too.

I am a very emotional person and I can't handle much so thats why I write lighthearted stuff and I read lighthearted stories and I love RM because most of the time (until recently on the show) they were a lighthearted couple. Needless to say I expected a lighthearted story. Well, in all fairness, maine umhe pehle hi warn kiya tha ki this was something different. I know i relieved absolutely nothing more than the fact that i was extremely eager to put this up and how close to my heart it was, so for next time, dhyaan mein rakhna ki when i say different, I MEAN different. lol.

I started reading and right away I felt I read something like this before or watched it somewhere and I knew I would cry and I almost started crying well into the 2nd paragraph. Aw. I was hoping you wouldn't feel that way. That just tells me how predictable the storyline was. I knew the story but the way you wrote it... now thats something. I cried more than I have in ages. First its based on my most beloved couple and the emotions were so real. I don't personally believe in this true love and the whole soulmates thing but I could feel him. His never ending love and what his aspirations would have been. I love that you made it a narration by Rahul himself. So much more relatable and personable that way. Thank you so much! I'm sorry i made you cry so much though! And yes, i've gotten that from a lot of people. I personally felt extremely comfortable writing in Rahul's perspective.

I have thought about writing some emotional scenes with RM but I could never do it because I could not get past my own emotions and I would get so upset thinking about it. But you did it.. and beautifully. Now please go and update your other FF so you can make me laugh again as you are the one that put me in this state of depair right now. I will definitely put up the next part to the dream as soon as possible so I can make you smile again.

Originally posted by: jinil

I'm speechless! tears keep rolling down my cheeks as if this was real as if this happened to me! you have such a creative mind keep up the good work

P.S I'm usually a silent reader but it's impossible to be silent while reading this! Still crying!!

love,

Jinil!

Awww god forbid this should happen to you or anyone else for that matter! Bless you. I always love getting a few words out of the silent readers! thank you for commenting!

Originally posted by: princessuma
this was very good!! It made me really sad! but it's true that memories become treasures.

Yes they do! thanks for the comment!

Originally posted by: muskaan_ankita
wow... you left me speechless... 😭 I had tears in my eyes when muskaan died.... gosh!! This is fantastic!!

Thank you! Yeah so did I. I can relate. I was crying while I was writing it.

Originally posted by: SRK-Kads4ever
Komzie... Yes my dear?

Let me tell you one thing... Do baatein kaho. I've read a lot of FFs here at IF, but none of them have made me actually feel the characters' pain. This One-Shot, however, is so beautifully written. Right from the first words to the very last sentence, I connected with Rahul's emotions. Then that shows me that I succeeded as a writer. I achieved what I was hoping to.

I have never ever been touched by a story to the extent that tears come to my eyes, but when Muskaan was hanging on the rope, tears slipped out of my eyes... Mine too!

Amazing job, Komzie...Love you! And thank you for such a beautiful story! Love you too. and Thank YOU for actually reading and commenting kyunki R-M Dream mein jab aapka track phirse shuru hogaya hai aur woh bhi A-A ke saath, toh aap toh ghayab hi hogayeen hain! Stupid! I'm still waiting teri comments ke liye!

Originally posted by: luv_dmg_armaan
Hey Komal,

Omg!!This was the most touching story that I have ever read.It was so emotional and mann I can't stop crying,Seriously speechless...Fab writing!! Awesome! Thank you so much. I mean... not awesome that you can't stop crying, but awesome that you felt so strongly about it!
It was so sad..Poor Rahul... and I loved the concept. really different from your other one off's and your fanfic..It was truly touching and heartwrenching...But wht you wrote was so beautiful!!Love truly can never be lost and it remains with us forever..the person may die but their love for you will never cease and vica versa... I know. It was very differnt from my original writing. See the other 2 one-shots I wrote and the ff are more lighthearted and I match the dialogues to the characters, Here, it was a differnt story.
Truly Awesome story!! Thank you!!!

Radhika

Originally posted by: coolpal
Komal, this was totally brilliant yaar! It was soo emotional and so well written, i could truly imagine it all. The atmosphere with the mountains and all and that tense moment when Muskaan was slipping away..man u wrote that tooooo well!! I could feel their feelings and felt sad for Rahul, i can go on and on about how good it was. Really, it was too good!! U have managed to write it so beautifully, that it seems like i am reading a book or something!! Keep it up yaar, and u should never hesitate in posting such great pieces of writing, u know we'll always love it!! 😳

Thanks Fatima!!! Man I was missing your comment! We still need to catch up... BIG TIME! Sorry yaar, I was on Facebook even after you left, but then I had to practice for the concert. Guru Maa said I won't be singing for 3 hours like last time because last time toh she had me do the whole concert. her way of launching me. cruel way but it was very helpful. Lekin iss baar, no surprises. I am singing no more than 12 songs. List main tumhe baad mein message kardoongi fb pe. Still figuring some stuff out. Ali said he'd be ther for sure so I'm excited to have one of my good friends there. Roohi, Fatima, Sana, Mahrukh, Mehwish, Sofia sab aane waale hain. I'm damn excited! InshAllah sab achha ho bas! Allah se dua karna ki mera yeh concert achha hojaaye bas. Pictures upload kardoongi facebook par. I wish ki tu bhi Chicago mein rehti. Eik kaam kar, New York se Chicago ki agli flight pakad aur seedhe yahaan aaja. My special gift! lol.

love you!!!

Komzie

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Komal.. it was an awesome one... u made tears come out of my eyes... I could visualise everything happened... girl... I do not what my present feelings in my mind are... but I can just say I loved it so much.

I can see the hardwork u've put while writing it... loved it loads... keep writing more.. Kudos to you!!!

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Komal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it and took the time to read it. I will definitely write some more stuff soon!

-Komz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Hiiii it was such a such a...I don't have words for this...U just made me cry...while writing this I m still crying I cannot controll my feelings....N ya I just want to Say Haapy birthday Muskaan...As Rahul I also miss u......

N I just want to dedicated a shayari for her frm Rahul's side to Muskaan.....Shayad aapne padhi ho.....but this is the perfect feeling frm him...

Can u close ur eyes 4 a minute plz.......

Thank u.....

Did u feel how dark it was???

This is my life without u.....