A Ray of Hope—(AR) part 4 pg1 (finished)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Thanks guys....will try to reply each of the comments if i find some extra time......love u all....next part will prolly be up by tonight.....

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Atma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Such an interrsting ff

pls dont give it a sad ending!

would u b able to pm me when u update?, pls!

Atma

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Anita Malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Ania! First off thanks for the PM! I've been quite busy these past days and haven't found time to come to the FF section!

I love the way you're developing the story! Armi sure seems different than the guy from the first part, other than those eye-staring sessions...LOL...I wonder how they fall in love..Hmmmmmmm...

Continue soon!

Love, Anita

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240648

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

part 3 updated guys......

don't forget to leave ur comments (it doesn't take too long)....

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!

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Anita Malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Loved the part Ania!

So Ridz and Armaan bonded...and you showed us that Armi is married...Hmmm...that last part better have nothing BUT suprises in it...LOL...I wonder what all you're gonna show in the last part before winding up the story! Hmmmmmm....

Lovely part..Continue soon!

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sharvi123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

OMG!!
its such an amaizing ff!!
can u plz convert ur short ff into a long ff?? lol
but seriously i would love 2 read more parts of it...its so awesome!!

If you have written another ffs, can u please provide me the links of them? It would be immensly nice of you.

Plz pm me for the next part...but only if its fine with you!

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Hey it's really fabulous FF, I really loved it.
Pls continue soon.
I am waiting eagerly and PM me if possible.

And ya very very happy new year, have lots of fun.
Kashish

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Hina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

hey ania
just done part 2
as a new yr resolution i'm avoiding reserving posts and commenting right away,saves me time somehow
so lemme tell u what i thot of part 2
well it was kinda short ,may be coz i didnt want the meeting to be short
oh well,loved how u desbribed her expressions and his effects on her
the change in feelings is awsomely written
the queue ,he ipod
haha laziness and boredom came easy wow,thats me
thanx for that line,will use it for myself hehe

ok so moving on,he remebered her and offered for the lift,i like
and finally he gave his name like delivering a movie dialouge haha cool!
the next morning description i loved it,coz u just described it so well wid her emotions

now me back to part 3
thanx for the pm

love
Hina

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Hina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

ok done with part reading pt 3
wat was that about?
i bet she'll turn out to be his sister
i was sad to know anjie's ill state
but none the less glad he spoke a little more
not all tho
lots happened in this pt but gave us lots to think
me gonna reserve my comments as of yet
and will give u a whole essay once u give us the last part
love your writing ania
cont soon and pm me if u can
and i've bookmarked the link,i wont lose it this time

love
Hina