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am finally here...humph!!
awwww such a sweet one...the whole description of it being christmas time and snow and all...its so sweet...wish i could see all that for real...it was beautiful how u described it and okay so she a doctor and he a violinst..good good...i like it...and his event got ruined...hmmm...
I read the next part where the snow flakes falling on her lashes and all and i couldn't help but think of this song i love...
raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens...
Bright copper kettles and warm wollen mittens..
snowflakes that fall on my nose and eyelashes...
These are a few of my favorite things...
haha..i dn't remember the whole song but when i was reading the part this song resounded in my head and u know i was smiling...i just love this song soooo very much...
omg the whole scene was beautiful...how she enjoyed the snow of her skin...and he saw her from a distance...di you created the romance beautifully...
the next moment she screamed and swayed dancing like a little kid as she lived her romantic high...
awesome awesome awesome...this one was sooo good...i read it over and over again...hehehe
but the part just got better...the whole scene in the pub was so so so sweet di..it was really nice..their bonding and all but the poor guy didn't have money hehehe so he gone to the hospital now...poor him...
okay me reading the next part now...
awww...he was sleeping in a corner feeling all cold...oho...and the red nose 😆 cute...nice nd she so worried about him...hmmm...yeyyy!! christmas dinner togethor and you know while reading i was worried throughout that his christmas gonna be rotten and i remember reading in my english textbook about this 'special' christmas dinner and i was like 'poor armaan not getting any' but yeyyy!! coz his is gonna be extra special as he going to have her along...and she too would have some company...😃 gr8
ahh!! he observing her again huh?? and he dislikes his father...why so? okay and i liked that line...her eyes a symbol of passion😳...nice
hawww...peeking in her bedroom...bad manners...but awww its so cute her room...
Mr.Bean i love him too...well who doesn't...even mom doesn't mind it when i make her watch him while having dinner...everyone likes it i guess...
awww....wat a romantic moment...he played a romantic passionate music for her and the kiss...awesome di...well described...it was so touching..and passionate of course...
damn that man...ufff!! when he jerked up..i was like plsss no same old story of this is wrong and bla bla but the awww the poor guy was nursing this hurt in him about this bilogical father of his...hate such men....so that's why he hates his father...
omg he left...and i got tears...okay not exactly but i think its coz i didn't read continuously and paused to write the comment but di its soooooooooooo toching...you know i love books which are light on a reader and still touch the very core of u and this fic did exactly that...its beautiful...lemme find a word other than the ones i have used like a hundred time already...wait sensuous is one i already know ...yeah...the part was of course sensuous but not the romance bit instead your description of the christmas eve...and other wise the part was brilliant, exquisite and handsome.....hehehe...
Loved it di...would wait for the next one now...😳
Love ya
Kratz
I just read the part-7-9...and they all sooo good...a perfect start for my day though its already afternoon here but my day started now only and ur parts are wat i read the first thing...my keyboard got toothpaste over it coz i was brushing my teeth wen i was reading...nyways i just loved this di and i wudn't mind if u write 10 more parts...this such a light and sweet fic...i can read on and on...do wrie an epilogue na...
okay so coming to the part...it was beautiful obv and the painful pleasure she getting in waiting for him was stunning nd described the emotions with such beauty that i was left breathless....kudos to u for creating this magical world with romance in the air...sprinkled with passion...and a hear warming bond formed b/w two people which was so beautiful that it got tears in my eyes and the smile just stayed for a whole minute with the toothpaste everywhere except in the tube...
Loved it so much...write another one ya..and wud wait for the epilogue....
Love you loads
Kratz
Edited by krati.mehra - 16 years ago
