Yeh Kasi Zindgi - Note regarding AR entery Page 1

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This is a fan fic about Ranbir Kanya, Nakul Sanchi, Sagar Ganga and Akash Manya. This is my first fan fic so please forgive me for my mistakes. I had posted it in KIT forum. I would like people to comment it will help me want to write more.
Kanya is Ayan's widow.Ranbir comes to meet Ayan after a long time but shocked to know he is dead. Ranbir and Kanya are attracted to each other, but ignore it. Nakul, Ganga and Manya are Ranbirs siblings. Sanchi, Sagar and Akash are Kanya's siblings.
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Nakul Nanda (23)

Ganga Nanda (21)

Manya Nanda (21)
The Godbole's

Kanya Godbole (24)

Sanchi Godbole (23)

Sagar Godbole (21)

Akash Godbole (21)

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Part 1- Ranbir meets Kanya

It's Ayan's funeral, everyone's there crying. Kanya's all quite and upset. Ranbir's in the airport, really excited to meet his best friend in such a long time. When he reaches Ayan's house he see's someone had died. He goes inside and sees a picture of Ayan with garland (not sure wht they call it). Ranbir sees this and brakes down. After everyone leaves Ranbir goes to Ayan's dad

R: Uncle yeh saab kasi hua?

Ayan's Dad: Woh Ayan aur Kanya shopping ki liye gay thi, Jab wapis aree thi ek truck usi direction ara tha aur unki gari tree pur hit kargi.

R: I'm so sorry uncle. Aap thek ho?

Ayan's Dad: Muji mere neih fikar muji toh Kanya ki fikar hai? Jab si accident hua us neih kuch neih kaya ja piya.

R: Uncle Kanya kan ha hai?

Ranbir's Dad: who apne kamre meih ha, mera matlab Ayan ki kamri meih hai

Ranbir goes to meet Kanya

He sees a girl beside the window wearing a white sari. He calls her. She turns around and sees Ranbir. He goes up to her. He can't take his eyes off her. He has never felt this way before. They both have an eye lock

Part 2- Ranbir and Kanya become friends

Just then a servant comes to give Kanya food. But she refuses

R: Kanya tume hi kana hai

K: Muji bohok Nahin hai

R: Tum apni liye nahin Ayan ki liya kalo. Kya who tume assi deck kar kush rahi ga

Ranbir takes the plate and starts feeding Kanya. Ayan's mom is passing by, see this and gets excited. She goes to Ayan's dad.

Ayan's mom: It ni dino me pelhe bar Kanya kana kati deka

Ayan's dad goes and sees Ranbir feeding Kanya and starts crying.

Afetr eating…

K: Aap Ayan ko kasi janthi ho?

R: Mein aur Ayan bachpan ki dost hai. Ek baat bato tum hari aur Ayan ki love marriage thi ya arranged marriage?

K: Hamari love marriage thi

Ranbir's phone rings and has to leave

R: Mai chalta huin, lekin jani si pelhle ek dost banana chata huin… Mujsi dosti karogi?

K: Agar aap Ayan ki dost ho to mere bi dost ho

R: Teek kal hum phir si millngi

Part3-Ranbir gets Responsibility

Ranbir gets home and goes to his room. He had no clue what was happening to him. He couldn't stop thinking of Kanya. He was lost in her thoughts. He remembered her

He thought about her sparkling eyes. Then how long her hair was, and it was put down. It was amazing how couldn't stop thinking about her.

R: Yeh muji kya hora hai. Mein Kanya ki bare mein kuan sochra huin?

Later he went to sleep.

The next day he went to meet Kanya. On his way to Kanya's house he met an Astrologist. He said…

Beta tum hari Zindigi mein tum hare jeven saati agi hai a ari hai.

He had no clue about he said. He reached Kanya's House. On his way to her room .he bumped into Ayan's Dad.

AD: Ranbir beta mein tusi baat karna chata huin.

R: Kya hua? (With a confused look)

AD: Mein aur Ayan ki mom kuch din ki liye Dubai Ja ri ha. Mein chata huin uss waqt ki liye kyat um Kanya ka kyaal rakt sak thi ho?

R: Of course uncle, mien Kanya kai kyal rak sak ta huin

AD: Thank you so much, mera buge halka hogya

R: Iss mein thank you kani wale baat kahan hai

AD: Mein vhata huin Kanya tumhari saat tumhari ghar mein rahigi. Agar who yahaan rahigi who Ayan ki mut par both rogi.

R: Uncle muji koi atraaz naih hai.

AD: Teek hai, pir kaal tum Kanya ko line ana

R: Okay mein Kanya si milta huin

Ranbir goes to Kanya's room. He sees she's holding Ayan's picture.

K: Ayan tum muji chor kar kuan gi? Tum janti ho mein tumsi kitna pyar karthi huin, pirbi tum muji chor kar gi. Tum hara who jo… bachpan ka dost hai na bot acha hai, lekin muji usi milkar kuch hua.

After hearing this Ranbir was happy.

R: Knock Knock.

K: Oh hi kasi ho?

R Mein teek huin. Kya tumi yaad hai kaal mani kya ka tha.

Kanya made a confused face

R: Teek hai mein yaad karatha huin. Aaj tum pura din mere saat raho gi. Kaal si tum kuch din ki liye mere saat mere ghar mein raho gi.

K: Oh… papji neih muji baatiya

R: Acha jaldi karo humi janna hai

K: Kuan jari hai

R: Yeh toh surprise hai

Teek hai pelhe tum jao. Muji badal na hai

Kanya comes out wearing a white churidaar. Ranbir couldn't take his eyes off her. Her churidaar was plain and simple, yet she looked gorgeous.

R: Chale

Kanya nods her head, and they leave.

K: Hum pelhe kuan jari hai.

R: Hum, pelhe tum hare liye shopping karogi

K: Ranbir lekin mein ek widwa huin

R: Kanya please asi mat kaho. Muji acha neih lagta hai.

K: Ranbir please try to understand

R: Kanya please agar tum asi baat karo gi, toh mein tumsi baat neih karo gi

K: Lekin Ranbir…

R: Kanya please tum asi old fashion muth banno

K: Fine agar yeh baat hai toh mein deko gi

R: Iss ka matlab tum shopping karo gi

K: Mein yeh naih ka tha. Lekin dekin gi

R: Koi baat neih tum razi to hogi

They reach the shopping mall. At first Kanya is looking for clothes that Ranbir can wear. He tried a lot of outfits but Kanya did like most of them.then he tried one that Kanya loved. It reminded her of Ayan in there first meeting.

Flashback

Kanya and Pooja are shopping.

P: Kanya muji boy bok lagri hai, mein khana kane jari hoin

K: Okay di, app jao mein baad mein aogi.

Pooja leaves and Kanya goes back to shop. She's looking for something to wear on Pooja's engagement. While walking to a store she notices these guys checking her out.

G: Wow kya maal hai. Ek bar is ski saat…

K: Excuse me!! Ladki si baat karni ki tameez nieh ha? Bloody losers.

G: Yeh ada toh muji usi hor attract klarthi hai.

Before they could say another word Kanya left. Kanya went to Pooja.

K: Di yeah aaj kal ki ladki bi na.

P: Kya hua?

Kanya tells her everything.

R: Kanya tum bi na. Yeh India hai Canada neih. Aur tum to asi baaton ko gor neih karti.

K: Your right di. Meih bi na asi baaton meih agi.

Pooja's cell rings.

P: Hi jaan kaso jo. Teek hai meih arre huin. Kanya muji jana hai. Main tum ghar mein milti ho. Bye

K: Teek hai bye di.

Kanya goes back shopping to find the perfect outfit.

K: Oh my god, mein late hori hun. Muji jaana chahi

Kanya goes to get her car when she sees that the tire is punctured. Then it starts to rain

K: Oh god. Tire ko abhi puntchured hona tha, aur aab barash hori hai. This is just my lucky day.

Just then a car stopped. And a guy opened the window

G: Excuse me do u need any help?

K: Its okay, ill manage. Thanks anyway

Kanya starts walking when she sees that sees surrounded by the guys who were checking her out earlier.

K: Muji jaani do?

G: Kuan pelhe tora khelti hai.

The guy starts coming close to her.

K: Ek kadum aggi kiya toh meih…

G: Kya karo gi. Maa ko baalo gi

He's about to grab her when, someone pushes him away. It was the guy who asked Kanya for a ride.

Guy in the car: Tumhi ladkioyn ki saat khel neih mein maza ata hai. Ab dekti hai mein tumhare saat kya karooyn ga.

He beats up all the goons, before he could hit them anymore they ran away as fast as they can. He goes to Kanya and puts hi jacket on her because she is soaking wet. He take her to his car.

Guy in the car: Aap kahan rati ho?

K: Magic Hill (I couldn't think of anything else)

Guy in the car: By the way I'm Ayaan Nanda

K: Kanya Godoble

A: Acha naam hai

K: Aap ka naam be acha hai

They talk until Kanya's house comes.

A: Dekho aap ka ghar araa hai

K: Thank you

Back to Reality

R: Kanya, Kanya, Kanya…

K: Oh sorry mein vo kuch neih

R: Kanya tum muji baata sakti ho

K: Baad mein baato gi

R: Teek anyways. Mein kasa lagta huin?

K: Tum bot achi lagti ho

R: teek hai phir yeh leti hai.

Part 4-

After shopping for Ranbir, Kanya and Ranbir decide to eat. They go to the food court and eat.

R: Kya kaho gi?

K: Kuch bhi.

R: Kanya such baato. Kya kaho gi?

K: Jo tum kaho gi.

R: Kanya seriously baato kya khana hai?

K: Jo tum kaho gi.

Ranbir getting really annoyed wants to scream but something stops him. Whenever he sees Kanya something happens to him. He just doesn't know what it is. Kanya seeing Ranbir all frustrated starts laughing.

R: Tum janti huin, tum bhoot achi lagti ho jab hansi thi

K: Line mar ri ho

R: Naih… woh… mein

K: Mein mazak kari thi, anyways muhji salad chai hai

R: Kanya tum bhi na. Waiter

W: Yes sir.

R: We'll like 2 salads, and small pizza

W: Yes sir and leaves

K: Ranbir mani kaha tha mani salad bus lani hai. Tum neih pizza kuan magaya?

R: Kanya … kyat um diet joa sirf salad logi

K: Ranbir, mein aur diet please. Jab mein mom aur dad ki saat rahti ti to mein har panch min mein kahana kati ti.

Kanya starts telling him all her past times with her family. While Ranbir just stares at her. He is not able to take his eyes of f her.

In his mind R: Wow, Kanya bhoot kubsuraat lagra hi ha.

Interrupting Kanya R: Kanya, tum jaanti ho tum bhoot achi lag ti ho jad hansi (laugh) thi ho.

K: Tum jaanti ho Ranbir, tum bilkul Ayan ki tara baat karthi ho. Ayan bhi asi khata ta, lekin muji compliment karni si pelhe who muji bhoot chara tha tha.

R: Ayan to buchpan si asi tha. Sub ko tang karat ha tha aur phir un ki compliment karta ha tha.

K: mein janti huin. Aap janti ho ki jab mein aap ki saat hoti huin tab muji Ayaan ki yaad neih ati

Part 5-

Ranbir and Kanya finished there lunch and went back to shopping.

R: Kanya come on try some dresses.

K: Ranbir…

R: Oh come on Kanya. Please for me

Kanya thought a little and finally agreed. Ranbir brought a lot of colorful salwaar kameez for Kanya to try on. While she was trying them on, Ranbir thought how pretty she looked in each one. He bought most of them for Kanya. After shopping they went to a resturant.

Ranbir: So what do you want?

Kanya: Anything

Ranbir: Okay, then we'll have my favorites. Waiter.

Waiter: Yes sir

Ranbir: We'd like to order

Waiter: What would you like?

Ranbir: Dal, Chawaal, Roti and chicken. (I like home made food so I don't go out much, but if I do its like Pizza Pizza)

Waiter: Okay sir, your order will be here soon.

After the waiter left, Ranbir turned to Kanya who looked shocked.

Ranbir: What happened?

Kanya: We have the same favorites.

Ranbir: That's a relief. I didn't think you'll like what I ordered.

There dinner arrived. They ate and talked a lot about each other. After eating, Ranbir took Kanya home.

Ranbir: Kanya your house is here.

Kanya how was lost in her own thoughts didn't hear him.

Ranbir: Kanya, Kanya.

After getting annoyed with Kanya, he screamed in her ear.

Kanya: What'd you do that?

Ranbir: Because you weren't listening to me

Kanya: Sorry, I was just thinking about how; I'm going to stay at your house.

Ranbir: I don't understand

Kanya: what would everyone think if I stay with you? There going misunderstand our relation.

Ranbir: Don't worry; my sisters are coming back from the US tomorrow.

Kanya: I didn't know you had sisters. You didn't even tell me about your family.

Ranbir: I'm sorry, I'll tell you everything tomorrow and you also have to tell me about your family.

Kanya: Okay, it's getting late I'll see you tomorrow.

Ranbir watches Kanya, toll she's inside.

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Kanya's Room

Kanya Thinking: Ranbir's so nice. I donno why, but I feel attracted to him. He's so cute, and yet so sexy. Oh my god! What am I thinking; I can't think that Ranbir is Ayan's friend and I'm a widow.

Kanya tried hard not to think about Ranbir, but the more she tried the more she would think about him. She fell asleep thinking about Ranbir.

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Ranbir's Room

Ranbir Thinking: Kanya looked so happy. She so cute when she smiles. I will make sure she always smiles. I don't know why, the more time I spend with her, the more attracted I get. What am I doing? I can't think about her like that she was Ayan's wife and now his widow. Why can't I see her like a like that. Why do widows have to live like that? There also humans. I don't care what people say I will make sure Kanya's always happy.

Ranbir went to sleep thinking about Kanya and that he Kanya will stay with him for 2 weeks.

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The Next Day

Kanya's House:

Ayan's Dad: Take care beta we'll miss you

Kanya: I will, don't worry about me.

Ayan's Mom: Beta, Ranbir should be on his way. We're getting late so we have to go right night. Bye beta.

Kanya: Bye mom and dad

Kanya then goes to her room and starts packing her clothes. After putting in some of her clothes she realizes there all white. She thinks about Ranbir and how he'll get mad if she wears white, so she keeps some of them and put the clothes Ranbir bought for her yesterday and some clothes she had before Ayan's death. When she's done she goes downstairs and waits for Ranbir.

Kanya is very excited to spend 2 weeks with Ranbir, but doesn't want to accept it. Kanya is lost in her thoughts that she can't hear Ranbir calling her name.

Ranbir: Kanya, Kanya and gets really annoyed and screams in her ear.

Kanya: huh. Ranbir, when did you come? And why were screaming my name?

Ranbir: I came 5 mintues ago and tried calling you but you weren't answering. I got annoyed and screamed in you ear.

Kanya: Sorry. Let's go.

Ranbir: Okay, I'll get your bags. You go wait in the car.

Ranbir gets her bags and goes to the car. The car was in silence. Kanya was getting annoyed of the silence, so she started talking.

Kanya: So Ranbir when are we going to pick your sisters up?

Ranbir: When we get home, we'll put your bags in your room. I'll show you your room and the house and then we'll pick my sisters up.

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When they reach the Nanda mansion, Ranbir gets someone to put Kanya's bags in her room. Then he starts showing Ranbir the house. Then they reached Ranbir's room.

Kanya: Let me guess this is your room

Ranbir whispers: And your future room.

Kanya: Did you say anything?

Ranbir: No. Did you hear anything?

Kanya: I donno, I thought you said something. Anyways let's forget that, can you show me my room.

Ranbir: Okay

Ranbir leads Kanya to the room next to his. When Kanya sees the room she is shocked. It was just like her room before marriage expect for the colours on the wall.

Ranbir: Do you like it?

Kanya: I love it. It's just like my old room.

Ranbir: Thank god you like it, I wasn't sure if you'd like it or not. You know I got my sisters to help me with the room.

Kanya: Talking about your sisters, tell me about your family. Kanya says dragging Ranbir to the bed.

Ranbir: Okay. My family moved to America about 15 years ago. So basically my childhood was spent there. 3 years later my dad died in a car accident, so my mom had to take care of all the business. Even though she worked she never neglected me or my sisters. When I finished uni I started helping out in the family business. I came to India a couple of times due to business, but never got a chance to meet Ayan. I have 2 younger sisters and 1 younger brother. I am the oldest, the second oldest is Nakul. Then are my 2 princesses Ganga and Manya, they both are fraternal twins Ganga is 5 minutes older then Manya.

Kanya: I'm sorry about your dad. She says, putting her hand on his.

Then they have an eye lock until Ramu Kaka doesn't come and tell them its time to go pick Ganga and Manya.

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Car

Kanya: Why aren't your mom and your brother Nakul coming?

Ranbir: Mom is working on a big deal and Nakul is having his exams so they'll probably come next week.

Part 6

Car

Kanya: Ranbir you told me who is in your family, but not how they are.

Ranbir: Mom is the best mom ever. She may work a lot but she never neglected us. She would go to all of my football games, Nakul's basketball games, Ganga's soccer games and Manya's Dance performances. Mom is trying to get me married, but I told her a million times I don't want to get married.

Kanya: Why don't you want to get married?

Ranbir: I guess I haven't fell in love or found the right girl.

Kanya: Don't worry I'll find the perfect girl for you.

Ranbir thinking: You don't have to; the girl is you…not again. What am I thinking? I can't think of Kanya like this.

Kanya: Ranbir, Ranbir what were you thinking of?

Ranbir: Nothing really.

K: Anyways, tell me about Nakul, Ganga and Manya.

Ranbir: Nakul is a big flirt, he changes girlfriends like s girl changes clothes. He maybe a flirt but he wouldn't do anything to bring disgrace to our family. He is very sweet and caring. He is very protective about Ganga and Manya. He loves basketball. Ganga is very smart, and an organize girl. She loves children. She can persuade anyone. She loves playing soccer and she is a great singer. Manya is very childish; she is just like a little kid. She is carefree; she is serious when it comes to school. She fights for what she believes in. she loves dancing, it's basically her passion. She has a little anger problem, maybe not a little, but a really big anger problem. Manya and Ganga are opposite, but there is one thing that they both hate.

Kanya: What is that?

Ranbir: Flirts.

Kanya: Nakul is a flirt, so they also hate him.

Ranbir: No, they love Nakul a lot. But if anyone tries to flirt with them they'll regret it.

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Meanwhile in the airport

We see a girl walking, listening to Guzarish (I love this song) while looking through her purse. Suddenly she bumps into a guy; she is about to fall when suddenly the guy catches her. The guy is taken back by her beauty. She keeps staring at, which makes the girl uncomfortable.

Guy: Beautiful

Girl: Excuse me

Guy: Your eyes are gorgeous

Girl: Will you leave or do I have to yell?

Guy: Chill women

He lets go of so she can stand up.

Guy: Don't I deserve a thank you at least.

Girl: Thank you fro saving me for falling down. But that doesn't mean you could stare at me.

Guy: It's a free country I could do whatever I want.

Girl: Well you're not allowed to stare at me.

Guy: Why is there a law that says that I can't stare at you?

Girl: Will you just shut up

Guy: Is it me or do you hear music?

Girl: My Ipod

Guy: What?

Girl: Nothing. And is about to leave when the guy grabs her hand.

Guy: May I know the name of this beautiful girl.

Girl: Leave my hand or else I will yell

Guy: What if I say I won't leave your hand until you tell me your name?

Girl: Then I'll scream. I will give you 5 seconds and if you don't leave my hand I will scream.

1… (The guy gives her I don't care look) 2… (The guy holds her hand tighter) 3… (The guy kisses her hand) How dare you kiss my hand? She screams

Everyone stops what there doing and stares at them.

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Meanwhile in the car

Ranbir: God why isn't there any parking?

Kanya smiles at Ranbir's childish behavior

Kanya: Ranbir stop acting like a little kid. Look there is parking over there.

Ranbir parks the car. Ranbir and Kanya both get out of the care and head towards the airport.

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Meanwhile inside the airport

Girl: I don't know who you think you are. But you have no right to kiss my hand

Guy: I am Akash, and I can do more then kiss your hand if I want. He says grinning.

Girl: I don't care if you're Akash or someone else, leave right now or else I'll call security.

Akash: This airport isn't yours, where you get what you want

Girl yells: Security

Security: Yes ma'am, is there anything wrong

Girl: Yes, this guy was misbehaving with me

Akash: Don't believe her; she's just mad at me. You see we're newly wed and we got into a small argument. Sorry for the trouble.

Security: Its okay sir, this happens a lot here. After saying this he leaves

Girl: How dare you say were married. I'm going to kill you. Just as she says this her phone rings. When she sees who is calling she becomes worried, and leaves

Akash watches her leave. Just as he turns he sees his sister Pooja and his brother in law Rahul.

Akash: Hey di and Jij

Pooja hugs Akash

Pooja: How are you? How is everyone at home? How's Kanya? How's school? Are still playing pranks on the teachers?

Rahul: Pooja stop asking him questions and let's go home. You need rest

Akash: By the way di you've grown really fat

Pooja: Shut up Akash.

Akash: Sorry di. Let's go.

Akash, Pooja and Rahul leave the airport. Just then Ranbir and Kanya enter the airport. Ranbir is searching for Ganga and Manya.

Ranbir: Who knows where they are? I told them to come near the entrance. Where are they? Just as he says that his eyes are covered by 2 beautiful girls.

Ranbir: Kanya this is no time for jokes, we have to find Ganga and Manya

Then the girls leave there hands and come in front of Ranbir.

Ranbir hugs both of them and says: Ganga, Manya I missed both of you so much.

Ganga: We did too. That why we came here.

Manya: By the way bhai, who is Kanya?

Ranbir points at Kanya.

Kanya: Hi, I heard at lot about both of you.

Manya: I hope there good things

Kanya: Don't worry there good things

Ganga: OH MY GOD!!!

Ranbir: What?

Ganga: Bhai, how can you get married without my permission.

Kanya looks horrified

Ranbir looks and Kanya and then says: Ganga, you're mistaken...

Manya: No bhai Ganga is right that's not fair. By the way bhabhi is very pretty; I must say your chose is pretty good. By the way bhabhi why did you marry bhai?

Kanya: I think both of you are mistaken. Ranbir and I aren't married.

Ganga and Manya: What?

Ranbir: This is Kanya, Ayan's wife.

Kanya: Correction was Ayan's wife

Ganga: Meaning?

Kanya says with her eyes moist: He is no more

Manya: Oh my god, we're sorry. If we had known we wouldn't have said anything

Kanya: It's okay. You both didn't know.

Ganga: We're really sorry.

Kanya: It's okay.

Manya: If you don't mind can we call you di.

Kanya: I would love it if you call me di

Ganga and Manya: Thanks di.

Ranbir: You guys must be tired. Let's go home

Ranbir, Kanya, Ganga and Manya leave the airport and go home.

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Part 7

Godbole Residence

Akash, Pooja and Rahul go inside.

Pooja: Mom, Dad, Sagar, Sanchi

Akash: Di, don't waste your breath. Its 2 in the afternoon dad is at office. Sagar and Manya are still in collage and mom must be preparing food for you guys.

Rahul: Akash why aren't you at collage

Akash: I have a spare right now, so I decided to pick both of you up

Just then Pammi comes

Pammi: Pooja, Rahul how are you? I hope Rahul is taking good care of you.

Pooja: Mom we're fine and Rahul is taking good care of me and the baby.

Pammi: Both of you go to your room and rest. I will call you both for dinner, and then you can meet everyone.

Pooja: Okay mom

Pooja and Rahul both go there room and rest. While Akash follows his mom to the kitchen.

Pammi: Akash, I'm worried about Kanya. I tried calling her so many times but no one would answer.

Akash: Did you try the landline?

Pammi: Yes

Akash: Did you try her cell?

Pammi: Yes, but it goes unreachable or it's switched off.

Akash: Mom don't worry, I'll go and check on her.

Pammi: When you find out anything about her, call me

Akash: I will, Bye ma

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Meanwhile Nanda House

Ranbir, Kanya, Ganga and Manya go inside.

Kanya: Ganga, Manya you both must be tired. I'll call you both for dinner.

Ganga: Okay di

Ganga and Manya both go upstairs

Kanya: Ranbir, what do Ganga and Manya like to eat?

Ranbir: Kanya you don't have to cook. We're going out for dinner.

Kanya: Are you sure because I don't mind cooking.

Ranbir: It's okay Kanya. You can cook some other time. You must also be tired. Why don't you go rest.

Kanya: Okay. What time are we going?

Ranbir: Be ready by 6. I'll go tell Ganga and Manya. They'll take forever just to choose an outfit.

Kanya then goes to her room, while Ranbir goes to Ganga and Manya's room.

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Manya's Room

Manya: Wow

Manya then goes and lies down on the bed. Just then she hears a knock on the door.

Manya: Come in

Ranbir comes in and sits at the edge of Manya's bed.

Ranbir: Manya I want you to be ready by 6. We're going for dinner.

Manya: Okay, bhai can I ask you something.

Ranbir: You don't need permission to ask me anything.

Manya: Bhai mom wants to know if you found a girl and when you want to get married.

Ranbir: Manya at least not you. Mom and Ganga are killing me with these questions. Tell mom I don't like any girl and I don't plan on getting married yet. Tell mom I will tell her if I find a girl.

Manya: Bhai please find a girl fast.

Ranbir: I will.

Ranbir leaves and goes to Ganga's room.

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Ganga's Room

Ranbir: Can I come in?

Ganga: Bhai you don't need permission.

Ranbir: Ganga we're all going for dinner. So be ready at 6

Ganga: Okay. Bhai if I ask you something will you get mad?

Ranbir: I won't get mad. Just speak up

Ganga: Bhai, do you like Kanya di?

Ranbir: What?

Ganga: It's not a hard question. Do you like Kanya di?

Ranbir: I have work; I have to finish work right now. I'll see later. After saying that he literally runs at out the room.

Ganga: Bhai, I will find out.

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Kanya's Room

Kanya goes to bed and lies down on the bed and tries to sleep. 5 minutes after twisting and turning Kanya decided to check her phone. When she turns her phone on she sees there are 10 missed calls from her mom. Then she phones her mom

Kanya: Namaste Ma

Pammi: Kanya, where were you? Why didn't you pick your phone? You know how worried I was? I sent Akash to your house to check on you?

Kanya: Sorry ma. I switched my phone. Mom I'm not at Ayan's house, Akash won't find anyone there. I'm sorry

Pammi: It's okay beta. By the way why aren't you there?

Kanya: It's a long story, I'll tell you later.

Pammi: Kanya I wanted to tell you that you're having dinner here with us.

Kanya: But

Pammi: No buts, I said you're having dinner here so you're having dinner here.

Kanya: Okay, ma if you don't mind can I bring some friends

Pammi: Sure beta

Kanya: Thanks. What time should I come?

Pammi: Around 5

Kanya: Okay. Mom I have to go bye. Love you

Pammi: Love you too

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Godbole Residence

After talking to Kanya, Pammi decides to call Akash.

Pammi: Akash

Akash: Hi mom

Pammi: Beta I want you to come home right now.

Akash: But why, I'm going to check on Kanya di

Pammi: There's no need. I just talked to Kanya right now. She's coming over for dinner.

Akash: Okay, I'm coming home. Bye mom

Pammi: Bye beta

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Nanda Residence

Kanya is going to meet Ranbir when she bumps into Ranbir and is a bout to fall when Ranbir catches her and they have an eye lock. Just then Ganga and Manya come and see this.

Ganga whispers to Manya: Aren't they adorable?

Manya whispers to Ganga: They look like a couple made in heaven

Ganga to Manya: I think we should leave.

Manya to Ganga: Let's go.

Just as they are about to leave Manya accidently drops the vase.

Manya: Sorry I didn't see that

Kanya: I'm sorry

Ranbir: It's not your fault

Kanya: Ranbir I need to talk to you

Ranbir: What do you want to talk about?

Kanya: I was stalking to my mom and she invited us to dinner. If its okay with you can we go there instead of a restaurant.

Ranbir: Sure, I would love to meet your family

Kanya: Thank you

Ranbir: there's no need for thank you, we're friends and there's no need to say

Manya interrupts: sorry and thank you

Ranbir: Manya! Anyways what time do we go?

Kanya: Around 5

Manya: WHAT!!!!!!!!

Ganga: What's wrong with you? Why are you screaming?

Manya: We only have 2 and half hours to get ready.

Everyone starts laughing.

Manya: Kanya di can you help me choose something to wear

Kanya: Sure lets go

Kanya and Manya go to Manya's room and Ranbir watches Kanya go while Ganga is looking at him. As he is about to go he sees Ganga looking at him

Ranbir: What happened? Why are you looking at me like that?

Ganga: No reason as she says that she goes Ranbir also goes.

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Manya's Room

Manya: Di how's this?

Kanya: Manya you're not going to a club

After several outfits Manya gives up

Kanya: How about I look for something

Manya: Sure

Kanya: Do you want to wear Western to Indian?

Manya: Western, I'll wear Indian some other time.

Kanya: Okay

5 minutes later Kanya takes out a white halter top and black skinny jeans.

Kanya: How's this?

Manya: Its perfect thanks di. I don't know what I would have done without you.

Kanya: No problem. You go get ready. You only have 2 hours.

Manya: Thanks di bye

Kanya: Bye. Kanya leaves and heads towards her room

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Ranbir's Room

Ranbir is throwing clothes everywhere.

Ranbir: Why can't I find anything? I need to look perfect; after all I'm going to meet Kanya's parents for the 1st tine.

Just then Ganga enters his room

Ganga: Bhai, what have you done? I can't even see the floor.

Ranbir: Sorry Ganga, I was looking for something to wear.

Ganga: Whatever, move let me look for something.

After 10 minutes Ganga gets out black trousers, with a white and black striped shit and a black vest coat.

Ganga: How's this?

Ranbir: Its perfect, thanks so much Ganga.

Ganga: Your welcome, bhai don't forget to clean the room before we go

Ranbir: Don't worry I will clean the room

Ganga: Bye

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Godbole House

We see a car parking on the drive way. We see a guy coming out of the diver's seat and a girl coming out of the passengers seat, but we don't see there faces. The guy and girl head towards the house. The girl takes out a key from her purse and unlocks the door and they both go in.

Girl: Mom were home

Pammi: Sanchi where were both of you?

Sanchi: Mom I had dance and Sagar had soccer practice

Pammi: Anyways I want you both to be ready by 5

Sagar: Why, are we having a party?

Pammi: No, Kanya and a few of her friends are coming over for dinner.

Sanchi: Mom are Pooja di and jiju here?

Pammi: They are resting in there room.

Sanchi and Sagar both run to Pooja's room.

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Pooja's Room

Pooja: Rahul can you get my pink salwaar kameez and iron it.

Rahul: Sure janoo

Pooja: Rahul wear your black trousers with the pink shirt I gave you last week.

Rahul says okay and goes to iron there clothes. Just then Sanchi and Sagar come. Sanchi and Sagar both go and hug Pooja.

Sanchi: I missed you so much di

Sagar: I missed you more

Sanchi: Shut up Sagar

Pooja: I missed you both too/

Sanchi: Where's jiju?

Pooja: He went to iron our clothes

Sanchi: Aww he so sweet

Sagar: No, who biwi ka gulam hai

Pooja throws a pillow at him

Sagar apologies while holding his ears

Pooja: It's okay. By the way you should go and get ready before Kanya and her friends arrive.

Sanchi: Okay, bye di

Pooja: Bye

Promo: Dinner. Akash and Manya meet. Sagar and Ganga meet. Ranbir Kanya romantic moments.

Javeria
Edited by 26javey26 - 16 years ago
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No one likes it 😭
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I will not post any more parts untill i get at least 8 replies
I was thinking of adding another couple. Most likely 1 of these. Choose which couple you would like to see
Angad Kripa
Armaan Riddhima
Sagar Vidya/Amar Divya
Abhi Niki
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Important Note

I'm really sorry for not posting. My computer got crashed, I lost everything all my school work, the next part to the FF. I'm not sure when i'll post the next part, because exams are in 2 weeks.
I will add Armaan and Riddhima (Sukriti or Shilpa) within the next 2 parts
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aww.. i understand..i'd kill myself if something like that'd happen but now ur exams ar over right?so when r u continueing??

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