FF- PYAR YA DUSHMANI LastPartA pg44- 30/10/9 - Page 19

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Posted: 16 years ago

Oh you updated!

Yay! wasnt expecting you to do it yet as you said it would take a couple of days
Woll read and comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice update 😊
Just as Prachi was going to tell Inder who she loved he rushed away
Aww poor Michi missing each other so much
What is going on with Neev and what does it have to do with Michi?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Nice update 😊 thank you

Just as Prachi was going to tell Inder who she loved he rushed away yeah bad luck
Aww poor Michi missing each other so much 😭😭
What is going on with Neev and what does it have to do with Michi?do you remember he's the one who witnessed inder and Milind's fight🤔

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi shravu,
how r u,
sorry for late comments, went to mom place
loved u update
so michi missing each other
pls unite them soon
like prachi and inder interaction
wonder wht will happend wen he come to know abt milind
and why neev is not sharing this prachi,
continue soon
keep on rocking dear
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehanandita

hi shravu,hey

how r u,i'm fine thanks
sorry for late comments, went to mom placeit's ok, your apologises are taken
loved u updatetankuuuuuuu
so michi missing each otheryeah yeah
pls unite them soonsurely yaar, for perfect ending
like prachi and inder interaction😉
wonder wht will happend wen he come to know abt milinda thousand wala will burst between two
and why neev is not sharing this prachi,something connected to the past, you'll get to know in the coming parts
continue soonyeah surely ASAP
keep on rocking dear😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
aww it was a miss!! wish prachi speeded up wit her talking! anyway! wen two powerful people are to come crossroads, its not gointg to be as simple as that is it?! hope they meet soon and sort out all the dushmanis!
continue soon🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: siya..

aww it was a miss!!hotha hai kabhi kabhi wish prachi speeded up wit her talking!actually, she was excited to that much heights, her words were coming out very slowlyanyway! wen two powerful people are to come crossroads, its not gointg to be as simple as that is it?!yeah you are really right in this one hope they meet soon and sort out all the dushmanis!you can count in it or something other may happened
continue soon🤗yeah ASAP

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Posted: 16 years ago
Part-14
"why did you give soo many missed calls." Ayesha asked Neev still looking at him suspiciously. "and if I ring you are disconnecting my call. What happened to you suddenly. one more thing why didn't come to Prachi's house for dinner. Is everything fine?" Ayesha asked him. "stop, it"Neev screamed making Ayesha to jerk back. "what's wrong with you", Ayesha asked him, looking at him more suspiciously. "I'm sorry", Neev said trying to go away from that place, but Ayesha stops him "what's wrong with you. why are you behaving like this" AYEsha asked him angrily. "it's none of your business", Neev shoved her back angrily. "yeah it's my businesss and I won't leave you till you tell what's worrying you." Ayesha shouted back clutching Neev's collar tightly. But Neev pushes her back. "I can't trust you", Neev replied turning his face away from her. "you say that word looking it into my eyes." Ayesha again shouted at him. "I can't do that." Neev again replied. "why can't you do that." Ayesha asked him. Neev did not reply this time, he stood there lowering his gaze. He suddenly slumps down on the sand. "I can't tell you becoz I fear you would commit the same mistake that you have commited four years back." Neev says with a lowered gaze. "I didn't comit any mistake." AYesha hysterically shouted. "then who told her the truth which led her to commit suicide." Neev got up, caught Ayesha by her arms and shook her. "I didn't tell anything to her Neev, she heard us talking about it." Ayesha shouted. Hearing this Neev slumped on the sand. "Avni actually overheard us two talking about their matter that day." Ayesha said weakly and trusted a piece of paper into his hands. He opens it and when he starts reading, his memories are transported to four years back.

Four years back, everything was different for Neev and Ayesha. they were best friends, moreover they were in love with each other. They were a gang of four, Avni, Naveen, Neev and Ayesha. avni and Naveen were a couple and everyone expected them getting married oneday. As Avni's parents stayed in the other city Avni had to share a hostel room with Ayesha. they both were so close that each other, they shared each and every matter whether it was personal or anything. Every thing was perfect , until a big thing happened devatating each and every relationship between the four. Avni's father who was in the city on business, accidentally fought with Naveen, which was witnessed by Neev and Ayesha. Avni was unware about this incident and Naveen was unaware that the person with whom he fought was Avni's father. Neev and Ayesha fought badly regarding this matter, they started arguing whether to tell them the situation, and decided to deal it carefully as Avni was sensitive. Atlast they decided to tell the truth to Avni when she was in good mood. At that time Avni overheard them accidentally, which made her more vunerable. The next day what NEev heard was her death, which made him to blame on Ayesha as he misunderstood her for telling Avni everything without sensing her mood. But he did not know that what he imagined is wrong.

Neev got back to the present. Reading that letter made him realize that he hated Ayesha without any reason. He then regretted for what he done. He slowly glanced towards Ayesha who then sitting a bit far of him and staring at the sea. He did not dare to tell her sorry. But something worried him, now they have the same situation infront of them. "the problem is……………" Neev started with difficulty. "we are now standing in the same position where we stood four years ago." Neev turned towards Ayesha whose expressions turned into puzzled expressions. "yeah, you what had happened. Milind fought with Inder uncle unaware of the fact that he is PRachi's father and he fell in love with her unaware of this fact, whose daughter she is. Prachi is totally unaware of all these. I don't know what will happen." Neev told staring at sea blankly. "nothing will happen."Ayesha said weakly. "I know Prachi and Milind are not so sensitive they really know how to deal with the situation, without any help." Saying this Ayesha stood up at went away from there without looking back, leaving Neev , who sat there still staring at the sea aimlessly.

Fifteen days passed away, still Milind and PRachi were struggling to live a normal lives. But both could live peacefully without each other. Though they talked and had video conferencing both of them missed each other very badly. Milind tried to tell about Prachi to his chacha and chachi many times. But something or other thing stopped him from telling him. That day he just came from the washroom after having the shower. He then restlessly laid on the bed staring the ceiling. He just picks up the photo frame which was on the table near his bed. He stares it for sometime, "Prachi I'll definetly tell about our relation today and come back to India very soon, just to take you from their. Promise." Saying this his kisses her photo and leaves it on the bed, changes into shirt and jeans. He then checks his Iphone for messages and slips it into his trousers pocket. He then makes his way to the hall, he sees his chacha sitting and reading the paper, beside sat Sukruthi who was reading a magazine. He sits near Sukruthi, "chachaji I want to tell you one thing from past fifteen days. I ………………………..", "oh I forgot to tell what did you do about that meeting that should be held tomorrow." His chachji asked him peeping out of the paper , before Milind could complete his sentence. Milind not knowing what to do, scratches his hair., "yeah it's ready……", replied with disappointment in his face. He then peeps into the kitchen where his chachi was preparing the breakfast. He then slowly goes into kitchen and stands behind her. But she pushes him and moves here and there in a haste. "chachima I need to talk to you." Milind said in a haste, fearing that he would cut off in the middle. "yeah ok Milind, but not now beta, I'm in the haste. It's already your breakfast time." "chachima I'm not going to office today. But first listen to me please……", "I told you not now. I didn't even prepare the breakfast." "yeah ok, prepare your breakfast." Milind said with disappointment. He walks towards his room in a huff and opens the door angrily and sits on his bed with his hands on his forehead. He then glances the Prachi's photo which was on the bed with disappointment. "sorry Prachi, I couldn't tell them about us." He made a disappointment face towards the photo. "don't get disappointed, you make your Prachi worried with this face." Milind turns back sees his chachi coming towards him, with plate full of sweets followed by everyone. "if you won't tell you thought we won't know about this. Sukruthi had told everything about this the day you'll returned from India." She added picking up the photo, which was beside Milind, who was surprised to hear these words from chachi. "she' so sweet. So when are you going to get my daughter in law." His chachi questions him. "chachima I should talk to her father." Milind replies sadly. "so why don't you talk soon." His Chachaji says him, handing over the tickets. "come on make it soon, we can't wait to see our daughter in law." His chachaji adds patting on Milind's back who was blushing.

Sorry for the mistakes. Hope you enjoy and plz do comment.


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Posted: 16 years ago
Me first?
Very nice update ! pl. contii sooooon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
me second 🥳
gr8 update sharvu 👏 👏
plz jaanu next update last part bhulne se pehle kar dena 😊 😊 😳

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