FF- PYAR YA DUSHMANI LastPartA pg44- 30/10/9 - Page 18

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shabz.

nice part sharvu,thanku very much i love the bond milsi shares with neev they care for each other and michi romance was a joy to read.😊 milsi and inder just missed one another at the airport..yeah it's a just miss case eagerly waiting for the next part.yeah surely i will update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Shrav
Will you be updating this soon?
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Posted: 16 years ago
pl update this ff too when ever you have some time thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rosie111

pl update this ff too when ever you have some time thanks

yeah surely, it will be up in three days time

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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 13
"dad he's so wonderful"Prachi told excitedly, not touching her food still. Ayesha looked her at her cheerfully eating the food. Inder was too anxious that he even didn't the food in the plate. "he's just like you, dad. Ambitious,hot and handsome." She stretches her both hands. Inder holds her left hand, seeing something glittering. "so it's him, who gave this diamond ring." Inder asked her seeing the ring curiously. "yeah dad and he is ready to spend rest of his life with me." Prachi added with a wide grin on her face. "so my princess will be leaving me." Inder asked her playfully. Prachi's face turned into pale. "so, Ayesha do you think he is right for this girl." Inder asked Ayesha who was looking cheerfully at her friend. She just nods her heads positively with smile on her face. "so when did you'll both decided to marry." Inder asked her. " next month or so, dad", Prachi replied retaining her smile on her face. "he told he'll come and talk to you dad, and marry me." "so your boyfriend is a well mannered guy." Inder asked her while he took a spoonful of rice. Prachi just gives a shy smile. "I think he was bowled over her seeing this one only." Inder started to tease her. "daddddddddd", she said sleepily. "now can you atleast tell me his name." Inder asked her. Prachi was about to tell Milind's name. but they hears Inder's phone ringing. Inder excuses himself to answer the phone. Minutes later, he comes back bit paleness in his face. "sorry beta, I should go now, I some work in the office. Don't mind about it. You both continue your dinner." Inder announced sadly. "dad what happened, why are so worried." Prachi asked him concernedly. "nothing beta, a little problem." Replied Inder with a worried face. "a new person started to compete with me. I just lost two tenders and one deal to him." Inder palely replied hurrying into his study. "tell your mom that I'll be late." Inder added loudly while rushing into his room. "shit……it's second time Ayesha." Prachi said palely. "I was about to tell his name." Prachi palely started to play with her food, not in the eating mood. "it's ok PRachi, I think, Milind is in your thoughts now." Ayesha added making her cheerful. But Prachi palely nodded. "bye girls." They saw Inder rushing out. PRachi and Ayesha, made their way towards Prachi's room. There they laid down lazily staring at the ceiling. "what's time.' Prachi enquired Ayesha. "haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, what Prachi, whose going to call you." Ayesha rolled her eyes. "so Mr. Mishra is going to call his would be wife. Mrs Prachi Milind Mishra, not bad, it's sounds good." Ayesha says teasingly rolling on her stomach. "hey one more thing don't forget us, when you shift to London." "how can I" Prachi replied, rolling on her stomach. "but where's Neev, he's nowhere to been seen." Prachi asked Ayesha suddenly. "don't know. These days his mind is just wandering and he is also wandering with it. I think he's jealous of you. because Milind was almost everyday with you." Ayesha winks her eye. "Ayesha."Prachi playfully hits Ayesha with pillow. "do you love him", Prachi asks her, Ayesha lowers her gaze and nods her head in acceptance. "then tell him, na" Prachi suggests her. "will he accept him", Ayesha's voice suddenly turned pale. "we'll do one thing, we'll ask Milind to talk about this,k" Prachi said cheerfully. "you can't forget Milind. This isssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss I think thousandth time you are talking about him." Ayesha teases her.

He was trying to close his eyes, but he could not close. Memories of her are getting back in flashes. It had been just few hours, leaving her. He feeling as if he was in the hell. He thought it would be difficult for him to stay away from her for whole month. He decided to take a return flight from Dubai to Mumbai, but suddenly he was aware of why he had to go back to London. He sees towards his sister and his brother in law. He thought it would be right to talk to his chachi and chaha about Prachi. He then touches the bracelet, with a heart shape dollar and MP engraved on it. Prachi had presented him, just a day before he left in the memory of her. He opens his laptop and starts fiddling with it. He then stares at the laptop till he dozed of into sleep. It's almost midnight, Prachi's cell started ringing. Prachi woke with a start. Seeing the caller id a smile flashes on her face, she starts answering the call. "miss you sweety", she could hear Milind's voice from the otherside. "miss you too. When are you coming back." Prachi's voice turns into pale. "hey I'm still in Dubai, it takes still……." "Milind please comeback na. I can't live without you " PRachi says in a sad voice, cutting him of in the middle of the sentence. "you know na, why I'm going back. don't worry I'll be back to take my sweety with me. It is also difficult for me to stay away from you. I'll call you when I reach London, ok. Love you." "love you too" prachi utters and disconnects the phone. She then sees the ring on her finger and admires it for some time. A small smile creeps on her face and then she kisses the ring.

He was getting frustrated. He stood on the beach, and shuts his eyes tightly. Flashes of something was constantly going on his mind. He hits his fist in the air, taking out his frustration. He then hits his leg against the sand angrily. He then takes out the phone and dails out some number, but he changes his mind and disconnects it. Ayesha, who was standing far behind Neev, was watching all this in a puzzled expression. She did not know why Neev was behaving like this. She thought that something would have constantly worrying him. He turns back, but stood their dumbstruck seeing Ayesha infront of him, who was suspiciously looking towards him.

Sorry for the mistakes. Hope you enjoy and plz do comment.



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Posted: 16 years ago
me first again in your FF
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Posted: 16 years ago
fantastic part

hope prachi smile be there on her face even after milsi come to see her father ....... why business ppl mix their professional life with their personal life ....... inder will surely be not so happy after meeting prachis' dream man ....... ayesha should confess her love with neev ....... now what's troubling neev ???

plz continue soon
Edited by $ara_$hachi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

fantastic partthank you very much😊

hope prachi smile be there on her face even after milsi come to see her father keep your fingers crossed ....... why business ppl mix their professional life with their personal life they just don't see their face every where they go ....... inder will surely be not so happy after meeting prachis' dream man you're right ....... ayesha should confess her love with neev she will wait for that....... now what's troubling neev ???about Michi's relationship and Inder's reaction.........

plz continue soonyeah sure asap

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Posted: 16 years ago

shravu u updated the FF ....so fast..i am suprised.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

shravu u updated the FF ....so fast..i am suprised.

yeah yeah excatly after a month😆 i was bit busy yaar🤔

Edited by shravu - 16 years ago

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