~|Royal Love-Numbed wid Pain|*VeEraFF*|~Note_49~ - Page 24

Pls update kardo.Yes one week is over.Pls madhu nehi to koi aur sehi par update to karo.We r waiting.

pls update karo.One week is over.plspls.

piu plz dear update for us cant wait dear i know that ur busy but plz take out some time for us it already a week now cant wait any more u know na

RL:
I loved how you described shera's emotions.. You know like standing under the night sky enjoying the solitude was perfect I love the night sky too I mean it looks so great with the moon's dim light I love it especially when it rains and well to be honest there ain't a lot of stars where I live the atmosphere here is really dusty but I never actually got to see the sky with full freedom.. It's cuz my dad's a gigantic overprotective weirdo.. Yah and being followed around with armed guards especially at your own house is a total bummer .. And like how embarrassing just to hide from your own hubby like !!!!.. And when shera felt bad to leave this family woooooooooow a small bro. in agni cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee .. And again she just went sad about veer.. You described it beautifully how he ignored her the plague (how do you pronounce that?) line was gold.. Your word magic has charmed me yet again.. I like how you revealed how shera was confused to forgive him or not and how veer took responsibly about what he said and didn't come in front her and how you showed her father's love for her.. And how she made everyone to forget saddness.. And how she had an effect on everyone.. How her smile changed everything and how she was crushing on her father… I loved how the tiny voice spoke up (why not him?) awwwwwww and how veer was sleeping on the marble floor I loved how shera ran to him but just bumped in father and her father's lil joke.. And awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww bitto soo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute lol na samjh ladki sooooooooooooo cuuuute I wish my dad was like that… I really for bad how everyone ignores him nobody cares weather he's breathing or not… huuh.. No one seems to care not even niv what a bummer… I like your sia much more then mine or sagar's.. Mature and motherly filling out a big sister for shera.. I loved it how expressed shera's feelings her every thought you easly read her mind.. And said it through her angle it's really rare to find a writer actually feeling the character's role.. Feeling as though she/he went through the same.. Awesome I love this specialty about you .. You actually understand how she feels right now.. It's obvious your taking your time feeling the character.. I loved that rhyme pretty cute how she remembers it well… I soo loved it when she was like "hey bhaggu " it just made your FF get a place in cute country… I remember how anvesha from remix used to say that.. And her hubby fast asleep (beauty sleep) I liked how you described his sleeping habits..the curtins hitting his nazok eyes lol.. Loved how you described like he thought she was an illusion and told her to go.. Then he wrapped his arms.. And a seriously loved how she told him to go to the court and all… it really did show how she helped him in ways and other..

1 week over, pls post next part.

plz post the next part
cant wait now

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dear cant wait any more

Pls post next part.Cannot wait more.

ya dear plzzzzzzzzzzz post next part