Barsaat.- Note, pg209 - Page 72

Originally posted by: kneeduh2000

Da previous part was short and great... Thank God, Neal's mystery is being revealed in da next part. I think after some inquiry Angad would agree to go out with Kripa.
Nida

Yes I finally decided to put an end to Neal mystery. I thought of being Nice to you guys since KYPH has finsihed or I'll change me mind 😆.

I m glad u liked da part.

Originally posted by: bhumishah

i m sure neal has a problem n he is doin all this on purpose but w/e kripa asked angad out yes!!!1111
awesome part 👏
continue soon

Thanks. Nice guess, if Neal has a porblem wouldn't he consult with kripa as they r best childhood friends? 😉 Very Brave of kripa, wasnt it!

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Hey Sanya,
awesome part yaar!! I loved it...... I think Neal's mystery has something to do with him being sick and he's acting that "DRAMA" with the different girl on purpose... so that Kripa thinks that he cheated her and she'll go to angad and he will keep her happy and Neal already knows that Angad loves her...... and stuff..... So that was my prediction..... but i can't wait to see what you have in store for ur readers..... I mean u r just rocking about writing the ffs..... They are all amazing. I love reading them...... I understand u r hella busy with the tons of work load you have......Good Luck with ur studies and take care.... K... Bye!!
Divjot 😊

Hi,

I am glad u like the part divjot. Good guess but I won't say anything abt it now. No Neal doesn't know that Angad loves her? DOES ANGAD LOVES HER? 😕 They are just good friends!

you just made my day.I have loads of new ideas cuming 4 new FF but I m goona save them for now as I have to finish my other FF. If I don't that will add to burden 😆 Thanks for the luck, I will be needing it.

Sanya

Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

marvellous part
cant believe kripa asked him out but i think she only asked him out to make neal jelous...am kinda confused here arent neal and kripa going out together and if they are neal didnt break up with her and he already has a gf....am sure neal is using the gal to make kripa angry at him and so that she culd be happy with angad...kool neals mystery will atlast be revealed in the next part...i bet neal is dying coz sum of health probs or gettin blackmailed and thats y he wants kripa 2 start hating him
cont soon

Thank u. Hmmm I can't exactly break the suspense now but u have to wait for the next part. Yes N and K r going out. Wow nearly everyone is guessing that he's dying. Nice guess.

Expect the next part by this wknd. 😃

Originally posted by: aishika_pyar_5

hey i just finished reading all the parts of ur fanfic.. Its amazingly awsome. Please continue soon, i wonder whats gonna be angads reaction 😆

Thank u aisika. U have to c Angad's reaction in next part 😆 😉 😛

Originally posted by: brainychild92

your revealing it!!!!!! yess!! ive been waitng for soooooooooooooooo longgg!!!!! one side thinks its a health prob and the other says he is bewafa!!!!!!! lolz

continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooonn and reveall secretttt

Yes I am REVEALING it or shall i Change my mind? 😈

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

just started reading it and it is FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 PLEASE continue soon!!!!!!

Thank u.

Mahendiihan, blah_blah,candyprincess, me and just me, IndianCutie13,me_iq I am glad that you enjoyed reading the part. Expect the new part in this wknd! So watch out for it!

Love

Sanya 😃

Continued…

Amber saw from the window the teary kripa run. She pulled away from Neal and was shocked to see his eyes red. She quickly wiped his tears and made his look at her. 'Why are you this to her? She really loves you?

Neal looked at her and smiled. 'Why, don't you love me?'

'Don't you dare avoid the question with me Neal? You love her?' she asked once again

Neal started at the wall behind her, 'No, I don't and how many times do I have to tell you that she is only my best friend and nothing else.'

'Why are you lying to yourself? I can see it in your eyes, you can't do this to her and she'll brake down. It's not late, go and tell her.' She was about to cry but held her tears back.

Neal held her from her shoulder, 'exactly, it's too late now. I have to do this and then she'll be happy. I can't see her cry if she comes to know the truth, I can't afford that. It'll hurt me more of what I am going through now. I just can't.'

'Why, she is a girl and any girl would want to know the truth. She trusts you more than herself? She'll feel betrayed if you won't tell her; she'll be living a lie for the whole of her life. What if she comes to know about all this later on, she'll feel guilty than ever and she won't be able to live in peace anymore. She'll break down and may be in depression for a long time. It's not late now!

'What do you want me to tell her?' he said holding her close to him and then left her. He walked up to the window and looked outside. 'That I am going…' he stopped and let tears come out.

Amber out the hand on his shoulder and he turned to her and hugged her. 'Why is this happening to me Amber, why? What wrong have I done and I am getting this punishment?' he cried.

'It's not your fault Neal. You just have to trust yourself and live the life normally and may be something can happen you never know. For now, she has to know.' Amber took his face in her palm and made eye contact with her. 'I don't want to listen no's' or but's and jus tell her!'

Neal looked at her. 'I can't. not know but I promise I will soon and for now you just have to help me.' And he faced the window again.

'We are not doing right to her. She has to know and then she'll support you. I can't let this happen to her; what must she be going through.

'What do I tell her? What?' he demanded frustrated angry at him, banging his fist on the wall. 'Will she be able to hear it? She won't be tolerating it. She loves me too much. I know that I am going to hurt her but it's for her own good. She will be able to move on with her life. You, me and the doctor knows the truth and no one else. I can't tell her, I can't!' he whispered.

'You love her?' she asked in a persuading tone, she wasn't demanding and it wasn't question either. It was just a statement.

'I love her? Damn I love her lots' he closed his eyes and saw a smiling kripa and images of her all stages of their life flashed in his eyes and a smile played on his lips. 'I was the luckiest person on the earth to have, we shared each and everything. She was everything to me and I wanted to keep her happy all the way through my life and look what my life gave me. Isn't it ironic? I wanted to give her all the happiness and look I am the one who is giving her the pain.'

'You had your reasons?'

'I do but still. I hate myself. I can't do this to her'

'you'll tell her then?'

'What shall I tell? Kripa your Neal is going to die? He's going to leave you for ever. I am going to tell her that I am going to die?' he cried in frustration.

'Don't say that. If you ever say that I promise I'll kill you!' Amber said angrily, she was in a verge of crying but she held herself.

Neal looked at her. 'It's too late. It doesn't matter what ever way it is and the truth is the truth.'

'May be the Doctors got the wrong report we should go and check that all again'

Neal looked at Amber and smiled. 'You haven't changed at all?'

Amber looked up at him confused. 'What?'

'You're still the same stubborn Amber. Gosh and now I think I have done the mistake to call you here.'

'I hate you Neal!' she hit him.

'Thank you.'

'Amber please do as what I say and I promise I will tell her soon but for now you are going to do as what I say'

She sighed. 'Fine only if you promise to tell her in the next ten days.'

'Deal!'

'Come again!' he said as if he's not sure what he just heard.

Kripa rolled her eyes and held his hands. 'Will you go out with me Angad?'

Angad looked at her in shock and surprise. 'Are you asking me out? Kripa Sharma is asking me out! He repeated.

Kripa looked up at him annoyed. 'Why is it that difficult to believe that I asked you out?'

Angad looked at kripa trying to find she was joking with him? She was serious. He didn't know how to respond. Should he be happy, excited or angry or sad? At one side he felt excitement in him and he was happy. Yet the other side he wanted to know her reasons and what about Neal? He felt something fishy.

'Kripa let's talk.'

Kripa played a naughty grin on her face. 'Like this?'

'What?' he asked confused.

Kripa looked up and down at him and Angad noticed what she was talking about. He felt embarrassed; he was still wrapped in towel. 'I should change first!' he quickly grabbed his clothes from his wardrobe and went in whilst kripa laughed at him. After few minutes he came out in Denim jeans and sweats.

Angad and kripa sat in Angad's balcony with a cup of coffee. ' Kripa I know that I am handsome and hot but I didn't know you were that eager to go out with me. Wait and now I know why you're so annoyed when I am with misty. You're simply jealous.

Kripa shot him an angry look up at him. 'Oh please. Who are you kidding, me and jealous of Misty. Ha ha that's the funniest thing I ever heard. So -?'

Angad knew what she wanted to say but decided to irritate her furthermore. 'What?'

' I am asking you final time Angad Khanna, Will you go out with me?'

Angad looked at her and she was serious and then he saw it in her eyes. He put a hand on top of hers. 'What's wrong Kripa? You are not being yourself lately? I want my best friend Kripa Sharma back. '

Kripa looked up at him and saw the concern, worried in his eyes. Despite this, there was something else in his eyes that could make the girl drool over his looks forever. She could see why every girl nearly drools over him. She felt his warm his hands squeeze her and smiled at him. Her mind went back on Neal and the pictures Misty shown her earlier? What was happening behind her back, she wanted to clear everything.

She sighed, she doesn't no what ever she was doing was right or wrong. 'Angad, I am confused, I don't know what to do' she then suddenly felt angry at herself as she was in this situation. 'I don't know what to do. I hate my life!' Kripa complained as if she got turned down by her parents or friends,

Angad laughed at her childish behaviour and went to her side. He bent down on his and held her both hands on his. 'Would you tell me why do you hate your life?'

Kripa suddenly felt gush of happiness inside her to see the concern Angad with her, she felt so good. She was getting too close to him without knowing it.

'I don't know Angad what I am doing. At one minute I think I am going baloney thinking about this and the next minute I think what I will be doing is right.'

Angad rubbed his thumbs on her hands. 'Tell me what's gone wrong? Is it about Neal?'

Kripa nodded. 'you know the pictures that Misty showed me the other day I think they are…'

'Oh my, you silly girl' Angad stood up from his position and pulled Kripa up with him. He now held her by her shoulders. 'You don't get it do you, someone is using you. Kripa you need to learn to have a trust is relationships. If you don't have trust in them then your relationship is has no meanings. You have known Neal for about life time and look what happened to you. Where the 'trust' did suddenly disappeared. Someone out there is probably jealous and is trying to harm your relationship. Learn from me, didn't you see what the fake pictures had an affect on me. You don't want to regret something like me' he said.

She looked up to see something in his eyes. His eyes were something, she concluded mentally in her mind. There were just irresistible. She saw reflection guilt appear in his eyes. For what? Then it occurred, he was sorry for what he had done. And then there was something else she saw as if someone deep was arrested in prisons and longing to be free.

'I have forgiven you for a long time then why this guilt?' Angad left her and walked to the railing that over-looked the wonderful garden.

'I know you have forgiven me long time but the fact remains that I have done something very bad yet hideous to you and I can't forget that that. I can't forgive myself for that no matter you forgive me or not. Now let's forget about me, you need to think about yours. Kripa, what I am saying that don't repeat the mistake that I did. 'He paused for a second and turned around to see her close to him yet there was tears streaming down her face and a small smile played on her lips. He wipes the tears on her face, 'Am I the one who's only talking?'

Kripa smiled at him and put her arms around his arms. 'Well I will. Let's go for a walk?'

Minutes later, they both walked on the huge green land owned by the Khanna's that was right behind their mansion. Their arms were still locked on each others.

'So are you saying that I should not stress too much about the pictures?'

'Yes Kripa, I don't want you to regret anything like me. Please be careful on what ever decision you make.'

'If you talk about this guilt again I am going to kill you and I don't care if I get the blame of murdering. Take a chill pill. Haven't you heard the song just chill?'

Angad laughed, 'yes you can kill me later on for that and make me watch that song you are talking about. For know you madam need to tell me what's disturbing you.'

Kripa told Angad about what she witnessed this morning and how close they were. She told him about her fears becoming true.

'Is that it?' Angad asked finally.

'Yes'

Angad started laughing as they stopped walking. Kripa looked up at him confused. When he didn't stop laughing she got angry. 'Mind telling me what's wrong with that?'

'Kripa, I was right all the way along, you are such a silly girl. You just took a simple matter that seriously?'

'That's because you haven't found your Miss perfect!'

'shut up Kripa! You are simply getting jealous because that girl has been spending too much time with Neal that does not mean they like each other as you know? I mean look at us, we are friends and spend time with each other, and does Neal say anything? No! May be they are friends just like us'

'No, she says that she have known Neal for a week? How can friends get along so easily and spending a lot together if they have known each other for a week? I tell you something is not right.'

'Well in that case, what do you want from me?'

'hmm if what I am thinking that is right, you simply need to go pretend that we are going out. So that Neal –'

'Naughty Kripa, you are simply jealous and you are going to make Neal jealous. That's fun and I can't wait to see Misty's expression'

'And prithiv's!' Kripa replied grinning inwardly as if she has already seen his reaction.

'How long time does he have left?' The mystery man asked his men.

'According to the doctor, he only have a month left'

The mystery man gave an evil grin. 'Well well in that case I suggest we need to kill him before he dies. The time is too short us.' He then looked at his men and told him his plan, '……… What ever happens, at the end it should assume that Angad khanna murdered Neal'

The men simply nodded and left at his gesture. The mystery man gave a wicked smile, 'I am coming to you Kripa darling. Don't worry you got me!' he kissed her picture and gave out a malevolence laugh.

Here's another part as I promised for the weekend. I have just realized that I am going too slow on this FF and this is the probably the reason it's not getting there where I wanted to. Oh well, I better be moving on with this Fan Fiction.

Was it that easy to guess that Neal was dying because of his medical illness? Congratulations to those who's prediction became right.

DO COMMENT AND YOURS PREDICTIONS. I would love to hear this from you.

Teaser: who's the mystery man that has once framed Angad and what he is planning for him again? If you're thinking its prithiv let me remind you that Prithiv is Angad's best friend. Why is Amber giving his side to Neal? Maybe she loves Neal and has planned all fake Neal illness to get him back. What if he finds out that all his illness was fake? He'll go back for kripa and kripa would be more happy to go back to him. What about Angad, how would he feel? If his feelings for kripa starts to grow? Will it make him evil and greedy to get kripa back.

To find out all this; Stay in touch with Barsaat! 😉

Love

Sanya

i think the evil man is Prithvi, even though he is Angad's best friend, he would do anything to get Kripa.

p.s. btw GR8 job, once again!!!! 👏