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Posted: 19 years ago
finally!
omg r u purpously trying to kill us?jkk 😆 cuzz im gonna die just wonderin why neal is soo sad! 😭 😭 plzzzzzz tell us sooon 😛 and awesum part like always..cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_51_girl

hey, sanya how u manage to write such a gr8 ff........!!!! ur writin skills r really good....... love it!!!! 😛

Thanks. I m glad u like my FF's

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Hey sanya,
when r u continuing..... me waiting and i love ur writting and ur ff and continue soon.
Divjot

Hi Divjot, I have continued. 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Shahrambaa

lol i liked it. what's neal upto? hmm continue soon. can't wait.

shaheera

Now that's up to you to find out! 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey sanya
that was a fantastic part
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: *Izzy*

Yeah after a long wait 😆😳! Keep guessing, I won't tell which is the one because it means giving you a hint? No I won't make u wait long this time! 😃

Thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
it was a rly nice part! wish, i had a best friend like that!! wait, i do! or atleast i like to believe that i do! newayz, now let's see the neal mystery...poor guy,i think he is suffering from some fatal disease!!! but we will soon find out! keep up the good work n.......stick to ur schedule!!hehehe
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Posted: 19 years ago

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Kripa entered the college catching the attention of the crowd especially boys as usual. This was usual for Kripa even in the New York; it was better the other way, Kripa thought when she had to wear Indian clothes to hide her truer hide identity, in that she won~{!/~}t be able to get the attention. She heard the similar voice from behind,

~{!.~}Don~{!/~}t be proud of yourself, you will always remain Behenji for me~{!/~} he joked.

Kripa turned around to face him, ~{!.~}Angad~{!/~} she wined/

~{!.~}What?~{!/~} Angad replied

Kripa makes a puppy face like a child who demands an ice-cream!

~{!.~}Now, don~{!/~}t blackmail me!~{!/~}

~{!.~}Oh, Angad you are co clever, you just told me of your weaknesses~{!/~} she smiled like a brat!

They walked in the corridor for their next lesson. Everyone in College in envy them because they share a great relationship, they have everything! Even Misty started to feel insecure when Angad hangs with he trio more than them, Angad used to be there friends but now he is like s total stranger to them.

Whilst those two were chatting, Kripa kept glancing at her phone. Angad was aware of this;

~{!.~}Chill out krips!~{!/~}

~{!.~}What?~{!/~}

~{!.~}I mean you kept looking at the phone every few seconds, Man he~{!/~}ll be here any minute and yeah I am talking about Neal~{!/~} Angad grinned.

Kripa looked away embarrassedly, ~{!.~}No it~{!/~}s not that, yesterday he sounds bit worried you know what I mean and hell he should have informed me about going to hotel, WHAT meeting finishes at 12.00?~{!/~} Kripa demanded

~{!.~}Calm down, he~{!/~}ll be here anyminutre and don~{!/~}t you go exploding on other, I have to save myself ~{!.~}he ran away quickly before Kripa can hit him.

Kripa smiled to herself, evil smile.

**

Kripa took her seat where she usual sits beside Neal. Angad sat front with the next seat empty. Angad did not look back, which made Kripa annoyed. Soon Misty entered the class, Misty face lit up like a bulb when she saw an empty seat beside Angad.

~{!.~}Misty!~{!/~} Kripa waved at her. ~{!.~}Sit with us!~{!/~}

Misty came to them with a huge smile on her face, she was going to sit next to Angad but she wanted to show Angad that she can also live with out him, ignoring him. Angad let a huge relief when Misty went past him and stopped in front of Kripa.

~{!.~}Hi Kripa~{!/~} she greeted and went to took the seat beside her. Before she can sit, Kripa had her hands on it.

~{!.~}Sorry Misty, you know this seat is specially for Neal, why don~{!/~}t you go sit with Angad, I hope he doesn~{!/~}t mind! Do you?~{!/~}

Angad eyed Kripa and then quickly replied, ~{!.~}No I don~{!/~}t!~{!/~}

Misty smiled at Angad and took seat beside him. The teacher came in.

~{!.~}Class, today I am going to set you a project that you have to work in groups of two or three, these groups will be permanent for you in every assignment you do~{!/~}

Angad widened his eyes and couldn~{!/~}t believe his; he took a quick glance at Misty who was smiling wide showing her teeth of and then turned back to Kripa, eyeing her evilly.

~{!.~}Is there anything wrong Mr. Khanna?~{!/~} The teacher asked

~{!.~}Erm no, er yes, well you see I can~{!/~}t work with Misty~{!/~} he concluded leaving a shocked Misty and then turn around and walks to Kripa and sits beside her. ~{!.~}As you see I and Kripa have some busy schedule together at work~{!/~} he lied, ~{!.~}So we have time to get together and do our project work. If I work with Misty I won~{!/~}t be able to have much time to go to her house and the come back.~{!/~}

~{!.~}I see~{!/~} the teacher replied and then looked at Misty, ~{!.~}Why don~{!/~}t you join them two, I am sure Kripa will be able to help you, won~{!/~}t you?~{!/~}

It was Angad turn to grin, ~{!.~}er yes sure~{!/~} she mumbled.

Angad and Kripa look at each other then back to Misty and smiled. Before Misty can join them Neal appeared on the door. He walked and quickly joined Angad and Kripa.

~{!.~}ops!~{!/~} Kripa cried grinning, ~{!.~}Neal is back. I am sorry Misty~{!/~} she put a false sad expression on her. ~{!.~} We are only three, I wanted to work with you but oh well!~{!/~}

~{!.~}It~{!/~}s O.K kripa, don~{!/~}t be silly I have other friends~{!/~} she replied as looked around the class. But to her detriment everyone were occupied busily.

As soon she left, Angad and Kripa hugged Neal happily. ~{!.~}Guys I~{!/~}ll die if you squeeze me that tight~{!/~} Neal cried.

~{!.~}Shut up~{!/~} kripa snapped at him, ~{!.~}Don~{!/~}t talk like that!~{!/~}

~{!.~}I was only joking!~{!/~}

Then three burst into laughter and gave each other high fives.

O.K Guys, this is what I meant by posting short parts! Tell me how it was then I will continue with the rest. No mystery in this part but the preview is same ~{!.~}More of Neal mystery!~{!/~}

AND COMMENT! PLEASE. No more of ~{!.~}Continue soon or cont soon~{!/~} etc~{!-~}

Love

Sanya

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Posted: 19 years ago
just caught up great job continue soon 😳 poor mishty i feel bad for her 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey..so far so good. I really want to knoe why Neal story is a mystery.Continue soon

Nida

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