Barsaat.- Note, pg209 - Page 2

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey gr8 part izzy ...continue soon...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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plzz continue soon!! 😊
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Part 2 continued from part 1


As josh approaches the bed, we see a girl in pinkish silky nighty laying there in the bed hugging a pillow. We cannot see her face b'cuz sum of her hair in front of her face. He brings his face closes to her and then to her ears. He gives himself and evil and thinks, its payback time!!

He slowly gets up and walks to bedside drawer and picks sumthing. And again walks to the bed where the girl is sleeping peacefully. He kneels down and brings his mouth closer to her ear and shouts: AArrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh and while doing this he throws cold water on her face.

The girl also shouts and jumps up, she moves the blanket away from her face and the blanket is also wet. We see her rubbing her eyes and she blinks one or two times and gives a cold stare to Josh!

Kripa: I will not spare u.. saying this she went to take a shower.

Meanwhile Josh goes to downstairs and seats himself in the dinning table. He is looking for something..

G: Josh kya dhond rahey ho?
J: Mom where's da chocopops cereal?
G: uff hoot um chocolate alawa kuch aur nahin kha saktey

Kripa who has got ready and is wearing pink t-shirt that says adore me with glittery purple text and wearing a white jacket over it. She is wearing blue latest Miss sixty jeans. She is carrying a handbag and a file on her hand.
She has been listening to the conservation and gives her self a naughty smile
K: Mama u r right, waise bhai is uncontrollable I think we should now keep him away from chocolates for 1 month and he should start the chocolate dieting from now onwards. What do u say dad
S: who knows what's going on between Josh and Kripa but decides to keep quiet cuz it's for the best.
S: I agree with Kripa and look josh how much ur sis cares for u?
Kripa smiles towards the josh and josh is like u r not going to get away with it , look
K: Bhai c'mon take out all the chocolate from your bag saying this she moves towards the josh and grabs the bag. She takes out all chocolates and keeps it in her bag.
Don't worry bhai .. I will also take it from ur room it's for ur own good.
Josh who is giving a I'll kill u look and politely says Kripa chalo college kay liyee late horahi.

They both get up and says their byes t parents and leave
Mrs.: pagal hai dunno.. patta nahin kab sudray gey.
Mr: tum aisey naraaz hoti ho, just chill
Mrs: is like lo phir shoru hogaya!!!

Outside the house they both make their way to the car and drives off. Josh is quite all the time and is thinking of a plan to pay her back and get his chocolates back. In is mind: what r gonna do josh, u r going to stay away 1 month from chocolates. He remembers flash back when he is eating chocolate and enjoying himself. He wants to eat dat know!! We hear his stomach grumbles and Kripa is trying not to laugh!! Josh is kinda bit embarrassed and at the sametime angry with her.
Hey this is my first fanfic and don't expect a lot! I m just hurrily typing and I apologize 4 making mistakes.




I know it's short and boring but I'll make a move on soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
Part 2 continued from part 1


As josh approaches the bed, we see a girl in pinkish silky nighty laying there in the bed hugging a pillow. We cannot see her face b'cuz sum of her hair in front of her face. He brings his face closes to her and then to her ears. He gives himself and evil and thinks, its payback time!!

He slowly gets up and walks to bedside drawer and picks sumthing. And again walks to the bed where the girl is sleeping peacefully. He kneels down and brings his mouth closer to her ear and shouts: AArrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh and while doing this he throws cold water on her face.

The girl also shouts and jumps up, she moves the blanket away from her face and the blanket is also wet. We see her rubbing her eyes and she blinks one or two times and gives a cold stare to Josh!

Kripa: I will not spare u.. saying this she went to take a shower.

Meanwhile Josh goes to downstairs and seats himself in the dinning table. He is looking for something..

G: Josh kya dhond rahey ho?
J: Mom where's da chocopops cereal?
G: uff hoot um chocolate alawa kuch aur nahin kha saktey

Kripa who has got ready and is wearing pink t-shirt that says adore me with glittery purple text and wearing a white jacket over it. She is wearing blue latest Miss sixty jeans. She is carrying a handbag and a file on her hand.
She has been listening to the conservation and gives her self a naughty smile
K: Mama u r right, waise bhai is uncontrollable I think we should now keep him away from chocolates for 1 month and he should start the chocolate dieting from now onwards. What do u say dad
S: who knows what's going on between Josh and Kripa but decides to keep quiet cuz it's for the best.
S: I agree with Kripa and look josh how much ur sis cares for u?
Kripa smiles towards the josh and josh is like u r not going to get away with it , look
K: Bhai c'mon take out all the chocolate from your bag saying this she moves towards the josh and grabs the bag. She takes out all chocolates and keeps it in her bag.
Don't worry bhai .. I will also take it from ur room it's for ur own good.
Josh who is giving a I'll kill u look and politely says Kripa chalo college kay liyee late horahi.

They both get up and says their byes t parents and leave
Mrs.: pagal hai dunno.. patta nahin kab sudray gey.
Mr: tum aisey naraaz hoti ho, just chill
Mrs: is like lo phir shoru hogaya!!!

Outside the house they both make their way to the car and drives off. Josh is quite all the time and is thinking of a plan to pay her back and get his chocolates back. In is mind: what r gonna do josh, u r going to stay away 1 month from chocolates. He remembers flash back when he is eating chocolate and enjoying himself. He wants to eat dat know!! We hear his stomach grumbles and Kripa is trying not to laugh!! Josh is kinda bit embarrassed and at the sametime angry with her.
Hey this is my first fanfic and don't expect a lot! I m just hurrily typing and I apologize 4 making mistakes.




I know it's short and boring but I'll make a move on soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#15
i'll try to continuee but if not ,surely 2mo
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Posted: 20 years ago
#16
continue soon. amazing story. 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#17
GR8 JOB IT IS FANTASTIC CONT SOON
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Posted: 20 years ago
#18
Gr8 story.....I LUV it.....plz. cont. soon...👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#19
wow! sounds awesomes soo far! cont soon! 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#20
and i love the name 'barsaat' 😆 😉 😳

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