Jab We Met Again - Rahul Muskaan FF - Part 3 pg 32

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Komal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Can I kill you? seriously man! U PM me and say i started a new one, and when i see it, it's a 2 sentence description. I hate you. Idiot child. Post the part! gandi bacchi!

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
Can I kill you? seriously man! U PM me and say i started a new one, and when i see it, it's a 2 sentence description. I hate you. Idiot child. Post the part! gandi bacchi!

Komal! This verbal abuse!!! Maybe you need anger management??? 😆

Thanks for the interest!

Anyways, I just have to edit as Mitsy already did a wonderful job with it..

Will have it up this week for sure!!! 😊

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Mahima

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heyy....i like the concept!! sounds good!! plzz cont soon and pm me when u do!

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mohini_agarwal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey sonia!!

i see you have started yet another ff, which i am obviously looking forward to reading.

continue soon and pm me!

mona :]

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Sonu

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whats wrong with you'? why do you open topics and not start the story!

i command you to start now.

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-Mishti_Divz-

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It Sounds really intresting plzz continue soonn 😃 waiting 😃

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..wow..IM WAITING...4 THE 1ST PART..DO ADD ME 2 UR PM LIST

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Sonia Bhalla

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey guys! So finally we will start this FF. Sorry it took so long. I didn't anticipate this week being as hectic as it was and I definitely didn't expect on getting ill. I hope you enjoy the first part. Its basically like an intro to the characters but you don't learn too much. I can't even take full credit for this. I told Mitsy my idea and she wrote most of it up and I just finished editing it now. If its not edited well.. sorry.. I am not thinking the clearest right now. It is a little back and forth from scene to scene so hope its not too confusing. Well, I hope you enjoy.. and please comment/criticize.

Intro

'Dulhe ki saaliyon.. oh hare dupatte waliyon! Dulhe ki saaliyon .. oh hare dupatte waliyon.. joote de do.. paise leloooo, joote dedo, pais..'

Abey! - A handsome guy in his early twenties interrupted the other guy, about the same age, from his not-so-surila song.

He continued - Yeh kya ga raha hai Atul?

Atul placing his arm around the guys shoulder - Practice kar raha hoon!

Kis ke liye?

Atul smartly replies - Arre, Armaan! Suna hai aaj apne dulhe ki saaliyaan aane wali hain.. aur woh bhi AMERICA se! Ab tu toh mujhe janta hai na.. woh shaadi mein humse joote mangegi .. to main unhe kaise.. kaise mere bhai. mana kar sakta hoon? Isliye.. uske baad ka soch raha tha.. tab to hum yehi geet gayenge na?

Armaan irritated by Atul's never ending bakwas - Bohot dur ki sochta hai tu. Abhi yeh soch Rahul kahan hai?

Atul - Rahul? Hoga yahin kahin.. ladkiyon ke beech!

Somewhere across the room a girl giggled inanely - Heheheehe! To kya sach mein mera rajkumar ghode pe aayega? She asked a guy while blushing.

The guy is holding the girls hand and looks up to make eye contact and he replies - Safed ghode pe.. woh bhi sehra bandkhe. This makes the girl blush even more.

Atul and Armaan are watching from a distance -

Atul - Woh.. raha Rahul.. Dekha maine kaha tha. Rahul bhi kitna lucky hai. Usse hand reading karna aata hain aur sabhi ladkiyon ko yeh acha lagta hai.

Armaan - Champ, tujhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki Rahul ko sach mein hand reading aata hai?

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A car pulls up with 4 girls inside.

Oh my God! We are here, finally! - A girl exclaimed looking at the beautifual resort.

It was a huge place with an enormous lush green lawn. There was a bungalow right in the middle of it which was ornamented with lights and flowers. There was a garden barely visible behind the bungalow and a pool by the side of it which appeared deserted at the moment.

Its so pretty, na? - Another girl stated as her eyes wandered trying to get a good look around.

Yes, its just wow!

Riddhima and Sukirti.. please ab ander bhi chalein! The other girl finally said irritatingly.

Riddhima asked innocently - Anjali di, kya aapko yeh jagah achi nahin lagi?

Anjali - Ridzi, maine kitni baar kaha hai, main yahan shaadi ke liye nahin aayi hoon. You know, I don't like Indian weddings and all that. Agar papa ne meri nayi car ki shart nahi lagayi hoti, toh main yahan kabhi nahin aati.

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Atul complained - Main toh yahan sabse pehle aaya tha! Phir bhi koi ladki meri taraf dekhti hi nahin hai!

Armaan enlightened him - Champ, does it make a difference tum kab aaye? Ladkiyan patane ke liye waqt ki nahin, skill ki zaroorat hoti hai.

Rahul comes up behind them with a crooked smile on his face - Aur woh toh tujhme hai hi nahin.

He is dressed in a long white kurta unbuttoned and black straight jeans. He put his arms around both Atul and Armaan and just watched the girls from afar.

Atul getting annoyed at his incompetence - Haan, haan.. tumhi sab smart ho, hai na?

Armaan replied teasingly - Ab champ, jo sach hai woh hamesha sach hi hota hai aur sach hi rahega.

Rahul smiled widely.

Armaan asked - Par ek baat bata, Rahul! Meri to itni girlfriends hui hai magar tu itni saari ladkiyon se milta hai lekhin koi tujhe achi nahin lagthi.. I mean.. pyar shaar?

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Riddhima - Muskaaaaaan! Ander chalein?

Riddhima was impatient to go inside and is trying to get the attention of her cousin, Muskaan who is walking around looking at the decorations.

Riddhima - Mujhe andar dekhna hai kya ho raha hai.

Sukirti joined her excitedly - Aur haan .. phir mehndi aur naach gaana bhi to hoga!

Anjali rolls her eyes. The only motivation for her to go into the house was to jump on a bed and catch some shut eye which she missed last night because of their long plane ride from Chicago to Mumbai. She was worried that without her beauty sleep she would look like a witch with dark circles under her eyes and pimples on her face.

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Rahul gave a small laugh - Pyar?!! Naah! Ab tak koi meri type ki mili hi nahin.. toh kya karoon?

Armaan - Toh patha toh sahi Mr. Rahul Garewal.. teri type ki ladki kaisi hogi?

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Parallel scenes:

Rahul - Mere type ki koi aisi hogi jo apne pairon ki ek ungli mein ring pehnti ho.

Muskaan is wearing a cute white sandal with a small ring on her second toe of her right foot.

Rahul - Jo salwar kameez mein sexy lage.

Muskaan is wearing a green and white tight well fitted suit. Her kameez hugged her body perfectly showing off her slim and suave curves.

Rahul - Jiske haath pe bhagwan ka laal dhaga ho aur dusre haath mein thodi .. shayad theen ya char chudiyan ho.

Muskaan is wearing a red string around her right wrist and half a dozen white bangles on the left.

Rahul - Jiske aankhen nashili aur honth rasile ho.

Armaan and Atul give him a look but Rahul is too busy lost in his thoughts of his dreamgirl to notice.

Muskaan turns around (filmy style). Her eyes were embossed by a light touch of mascara and eye liner. Her lips were gleaming covered with cherry lipgloss.

Rahul - Jiske muskurahat pe saari duniya rukh jaye.

Muskaan walked towards Riddhima and Sukirti and smiled.

Rahul - Jisse dekh ke sab kahein...

Muskaan - 'Beautiful!' - while pointing to the house and joining Riddhima and Sukirti.

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Riddhima - Ab chalo na.. andar chalte hain.. please!

All 4 of them finally walk towards the door to enter with Muskaan trailing behind still admiring the house.

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Rahul - In short.. main usse jaise hi dekhoonga, usse pehchaan loonga.

Rahul looks over at the guys to see that they are no longer listening to him but standing there with their mouths open and their eyes wide and literally popping out. They were looking right past him over his shoulder towards the door.

Three girls dressed in cool western outfits and deep necklines was quite a treat for the guys. Atul and Armaan automatically started walking towards the door, completely ignoring Rahul, as if they were in a trance. Rahul turned to follow them as well.

Atul stared at Anjali and Armaan at Riddhima. Sukirti stared at Rahul and Rahul was checking them all out.

Anjali snapped her fingers.

Anjali - Oh, hello!

Atul came out of his wonderland - Ha..haan.. hello. My name is Atul.

Armaan with his eyes still fixed on Riddhima waves slightly and says - Hi. I'm Armaan

Riddhima - Hi! I'm Riddhima.

Sukirti still looking at Rahul - My names Sukirti.

Rahul smiles - Rahul! Naam toh suna hi hoga!

Atul looking at Anjali - Aur tum?

Anjali just rolls her eyes and brushes by Atul almost knocking him over - Whatever! Chalo!

Atul followed. Riddhima and Sukirti also follow with Armaan following them. Rahul is about to turn when..

Muskaan - Suki, tunay dekha bahar kitni achi tar..

Rahul turns around to see who it was. He sees Muskaan entering through the doorway still in mid sentence when she abruptly stops talking and walking. Its as if time stood still. Rahul and Muskaan were only a few feet away looking at each other. Their ease had suddenly changed to something else. Their smiles slowly disappeared. They just didn't know what to say or think. They just stood there looking at each other.

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago