Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 52

Originally posted by: suv.patki

Dear Sam, thanks for the updates and extremely sorry for not writing back to you earlier. I was also away for new year and use to hardly get time for browsing. In whatever time I got, I made it a point to read ff's and was being lazy to comment 😭

Thanks for the PMs as well.

Wish you a happy, healthy and blissful 2009.

Part 12:

Atul is a cool dude ... love him for his chat with Riddhima about Armaan (carry forward from part 11 😊)

Whats up with Ankit? Why is he not continuing with his 'No Entanglements' motto? Sorta getting negative vibes from him ... maybe coz I have read the recent update as well.

Wow ... finally AR together and Armaan opening up. And transition from Scarlet Pimpernel to Prisoner of Zenda. And thanks to you for the link. I read both the books and owe a thanks to you for the same.

Was wondering how Armaan is going to use the poem now? Hey, is it written for Armaan? Ummmm ???

Part 13:

Armaan is not leaving single chance of cornering Riddhima ... too cute.

"Oh so we are piling on but that's ok?" Armaan asked with a lazy smile I was all 😆 reading this. Anjali is after all not a spoilt sport. She did make up to Riddhima. But she thinks a lot ... and at times she is pretending, which is scary.

Slow and steady AR relationship is evolving ... really appreciate you not rushing to their confession. As a reader, I would definitely want to read the confession and AR being a couple, but loving the building blocks you putting together with each update more. I hope though, AR will be in such a position soon as to understand that none of them is in any committment. Muskaan is the lucky one to know that RR share only a bond of friendship and there's nothing more to this relationship.

Riddhima-Muskaan convo was entertaining.

Ouch ... Ankit is such a .... why has he to instigate Anjali by his statements? I am seriously not liking him. 😡

Was waiting eagerly for you to return back and update about the club trip. Glad you are back with an update.

Part 14:

What was up with Armaan? Why was he so insistent on making Riddhima sing? Loved the way Rahul supported Riddhima.

Atul is such a sweetheart. He is a gem of a person ... he will surely make a good manager as he misses nothing.

She really did sing fabulously, Atul grinned, enough to captivate Armaan, if only Armaan had the brains to recognise that! Maybe the two of them did need to spend some time together, who knew what would come out of it? Even we are waiting to see what would come out of it.

Anjali is such a wicked mind. Arghhhhhh ...

so far it had been a perfect evening! not for me though ... as will have to wait till the next update. Please please please update soon.

Cheers,
Suvarna

Originally posted by: ~nyla~

hey, hope you enjoyed your holiday
really enjoyed reading this part
well armaan surely was insisting that ridhima should sing and the whole thing with her poem and smoothing it was i think a little bit too far on his part but thankfully he realised and went to save Ridhima even if it was too late lol.
and i love the way Ridhima faced her fear and went to sing on that stage. the way Rahul was supporting her and trying to bring up her confidence was really sweet and i think it just might have worked as she done a great job of the singing. Armaan was bowled over lol.
And Atul, loved him even more in this part. he really is a bright spark as he doesn't miss a thing but he is also very sweet. i wish somebody just asks Armaan if he is going out with Anjali and Ridhima if she is with Rahul because it would just clear a lotof the confusion.
to be honest as much as i admire Anjali for trying to get over her problems with Ridhima and being friendlier towards her i don't like the way she was thinking towards the end of this part. it is understandable but i hope she gets over Armaan soon, and i hope Armaan makes his intentions towards her more clear. Lol maybe Anjali and Ankit should get together hehe.
overall and amazing part
and ya i have added you to my buddy list...and thanks for the pm
please update as soon as you can

heyyy....yr backk with as usual a fab update!!!.......

last one reserved this is sam...um at nijal's place tonight its 5:25 am...n iv been instructed to finish the update before i leave her house tom afternoon...i have hence refreained from readinmg ur part, i know if i do i wont quite concentrate on my own, hence the delay...but about a day and a half n i promise il have the comments done, if any earlier pin it to how eager i was...i told nij my bribe is to read ur update after um doen with writing half mine!!!

cheers,

nj

*edit*alright 14...wow now um coming closer to catching up...adopting fidelity for not more than its worth i hpe in putting up essays after every single part, i promised u so, promise fulfilled hence,....

anjali n ankit evolving much more in terms of char sketches here...particularly ankit....now he admits reconsidering his stay aloof funda...god...i totally despise the likes of him....um making no secret of that u must already know my hostility lies exactly where....

atul the sweetehhart is back, hes a fab frend...my star for now over the pimpernel...actually he quite perfectly fits a rle in that book, u must know who n wat i indicate, il leave it unspelled for those who may wana read and chance a glance at this comment!

with alot brewing in this part, the mind games were high, everyone's thoughts were the base, not that much speech, n it was well needed...one teeny weeny thing sam....i think it must be just me (thats a horribly phrased sentence)....but i felt, the part despite the prime of its evenst n position in the fic....in some strange way, i cant put my finger on it....lacked the sam touch....perhaps, just by the iota percent chance if i am correct in this thought, u will know wat i mean...but u dont, i recommend u read this line n forget it, it cud well have been my crazy mood while reading the part....n a essentially lacked sleep....

in stands of wat the part presented, it was a critical one, n def a hooking read!

Originally posted by: armaans*basket*

Awessooommmeee!!!! Loved, loved an loved it...!! I hope AR get together asap, i am loving this story and the way its progressing to the core. What a comeback, Sam!!!

Loads of lvoe

Kiran

Originally posted by: missypatel

hi sam..

sexy update...for sum wacko reason tis one topped all yur updates..!!
AR were d best...no dance betn d 2 yet..u serious?? ahahha i luv atul ovb for his eagle sharp eyes!! ankit/anjali....hmmm u takin dt soo welll!!..missed rahul-muskaan! :)

update soon gurl!!

nijaL

HI Sam

Originally posted by: Jodubai

HI Sam

I was on a long holiday for about 15 days & now again going off, but thank you so much for sending me all the pm's, I have taken a print out today, will comment tomorrow.....

thanks....

Originally posted by: spln

last one reserved this is sam...um at nijal's place tonight its 5:25 am...n iv been instructed to finish the update before i leave her house tom afternoon...i have hence refreained from readinmg ur part, i know if i do i wont quite concentrate on my own, hence the delay...but about a day and a half n i promise il have the comments done, if any earlier pin it to how eager i was...i told nij my bribe is to read ur update after um doen with writing half mine!!!

cheers,

nj

Originally posted by: bernard shaw

As long as you update, you are forgiven anything sweets! Shall tell Nijal to keep you tied down to the comp and ensure that you do not get up till the part is done and posted! 😆

The two of you have fun!

that might be ur excuse for a holiday to chicago this time then, coz ur pawn in question peacefully snores away after asigning me the task, n some how trusting me to complete it as well...hahahaha....oki...no um at it honest to the likes of rassandyls n pipernels...even butlers n cannans 😆.....will update tom....my part, the comments...fidelity for once has befriended me, if all for a short spell n i shall honor its obligation!😆