Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 14

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Posted: 16 years ago
part 4 and 5 were amazingly witten
i really liked the way u showed how ridz parents trust rahul with ridz but i hope they dont think about getting the two together.The way u showed how muskaan always speaks her mind was really good.Finally muskaan is seeing rahul in a different way rather than a friend hope rahul and ridz tell muskaan that their not a couple.I really enjoyed armaans speach it was really good cant wait till ridz and armaan meet face to face.I also enjoyed the way u described armaan and anjalis relationship and the way anjali told armaan about the thresome showed that the thresome are becoming popular with the students.
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyyyyy! i luved thnx 4 tha PM/update!
❤️twinkle!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hello Sam ..........Just finished reading ur ff..........i must say its really good........enjoyed every part........
Its the "title" i must confess ........that made me take notice of ur ff.. ....but I guess iam hooked to it now .......:)
Needless to say u have great writing skills..........waiting eagarly for ur updates........
Get well soon.....
If u can add me to ur pm list that would be great.....

love
sudha.

Edited by armaan123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Sam
Great update!!! loved it, I haven't read Scarlet but looks like I have to read now....
I thought Arman was dancing away with Ridz, but here they haven't even met....
hopefully in the next part!!1
many thanks for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sam...........gr8 update..............the trio is becoming famous.............guess we will have to wait a lil while for the F2F(face to face) convo..........and im sure armaan has rcognised riddhima by now..........will anjali be a spoke in the wheel or will she continue as a friend only.............i like the speech........
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey, I was away from IF for some time now and it's only now that I got to read your ff and I have to say it's simply wonderful. No one would say that you're a first-timer. I have to admit what first attracted to it was your ID. Shaw is one of my favorites though I haven't really read many of his works. All I can remember at present are Arms and the Man and Pygmalion. I love the subtle satire in his writing…it's amazing. Just like Wilde, who's one of my all time favs. The importance of Being Earnest is one play that should be read by everyone who likes intelligent humor. The sheer social satire that is present in it can rarely be rivaled.

Anyway loved your ff. Ridz's character is superb and Rahul and Muskaan are adorable as usual. I really liked Shashank and Padma as well, really cool parents. And as for Mr.Pimpernal Armaan, he's of course highly attractive (as both Angie and Muskaan, not to mention Ridz have already observed) and I loved the convos b/w them. Btw I have to say the Scarlet Pimpernel will always have a special place in my heart because it's one of the first romances I've read. It was way back when I was 12 or 13 but I still remember that silly verse that went

We seek him here,

We seek him there,

The frenchies seek him everywhere…

Anyway loved the parts till now and can't wait to read the next. Btw I have the feeling Armaan is not the only voracious reader around here. Even his creator seems highly read. I'd love for us to get together and discuss our fav books one of these days. It's so rare to find a fellow book lover not to mention one who likes the same books you do. It's like no one reads the classics any more. Not that I do a lot, I mean I'll be the first to admit that A War and Peace or Les Miserables is beyond me, but I'm talking of childhood favs like Ivanhoe or Black Arrow, u know…anyway hope to get to know u more. And I loved the song Ridz sang during freshers.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part! Loved it!
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: missypatel

Sam!! NJ does it all d time..gosh..even bfr i read d part i knew wat it was abt!! ahhah crazy chick rattlin abt scarlet n chd!! lmao!!

m n outsider for both..bt maybe for former..not for long ;)!! neways!!
luved d update..do u c those gooseflesh on ma hands nw..ohh yehh...sooo wanted 2 c ter encounter..bt nt enuf glad u didnt giv in so easily..u learnin d riter tactics well frm all it seemz! lol
armaan is such a darlin..i fall in luv it ppl easily tes r mere charz..and woot do i c sum feelin betn anji-armaan..ahah nah m guessin u hve a twist even wit yur simple factz ter!! muskaan realizin d attraction shez formin for our other hunk..ahha wateverz keepin her frm askin tem straight..i like ;)!! uhh i hate ankit..juss d nme actually..m surprised...no confused..n rather wonderin..at hiz witty tlkz n cum bckz...wish u cud gve me a mugshot for juss his char..so dnt wanna imagine d 1 i tend to..hearin his nme..crap!i mean dtz 1 thin abt all of tem...maybe its cuz of d obvious..Bschool..tey all tlk smart..in ter own ways..n i shall be honest here...i almost dislike dt..a tiny bit..tey all seem 2 be brought up in d same basket..ohh well!! dtz me tlkin..ignore me! blah!

awesome update! do i c U ritin d next one already? luv d speed..u groupie oh yhhh..swweeett!! =) welcome 2 d crazy IFerz gang!!

nij

ps...smhow i feel u a nutter juss d same as nj n me..n a few more..ull cum across soon...nj wud back me up here...hope 2 c u..on d nutterz gang.."NHN the creative corner" ...check it out! 😆

Nijal, thanks!
Oh do rectify one of the two - read Scarlet Pimpernal. I guarantee, and I am sure NJ will back me up on that , its a fantastic read!
On the wait for their face to face, I couldn't go there without expressing Armaan's point of view which I thought was necessary.And I would love anyone who was Scarlet Pimpernel, and, add Armaan to it,, you just cant go wrong, lol!
As to the way they talk, don't blame the characters, blame the writer! This is the world I know, so unfortunately, that's what comes across, but yes, Bschool types (yours truly incl) can be oversmart and sometimes quite irritating, but they don't represent the entire spectrum. On a serious note, most Bschools do a profiling and deliberately chose a cross section of backgrounds which gives rise to interesting situations and not so interesting or desirable divisions. But its a great lesson in learing to deal with all kinds of people! but despite their smart talk, they're not all bad guys, lol!
Anyways, enough of lecturing, am going to post the next part tonight, hopefully. I just hope that it does not dissapoint!
Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monadarling2628

hi! i really enjoyed reading your update. please continue soon and if you don't mind, could you please add me to your pm list?

thanks,
mona :]

Mona darling, that term evokes a huge amount of imagery! What a delightful name! Thanks so much, shall PM you when I update next!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

part 4 and 5 were amazingly witten

i really liked the way u showed how ridz parents trust rahul with ridz but i hope they dont think about getting the two together.The way u showed how muskaan always speaks her mind was really good.Finally muskaan is seeing rahul in a different way rather than a friend hope rahul and ridz tell muskaan that their not a couple.I really enjoyed armaans speach it was really good cant wait till ridz and armaan meet face to face.I also enjoyed the way u described armaan and anjalis relationship and the way anjali told armaan about the thresome showed that the thresome are becoming popular with the students.

Hey thanks, am glad you like the way the characters are shaping up! You have no idea how hesitant I was about writing this fic...I just hope the rest of the parts do justice to all your comments!

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