Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 120

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Posted: 16 years ago
reserved sam....theres some extraordinary connection with this date to something more personal...il be back with my not brief at all n never so analysis!

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back sam...oki i cant think of when an update worked better in terms of timing for me...it was just this huge series of events of confusion which happened, tons of miscomm...n that leading to a kinda mess....so ameen n i (my brither)...we had this insane tiff...over something not worth it at all...n usually one of us gets mad n the othertackles...it works well that way i daresay, dont tell my mum this she will pledge in denial to any sense even traces of it in either of us...she shud know, having raised not one but two imposible kids!!!!...but yesterday we both blew of over the top n it wasn't a over a usual....then i read ur update with a half mind....wondering if i was gona do justice to read it just abt then...but the idea of distracting out of my mad head....anywaz so i read on...n the statement whr armaan talks of his elder sis....god sam u had me in teas coz just got up n dabbed the digits quick n called him back...yeh ye long convo n a supremem divertion form the part i had toi read...but well...i cant think of when reading something nocked better sense int me, i totally owe u that one...hes younger to me btw...4 years close to the gap armaan has with his sister....n ummm...its an insane bond, i duno if i know one closer in my life, i keep discovering with each day how theres its more of i um sill learning abt...

nonetheless i had to tell u this, since it mattered a ton...just one of those crazy days when everything looks messed up n tn suddenly u know it was u being silly all along, i accept um the mad head!

back to the part now...frankly i cudntdo much justice to atul here...somehow i was way too occupied with armidz...specialluy armaan talk of his fam um so glad u made him do that....it feels like u know my home hahahaha....i was missing my home tons after reading it, i never quite thought i wud be the ridhima in this fic even if there are some stark similarities...but now i know why...coz um much more the armaan so though there are those similarities like i said, the essentials still differ in alot....it was an awe struck moment...the whole date read for ...their jests...the spade is a spade naming for date n flirting..yeh all of it extrememly well hadled..nothing over the top i agree...ur doin abs justice to ur chars....!!!

treat reading the update sam...i cant wait to se the amn get into responsible action, abt time his nuances start uncovering unexpectedly before the lady, as usualy the case has been quite the contrary!

loved the part sam....for so much more than just the part...i needed it n just then...n it was 23...it cudnt be anyless special to me!!!the cosmic things, despite my scientifically honed head, work incredulously well for me!

nj
Edited by spln - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!
i am so in love wid dis fanfic......itz as amazing as dmg if not more.....
.....nd im nt kidding.......fabulous.....words cant convey d exellence of ur fic....
its addictive......reading it is lyk one big treat!!!...lol....
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Posted: 16 years ago
sam!! thanks a lot..!! u have made this date more amazing thn wht i cud hv imagined..u wrote it so beautifully,i dint get time to realise i had reached the end..u have a gift with words..the conversation was framed beautifully! n the way u have strung the words together makes the concept very interesting..!the way armaan discussed his childhood as well the references to his name was jus so good to read,makes me go through the part agn n again..sam u r one amazing writer..u have done complete justice to the date..u knoe kind of reminds me of our own lives,,,thanks for telling us abt the origin of the word tantalising n aman..thts one of the various reasons i love abt ur ff..every part has something new n interesting to offer..
i jus cant express in words how much i loved ths part..obviously m not as gifted with words as u..it amazes me to c such gud talents in ths forumm..i love indiaforums for ths reason..the Bandra trip gave me an insight as to the place actually is since i have personally never been there..i waited a long time yesterday nite jus so i cud read ur ff,but cudnt make it..m reviewing now..jus feel like goin on n on..but i knoe thr has to b a limit set to my words..i jus want to say, MHON means a lot to me..keep writing n i also need to appreciate u for updating so soon..thanks a bunch honey..will wait for the nxt part eagerly!!
shriya
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Posted: 16 years ago
Its is just irresistible.It was like i m totaly addicted 2 ur ff.I had presentations,classes,exams this whole week but I read all parts updated till day bcoz it is just impossible 2 leave this such a lovely,beautiful ff in between.So keeping it short "ur ff is just mindblowing".
PLZ CONT WITH UR EXCELLENT WORK
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Posted: 16 years ago
part 22 and 23 were really amazing i really liked the way u described their first outing and the way u got armaan to share things with ridz was amazing.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi!! sam
its gonna be a short reply as i cut my finger in the workshop practs and just received tetanus
it was an awesome episode
loved every bit of conversation and also every shade of red causers
tantalus story was new thing to me and was very happy to know it
armaan's name origin was very well researched one
who is the young girl to visit atul?? on other hand is atul an aged man??

thanks for pm

love:
aishwarya

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Posted: 16 years ago
Sam again a unique part.D'nt wanna say much but something for AR & U
hope u like this.
William Shakespeare
"Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimmed;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st;
Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st:
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
Thanx for adding me in ur list
love
ritu
Edited by janu1610 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Sam,
Fabulous part yaar, I really loved it.
AR date was awesome.
Continue soon and thnx a ton for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Sam

awesome update hun
loved the tour date
well wat made it gud was the realistic touch to it
i cud literally imagine myself in that car with them lolz
i know its sad but i get into the story when i love it
and the pani puri thing brought back many fab memories
cheers for that part
and the dinner was just perfect
him asking her for an answer and her reply was just amazing
i just love the wit in your Ridz
i duno why i had a feeling that the date wud end in haste
well hope u fix the chest pain and alls well lolz
i get worried about characters in a fic too,no wonder the nutterz call me worry bug
haha well hope we get to read the next part soon

take care hun
love
Hina



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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy--
suchh a cute part-- they shud go on dates like this more often !! :P
esp liked the paani puri part !! :P
hope ridz's dad is ok !--
cant wait for the xnt part !-- =)

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