AMOR~MY RAHUL MUSKAAN FF~~updtd pg 11 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

very NICE PART................CANT WAIT 4 THE NEXT PART.........

AND THANKZ 4 THE PM
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

yo friends!!!!!so,wazzup?everything good?well,i'm in a god mood today so i'll post PART 5 today,even though i don't really have it written down on paper!!!!!its really sudden but i do hope you like it!!!!!

❤️ PART~5❤️

2 years ago......muskaan's 24th birthday party....organized by rahul................
RAHUL AND MUSKAAN'S HOUSE.LOUD MUSIC WAS BEING PLAYED.....LIGHTS,DELICIOUS FOOD,LAVISH DECORATIONS....PEOPLE DANCING HAPPILY.....
atul was doing some mad kind of bhangra thing;anjali was standing next to dr.keerti drinking her diet coke...armaan was playing DJ for the night...rids was busy blowing flying kisses at him...and somewhere in this loud,rowdy,hip crowd,rahul and muskaan still managed to live their romance...as they danced happily..energitically-but looking at each other's eyes and getting lost...
rahul:coke piyegi?
muskaan:haan!
rahul:theek hai.tu rukh.main lekar aata hoon.
he went off.
after he wnt,muskaan started dancing by herself,like,she started swaying to the beats.
"hey sexy....kya moves hai tumhaare...."said a voice.muskaan turned around to see the waiter looking at her.
muskaan ignored him.
waiter:zara mere saath bhi naacho na....
muskaan:dekhiye,aap apne limits cross kar rahe hain.
waiter:jab saamne itni khoobsurat ladki ho toh kya limits?
he kept his hand on her shoulder.
muskaan:haath mat lagaana!
waiter:warna kya?
he held her hand forcefully.
waiter:warna kya,huh?
"warna woh nahi,main bataunga."
it was rahul.
what followed was a crucial fight.
"MUSKAAN!!!!!RAHUL KO ROKO!!!!!MUSKAAN WOH AADMI MAR JAYEGA!!!!MUSKAAN TELL HIM TO STOP!!!!RAHUL PLEASE STOP!!!!"anjali screamed.all the boys tried to stop rahul but in vain.
muskaan simply stood there,staring at him,transfixed with horror.she had neve seen rahul so angry,so violent,so fierce.he was boiling with rage....he did not seem human...he seemed terrifying..this was not her rahul.
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after everyone went away........
rahul sat on the bed while muskaan brought the first-ai kit.his forehead was badly hurt and was bleeding.muskaan took out the cotton and the dettol and started dressing his wound.she did it a little roughly,as she was really angry,and while doing it she even hurt him a bit;she thought he squirmed a bit;but she didn't really soften.
muskaan(sternnly):yeh kya tamasha tha?
rahul remained quiet.
muskaan:rahul?main kuch poonch rahi hoon.kya tha yeh sab?
she was facing him now.
muskaan:kya prove karna chahta tha tu,haan?
rahul looked up at her but didn't say anything.
muskaan(sarcastically):kitna achha birthday guzra mera!SAB BARBAAD KAR DIYA TUNE RAHUL!!!!
rahul looked down again
muskaan:kya zaroorat thi yeh sab karne ki????haan???kya prove karna chahta tha tu???
rahul:main kuch prove nahi karna chahta tha muskaan.bas,tujhe koi chuye,yeh mujhe manzoor nahi.tujhe choone ka haq sirf mujhe hai,sirf mujhe.
muskaan sighed.she went towards him and sat down on the bed beside him.
muskaan:rahul...
rahul:i'm sorry..
muskaan kept her hand on his cheek and stroked it gently.both leaned forward.it was hard to tell who took the initiative,but most probably it was muskaan.she pressed her lips against his gently,and both shared the most beautiful kiss ever.muskaan was ind of shocked.she never knew thar the rahul who was so rough,tough and hot-temered from outside could be so gentle...he was so warm,so loving,so tender,his touch so soothing,so tender....
when they broke apart,she made him bend his head and kissed his forehead.
muskaan:thank you for loving me so much rahul.
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COMING BACK TO THE PRESENT DAY............
the doorbell rang.
muskaan:aati hoon!!!
she opened the door to find the postman.
postman:ji yeh ek letter aaya hai amritsar se dr.grewal ke liye.
mus:ji achha.
she took the letter.
mus:rahul!!!!amritsar se letter aaya hai tere liye!!!!
rahul was seated on the divan,looking at soome case files.
rah:amritsar se?
muskaan looked at who it was from.
her face was contorted with fear as to how rahul would react.
mus(shakily):tere-tere-bauji ne bheja hai-
rahul looked up,shocked.3 years it had been since he had severed all ties with his family,specially bauji(the reason will be revealed in the next part!)
they had no contact at all...and now suddenly,a letter?
rah:woh mere bauji nahi hai.woh mere liye mar chuke hai.
mus:rahul!aisi baatein nahi karte!
she opened the letter and read it.
mus:rahul:didi ki shaadi hai.humein jaana padega.
rah:jaise unhe jawaab pata nahi!!!hum uss ghar mein kabhi nahi jayenge!!!unka mooh kabhi nahi dekhenge!
mus:please rahul!!!
she was in tears now.
mus:rahul please!!!woh tere bauji hain!!!
rah:woh mere koi nahi hain!!!!tu abhi wahaan phone kar aur bol de ki hum nahi jayenge!!!
mus:main kyun???tu yeh kaam mujhse kyun karwa raha hai?
rah:kyunki main unse baat nahi karna chahta!!!tu kar abhi phone!!!
muskaan was crying.with shaking hands,she took the phone and dialed the number.
rah:oh please muskaan!!itni over acting mat kar!
muskaan looked at him,teary eyed.rahul's dad picked up the phone.
mus:woh,namaste bauji,main muskaan...
she started jabbering all sorts of stuff without getting to the main part as she was scared to do it.
finally-
mus:woh bauji...woh rahul nahi-matlab HUM nahi aa sakte..
rahul:there is o need to be so emotional muskaan!kep down the phone!!!
mus:woh toot chuke hain rahul!!!!how can you do this to him?????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she again spoke to bauji.
mus:bauji-maaf kar dijiye-rahul-woh-rahul aapse bohot pyaar karta hai.
and she quickly hung up.
rahul's insides were boiling with rage.
he went up to her.
rah:kya zaroorat thi itna naatak karne ki?
mus:rahul....
she was realy crying.
rahul:MUSKAAN WHY DON'T YOU JUST GET OUT OF MY LIFE AND GO TO HELL????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
muskaan stared at him,howling,and then she just ran out of the house.
PRECAP:~~FLASHBACK AS TO WHY RAHUL HAS SEVERED ALL TIES WITH HIS FAMILY.
COMING BACK TO THE PRESENT DAY....WHERE IS MUSKAAN?WHERE HAS SHE GONE???WILL RAHUL FIND HER???
so guys,that was iy for today...hope you liked it!please comment!!!!i wrote this really long part just for you!!!so i really hope you like it!!!!
love ya!!!
yours forever....
saku...😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
Are you purposely trying to make me angry with my Rahul? It's working... Why is he doing this to her??? How mean! Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
really good part thxxxx continue soonn😃👏👏
wats wrong wiv rahul ?????😭
thxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx for pm 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
Hey Sakina ~!
Great Yr !~~!

Waiter VS Raho0o0l Hun !~!~

GReat Story line !~~!~!

Raho0o0l Ko Kya Ho0o0 Gaya Muski K Saaath What Doing !~~!!~


-Walo
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
wow... THIS PART WAS SO PASSIONATE!! SO LOVELY!! LOVED THE KISS!! update soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
Hey Sakina!
I like how your story is going. All the parts have been real interesting.
It was quite intense this time with Rahul's family. Can't wait to read more.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
hey saki....
dis part was so intense....im dying 2 noe wht is da prob wid rahul and his family...plz post da next part soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
don't getvangry on rahul,guys!!!!
please..he's my hubby!!!!!!!!
you'll find out soon guys!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
well saku...dat was awesome ...really emotional in fact....waiting for next part

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