AMOR~MY RAHUL MUSKAAN FF~~updtd pg 11 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
sorry guys...computer mein problem ho raha tha...had to post it in 2 parts!!!
❤️PART~3(part 3b)❤️
muskaan couldn't help noticing that rahul looked very distressed,disturbed.as though there were a thousand things going on in his mind.he looked so worn out,as though he didn't really want to go on.......
and surprisingly,after an hour or so,she could not see him in sanjeevani!!!!!he seemed to have disappeared!!!
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keerti:dr.anjali,aap please yeh files dr.chatterjee ke cabin mein rakh dengi?
anji:dr.chatterjee?
keerti:oh,aapko nahi pata?dr.chatterjee sanjeevani ke naye senior doctor hai.he's not permanent but is here for long.woh los angeles se hai.
anji:oh i see.theek hai main files rakh deti hoon.
anjali went to dr.chatterjee's cabin and knocked.
"come in"said a voice.
anjali entered.
anji:dr.chatterjee?these are the files you sent for.....
the man turned around.WOW!!!!!!wasn't he dishy!!!!!
he was like the most handsome guy evet,with jet black eyes and such a sexy smile!!!he was dressed in a casuak T-shirt and denims.
"oh.thanks!!"he said."and not dr.chatterjee,please.it's aniruddh.
anji:oh.right.aniruddh.i'm dr.anjali gupta.
ani(aniruddh):the most beautiful woman i've ever seen.
anji:i know.everyone says that.
ani:maybe.but you don't consider them as sexy as you are considering me right now,i'm sure.
anjali smiled.
anji:i've got other work.i'll see you later.
ani:ok...but i have a request.
anji:go on.
ani:main is sheher mein naya hoon.toh,aap mujhe mumbai ghumaane le jayengi?
anji:depends if i'm free.
aniruddh made a cute,puppydog face.
anji(laughing):ok ok.sunday evening,ok?
ani:thanks!!
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muskaan finished her duties and came out.
mus:yeh rahul kidhar gaya???agar woh nahi mil toh mujhe F.I.R. karna padega!!!
but just then,she saw his car.he was leaning against it.she ran towards him.
mus:tu kidhar gaya tha???pata nahi mera BP high ho jata hai????
rahul:mus-muskaan-woh jo baat mujhe kehna tha..
mus:haan bol rahul
rahul:woh baat...main ghar jaake bataunga.
mus:kyun?abhi kyun nahi?
rahul:kyunki tu bharosa nahi karegi.tu bas ghar chal.
muskaan was really confused but she did as she was told.rahul was quiet throughout the journey back home.
mus:rahul.....?tu kuch bolta kyun nahi?
rahul:i'm sorry muskaan.
muskaan(thinks to herself):yeh baar baar "sorry" kyun keh raha hai?kahin isne kuch galat toh nahi kiya???
they reached home.
rahul:tu andar chal.main bataata hoon.
muskaan opened the door.
muskaan:RAHUL???????????????????????
precap:what is it that rahul has been hiding;
muskaan and rahul get drunk like hell!!!
NOTE:~ I'M GONNA CONTINUE WRITING ABOOUT ANJALI AND ANIRUDDH ONLY IF YOU GUYS WANT ME TO INCLUDE THEM.SO,WHEN YOU'RE COMMENTING,PLEASE GIVE YOUR OPINION ABOUT THIS TOO!!!
please comment!!!
love ya!!!
saku
-Mishti_Divz- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
awsome part saku 👏
thxx for pm 😃
-Sakina- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: divyashaz

awsome part saku 👏

thxx for pm 😃

thanx a lot divu!!!!
but u didn't comment on the note?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hey saku accha tha aur yeh ani ko digest karne mein thoa tym lagega....aur precap unbelievable...both of themm .... hope everything is ryt.... and muski's dream 😆
Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago
-Sakina- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ramusk

hey saku accha tha aur yeh ani ko digest karne mein thoa tym lagega....aur precap unbelievable...both of themm .... hope everything is ryt.... and muski's dream 😆

keep reading!!!
Edited by justluvmayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
i think u should write it will make u r story more enjoyble about abjali and aniruddh that is what i think don no abt the others
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
Hey Read Ur FF From The Scratch ~~!~!

It Was Awesome YR !~~!
U A Get Writer !~~!
And In PArt 3b The Best PAr Was I M Sorrie !~~!
And Precap !~

Oh God KAhan Ja KAr End Kia HAi To0o0o0ba ~!~!~!

Do Continue So0o0n !~!~
And Hun Anji - Annirudh K Bare MAin Thora Likh Dena ~!!
Please No In Detail ~!~!

Thnx

-Walo
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Hey Sakina..jus returned frm the film..sorry..AWSOME partt!! I was very curious 2 knw abt RM..but u post-poned it to the nxt part..:( No worries..Im waiting..:))

Luved Anjali n Aniruddh...good break frm AA..OMG..RM drunk..it was an idwa for my FF also..got post-poned ..anyways..Update soon!! :)

-Mansi

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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
Sakina it was so short yaar! anyway, it was really good nontheless, and I'm already starting to get negative vibes from this Anirudh dude. He's so damn conceited. Honestly, he actually telling her he's hot? What a loser. But you should totally write up on them. R-M ff doesn't mean you should only concentrate on them. GO ahead and do it, it's a good idea. 😊 Continue soon. Oh and I loved the PM. LOL. the first things sounded like you were in a hurry and out of nowhere you stick in the last question. Touche. lol. i was honestly have a laugh attack. jaldi jaldi mein sab bol diya. I updated!!!! Read it!!! Comment!!! How's ...??? all in one breath if you were to say it. LMAO.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
That was a short part but good.
Rahul in a sexy black sari??? 😆
Now I am intrigued what is wrong with Rahul???
And I am looking forward to the drunken-ness! 😊

I am glad you added Anjali stuff. I personally can never write about anyone but RM cause I don't really like anyone else.. but its refreshing to read about some other characters.

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago

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