THE HEART'S SECRETS AR FF PART 21 NEW PART!!! - Page 6

Originally posted by: tanasha1993

this just keeps on getting

better and better...its just so mysterious

why is it that he will kill her if she kissed him

on his lips? why cant he tell her his real name?

does keerti know anything about it?

though the passionate part got a lil out of hand

it revealed a bit about armaan...just not enough

for me to figure out exactly whats going on

I suck at solving mysteries...though I love reading them;D

anyways do cont soon yah?

love

tanu

Hi guys!

i'd love to reply to each and every one of ur replies, but unfortunately i've been told that we, writers, can't do that cuz of the space issue...soo i'm just gonna say it all here:

ok, im sry for the ff getting "too hot to handle!" actually...i think i got a bit into the story and i could help myself but to add that!😛...so i'll cut it down for next fo sho! also, i apprieciate how you guys tell me good things and things i need to improve. Never think that you're offending me, because it is critism that helps one improve! therefore, i'll mold the way i write, so that i can be pleasurable plus under the rules of this forum! now the only problem i'm facing is that: should i change the parts i've already posted as well...since they have a bit if R rated wording??...thanx sooo much guys for the support! love you all! ❤️

Originally posted by: kapilsharma123

eww....kya bakwaas hai yaar....koi sense nahi banti....ek 3rd class story hai....jisne nhi likhi hai bahut immature hoga....the writer looks like wants to have sex badly...salli agar itna hee sex chahiye to ja ke sarkon pe nange khare ho jayo....ridhima is supposed to be a inocent girl who has nvr kissed arman yet but just changed her image infront of the viewers....f**koff😡

Thanks for the comment. It is highly apprieciated...i'm sorry if my story offended you in any way...i'm just a fresh writer and write what comes to mind...in this case, if you feel that all i want is sex just from reading one of my writings..then i guess i can't change your point of view. But just as a future advice, and please don't mind because i am saying this as an older sister to whomever you are, do not judge people on the way they look, or what class they are in, how wealthy they are.... or how they WRITE. If you do so, then you will never be able to find success in life. Because sometimes even one of those people who go "sarkon pe nange khare ho jayo" as you quoted...have a reason behind what they do...thanx for the sincerty, and please don't mind my saying.

heya di..well thanx for editin the prts..thank u sooooo much..as NJ sis said we don't want tis g88 n superb a story to trash..so plzzzzzzzz plzzzz nxt time keep in mind the age limit of 13 yr old kids..

great part 5 dear;D

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

heya di..well thanx for editin the prts..thank u sooooo much..as NJ sis said we don't want tis g88 n superb a story to trash..so plzzzzzzzz plzzzz nxt time keep in mind the age limit of 13 yr old kids..

@kapilsharma..

plzzzzzz stop harasing her..it ain't her mistake..writers do get carried away n that prt has been edited so chillax..n to tell u one tin..she too is new to IF may be she didn't read the post on adult content..

it ain't her mistake fully..she is trying to rectify her mistakes n that is sumfin highly commendable..as most do not correct emselves or r not able to correct emselves even if told..

So I humbly request u to edit u'r posts n not to say harsh tins like that..

it hurts yaar..to everyone who'd read..if u can't give an encouraging compliment or a straight (plz edit u'r post as it is sexually expilicit..[mind ya em sayin in uu'r language])...plzzz don't abuse her..I get u'r feelings right that Riddhima is an Indian gal n u may not like her in tis way..buh then its the writers thoughts abt the whole fic..If u don't like it..Stop readin it..buh plzz don't abuse oders..

Hpe to get my points clear...

n sifters..sis don't take tis to heart..Mr. kapil jus gav his views so don't take that to heart..I appreciate it that u edited the prts n don't feel low..it's okk..I too em a writer n I know how we get carried away..or if the story demands we do write tins..so no probs..n don't take whateva kapil bro said to heart..waitin for nxt prt eagerly.......

hpe y read my PM......

Love ya loads hon........t.ccccccccccc

aaww thanx soo much yaar! actually i was sort of feeling low..cuz maybe he's rite..but after reading ur comment, it's really boosted up my thinking again! i owe u one for that!👏

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: tanasha1993

great part 5 dear;D

I dont know why I have this really strange feeling

that armaan...is some sort of mythical creature

sort of thing...like a vampire...haha I guess I read

the twilight series too much...so basically everything

about armaan is 'complicated'...gosh, I am still going

on the he is vampire track...hiding his age, she dying if

kissed her lips...he really is complicated man;D

anyways cont soon(which you are doing, haha)

LOL i noe EXACTLY what you mean! sometimes when i'll write a draft...i'll read it again and it seems like i'm writing a chapter for one of the twilight books, which i obviously cant cuz Meyer's writings are beyond awesome...but still, i noe exactly how u feel😛

love

tanu;D