THE HEART'S SECRETS AR FF PART 21 NEW PART!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: suv.patki
Hey ... the story is turning into a mystery story now? Actually, i've read a lot of stories on this site, and with a few exceptions, most of them are just about flirting and love...so i thought that maybe it would be interesting to add a new twist...it's still a full on LOVE STORY...but it has a bit of adventure to it...Whats with this Peter? Is Peter not his real name? Just for fans to know, Peter is not his real name...his real name is actually Armaan, and the story will reveal that in the next part or so...and there is a concept behind him not telling her his real name and not loving her truely...YET. but there are many hints in part 3 that reveal why he can not do so! i promise you, it will be all clear in the next part...😊And why cannot he fall in love with Ridz?? Well, too confusing. Waiting to read on.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

omg wat is dis???????? im confused .com (LOL). dis jus gets interesting update by update. the first thoughts dat came to my mind were dat hez either an absloute nutcase or..............n dont laff or..........a vampire..... i no i no it sounds stupid n dont ask hw i came to dat conclusion but i did. i guess i was a big fan of buffy the vampire slayer. well wat eva he is, he definately hidin summat big. dont no y but got a gut feeling he got summat to do with the murder she witnessed mayb not directly but mayb thru family unless his all family are or were serial killers( as ders no mention of dem being dead or alive oly wat keerti noz). luk at me blabbin on anyways do continue soon dying to no wat happens nxt

lov iram

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Sifters

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: rani 19
omg wat is dis???????? im confused .com (LOL). dis jus gets interesting update by update. the first thoughts dat came to my mind were dat hez either an absloute nutcase or..............n dont laff or..........a vampire..... i no i no it sounds stupid n dont ask hw i came to dat conclusion but i did. i guess i was a big fan of buffy the vampire slayer. well wat eva he is, he definately hidin summat big. dont no y but got a gut feeling he got summat to do with the murder she witnessed mayb not directly but mayb thru family unless his all family are or were serial killers( as ders no mention of dem being dead or alive oly wat keerti noz). luk at me blabbin on anyways do continue soon dying to no wat happens nxt
lMFAO!!!🤣 WOW! omg this is the cutest comment i've seen yet! hahaha...thanx soo much! don't wry, when i read my part again, i also thought for a second that maybe i was getting too much into this all...but really, that's the amazing part of writing this story! thanx for the comment!!

lov iram

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harika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

hey, this is such a different story...getting interesting with every part...he cant kiss on her lips?? wats that?!!! the physical bits, its going a bit fast but u made it clear that even they r feeling its fast...so, thats fine...wats with his family? mystery mystery hmm...plz post the next part soon... i like the way u r writing it😊

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lookwhoshere

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

whoa..this one's unusual...too hot to handle ! lolz.. wats with the mystery of his family n the kiss thing i wonder..

continue soon

luv,

anu.

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lightening

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

hey.. rilly rilly different n woa a bit too hot to handle!!! ;)
neway i just hope fr my n ur sake dis ff does nt get locked up by d mods cz dey locked up bodyguard as well cz it had a bit too much of passion in it. ... btjst wnderin peter is armaan rite? n wats wid d i cant kiss on d lips .. reminds me of pretty woman lolzz!!

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ridzie4u2nv

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

um hi wonderful sizzling parts plz do pm me wen u next update

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

first i will definitely say it was too hot
ok here's kind of suggestion:just dont mind, the mods here are kind of strict, what am i saying?? there are strict in case of the ff's which have too much of passion and sex and other such things/bad words and on
see i have no grudge against ur ff
but i dont want ur ff to be locked coz it is getting interesting
with the kiss thing and all

so kindly reduce the passion part and all coz there are many ff readers who are below 15 yrs and since it is unsuitable for them!!!!
dont take it to heart that i didnt like ur ff or somethin
its just that u r new and u dont know the rules and all

love:
aishwarya
if any doubt then do pm!!!