Love is life- AR(KaSh) (part2 updtd.pg3)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys..this is ayesha..an its my first ff
do post comments and be frank cuz it will help me write better ffs...
this is just a small introduction..plz comment and ill continue if i get good comments😊

What do you want to say about the 23 year old girl who died?

I loved her so much..all i wanted was her and her love... i did get her..but not for a very long time..

-The characters are anjali and riddhima who r sisters, armaan, muskaan, rahul and atul who study in M.M.I (mumbai medical institute)together and r very good friends. anjali is a popular girl hu finds atul cute hu really admires her. rahul and muskaan r dating each other and armaan and riddhima always keep troubling each other!ms.keerti and mr. shubhankar are teachers.

PART 1:
in the college library on the first day of college
Armaan:oh! main yahi book toh dhoond raha tha..
Riddhima: armaan, yeh book maine tumse pehele utha li thi!ise main issue karoongi..
Armaan:dekho riddhima, mujhe mere pehle project ko ache se karna hoga Ms.lavina ko impress karne ke liye.. aur tumhe waise bhi pata hai ki mujhe in projects vagera me itna interest nahi hai!
Riddhima: armaan jab tume interest nahi hai toh tumhe ye book chahiye kyun?!
Armaan: riddhima please..while making a flirty face and touching riddhima's hand in a naughty way!
Riddhima:achaa! lekin sirf ek shart par.. tumhe mujhe ek cup coffee ke liye leke jaana hoga!
Armaan:pakka! i promise..hmmm..basket ko 'date' pe lejane main bahut maza ayega!!heehaha!😆
Riddhima: ok fine..!
And then the bell rang so they went for their claases..In the class:
armaan throws a paper ball on riddhima
Riddhima:kya hai armaan?!
Armaan: kal college ke baad shaam ko 6:30 baje coffe ke liye mujhe ccd mein milna!!while whispering vry softly so tht the teacher duz not hear him..
Riddhima: while laughing softly she says theek hai..
Ms.keerti:In an angry voice-riddhima..riddhima!
Riddhima: ye yes ma'am!whle getting up from her seat.
ms.keerti:Riddhima does not say anything as she was distracted by armaan..
ms.keerti: ms.riddhima, class main apna dhyan idhur udher na rakh kar class main rakha ki jiye..
riddhima: im very sorry ma'am
ms.keerti: aap beth sakti hain..par ainda yeh galti mat karna..
Riddhima: ye yes ma'am!while sitting on her seat.
The bell rings so they all leave..
Armaan; byee basket!! he screams standing in one corner with anjali and atul in fron of everyone while she is standing on the opposite side.riddhima makes a face and leaves
anjali: armaan tum kyun meri bahen ko satate rehte ho?
atul: haan armaan, kitna tung karte ho tum bechari ko!
Rahul n muskaan come together n join them..
Armaan: hey guys! kyaa baat hai..aaj mile bhi nahi? hume bhool gaye kya??😉
Rahul:arrey nahi yaar..hum kaise tumhe bhool sakte hain!
Muskaan: woh kya hai na, rahul mere liye bahut sundar phool laya hai itne dino baad!😛
Rahul: tu kya kehna chahati hai? main tere liye kuch lata nahi!😲
Muskaan: acha! tu mere liye isse pehl kya laya tha??
Rahul: wo wo woh..
muskaan: dekha!tujhe toh yaad bhi nahi..while poking him on his arm..
Rahul: hey riddhima kahan hai??
Armaan: laughs n says woh gussa ho kar ghar chali gayi..
Rahul: armaan tune hi kuch kiya hoga!
Anjali: ok i gtg guys..cu
Atul:haan main bhi chalta hoon..
Everyone say bye to each other while hugging n leave.

Hey guys,,this is part 1..plz comment n tell me if it is boring or watever cuz its my first ff n i seriously no noithing! pl comment n tell me hw is it..! hope u like it..im nervous!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Wow a veryyy differnt concept
do cotninue soon
swanzzy
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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
definately different. i hope itz not ridz hu died and armaan saying dem dialogue but do continue soon, wud lyk 2 c hw da story unfolds
luv iram
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey,

nice concept yaar....a different one....
please continue this and if u can then plzz pm me when you update.

love,
sameera😊


Edited by sameera_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AYESHA!!!! OMG!! i cant belive it ya!! just coz i started writing i neva knew ki im encouraging u also!! OMG!! and dont say all that ki u dont have anything in mind!! im soooo happy!! and yes hw can i fgt plz cont soooooooon!! and i hope now u know hw imp comments r!!
love u!!
Edited by vcaobi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: vcaobi

AYESHA!!!! OMG!! i cant belive it ya!! just coz i started writing i neva knew ki im encouraging u also!! OMG!! and dont say all that ki u dont have anything in mind!! im soooo happy!! and yes hw can i fgt plz cont soooooooon!! and i hope now u know hw imp comments r!!
love u!!

hehe..luv u too!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey intereasting intro do continue😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow what a different concept. can you pm me whenever you update?
-mona :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice concept and please pm me when you update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks so much guys!!!😃

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