'Desires' AR ff-Part 6(pg 19)July 5

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Kanu K

@artizia

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: kvn1983
waoh👍🏼 its really a nice⭐️ superb one😊😉 so cute😍 plz continue it soon😊😉

thanks nidha di ..and i loved the chocos :D

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Kanu K

@artizia

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: mar-
woooooow grt part really good pls continue soooooon
can you plss pm me when you update??

thanks dear ...

Originally posted by: janu1610
Kanu really sweet but realistic part. A part of every couples life.
wow what an observation. Good going .Keep it up. Plz pm me
Ritu

thanks ritu .. yeah sadly it happens in most ppls life.but lets see how they resolve the issue

Originally posted by: Robin_M
kanu meri jhansi tusi kamaal kardi!!!!!!! kina sona likh de aa tusi yaar! teri story meinu bhot vaadia lagi! i guess love wasnt enough to keep ar happy after marriage! u never really know a person untill u actually live with them...the only thing keeping armaan and riddhima together is thier physical desire for one another! but now shes packed up her things!!! looks like riddhima is taking a drastic step by leaving him!
well im really enjoying it soo far, hun tusi cheti cheti update karo!!!!

thanku maasi for enjoying it .. and hun maariyo na main late udapte kita aa

Originally posted by: $h!V@n!
Wow kanu di, its amazing....but she leaving?? 😕
what a cliffhanger yar, plz cont soon

thanx for the pm..

luv Shivani😳

yaar cliffhanger ke bina maza nahi aata na 😉

Originally posted by: rhama2
oh ma!!
what happ??
why d suitcase??
i guess she is trying to stay away from armaan
so that he learns d lesson!
lovely update kanika!!!

love:
Aishwarya

aishwarya .. have u heard of the song ? jaiye aap kahan jaayenge ..laut kar phir yahin aayenge .
thanks dear ..

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Kanu K

@artizia

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: armaanridz
hi kanu
wow very nice part..................
n quite realistic too
hmm ridz is leaving lets wat happens next
chandni

thanks chandini ... ya its quite realistic ......

@madhasar - thanks dear for liking it

@swanzzy - thanks dear ..will wait for your comments on the next part

Originally posted by: dmgluver01
heyy.....i just read ur FF and its awesome!! great concept!!!!! wow....what a cliff hanger!!! plzz cont soon and can u PM me when u cont plzz??

thanks mahima .

@aishah02 - thanks aisha .. lets see what ridzi does ..

Originally posted by: jia..
Madam ji did i comment here??? On part 2???? I dun remember!! A great art Kanu, um loving the turmoil, her POV , her reasons for seeing their relationship no longer existing, his POV, the entire concept of leaving fites outside the bedroom, Fabulously and just simply brilliantly portrayed Kanu.

Waiting for u to continue this, its a bad cliffo yaar!!

thanks jia ..its really an honour to get sucha wonderfull comment from one of the ace writers .

@chocofreak - thanks dear

@pwincess kanzi - thanks kanan for your comments

Originally posted by: dhruviarmaanfan
Hey kanu once again a kool n sweet part but little bit confusing
n u wrote whole feeling for her n him also...N ya if she hated that part "So gai kya?" then I don't like her bcoz he looks sweet n cuteee while saying this...Loved ur part plz continue soon n if possible plz plz plz PM me....

dhruvi they both are right as per their thinking ..but lets see where their thinking meets

Originally posted by: suvrati
hey when u planning to update sweety
its been ages
do post a prt.

suvrati dear just did the update ..so sorry sweety for keep u waiting for so long

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER
Hii Kanu.. Riddhima here. I think yuw have a very nice concept to your fan fic. It's like a real love story, like how a husband and wife relationship sometimes is like. Yuw wrote those two parts with perfection and i really want to continue reading this. Please continue soon. eep up the good work..

hey ridhima yaar who deosnt know u ..im one of ur fans from the open ff u have for "come on in arman and ridhima are married .." you doing sucha splendid job in that ....

thanks dear for liking it so far ..i hope i wont let ur expectations down .

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

that was so nice.. and yeah talking always lessens the distances... beautiful and little emotional part dear...

ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS and come back soon...

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ttimpy

@ttimpy

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

a very realistic part.kanu dear.......it so happens in a lot of couples lives.............maybe familiarity breeds contempt (ha ha)...............just a physical relationship is not enuf to carry on a marriage.........emotional bonding is also needed............

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heezy

@heezy

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

kardiya na serial wali kaam kanta rani.

pyar kaaro toh problem, pyar na karo toh bhi problem.... hai raba how is a guy supposed to survive? lol but why was he getting so defensive, i know what she said was, she could very easily have been wrongly accusing him but he should ave heard her out then exploded if needs be. lol koi baat nahi delay hua toh kya... bas dont make us wait absolutely forever for the next update.

ciaoders motiji

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Dhruvi

@dhruviarmaanfan

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Hey Very sweet part once again n ya plz riddhima ke dimag me shak mat paida karo.....I know Armaan aisa nahi hai.....N the lipstick mark would be of her only I suppose.....N ya thank u soooo much for the Pm.....

Plz continue soon....N if possible plz plz plz do PM me

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ and wht she is doing😲 she is doubting him😡😡😡 how can she🤢 if he talk sweetly😛 den she think something fishy and if he fight😉 den she says no love😡 she is impossible😆 plz continue it soon😊 &thanks for the pm😉

"KABI NA HATHON SE HATH CHUTEY KHAYAL RAKHNA,
KABHI NA CHAHT KA MAN TOOTE KHAYAL RAKHNA,
HO JO MOHABBAT TO RANJISHO SE GURAIZ KARNA,
KISI KA NAZUK SA DIL NA TOOTE KHAYAL RAKHNA..."