Armaan Ridhima are married!! COME ON IN.. - Page 4

Originally posted by: rajeev_crazy

wow yachna, that was such a romantic part,

i really liked it,

i wonder why u dont have ur own FF,

ive read some parts by u in shaadi ke ladoo too,

and all were really good,

i really feel u shd attempt to write a ful-fledged FF,

im sure u will earn many fans, well main already ban chuki hoon..lol

Originally posted by: yachna

thnks why dnt u cont yaar plzzzzzzz short prt hi update kardo

Originally posted by: devanshi_

hey i just read all the parts its really good!!!!!!!!

srry i cant continue......

u guys plz reply soon!

n yachna nice part hun!!!!!

in sanjeevani....

riddhima is in the maternity ward checking on one of her patients(priya kumar) who has just deliverd a baby girl.

riddhima- toh how u feeling now??better??

priya-haan much better!!(looking at her baby who is sleepin on the cradle neat to her bed)

riddhima-(smiling) good!

priya- (still staring at the baby) doctor... apko pata hai jab ek maa apne bache ko dekti hai na toh who apne aap better feel karne lagti hai. duniya ka sab kuch bhul jati hai! she gets all d happines in d world.pata ek maa bananna is the best thing in d world!

riddhima-(who is lost in her own world after listening to priya...)

priya-magar jab u loose your child u loose everythin

priya had lost her first child but now was lucky enough to get another

riddhima-(who is disturbed when priya says this)

priya- riddhima ji....kya hua?

riddhima still lost

priya-doctor....???

riddhima- (brought back from her thought) haan kuch nahi

take care ok!!(walks away with slight tears in her eyes)

riddhima runs to the fire exit...starts to cry really badly sitting on the third step

suddenly some one opens the door

riddhima turns around to c who it is

its armaan

looking at him she gets up and runs to him n hugs him holding him really tight. crying her heart ....

armaan(worried n shocked) riddhima......kya hua???

riddhima still crying...

armaan cups her face

armaan- riddhima stop crying....batao kya hua

riddhima- armaan(not able to speak properly) mujhe daar lag raha hai

armaan- kyun?? (really worried)

riddhima-armaan agar hamre baby ko kuch hogaya toh??

armaan - tumyeh kaisi baat kar rahi ho!

riddhima - explaining him wat had happened to priya first child

armaan then taking ridhhima in his arms

armaan-jaana..tum bekar mein chinta kar rahi ho ek doctor ho kar aisi baat karti ho...dehko abb tak toh saare report sahi aye hain na

riddhima- haan

armaan-toh phir.... basket chill ya brave bacche rothey nahi (tryin to lighten up the mood)

riddhima-(now smiling) achha toh mein bacchi hoon!!

armaan -meri toh tum baby hi ho na!!! aur wiasi bhi main apne anne wale baache ke liye practice kar raha tha.(holding her hip pulling her closer)

riddhima – ur sure na baby ko kuch nahi hooga

armaan- (pulling her into a hug) haan baba….. now no more discussion ok!

Riddhima kissing him on his cheeks

Riddhima-ok!

So sum one carry on n tell me how It was?????

awesome prarthna!!!!!!!! really well written loved how she gets emoctional!!!!!!!!!! and srry im not tryin now il try after my final exams wen i can think in peace!!! lol!

Originally posted by: devanshi_

awesome prarthna!!!!!!!! really well written loved how she gets emoctional!!!!!!!!!! and srry im not tryin now il try after my final exams wen i can think in peace!!! lol!