Resonance - AR ff - Part 1[pg3]Nov17 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow ur intro is terrific cant wait to read mre. as for ur previous ff havent cum across them if they r by any chance based on ar then can u pm me da linkz. preeeeeeetty plssssss
thank
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yah....same here rani...if ur previous FFs were on AR could u evn PM me the links??
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i'm booked !!! awesome concept plzz continue soon
and plzz pm me .. sounds really interesting cant wait to read more about A-R !! ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

lolz u posted the intro omg it was fab....it was like just perfect...AR love each other knowing how different they are awwww thats really sweet...

im in a rush so i will give u detail comment later....so sorry im really in a rush


love, sonu


Thanks sonia ..your presence means a lot sweety ..u read it that was a compliment in itself 😊

QUOTE=dmglovernimisha]
u think u need responses with such a gr8 FF in hand??
its outstanding!
um w8ing 4 ur upd8 yaar!
btw when will u upd8 hun??
plz PM me whenever u upd8!
thanks honey!
upd8 ASAP plz plz plz!
um begging here!!!
he he...
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue !!!
n could u add me 2 ur PM list??
thanks
tc
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Nimisha

thanku so much Nimisha .. yaar im writing after a long time so for sure need you guys comments to reflect back on how i did and would love to see if i can make it better with ur comments .
i have pmd u list of my other AR ff's .

Originally posted by: *tiny*

OMG Kanu...i am already inlove with your armaan. he is the fast and furious?? lol...but oh so sweet, if anyone looks at riddhima he beats the hell out of them? NICEEEEEEEEEE!!!

and what is this? the guys will get beaten up but the girls are alllowed to droool?? actually, good...otherwise how will we drool....hey, u have reaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllly made it interesting and u write very well too....

do pm when u update...will be waiting to read this!
thats wat makes armaan stand out yaar ..his first looks 😃, thanks for your wonderful comment dear .

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Posted: 16 years ago
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The intro itself is so fascinating... plz start the FF... waiting for it.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Kanu ... impressive intro. And the name's even cool .... Resonance. Waiting to read on. In case you planning PM ing people, please add me to the list.
Cheers,
Suvarna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1

Lets see whats happening behind that closed blue door turning at the hallway ...little to your left .... ya there..no no .....few steps back ......right there . Oh it looks like some classroom. I hear some commotion going on.. but it doesn't sound like a class going.......

I hear only 2 person talking.... ok this one sounds like a guy............let me get little closer... this one sounds like a girl. Hmm..... something fishy ? Shhhhhhhhhh..everyone silent ....what are they talking though ..............Oh my God the pitch is so high........looks like a fight to me .........

" what were you saying to sam ? was it really important" ....this is one harsh tone .......hmmmm


"i was just talking casually"....hmm this one is so delicate and low

"was there any need to..he isn't even in your class ...."omg one more blow ?

"cant i talk to anyone outside my class" now i hear the delicate turning up .....

" ridhima unless it concerns your studies ...you need not talk to guys like sam..you get that clear ?" wow this is a commanding one.

"Armaan i just talked to him...just a hi hello stuff u know that" i hear some defence here .


Oh my God , is this the famous AR ?

Shhh guys calm .......otherwise i wont be able to hear wats going on in here .


" Ridhima i said na ..done ..no more discussions on this ..anyways its time for my class ...." oh i hear some footsteps coming closer.

"armaan?" oh those high heel sandals coming closer to the door .


Move guys .....

Ok i need to hide behind the door now ,coz im caught I will be beaten like hell just like others .

Hey anjie ..where you going ?

"Nothing yaar AR again had a fight ..seriously that Armaan he sucks blood out of my poor ridhima on the name of love" oh here i see the protective side of anjie

Oh by the way anjie ..why does Ridhima wear this high heels ? and she stumbles a lot on them .

"Just like everything , cause of one more pain of her ....the cool dude..Armaan..cool ...huuh... he tells her to wear so that they look good and their heads levelled when they walk" wow I'm hearing this use of heels for the first time .


I still cant understand how can one become levelled at heads with heels. I used to think its your thinking what makes you levelled up at the head .Never mind... doesn't seem like working for them.


What now ? why you all are looking at me like this ?

I know this is your first day at college..but doesn't mean we are going to look at all the love stories today.


What that buzz there ... ?

Oh i see ..here comes miss attitude .......... Nick ... everyone things Nick !! should be a guy ..But alas... its a girl ..sister of our cool dude ...Armaan.. i told you all on your way to college right ?


"pash ...u had a look at my bro's girlfriend?"pash ??????wat kind of name is that ..well who cares ...wait a minute did i hear someone calling a name called pushpinder ? Now i got it 'pash' for pushpinder .This is crazy ...


And what is she complaining about now ?

"That ridhima she was looking like that old actress.. wats her name ..oh ya mala sinha... in that yellow suit" no way .. ............she was looking so cutie in the yellow dress.


"what ????what you saying pash?????..u heard bhai complimenting her ... well he seems to have completely lost it .." wow such rich thoughts about your own bhai..good going nickkkk...


As you can see Mr.Goodies biased thinking..sister in mini skirts and talking so loud in the middle of the hallway ...and its all cool with mr.cool and when that angel just had a talk with sam..he got hot at her!!!

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I think thats enough of harshness and rudeness for the day.... lets see what happening here near the dance room ......ya ya the one near the ladies washroom .......


Oh wow window is open...thats good ..will help us see whats going on here .Let me open it up a little more ....yah now its easier to see .


"I told u so many time to dump that idiot box....but u never listen to me .. you deserve much better..."now who is the reference point here ?


"But you know how much i love him.....and he cares about me ..... and doesn't want to see me in any kind of trouble ....." awww so much love ..who is the lucky one here ?


"Ria .......he is just an over possessive piece of crap ..who doesn't care what you want and what you feel" ria ? is this someone new i don't know ?........


"Anjie you are taking it all wrong..he loves me too much ..so he become protective ...u know like a shielding yaar..." i guess Ria is our ridhima ....look at how much she loves him .... justifying his actions to herself.....


"you know what..its useless to explain to you ..and make you understand ... you have a swollen ankle due to those d*** high heels ...why don't you just take them off ......if his stupid belief more important than your pain" good going anjie..... I wish you were his girlfriend.... would have served him better and that sister of his too .


"leave it na ... we will be fine by the evening ....its time for class" such a belief in her love ? Bless you dear!!!


Ok as everyone is leaving to their classes...lets make a move too ..and we will wait till their day ends .


Who's that sitting in the garden .....?oh no that Plant lover ...Atul..... is he not going for class ?

"hey these are new students ?"


Oh God save them now ....these seniors they dont know anything better then do the ragging of new students .


"Tell me your names .... you know you gotta respect your seniors and do as they say" now what was that big grin for ?


Ok so lets hear who I have with me ..as i forgot their names as well .


From right to left ... Nupur.. Mayank....Samrat...and last one ..Gunjan...


"nice names .....you can go now today..but at the end of your day...you need to come here for other seniors ..."


love

kanu

Edited by *Kanu* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Kanu,
Loved the 1st update so much... I am so fascinated by your narration.. u gave a beautful sketch of all these characters so well.. keep it up and keep going... and we will follow you by reading...😊
And by the way thanks so much for the PM dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ooo i see your mixing mjht with this one hehe cool... but who is this narrator? bhai is story teller ka bhi naam toh batado abh humme 😃
btw why does Armaan seem like such an air head here? and why for the name of love would someone be willing to go round with heels? 😕 when they have a swollen ankle?
noce part 1 kanta, now where's 2? hehe come on get this day moving... i want to see someone teach Nick a lesson or two hehe maybe Mayank or even better Nupur😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Kanu amazing update.........U really bring life to the characters thru ur narration.... i really luved... Keep goin n we'll b there to follow ur updates..............😊PLzz do PM when u update.......
Edited by swetha10 - 16 years ago

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