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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

once again awesome part.......................u posted after lonnng time but posted 2 parts together.........................yash n chah honeymoon was superb...................they enjoyed each n every momemt of this.......................chah is comming closer to yash i mmmmm soo happy for them.....................i really hate that lalit scene how he scolds chah.......................

u really done a great work .....................really apprectiate one.......................plz con't soon



thanku so much dear... i'am glad you liked the scenes.. yup chah is coming closer to yash... lalit will surely learn his lesson.. i'll continue soon..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Nice parts !!

I wish u hadnt kept Shweta as the negative character....but I guess I have no right to question your choices !!
Anyways,continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu



thanku very much... & coming to shweta as a negative character she is not really a negative person.. you will know about her in the future parts... i'll try & continue soon..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazy_4_RA

Lovely part & biiiiiiiiiigggggggg part....😆
It took so much time for me to finish...
Thanx for the double update, continue soon....😊


thanku... i'll continue soon..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana25

wow
loved it
too good
a double treat!



thanku.. i'll continue soon...😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow double treat thanks a ton cont soon



thanku so much...😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

mindblowing parts

i dont have words to describe how intresting these two parts were,i really enjoyed reading the scenes between yash and chah.The way u described the seven days was really good and most of all i really enjoyed how u made yash and chah comfartable with each other and the way their love grew over those 7 days.The scene were yash helps chah overcome her past was really beautifully potrayed i could actually imagine yash consoling chah.Im really glad yash and chah helped angad and kripa the way they showed AK how much they needed each other was really good. Poor chah getting shouted by lalit but it was intresting to see how all the family supported her.I really liked the way u described the love between yash and chah.The way chah and yash stood up to maya and swayam was intresting.Finally everyone knows chah is chah yash garewal.
👏



thanku very much dear,,, i had done a whole lot of research for the honeymoon ... yup all know yash & chah are married.. bas agge agge dekho hotha hai kya.....i'll continue soon...😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky901

awesme parts dear

luv the parts as u beautifully shows their honeymoon period and their life after that.
i really appreciate ur efforts dear as u not only connected ur readers wit the characters but with the whole fic . u very beautifully describe the places n their history so that we in actually imagine how characters are behaving aur feels at that time at that place.
everyone feels conected wit the story after reading it.
u trully a very hard working writer n its shows from ur writing itself that how much interest u take for ur fics.
not only we readers are eagerly waiting for ur update but u also waiting eagerly to write updates.
thanks alot dear for such a being gud writer and give us such a beautiful updates,
i really feel lucky to have u as RA jodis fic writer
Keep it up the grt work dear
pls cont soon
And Thanks alot for 2 parts



thanku so much.. it feels nice to receive a big comment from you... well i had done a lot of research so that the readers find it easy to read... well i really enjoying writing... yup i love to write... thanku once again.. i'll try & continue soon..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

hey dear wonderful parts.....................worth the wait...................loved it...............yash and chah had wonderful moments in greece and also its nice that now angad and kripa are also together..................liked every scene of Greece.................as if lalit and swayam werent enough now maya and vasu have joined the list.......................by the way whos vasu???????????????and i love snoopy..................how i wish he does the same to maya too.................anf twas too bad she did putforth all the useless allegations just to get rid of chah but loved the way yash managed everything.............maya ki chehra dekhne ki laayak thi...................just kick maya and that kapoor doc out of CYG..................post the next part sooooooooooooooon dear...............swayam is behind that accident hai na????????????????and lalit hes worst............feel sorry for chah..................even if lalit redeems also his doings can never be forgiven...................wonder what ur precap means....................and u r gonna finish in 30th part????????????????only 4 more to go?????????????sigh..............plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part ASAP dear........................cont soon..........................



thanku so much deepa.. i always get a smile on my face when i read your comments... i'am glad you liked the Greece bit had to study the Greek history & places thoroughly for that bit... well maya is not totally a negative character.. you will know about her in the coming up parts.. vasu is lalit's sister.. yash's bua.. i have mentioned about her in the intro.. don't worry maya will learn her lesson.. you are right even if lalit redeems himself, things can never get totally alright... precap ka matlab you will know soon.. & yes i'am planning to end 'HPKJ' in the 30th part.. but don't worry will start a new one once i end this.. i'll update son..😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

kya hogaya.. update ke liye waiting kya...😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanku To All The Silent Readers & Readers Who Have Liked The 25th & 26th part of 'Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet' post'....😊

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