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shazia

@xarmaanx

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#81

silent readers plz do leave comment.

more comments i get the faster the update. av got soo many views but very little comments. soo if u want the next part very soon u know what u need to do is leave reviews and comments luv sonia

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Huma

@HS.KaSh

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#82

aww amazing i just the concept babes

pls pls continue amazing......splendid

pls pm me when u'll update it

chandni

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#83

ammy planng 2 take sum inititative.. gr88 prt.. thnxx 4 d pm.. update ssoon

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Zara

@SWEET ZARA

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

Hey!

I visit this forum regularly and i am a silnet reader in this section. actually i only comment on a few ones and i must say your one really need an applause!i really want to say that its amazing and a wonderful fic.the way you have potrayed all the feelings in a go and his dual kind of nature..its totally marvellous!i am really impressed by the way the story is progressing and the way he is accepting their child but not her,well thats the way he is i guess.the change in his reactions and him staring at her.the way she actually never regrets with whom she fell in love with..ohh man i am totally in love with your fic.

At least he's accepting the baby, she thought, a small smile playing on her lips. armaan immediately regretted his words as soon as the crestfallen expression flitted across her face

seems as if he is guilty to notice her fallen expression but the very next moment he s fine with that!

He was doing the right thing, anyway. Wasn't this what she wanted, for him to take responsibility?

It wasn't as if he was in love with her or anything.

so he doesnt love her or have a feeling for her but thinks its the baby just who's bothering him!oh well boy u will learn soon..!

"I'm sorry" he murmured.

ridz closed her eyes, stifling the urge to scream at him. She had already been through enough pain because of him. ridz really didn't need reminding of what it did to her family.

it apears to be so true..like the way she telling him about being thrown out of the house in bits, its so much flawless.

"It's not a date! I just thought we bought needed to eat" armaan quickly added.

ridz smiled.

"And the baby?"

"And the baby"

Aww the way way your story flows is the best part i think. he thinks hes merely concerned with the baby but thats where he stands wrong!

armaan found himself anticipating her answer.

ok now he noticing himself??well thats good.atleast he should know what really is changing in himself,as the current title goes, "look what you done to me."

luv zara😳

Edited by SWEET ZARA - 16 years ago

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#85

Oops a daisies ... Armaan just feeling guilty for his act!!! Poor Ridz ... her parents kicked her out and this chap just feels guilty. Gosh ... Ridz is totally in love with Armaan if she can think thoughts like "he has grown even cutier'.

Thanks for the PM and waiting for next bit!!!

Cheers,
Suvarna

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shazia

@xarmaanx

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: *~*Mehek*~*
Hey...
Awesome FF....

continue soon...

thanks you mehek for the wonderfull comment

luv sonia

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shazia

@xarmaanx

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

Hey!

At least he's accepting the baby, she thought, a small smile playing on her lips. armaan immediately regretted his words as soon as the crestfallen expression flitted across her face

seems as if he is guilty to notice her fallen expression but the very next moment he s fine with that!

He was doing the right thing, anyway. Wasn't this what she wanted, for him to take responsibility?

It wasn't as if he was in love with her or anything.

so he doesnt love her or have a feeling for her but thinks its the baby just who's bothering him!oh well boy u will learn soon..! yep he will learn that soon lol

"I'm sorry" he murmured.

ridz closed her eyes, stifling the urge to scream at him. She had already been through enough pain because of him. ridz really didn't need reminding of what it did to her family.

it apears to be so true..like the way she telling him about being thrown out of the house in bits, its so much flawless.

"It's not a date! I just thought we bought needed to eat" armaan quickly added.

ridz smiled.

"And the baby?"

"And the baby"

Aww the way way your story flows is the best part i think. he thinks hes merely concerned with the baby but thats where he stands wrong!

he will realsie it after a while that he has feeling for ridz aswell.

armaan found himself anticipating her answer.

ok now he noticing himself??well thats good.atleast he should know what really is changing in himself,as the current title goes, "look what you done to me."

Its a treat to read your updates overall as they are worth reading. i hope you are not bored reading the comment but its like i never comment and whenever i do, i usually say blah blah blah expressing my feelings completely.love your fanfic anyways.thanks you once again am really happy that u r reading my ff it means alot to me and let me tell that u r the first person in this ff who has wrote a long comment lol so thanks and trust me am not bored reading ur comment it just encourges me to write more and it make me feel that aleast sumbody is liking my work.

and i aslo love ur name zara that wot my niece is called.

thanks for the lovely comment u made my day

luv zara

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shazia

@xarmaanx

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: suv.patki
Oops a daisies ... Armaan just feeling guilty for his act!!! Poor Ridz ... her parents kicked her out and this chap just feels guilty. Gosh ... Ridz is totally in love with Armaan if she can think thoughts like "he has grown even cutier'.

Thanks for the PM and waiting for next bit!!!

Cheers,
Suvarna

hey thanks for the comment. it means alot to me. i will update soon as possible

luv sonia

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shazia

@xarmaanx

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: prernawaghray
hey update soon naa

hey i will update soon as possible i wil try to update the next part on thursday cos that day am not working. keep on leaving comment if i get really good response for this part 3 then u never know i will update the part 4 even before thursday lol

luv sonia