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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#331

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Hey Haru
idi em amma,nuvvu guda na laga chinna parts istunnava😆
naaku sunday chala pedda part kawali

ok coming back to talking normal
sorry for the extremely late comment
ok
so i loved muski -armaan debate after the hiccup u left us with in the last update
and the bit where Ridz asks Muskaan about them was fab too
haha when she curses herself for not dreaming of muskaan before he met nikki was hilarious
i absolutely loved it
the flow was again brilliant
the last line nij told me was the best and i cudn't agree more
it was too good,now that makes me want a part real soon ok

hope u're feeling betta and done wit shopping and all
ye sunday kabi ayega yar😆

love
Hina

Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago

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N. :)

@Princess..

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#332

hey harika!!
nemo's here!!
lol
wow!
i guess bandi sahi mein pyaar karne lagi hai..
nd one more guess..
is he gonna say sumthing {😈} to her?...
well what was evil in dat?
silly me...
neways!!
u upd8ing on sunday?
thanks 4 the PM
tc
hugs & lub
crzy nemo 😆

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#333

now i'm waitngg 4 sunde... loads of emotionz thru dis ff was conevyed... n d bst was lik describng ammy as a notice board....,

thnxx 4 d pm... update soon

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Simone

@-simi-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#334

harika! i think this has been your best part till now when it comes to expressing ridz's emotions! specially the washroom scene! i was awestruck reading it! really!

i really admire how u went from describing ridz as a chirpy crazy girl to someone who can be so deep and emotional.... it was truely beautiful!

and the last line by armaan was just too sweet!! i cant be happier to know that now i dont have to wait a whole week to read the next part hehehe

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Mudita

@mudi

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#335

YESSS !!! Good one

Harika pls post the next part on sunday

if you dont do that then I wont talk to you

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bulbul

@bulbul123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#336

wow it's amazing hats of to you really really nice

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#337

ahha harika!! niceee yehh!! it went pretty smooth...bt m more than surprised at armaanz earnest attempt at d right start for ter signific convo!! cnt wait!!

Merry Xmas! Hope u feelin betta now!!

nij =)

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#338

reserved hun...until i get back from the vacation!

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#339

aww poor ridz, how just one meeting with a stranger changed her life! i really deeply hope nikitas feelings are one sided! it does look like armaan seriously likes her, so i have hope! yeah it was a bit gloomy, but the ending was wicked! armaan taking charge now! lets see what happens next!
really enjoyed the part, continue soon!