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sonia

@dmg_sonia

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: prernawaghray
hey sonia
aww that was soo cute
i liked the small romantic scenes u try to put in thoughnot completely romantic but still it was very cute
i like their chem its sparkling dear awww good 2 know u liked it
update soon

hey prerna...thanks a ton 4 the wonderful comment, im glad u liked the...i will cont in an hr

sonu

Originally posted by: *azra*
hello
it was a magical update....i loved their chat, car ride where they were close to kissing☺️....your update was like a dream😍, so beautifully written awwww thanks dear
cont soon, may be tomorrow? i cant wait or i will be hurt😭 sorry i made u wait, im updating in 1/2 hr

hey azra...thanks a ton 4 the wonderful comment, im glad u liked the...i will cont in an hr

sonu

Originally posted by: anitamalik
Ahh Sonia! That was a fabulous first part...It was written so beautifully and had no flaws whatsoever! awwww its really sweet of you 2 say this

The way you describe Ridz thoughts is just out of the world...I feel like I am reading a diary entry!

Armaan is such a sweetheart..So charming! I agree he is the best, there is no 1 like him

Continue soon Sonu!

Love, Anita

hey anita...thanks a ton 4 the wonderful comment, im glad u liked the...i will cont in an hr

sonu

Originally posted by: Jodubai
reserved, will read it during lunch hour!

Sorry, I got a bit late here

Loved the 1st part!!! Ridz' feeling is so beautifully penned down, its like can almost relate to her, she being all happy seeing him after such a long time, making him sit at her fav corner of the cafe, wnating to talk random things so she can be with me, its just so natural, poor gal learned all about cricket to keep the convo ready , incase he was to bump into her someday, sure that came in handy yea sure it helped her, love makes us do crazy stuff, ridz did her side of crazy stuff too....whatever she did or said was all becoz of love...love is blind n weird hehe...it transports u 2 a world where u think about him n do things 4 him, u know things which u never did 4 others too, u do 4 the one u love

He gving her a life back, the brief physical contact was enough to give goosbumps, like when he kisses her cheeks.....so sweet, such a gentleman! armaan well he is a pure gentlemen, n yes there is no 1 like him

but why is she panicky about Muskan & Rahul coming, hope she does go with him...it will be like a date....how romantic well i would just say wait 4 a while u will know everything jo

hey Jo...thanks a ton 4 the wonderful comment, im glad u liked the...i will cont in an hr

sonu

Originally posted by: suv.patki
Please update soon!!!

im updating in 1/2 an hr

Originally posted by: Ladoo645
Sooooonia!!!

I'm soo mesmerise at this part!! Riddhima's anxious waiting for Armaan really does tell, by your writing skill, every 'normal-hard working', yet modern Cinderella story! I LUV it to bits!awwww its really sweet of you 2 say this...n i must say its good 2 know ur liked the pt

Aww I wanna poke his dimple too! me 2 me 2 his dimples☺️

OMG He's ask her for coffe?!?!, whoa this is fast! they were friends before too, soo a coffee was pretty kool

Love is all around
Here it s calling now
Love is all around
Can u feel it
it feel it feel it??

I can soo feel the love here! hehe me 2...love is all around them, it has wrapped them

Hawww Riddhima a chor!! Stealing other rides lol, but my what a ride.....totally riding on cloud nine! lolz have u heard love ke liye kuch bhi karega?....well i think that is what she thought

Loved the part immensely!

-Natasha

hey natasha...thanks a ton 4 the wonderful comment, im glad u liked the...i will cont in an hr

sonu

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sonia

@dmg_sonia

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

hey friends🤗....part 2 posted on pg 1....thanks a ton guys 4 the supporting comments u guys gave me...i hope this part doesnt disappoint you all

love u all, sonu

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Amna Malik

@amna malik

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

awwww tht is such a sweet part. Love ur writing style. The entire AR scene was amazing. Ridz loves him so much and by the behaviour of armaan....i think he loves her too....infact i m sure he does. He does unexpected things wid her, like he came so close to her to tell her the dressing code. Loved tht part.

The ending is kind of a cliffhanger. Don't know abt the bad shock but if its a good one....... then is armaan proposing her or something? Can't wait to read next part. Its the last one na. Just thinking abt it is making me sad😔

Anywayz do cont soon

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sasya

@sasya

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

that was soo good👏👏👏.ridhima is really very smart,atlast she made anji agree for her offer.i like all the ar scenes u write and this one was great.

i think he loves her.and the dress code was soo cute.will armaan propose to her in the party??cant wait for the next part.continue soon........

Edited by sasya - 16 years ago

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

lost the chance of being first due to my stupid net
but better be 2nd, as its not late

reserved

oh, not even 2nd............sasya beats me.........but i luv u sasya

so 3rd atleast..........but what say, i m 3rd in my siblings...................so not at all bad😃

comming to the fic...........it was purly a cliffhanger yaar

i do think armaan having a G.........F.......u know right............but hopes is not true😕

and if it is...............let me come to kill her yaar

ridz is so much in luv with him................he better propose her

may be there is no one in party except them both

how romantic that can be😍.................ah............let me keep on dreaming on the sequences that could take place

great writting.............i luv the bits u wrote like heart in the left but gives right answer and the book of love...........Shahjahan and ranjha manju thoughts

they were totally new and i luv reading that...............that really shows how creative u are girl................keeping small things in ur mind, u made your fic exceptionally beautiful

luv it till now

luv ya

lolz
ana👏👏👏

Edited by cool_SK - 16 years ago

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Fabulous, outstanding, I just loved it, pls continue soon and pls PM me (thx for the PM)

Kashish

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Part 2 was superb.
Just wow ... the hotel scene was too good. I hope the story continues to move this way and is simple with no twists. I am dreading your 'Something was waiting for you...something unexpected' . Would wait for you to unfold. And thanks for the PM.

Cheers,
Suvarna