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Sooooonia!!!

I'm soo mesmerise at this part!! Riddhima's anxious waiting for Armaan really does tell, by your writing skill, every 'normal-hard working', yet modern Cinderella story! I LUV it to bits!

Aww I wanna poke his dimple too!

OMG He's ask her for coffe?!?!, whoa this is fast!

Love is all around
Here it s calling now
Love is all around
Can u feel it
it feel it feel it??

I can soo feel the love here!

Hawww Riddhima a chor!! Stealing other rides lol, but my what a ride.....totally riding on cloud nine!

Loved the part immensely!

-Natasha

Originally posted by: jia..

Woahhhh loved it!! excellent one....awww the car scenes and then the hug....man am still in a daze!! Ur srsly beyong excellence girl!! U rock!!

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

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Wow Sonia

amazing part👏

so armaan is back hmmm and ridz totally gone haha lolz u tend 2 behave like this in love right?

aaah the car scene lovely i like

yar love your writing style seriously

and the hug was too gud , awwww thanks hina

armaan hmm can't tell much about him well its a story written 4m her side, which keeps armaan under wrap till the end, its fun

whats with rahul and muski?

hope a bit more is revealed in the next part almost everything will be revealed

thanks for the pm hun ur always welcome

when u updating next eh? in an hr

Originally posted by: mar-

woow grt part really goood

pls continue sooon

Originally posted by: meow23

at last ammy made a grand entry.. hehe yea finally he made a re-entry in her life
luvd d cpnvo.. amzngggg
thnxx 4 d pm.. ur always welcome
update soon

Originally posted by: arluver15

HEY

first of al thnxs a ton for ur PM ur always welcome

wow i loved this part i m sooooooooo glad that he came back ha ha he had 2 come, where would he go

it was fantstic part totaly full of lil bit of romace

thnxs

luv

nruti

Originally posted by: sasya

wow it was great👏,i am soo happy that armaan is back, me too, im also super glad he is bak waise woh jata kaha
ridhima learnt alot for him like cricket and telling lie😆.i like the whole car scene.and the hug was just great, awww thanks
i think armaan must be shocked and suprised. i agree poor guy hehe
i think armaan likes her too.now what is with rahul and muskaan😕,i hope she will go to armaan's party. do u think she will miss?
thanks alot for the pm. ur always welcome
continue soon.......

Originally posted by: saridena

hi sonia

thks for the pm dear ur always welcome

awesome part

ridz is lost case she is sooooooooooo in love with armi lost case sure she u tend 2 behave kind of like this in love right?

looks like armi also likes her hmmmmmm

but does he love her? lolz i would say lets see or can u figure out yourself

hope u relieve it sooon i will

and what abt muski and rahul an dwhat is connected with 25th ? wait n watch

she will not go or what? do u think she will miss 4 anything in this world?

armi will be soo upset

update soooooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

Originally posted by: kashishk

Part 1 is fabulous continue soon.

Kashish

Originally posted by: samijan

oohhhhhhhhhh, wht a gr8 part. continue soon!!!!!

Originally posted by: *tiny*

OMG sonia...is this for real?? arrey, i am forgetting to breathe and forgetting that i need to breathe to live....lol omg u cracked me up...im laughing at my own line surely im crazy gurl lolz

gosh, i can almost see armaan standing in front of me and feel the same intense emotions in Riddhima yaar.... he is looking handsome naa? i bet he is☺️

what writing, what expression, what an array of intense, intense emotions....and with every word, i was holding my breath lest with my breathing the spell should break, and something terrible should happen to burst R's bubble.... awwwww thanks a ton, ur comment is now making my smile broarded...i just wrote what i felt when i put mself in ridz's shoes....soo imagining armaan while writing makes my work damm easy, im glad u liked it



oh, sonia.....cant wait now! 😆

btw, thanks a TON for PMing..i wouldnt have missed this for the world! awwww its really sweet of you 2 say this

Originally posted by: cool_SK

Sonia

u should beware us b4 updating as it was a killer lolz sorry i didnt knew it was that good, i still cant stop wondering if i should have edited it once more...u see im a bit crack hehe

muwah muwah......................it was so sweet to die for......awww thanks dear

lmao girl

did i say b4 that u r too good too be a great great writter..................u seriously rock....i luv how ridz feels for armaan and armaan reciprocate her feelings............its do felt so magical to live awwww its really sweet of you 2 say this

Finally he is back but hope that made him realize the liking about this girl of his

and Ridz, she is madly in luv with him...................Confess soon love yea sure soon promise

U just pull armaan in the part..............but i do know he was ready to meet her lady luv

Wink

heheheee

cont soon dear

waiting n waiting eagerly that u update

its never enough i think i could get of this fic of urs.....but now i m really feeling sad as u said its a short one even i, i agree even im sad but then i promise the next 2 parts would be good

but i m going to enjoy it full n i will enjoy writing it 4 sure

luv ya lots and lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttsssssssssssss

Best of luck 4 comming part thanks
luv ya

lolz
ana

Originally posted by: amna malik

wow sonia....fab part. Love ur style of writing. The car scene was gr8 and the hug.........was simply amazing. awwww thanks dear
All his gestures does imply tht he loves her too. hmmmm lets see if ur right
Can't wait to read more

Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH

Sonia!! Oh my god the first part was amazing!!
The way you described armaan...oh my god..the toned body his dimpled smile and stylish walk...*sigh*...you had me day dreaming😍 hehe good 2 see ur crazy behind him as much as im armaan *sigh*☺️
Wow they actually ended up being good friends.....loved it. they were good friends before too
Especially the ride home...sooo close to a kiss lol yea very close hehe
Muskaan and Rahul? Anniversary party maybe?? Seriously you left it at such a cliffhanger!! anniversary lolz nop
Amazing update
thanks sooooooo much for the pm =] ur always welcome 4 the pm

Mira

Originally posted by: cutie13

gr8 part

the detailes and emotiom was fab

cont soon

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey i loved it...amezing update......i hope she can go with him lolz do u think she will miss it?
........please continue soon as this ff is getting intresting after updates........
thankc 4 the pm................ur welcome 4 the pm

❤️MONA

Originally posted by: *Kanu*

you know wat sonia .. what i feel is ..
the way you are discribing the story .. tobe its like someone hypnotizing ridhima and telling her wat to do ...ofcourse the hyponotizing force is her love..... hehe yea one gets into another world when he or she is love n hypnotizing also takes you into another world so yea u can tell hypnotizing is another word of love
but reading it i myself felt hypnotized with your writing and felt like im being moved around by your words which are taking me places with them like a shadow which if following AR everywhere they go ..awwww kanu its really sweet of you 2 say this, trust me it made me smile a little more

awesome update sweety

loved it

Originally posted by: nix nd soni

SONU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It ws FANTABULOUS!!!!!!!!
JUS BRILLIAN
AMAZING
AWESUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
YAAR AAPNE PHIR SE KAMAAL KA DIYA hehe thanks a ton soni 4 saying this

I WS SOOOOOOOOO LOST IN IT K WHEN IT ENDED I WS LYK ITNA CHOTA SA N DEN I SCROLLED BAK UP N REALIZED THT IT WS A DAMNNNNNNNNNN LONG PART lolz it was more than 6 pages of word hehe
hehehe
welll it ws jus brilliant
m sooooooooo waitin for d nxt part
god!!11
i think he luvs her too
n i mean armaan as a writer wid a gurl who owns a cafe...it is such a brilliant concept!!!!!!!!! I COMPLETELY LOVE UR CONCEPT awwww thanks a ton soni im super glad u liked it
keep rocking
luv u!!!
soni

Originally posted by: aravi

heyyy sonuuuuu!!!!!!!! finally u updated as usual i loved it !!!!!! def a gr88888 concept n totally luv d way u r taking dis one!!!!!!awww... thanks a ton RV
finally her dream man came backkk wohhhoooo!!!!!! he had 2, how long he would be out of sight?
god riddhima fell 4 armaan a big time here naa!!! GOSH wenever she looks at him shez allllll soooo lost who wouldnt fall 4 him after all he is armaan ☺️he is soo, soo hot, handsome, sweet i bet u know can go on n on😆😆😆
hehe!!!!!!! still he invited her as his spl guest HAILA!!!!!!!!! yea after he is her future😉
me hoooookkkkeedddddddd to dis one hooked awww glad 2 know this piece of news
u better updateeeeeeeee sssssssssooooooooooonnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!! im updating in a while luv ya aravi

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

ohhh soo sweet...............

very nice part............

thanx for pm ur always welcome 4 the pm

Originally posted by: yachna

hey sonia wow yaar fantastic prt yaar d way u hv describe ridz thought on luv superb nd ar nd ridz ended up gud frinds they were good friends before too cute nd ridz ws sweeet thy wre 2 kiss bt awwwwwww nd rahul muski anniversry hope so anniversary nop dear cont sooooooon
thnku soooo mch fr d pm ur always welcome
luv yachna

Originally posted by: dmglovernimisha

Hi sonia!
yaar!
i wish u could continue rite away! hehe i wish too
there r soooooooo many things popping in my mind to write...
ohk here it goess...
does armaan feel the same about her?? hmmm lets see
ib hopw he says i love you too when she confesses...
i so wish.. i wish too
n whats about RM??
anniversary or sumthing??
or r they cuming?? lolz lets see
oh man i wish ridz is able 2 go to the book launch..
🤔...do u think she will miss that
n how can u write soooooooooooooo godd?? i dont know seriously hehe
lmao!
u write so amazingly!u r simple outstanding!!! hehe thanks a ton
how do u do it??
upd8 ASAP plz!
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey

awwwwwwwww..........................

dat was relllllllllllyyyyyyyyyy cho cho choooooooo sweeeeeeeeeetttttttttt cuteeeeee😳

luveddddddd it

cont super sooooooooonnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

Originally posted by: Robin_M

sonia!!!!!!!!!!!! wow what a part! it was soooo good! they are soo cute! hope they confess their love soon! that is, if armaan loves her...which i think he does! lets see robin if he really does
too good girl, please continue soon!