'Ankahey Rishtey' - AR FF(The End pg113) 11/07/09 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago

hi rucha

thks for the pm dear

i am sry for the late reply due to exams

hmmmmmm

coming to the last 3 parts

cute awesome

ridz knows karan loves radhika

adi and karan figit sooo sad

update sooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey rucha plz continue soon...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
HELLO... PLEASE CONTINUE SOON...
THIS FF IS ROCKING...
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 7

The next two days passed normally.. AR playing nd having fun with Arav nd other kids.. Ash trying to impress Karan.. nd Karan getting jealous of Adi nd Radhika's friendship but certainly his destiny had other plans for him.. Jai was always concentrating on his work or on the kids..


At Night after dinner

Karan was sitting in the garden recollecting how beatiful Radhika was looking in her pink suit that day, her cute expressions, her innocent smile, big brown eyes… He came out of his dream when he saw Adi coming out of Radhika's room at this hour…NOW he was furious..Karan stopped Adi as he crossed by nd blurted

K: Hey Adi…Tu iss waqt Ravs ke room kya kar raha thha..?

Adi: Dats non of your business..Main kuch bhi karu how does it matters to you..?

K: (angrily) Just keep one thing in your mind Adi..Ravs ko kabhi hurt kiya na to mujhse bura koi nai hoga..

Adi:Radhika meri dost hai nd I respect her.. so keep your bloody nose out of our matter..

Saying this Adi turned to go towards his room when he stopped in midway nd said


Adi: waise tujhe itni problem kyun ho rahi hai..?

K: (composing himself) listen Adi.. mujhe tujhse koi problem nai hai..Its just that main…Ummm..main vo… vo Ravs… (cut in between)

Adi: (smiling) abe mujhse nai bol pa raha usse I LUV YOU kaise kahega…? Tere chehre pa saaf dikhta hai..

K: Umm..Vo..h..haan…na..I mean nai..I mean gudnite..

Saying this Karan rushed to his room thinking " kya sach mein mujhe pyar ho gaya hai..? nai..naii..mujhe phirse pyar nai ho sakta..agar Ravs bhi Tina ki tarah..? no dats impossible..."

Adi's Room

He popped on his bed nd picking up the phone he dialed a number happily..

Adi: hello partner..Plan A completed..

Partner: Well done partner.. ab next target Radhika..Kal finalise karenge..okk gudnite..

Adi: Okk partner kal I'll be there will full details.. gudnite..

Saying so he hung up smiling knowingly..

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Next day they've all returned to Sanjeevni.. all the interns were given the duties ..

Jai nd Adi : children's ward

Karan nd Radhika : OPD

Ash : General ward

When Karan nd Radhika were checking their patients they both heard a loud cry of a small baby from the corridor.. Involuntarily both rushed outside nd there they saw a toddler's mother almost begging the nurse to let her in to meet the doctors as her son is having a really high fever..

Nurse: arre aap samajhti kyun nai.. yahan fees deke appointment lena padta hai pehle..

K: kya hua sister..

Nurse: sir dekhiye na main kab se inhe samjha rahi hoon ki inhe treatment ki fees deni hogi lekin… (before she could complete Karan barked at her)

K: lekin kya..? hum doctors hain aur hamara kaam hai treatment karna samjhi aap.. ab aap ja sakti hain inke bete ko main check karunga.. (then turned to the lady ) aap plz aaiye mere saath..

As he moved in he asked Radhika to take care of the lady while he checks th lil kid.. Radhika was amazed to see this side of him.. She has never imagined Karan to be that sensitive nd that to towards a stranger.. after some time Karan came out playing with the kid , smiling to himself not noticing Radhika gazing at him nd smiling in her dreamland.. She jerked out of the dreams when she heard him talking to the lady..

K: don't worry maam your son is fine.. fever hai 2-3 din mein utar jayega.. abhi maine ek dose de di hai.. yeh davaiyaan aap bhi isse 3 baar de dijiyega.. aur koi problem ho to plz feel free to contact me here.. (he said consoling the mother)

Lady: thankyou very much doctor.. yeh bhi aapko pasand karne laga hai..

K: haan bachhe to hote hi aise hain.. they love you to bits nd only thing they want is love nd attention..


Hearing this Radhika couldn't believe her ears.. How can sumone like Karan talk about kids like this..? after the lady left..

Ra: karan..

K: Hmmm….

Ra: mujhe nai pata thha ki tumhe bachon se itna lagav hai..

K: usmein kya hai..bache to sab ko achhe lagte hain..

Ra: haan par jaise tum usske saath khel rahe thhe.. you're really gud at it..I'm glad you helped the lady..

K: radhika..We're here for our duty nd not to talk about all this so it'll be gr8 if we just focus on our work..

Saying so he left Radhika with wet eyes.. she thought "maine kuch galat to nai kaha.. then why was he so rude..? Vo mujhse itna gussa thha ki itne dinon mein pehli baar usne mujhe Radhika kaha Ravs nai.. lekin kyun..? should I ask him..? will he tell me..?"

Finally shaking her head she left for the duties before any senior catches her.. but there was sumone hiding in the corner listening to the convo nd noticing evey change in Radhika's expression.. Was he a Well Wisher OR a Deserter..?
wait to find out..

TINA'S SECRET WILL BE REVIELED LATER WHEN HIS CONCERN FOR THAT TODDLER GETS INTO THE PICTURE..

GUYS I'M REALLY REALLY SORRY FOR THIS LATE UPDATE.. I HAD MY PARTS WRITTEN IN A PEN DRIVE WHICH I MISPLACED.. THATS WHY TO CHANGE MY MOOD I EVEN STARTED MY OTHER FF ND NOW I'VE RECONSTRUCTED ALL MY PARTS AGAIN IN MY PC.. SO FROM NOW ON UPDATES WILL BE THRICE A WEEK..
KEEP COMMENTING ND SUPPORTING ME PLEASE..


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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really gud bt why dint u pm?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana25

it was really gud bt why dint u pm?



I did PM just now..
didn't you get it..?😕

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Posted: 16 years ago
ya jst got pm it is a really nice epi
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey rucha.... itwas superb... but no AR.?😭
pls continue soon wid AR
thanx for d pm
love ya
Neha

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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy rucha di!! yayy u updated!! lol.....great part!!! really nice!! plzz cont soon and thanx fr the pm!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nice ff
do pm me when u update the next part

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