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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#271

awwwwwww she woke up alone???....alone??....ALONE???.....that is soooo mean of Armaan!!!...couldn't he wait???

but I guess he was scared about the morning after!!

Oh god!!...why did you end it here???....PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!.....I HAVE to know what happens next!!!....please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#272

yeh short that was i can't credit u for length here...but it sizzled the page in its own short size...hahah..great one that was sim..the chem...the impact of their interaction....

she woke up to herself...um guessing he is gone....but why...i duno why i think it was neither a sensitive move nor an insensitive one from the man...feel like it may havebeen plain circumstancial confusion n his need to think of why she still was a virgin...or something else maybe...duno...u gota tell us n soon!

lov,

nj

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aarora

@aarora

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#273

hey sweety..amazing part as always..plzz PM me whnvr u update....

luv ya..

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lookwhoshere

@lookwhoshere

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#274

hey..hope i have commented here before..have been reading this since long..

that was awesome...a very hot part!! n she woke up alone?? maybe armaan needs to clear his mind now, may be he's harbouring stronger feelings for her especially after this passionate encounter..watever!

can't wait for u to continue..luv ur ff!

luv,

anu.

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#275

Sim!!!!🤗

Cant believe i missed out two updates here, i din even knw u had a part 9A updated!!!! Anyways so glad to u back Sim!! Hope ur doing well!!

Well coming to wat missed......wowwww 9A was brilliantly written, his excitement and the entire sensual feeling throughout the part was excellently written!!! Short as it was though........9B was shorter but hell that was just outstandingly written!!

Very subtly and yet a real sizzler....thechemistry between them was just highly commendable!! Fab job Sim, kudos!!

He left her??? He realized she was a virgin so........dunno wats into his mind though.....really wanna know wats cooking up ur sleeve now Sim, do continue soon and hopefully a longer one.....:)

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#276

wonderfully written sim, very passionate! well done girl!!!
ouch he just left?!?! couldnt even wait till morning?!?! i knew he was a jerk, a playboy, but he didnt even have the decency to stay the night?!? especially after figuring out she was a virgin! ahh the man is an a**
i really cant wait for the next part, i want to see their first meeting after they slept together! really looking forward to more! hopefully armaan will develop some actual feelings for her soon!

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#277

woohoo Sim
part for me and a dam sensuous part wow
the length issues,lets not go there lolz

but nonetheless it was a simply brilliant part
simple words but such gr8 impact
awesome !

and u know what i think?
he still is there and i think u'll surprise us somehow
he isnt as insensitive as we think he is or it may well have been sumthing grave to make him leave,i kinda have faith in him
he wudn't have left coz she was a virgin

oh well we can wish and speculate till u update next
hope u do soon Sim
and thanks so much for updating as promised
hope work eases off
take care hun
love
Hina

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#278

waoh dear🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ superb😍 so he knows that she is virgin till now😳😳 and where he is gone😕 plz continue it soon😛😉

"Ek phool bhi aksar baag saja deta hai,
ek hi sitara sansar chamka deta hai.
Jahan duniya bhar k rishte bhi kaam nahi aatey,
wahi ek dost jindagi bana deta hai."

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Yamini

@yamnovbloom

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#279

Really it was a hot shot ☺️part simran my CPU turned super hot and the system turned off literally but that's very disgusting of Armaan he left her alone even after realizing she was virgin offering herself to him stupid mean person 🤢i never expected this of him really heart-breaking but this is not done why do u give such teasers yaar, hmm really hoping for the next part to be soon and big cat wait really.
Love Yamini

Love - a wildly misunderstood although highly desirable malfunction of the heart which weakens the brain, causes eyes to sparkle, cheeks to glow, blood pressure to rise and the lips to pucker

Edited by yamnovbloom - 16 years ago

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#280

Hey Simi,
The part was fabulous, but where did ammi went, I am sure he feel something different for ridzi, but I didn't like at all living her alone after making love and that too in the middle of the night.
Oh my god, Ammi can't do that, I just hope ridzi won't be so sad, she has to be strong and I feel that ammi went for some important work, he just can't leave her like that.
Simi have some pity on us and especially on me, from the minute I read it I am only thinking about it, I can't concentrate in my studies, It's request pls pls pls continue soon.
I am dying to read the next part.

Kashish

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