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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

lubna welcome bak..
firstly how much u sleep.. u gt brilliant dreams like dis....
luvd d new concept..
dancing n stuff... actually waiting 2 read more..
no more excuses update soon

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heezy

@heezy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: spln
wow hun the intro has a catch coz it says so muh n reveals nothin....loved it...do continue soon plz!

lol I know I wrote loads and none of it makes sense 😆 It gets worse with Part 2 😳

Originally posted by: prernawaghray
hey lubi
ummmmmmaaaazing intro dear
jimbo lolz thats funny
ok this was quite cute
update soon

sanku sanku very much 😳 lol well it was eiether Jimbo or Jumbo.. but that would have been the cause of way too many jokes 😉 just updated the next part. enjoy

hehe yes I'm a complete foodie and my mum absolutely hates it lol, not very femine to pig out on food according to her 😆

Originally posted by: aravi
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madamji 😉 intriguing is an understatement for dis wonderful piece 😃 awesome GOSH d way u started on armaan's looks not dat i havent dreamed of dose dimpled cheeks a thousand times it was sooo cute imagining him dat way all over again!!!!!! aahhhh italian god 😳😳 god cant blv i was blushing u noe dats vryyy vrryyy rare 😆😉 waise *me firshhhhhttt* 😃 hehe yesh you firsht 😆 I know I could write a complete thesis on Armaan's dimples, but alas had to cut it down for the sake of reading... wouldn't want anyone to think I'm obsessed with those dimples now 😳

neways pride n prejudice 😳😳 love it austen's wonderpiece aahhaa NJ where r u gurlll??????? 😉 n god u making AR dance i mean balle wowieee d clean n delicate postures mannnn me getting dizzzyyy 😆😆 ballet, the perfect clean way to get romance in the air without breaking any rules 😆 plus what better excuse to get up close and personal then under the pretence of dance 😉 okiee i got hyper neways luved james n yea maria is cute as she reminds me of one of my closest frnds 😊 [color] yay you have a mad friend too hehe lol doesn't she remind you of mental Muskaan? hehe still armaan had a trouble lifting ridzy naaahhh 😉 tujhe pata haina armaan toh just needs an oppotunity to b near her 😃still itz going gr8 guns hun conntt sooonnnnn 😆...

luv ya

aravi sanku so much for your great comments sweety 😳

Originally posted by: meow23
lubna welcome bak..
firstly how much u sleep.. u gt brilliant dreams like dis.... hehe okies I admit it to the poora IF I go through these periods of sleeping too much or too little... and this one was from sleeping too long days hehe
luvd d new concept..
dancing n stuff... actually waiting 2 read more..
no more excuses update soon mini billi I just updated like 10 mins ago... meri jaan loghe kya? hehe will update as soon as I'm done touching up part 3, fingers crossed for an early update 😃

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooooo gooood lubna di

tooooooooooo goooood

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

lol Lubna u crazy girl with crazy dream,

1st of all loved it!!

2nd - im glad the other ff is on a break and not ended ;-)

also i think i will pass in volunteering lols

anyways hope you can think of some soon

looking forward to the ending of this dream ff

Sania

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

i just read it honey....sorry rushing and unable to read!!

Wow like ur written like improved so much honey!!👏

Wow must have been some dance if she like so upset about it ...

Update soon

Love Kat

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Lubna!

WOW! How long did you sleep again...Maybe I need to try it out...I can't believe you pieced all this together from your dream..Kaash mujhe bhi aise dreams aate...sigh...lol...

You are one heck of an amazing writer...Your details are full of perfection and that along with the amazing storyline has me HOOKED! I love dancing...and so dancing being an integral part of your story makes me = D! Great going Lubna!

OMG! This part was amazing..You left no stone unturned in making sure that this part captivated us readers...I LOVED Ridz thoughts upon seeing Armi...sigh..Italian God---how could I resist...most importantly, how could Ridz resist...😆

You know what...This whole teacher classroom scene reminded me of High School Musical...Mrs. D'zousa--reminds me of Mrs. Darbus from HSM when she took up the phones in the metal bin...lol.....and eeven the way she speaks reminds me of her..AR have to be Troy and Gabriella...lol...Great going! I loved itttt!

Continue soon! I hope you keep on having awesome dreams such as these...you do full justice to your dreams!😳

Love, Anita

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

lubi im sooo happy! yay your writting something new!!!!!!!! love it already! curious to know what happend to cause ridz to be so depressed! please continue soon!

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: na2339

🤣 jungliii madhuuuu baaagooooo! hahahaha your jumping around like a chimp? 😉 hehe not had your medicine for the day sweety? 😆 Mein aur jungali...Ya allah...yeh kaise kaise dosh aur arop lagaye ja rahe hai mujh pe...me toh a choti si nanhi si jaan hoon....(don't ask mah friends..they'll go crazy wid me saying so..lol)

chalo bache ki jaan baksh deti hu... will post as soon as I've completed part 2... not long hopefully, within the next few days 😃 (depending on work uff) tc jungli shona madhu 😳 Ya rab!!!!!! JUNGALI....me jungali.....god..so many people callin me jungalli billi n u too...god!!!..lolllllll

Do update asap..yet again..will read prt 2 n comment..buh now gotta rush..Have IGCSE Boards n continous papers..God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...will surely read asap....

Good day love.......

Love ya lubi di (I love u'r name...choooo chweettttt).......t.cccccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Edited by cute_madhu - 16 years ago

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

wow armaan and riddhima doing a ballet together! awww i was just imagining armaan lifting her and all...sooooo good!

so looks like they are friends, waiting to see how things change between them!

lubi i really enjoyed the part, was fun! love ridz babbling, its cute!

continue soon!

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

aawww lubbi u are a dreamer i must say, n with minute details too lolzzzz loving the dream cum story girl....wish i was one with a medula half as active, alas god cant be gracious for every whim i place so i be patient to listen or read the innovations of those like u....jaded...def not...loved it trully....kudoz!