Originally posted by: SunainaTM007
~reserved~..
will be back soooooooon :)
*edited*
well...finally um back now...50th part...loved reading it...
awesome...superb..wonderful part :)
armaan continuously muttering abt riddhima and she back to her usual self of calling him Mr.Irritating...
and then comes the best part...armaan falling to the ground not just once but so many times that i've count..i was laughing so hard imagining armaan's condition...oh my goodness...superb aimee..
armaan's thoughts abt riddhima right from the start was well-written..
and atul..his witty remarks were awesome and his guilt at having accidentally said what he meant to say in a different context...and riddhima stopping him and all...
the convo between armaan and atul was really nice..loved the way armaan took control and put matters to ease and made atul not be so harsh on himself...
and armaan and riddhima's bickering...ooooohhh..i love their cute fights...
atul's reflection abt the two fighting like Tom & Jerry was really nice...nicely penned..and they way he stopped them was nice..
atul admonishing armaan for his behaviour was really nice...hope armaan apologises to riddhima...really want to see him do so...
riddhima thoughts abt rahul and atul was really nice...the differences pointed out in their characters was really nice...atul-riddhima's convo was great as well...i love his character..
and his talks over gossiping was really good..and riddhima is such an innocent soul :)
on the whole...a beautifully written part again aimee...
great work aimee and tejasvi :D
take care...
continue sooon..
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