DharamVeer in 21st Century - Part 23 - Page 67 - Page 6

Originally posted by: cute sushi

paar naam zara change karne honge n wen 1st tym Veer see Ananya it shd b lyk her hair comes on her face n she puts it bak n while puttin it bak by mistake dey hit Veer's face

ok ok i noe its very filmy

Originally posted by: subha2601

Cool fic,plz continue asap.

Hey love,

Jus read u'r FF..awie babes..need I say its jus way tooooooo kl….em like in love wid it..its a pretty kl idea to think of em being college students..My lord. I'm awe-inspired..U both..that is u n garvi di hav g88888 thinking..n yh G8 minds think alike..so

Like jus take the idea of DV-SS being college students..that's jus so g8888..its like more of imagning n realistic..of course RT-MC…vikki n priya wud hav gone to college (or wud be..my nonu is still a student)..buh still..food for my thoughts n imagination..seriously..I love imagining things like this..n this FF is jus too gd….

I loved ananyas entry..she must be lukin so sexy on the bike..n veer………………

*madz faints*……

..haila…mera bhai is such a shonu nonu baby..I loved imagining V as the handsum hunk…the hottest. Sizzling, dynamic, macho..woahhhhhh…(I can keep on praisin him…till eternity…) n em shocked ki veer itna sudhar gaya..I mean jaldi uthna…lol. For a change Veer leaves early this morning and haults his bike at a signal.

N loved the attitude of ananya…..I loved it..(me personally got that kinda attitude towards chauvinist's..unhe dhool chatane mein mazzaa aata hai..n breakin their ego..n proving their thinking wrong…LADKIYAN..KUDIYAAN R DA BESTTTT….Gals steal the show…coz abb voh time gaya jab ladke were treated as all time best..abb toh kudiyon ka jamana hai..we r the talk of the town..hai na gals….) I'm in LOVE wid ananya….Truly….Madly…Deeply…..I rilli love her……can imagine MC doin the role…

Cumin to Dharam n sia…awie loved this sentence "He had never seen a combination of such beauty and innocence. She was also eating an ice cream. It was dripping from her mouth. Dharam thought that that ice cream was so lucky." (awwiiiiiieeee Dharam thinking of a gal in this way..the ice-cream is so lucky hehe…aisa toh veer sochta toh jyada normal lagta..buh D…lol…I cud actually imagine him in that kinda role..)

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"Ananya entered the room and acted as though she owned it. Veer saw and his mood completely changed.

V:- Hey bhagwan yeh ladki yahan pe bhi.........

Ak(Akshay):- Kaun, Ananya?

V:- Yaar, tum jaante nahin ho. Yeh ladki bahut ajeeb hain. Har baath pe jhagada karti hain aur bahut ghamandi hain.

Ak:- Main usko jaanta hoon. Vo itni bhi buri nahin hain.......

Veer said jokingly........

V:- Taarif kyun kar rahe ho? Tum usko pasand karte ho kya?

Akshay gave a very weird expression.

Ak:- She is my sister.................

Veer was rather embarrassed. Before Veer could apologise the lecturer came in. Everyone stood up, reluctantly ofcourse. 5 minutes after the lecture started, Sia entered the room. She apologised for being late. She saw that the room was full and there was no place to sit. She saw that only one space was empty ie besides Dharam. She went and sat there. Dharam lost it completely. He was staring at her and remembered the first time he saw her. She looked at Dharam and smiled but kept her distance. Dharam realised she was getting uncomfortable and stopped staring and tried to concentrate in the lecture."

I seriously loved this prt..was in splits when akshay told V that A is his sis..lol…truly in splits..n DS..well pata tha ki D unki dilnashi ankhon ki kashish mein kho jaenge..unki itni khoobsurat….I better not start writing a poem..warna D ka hale-dil bayan karte karte mein hi ek poetess ban jaongi…

Not stretching myyyyy soooooooooooooooo long compli more…..

Do cont asap..the idea is jus fab..too interesting..n nu've got me hooked in here…plzzzzz deary cont it sn..coz me can't wait at all…

Love ya sweetzzzyyyy….t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: anushababli

PART 3:-

Dharam drove his car to his new college. He was very excited about his first day of BA and also about the girl. Dharam and Veer had just shifted to Bombay and they has already missed 2 months of their new course. Dharam was looking for parking space which again is difficult to find when he saw Veer and Ananya arguing. He parked his car and went towards them.

D:- Veer yeh kya ho raha hain? Maine tumhe rukhne ke liya kaha aur tum ho ki aise he mujhe choker chale gaye........

Dharam say Ananya in a very angry mood.

D:- Veer yeh kaun hain?

V:- Hain ek ghamandi ladki...................😆

Anaya came closer to Veer but not at all in a romantic way.

A:- Dekh, tu ab tak mujhe jaanta nahin hain. Ek ulte haat ki dungi toh tera akal thikane pe aayega Samajha......😡

Veer went towards Anaya in an angry mood but Dharam stopped him from getting any closer.

D:- Veer hosh main toh ho? Aisa swabhav accha nahin hain......

V:- Chodo mujha Dharam. Main is ladki ko abhi thek karta ho.😡

Ananya let out a very sarcastic laugh.

A:- Dharam aur Veer!!!!!!!! Accha hain. Aisa lagta hain ki main history ki kitab padh rahi hoon. Jethne puraane tumhare naam hain, utne puraane tum dono ki soch hain. Tu ek baar mujse muqabla kar😉

Veer went for another attack but Dharam stopped him.

D:- Dekho Ananya, Veer ko baar baar lalkaarna bandh karo.

A:- Kyun darr jaaega kya. Main chunaunti se peche nahin hat thi.

D:- Agar aise baat hain to theke. Veer tumse dobaara muqabla karega issi jagaha pe.............

A:- Mujha manzoor hain. (Looking at Veer she said.........) Haarne ke liye tayaar ho jao.😆

Dharam and Veer entered their new college. Dharam was quiet nervous but Veer was very chilled out.

They entered their classroom with everyone staring at them. Dharam got very nervous but Veer just looked back at them and smiled back. Looking at his smile and gorgeous looks many girls in the class started blushing. The bell rang. Many people came inside the classroom while a few who didn?t want to attend the lecture left the room. Veer sat beside another guy. He introduced himself as Akshay. They automatically clicked as they had some common interests. Dharam sat in front of Veer and Akshay. He wanted to sit with Veer but Veer wanted him to stay alone and meet new people. That the only way he wont get nervous.

Ananya entered the room and acted as though she owned it. Veer saw and his mood completely changed.

V:- Hey bhagwan yeh ladki yahan pe bhi.........😲

Ak(Akshay):- Kaun, Ananya?

V:- Yaar, tum jaante nahin ho. Yeh ladki bahut ajeeb hain. Har baath pe jhagada karti hain aur bahut ghamandi hain.

Ak:- Main usko jaanta hoon. Vo itni bhi buri nahin hain.......

Veer said jokingly........

V:- Taarif kyun kar rahe ho? Tum usko pasand karte ho kya?😆😆😆

Akshay gave a very weird expression.

Ak:- She is my sister.................🤣

Veer was rather embarrassed. Before Veer could apologise the lecturer came in. Everyone stood up, reluctantly ofcourse. 5 minutes after the lecture started, Sia entered the room. She apologised for being late. She saw that the room was full and there was no place to sit. She saw that only one space was empty ie besides Dharam. She went and sat there. Dharam lost it completely. He was staring at her and remembered the first time he saw her. She looked at Dharam and smiled but kept her distance. Dharam realised she was getting uncomfortable and stopped staring and tried to concentrate in the lecture.

Originally posted by: ~samy~

Hey very gud ff....ekdum 21st century..!!

Do continue...!!

Originally posted by: ashah03

heyyy... a request: pls add the part and page u update so that it is easier for readers to follow... thnxxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

Hey love,

Jus read u'r FF..awie babes..need I say its jus way tooooooo kl'.em like in love wid it..its a pretty kl idea to think of em being college students..My lord. I'm awe-inspired..Aww stop yaar, you making me blush. U both..that is u n garvi di hav g88888 thinking..n yh G8 minds think alike..so

Like jus take the idea of DV-SS being college students..that's jus so g8888..its like more of imagning n realistic..of course RT-MC'vikki n priya wud hav gone to college (or wud be..my nonu is still a student)..buh still..food for my thoughts n imagination..seriously..I love imagining things like this..n this FF is jus too gd'.

I loved ananyas entry..she must be lukin so sexy on the bike..n veer''''''

*madz faints*''You cant even think of what my imagination was when i was writing it.😆😳

..haila'mera bhai is such a shonu nonu baby..I loved imagining V as the handsum hunk'the hottest. Sizzling, dynamic, macho..woahhhhhh'(I can keep on praisin him'till eternity') n em shocked ki veer itna sudhar gaya..I mean jaldi uthna'lol. For a change Veer leaves early this morning and haults his bike at a signal.

N loved the attitude of ananya'..I loved it..(me personally got that kinda attitude towards chauvinist's..unhe dhool chatane mein mazzaa aata hai..n breakin their egoyou know madhu even i have the same attitude. iam very tomboyish. i hate when guys say that girls cant do it. i do exactly what they think i cant and do it better. was also thinking on how i would react when i was in that situation..n proving their thinking wrong'LADKIYAN..KUDIYAAN R DA BESTTTT'.Gals steal the show'coz abb voh time gaya jab ladke were treated as all time best..abb toh kudiyon ka jamana hai..we r the talk of the town..hai na gals'.) I'm in LOVE wid ananya'.Truly'.Madly'Deeply'..I rilli love her''can imagine MC doin the role'

Cumin to Dharam n sia'awie loved this sentence 'He had never seen a combination of such beauty and innocence. She was also eating an ice cream. It was dripping from her mouth. Dharam thought that that ice cream was so lucky.' (awwiiiiiieeee Dharam thinking of a gal in this way..the ice-cream is so lucky hehe'aisa toh veer sochta toh jyada normal lagta..buh D'lol'I cud actually imagine him in that kinda role..)

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'Ananya entered the room and acted as though she owned it. Veer saw and his mood completely changed.

V:- Hey bhagwan yeh ladki yahan pe bhi.........

Ak(Akshay):- Kaun, Ananya?

V:- Yaar, tum jaante nahin ho. Yeh ladki bahut ajeeb hain. Har baath pe jhagada karti hain aur bahut ghamandi hain.

Ak:- Main usko jaanta hoon. Vo itni bhi buri nahin hain.......

Veer said jokingly........

V:- Taarif kyun kar rahe ho? Tum usko pasand karte ho kya?

Akshay gave a very weird expression.

Ak:- She is my sister.................

Veer was rather embarrassed. Before Veer could apologise the lecturer came in. Everyone stood up, reluctantly ofcourse. 5 minutes after the lecture started, Sia entered the room. She apologised for being late. She saw that the room was full and there was no place to sit. She saw that only one space was empty ie besides Dharam. She went and sat there. Dharam lost it completely. He was staring at her and remembered the first time he saw her. She looked at Dharam and smiled but kept her distance. Dharam realised she was getting uncomfortable and stopped staring and tried to concentrate in the lecture.'

I seriously loved this prt..was in splits when akshay told V that A is his sis..lol'truly in splits..n DS..well pata tha ki D unki dilnashi ankhon ki kashish mein kho jaenge..unki itni khoobsurat'.I better not start writing a poem..warna D ka hale-dil bayan karte karte mein hi ek poetess ban jaongi'Yup i knew that many would like tbis scene.

Not stretching myyyyy soooooooooooooooo long compli more'..

Do cont asap..the idea is jus fab..too interesting..n nu've got me hooked in here'plzzzzz deary cont it sn..coz me can't wait at all'I have so many ideas. so does garvi. i hope we can do a better job each time.

Love ya sweetzzzyyyy'.t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳