DharamVeer in 21st Century - Part 23 - Page 67 - Page 4

Originally posted by: anushababli

please yaar. come on they deserve something a thousand times better than vivaah. they will be together. they are the best

Originally posted by: anushababli

I know that it isnt possible now but what if there is a Season 2. I was thinking about a story line for it. It should be base on a very modern story. College life in 2008.

Firstly i was thinking that because of some mishappening Dharam, Veer, Shera and Siya die and they get reincarnated after so many centuries.

It goes with the basic concept that has been used in Season 1. Now lets just change Shera's name to Ananya. That would be better.

Dharam is born in a rich family, an industrialist's son. His sister owing to the fact that she has lost her son after being born adopts Veer without telling anyone. They all live together like a happy family. Dharam and Veer are the best of friends.

Dharam is the one who always thinks before he acts and prefers playing by the rule. Well obviously our Veer is not like that. He takes life as it comes and is always ready for a challenge. Both of them go to a college named Aryans College of Science and Arts.

Dharam owns a very stylish Toyota Corolla (I love it) while Veer owns a bike (Vo Hrithik Roshan ka Dhoom 2 vaala red bike. Sorry dont know the name). For a change Veer leaves early this morning and haults his bike at a signal. Another bike, a Karizma comes beside him. The biker looks at him and accelerates his accelerator challenging Veer to a race. The biker is wearing leather jacket and any other cool things that most bikers wear. Both are wearing helmets. They wait for the signal to turn green.

As it does bot of them do a back wheely and wize off at a speed of 250km/hr near marine lines, Bombay. Each is taking over the other. Aryans College is at the end of the road. Who reaches first wins. As they just reach the college not knowing who might win, a child comes in front of Veer's bike. Reacting quickly Veer pulls the breaks. Because of the high speed, his bike slips and he skids off. The other biker wins.

Veer is on the ground and still in a little shock. He looks at the other biker who is approaching him. As the biker reaches where he lies, the biker reaches out a hand to help him. Veer, who is a little egoistic gets up by himself. Veer says "Accha muqabla tha. Main tumhe haraa sakta tha magar yeh bacha beech main aa gaya. kismat acchi hain tumhari." The biker looks at him and says "Oh really!!!!!!!!!"

Veer is shocked to hear a feminish voice. The biker removes his helmet and Veer is shocked to see that it is a girl after all. "Ananya kissi se haarti nahin. Aur tum haar chuke ho. Bahaana banaane ki koi zaroorat nahin."

Veer says "Dobaara mujse muqabla karo. Veer ko bhi ladna aata hain"

Ananya says "Theek hain, agar haarne ka itna shock hain toh ek aur muqabla ho jaae. Tumhara saara ghamand toot nahin gaya toh mera naam ananya nahin"

Veer says "Toh dusra naam doondlo kyunki tu Veer se haar jaaegi"

Ananya says "Dekh lenge"

Guys this is my vision only for the first epi. What do you think? Interesting naa................... Please do add your details. I hope they make something like this...............😆

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

😍 this is far more specific than wat i ever cud dream about dv in 21st century 😆... u wrote it b4 me!! 👏😆 lol..

btw, its really cool! 😃👏

Originally posted by: winnie27sh

Interesting story line!!

Originally posted by: shona_sweet

ooooooooooooo..............

🤗🤗

ye reh gaya tha

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

omg anu u n script

lovely yaar loved it......

hm veer n ananya..

lolz i can imagine Rajjy n MC 😳😆 on marinelines street..

lolz we can go der to watch d shooting kyun 😉😆

aw lekin mein tyujhe kaise sambhalungi 😕 😆

well next bike race must b on worli seaface road 😳 i love dat place..

coz no kids would come in between n it is quite near from here 😳😆😆

Originally posted by: anushababli

arre rashi jaan. meri dil baath kahi hain. dont worry. if i faint maybe rajat will personally come to sprinkle some water on my face. usse dekhkar main firse behosh ho jaaogi. then he will sprinkle water again. that will routine will go on and i would never want it to end. 😆😆😆 iif this goes on then he will b like 🥱🥱🥱 ise koi hospital le jao mein mera shot deta hu 😆

worli is amazing yaar. yup i know 😳and it is closer to my house. mazaa aaega. 😆😆😆 i know isliye wohi suggest kiya...that marine drive streets are quiet crowdy..but worli not much crowd..so we will get better chance tow watch them 😳😆 Dekha Rashi jaan tera kitna khayal rakhti hai😳 😳

i kept my visionin bombay cause i want to sse the shoot. i know dat tujhe mujhse aur dhanno se behetar kaun jaan sakta hai

PART 3:-

Dharam drove his car to his new college. He was very excited about his first day of BA and also about the girl. Dharam and Veer had just shifted to Bombay and they has already missed 2 months of their new course. Dharam was looking for parking space which again is difficult to find when he saw Veer and Ananya arguing. He parked his car and went towards them.

D:- Veer yeh kya ho raha hain? Maine tumhe rukhne ke liya kaha aur tum ho ki aise he mujhe choker chale gaye........

Dharam say Ananya in a very angry mood.

D:- Veer yeh kaun hain?

V:- Hain ek ghamandi ladki...................😆

Anaya came closer to Veer but not at all in a romantic way.

A:- Dekh, tu ab tak mujhe jaanta nahin hain. Ek ulte haat ki dungi toh tera akal thikane pe aayega Samajha......😡

Veer went towards Anaya in an angry mood but Dharam stopped him from getting any closer.

D:- Veer hosh main toh ho? Aisa swabhav accha nahin hain......

V:- Chodo mujha Dharam. Main is ladki ko abhi thek karta ho.😡

Ananya let out a very sarcastic laugh.

A:- Dharam aur Veer!!!!!!!! Accha hain. Aisa lagta hain ki main history ki kitab padh rahi hoon. Jethne puraane tumhare naam hain, utne puraane tum dono ki soch hain. Tu ek baar mujse muqabla kar😉

Veer went for another attack but Dharam stopped him.

D:- Dekho Ananya, Veer ko baar baar lalkaarna bandh karo.

A:- Kyun darr jaaega kya. Main chunaunti se peche nahin hat thi.

D:- Agar aise baat hain to theke. Veer tumse dobaara muqabla karega issi jagaha pe.............

A:- Mujha manzoor hain. (Looking at Veer she said.........) Haarne ke liye tayaar ho jao.😆

Dharam and Veer entered their new college. Dharam was quiet nervous but Veer was very chilled out.

They entered their classroom with everyone staring at them. Dharam got very nervous but Veer just looked back at them and smiled back. Looking at his smile and gorgeous looks many girls in the class started blushing. The bell rang. Many people came inside the classroom while a few who didn't want to attend the lecture left the room. Veer sat beside another guy. He introduced himself as Akshay. They automatically clicked as they had some common interests. Dharam sat in front of Veer and Akshay. He wanted to sit with Veer but Veer wanted him to stay alone and meet new people. That the only way he wont get nervous.

Ananya entered the room and acted as though she owned it. Veer saw and his mood completely changed.

V:- Hey bhagwan yeh ladki yahan pe bhi.........😲

Ak(Akshay):- Kaun, Ananya?

V:- Yaar, tum jaante nahin ho. Yeh ladki bahut ajeeb hain. Har baath pe jhagada karti hain aur bahut ghamandi hain.

Ak:- Main usko jaanta hoon. Vo itni bhi buri nahin hain.......

Veer said jokingly........

V:- Taarif kyun kar rahe ho? Tum usko pasand karte ho kya?😆😆😆

Akshay gave a very weird expression.

Ak:- She is my sister.................🤣

Veer was rather embarrassed. Before Veer could apologise the lecturer came in. Everyone stood up, reluctantly ofcourse. 5 minutes after the lecture started, Sia entered the room. She apologised for being late. She saw that the room was full and there was no place to sit. She saw that only one space was empty ie besides Dharam. She went and sat there. Dharam lost it completely. He was staring at her and remembered the first time he saw her. She looked at Dharam and smiled but kept her distance. Dharam realised she was getting uncomfortable and stopped staring and tried to concentrate in the lecture.