Originally posted by: liquidfantasy
thankgod i m not late this time..he he..warna to main hamesha hi itna late reply karti hoon...😉😉.suri di the part was 'subhan-aallah'..😊kya mast , jaandar , mazedaar , khoobsurat tha....and oh god it ws soooooo looooooooooooong...it took me hrs to read it....bt njoyd fully in those hrs..he he😊😊ye khushi bhi na ladti bohot hai raj se aur raj bhi kam nahi hai😆..ladte ladte pyaar karte hain...ab batao kya zarurat thi khushi ko challenge dene ki...aur raj ko wo accept karne ki...lekin agar aisa na hota to wo raj-khushi kaise hote..ladna to jaise unka hak hai..😆..bas unki yahi bitter-sweet fights hi to unka pyaar badati hain..😆😆party mein bhi khushi rooth gayi lekin uska hak banta hai...aakhir apne pati ko kisi mini skirt wali ke saath kaise dekh sakti hai wo...😉...aur wo mini skirt wali to 2nd tanya in making thi😡.. chhod hi nahi rahi thi raj ko..they sing n dance and r back to same sweet n romancing couple😳veer-mukti ki bhi shaadi ho gayi and now all r living happily n peacefully aur is baat ko 5 saal bhi ho jaate hain...sabke bache badce ho rahe hain...dua is cute n dev b prateek also hey happily play n live⭐️
lekiin ye baat us ghonsle ko kaise bardaasht ho😡..🤢.dikha di usne apni asliyat.aur iske liye usne 5 saal us maha pagal piyush ka wait kiya...dono mil jaye to kuchh bhi kar sakte hain😲kitna bhi neeche gir sakte hain😕...piyush ne is baar to hadd hi kar di chhoti si bachi ko kidnap kar liya..how cheap wo bhi isliye ki uski pagal behen aise insaan se shaadi nahi kar payi jo pehle se shaadishuda tha aur apni biwi se bohot bohot pyar karta tha.. disgusting😡lekin apna angad bhi to mast munda hai kya mast tareeke se usne vasu ko pakda👏..aur dialog bhi mast bola...'badkismati se aapka wo dost is ghar ka dushman hai'..👏.(seriously i remember a movie in which the same dialog was there but somehow forgetting the name of that movie😉😉)finally piyush bohot maar khata hai , jo uska janam sidhh adhikaar hai..lekin fir bhi asli villian ki tarah aata hai and points the gun at little dua...(bygod piyush u r so pathetic😡😡)but everything sorts out and he is dead...jo ki use pehle hi hona chahiye tha..😃but everything works out fine n they go to their home jahan vasu ki ulti seedhi baatein abhi baki hain...uski sunta hi kaun hai...bas thapad hi thapad padte hain usko😆...jaise 1 baar pehle tanya ko pade the😆sab kuchh sahi hai aur ab to RK ko twins bhi ho gaye hain...perfect... lekin suri di fic to khatam ho gayi😭😭..ab next kab likhoge...??😭😭..jaldi post karna...i seriously appreciate the efforts u put in to write such loooooooooooong parts...n i immensely love it..thank u so muuuuch😳and one more time a big round of applause.......👏waiting fr ur nxt fic,
love,
mehendi.
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