Dil Se Dil Thak on RajeevAamna-link 2,part30-pg 1. - Page 2

wwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooowwwwwww surya awesome, mindblowing part👏.......................................meri tu samjh mein nai aa raha hai kia likho⭐️................................itz totally complete part.......................raj aur khushi kitne pyaar se fight karte hai😳.................aur eik dosrey ko tease bhi karte hai.........................raj ne khushi ky liye gana bhi gaya😆 .................................tht song were superb.............................the chemistry between them were just hmmmmmmmmmm😳........................aur phir khusi ka jealous hona.......................kids enter was very nice woh sab kis tarah chore kate hai prasad😆........................aur phir dua ka apne papa aur mumma ko utha😛.........................vasu ky saath aisa he hona chiye tha kis tarah usne piyush ky mil kar dua ko kidnap karwa tha😡..............................raj aur khushi kis tarha ro rahy ty............................i was felly very bad.....................but nice ending.......................surya ur story were superb and i think ur next story will also be like this........................👏

Originally posted by: mystified

Ok surya here is my comment to this part'..
Since the part is splitted into two me will also give comments separately😃'.
The last part was fultooo romantic😳'I was blushing half of the time'.
Actually I am running out of words so mere vocabulary mein jitney hain I am using all those😉'..
These two have a very strange chemistry, I mean they fight a lot rather than talk but it is never annoying to see them fight, they r strengthened by their cute fights I suppose'.
I must compliment u for having given equal importance to all the characters'in the end all the lives were justified👏'all r happy😃'.
The party scene was very well described'.i was sure that khushi was going to be his date from the beginning but still wanted to see how u put it😉😉'and must say u have described it very well'.
U gave us all a hint about it is gonna end so I thought ki from now on no more twists but the real twist came in the epilogue😲😲😲'.
Now for the comments on epilogue'
This had an unexpected turn of events😲😲😲'
The entry with all the children and veena's talk was so goody goody😳😳😳'the names were very cute too'I really liked dua😃'.haaaiiiiiiiii such a sweet name for a sweet kid'..
The way vasu talked gave a hint as to she is planning something🤢'.but never expected this'
I was bowled over by the way u showed the school scene and then the phone and piyush'oh my god'itne saare jhatke ek saath'.awesome👏'.
Angad was a real hero in this part coz he had the guts to stand upto his mother when he knew she was wrong'hats off to him⭐️'
The rescue scene was too good'.i mean pehli baar kahin pe police waqt pe aayi hai😆'in the end vasu and piyush deserved what they got😡'.
Finally the party'.oh my favorite part😳''..they have a good news now'.oh me so happy with this bit🥳'''..
Then the ending I must say was perfect'.a perfect or rather a beautiful ending to a beautiful story'..hats off surya'.very well done 👏
I know it is very difficult to write a fanfic that too when the expectations are so high'u have taken time and have written such a long and beautiful update so it would be an injustice if I do not comment properly'.
Being a ff writer myself I know how much of importance the comments hold for the writer, so I have written all that I could have for this part'hope u like my comment😳'.Do come up with another beautiful ff pretty soon and I am sure that it will be as good as this tooo'.all the best👍🏼'Actually I read this part in say an hour😊'so I can understand the pain behind writing such a venture'.u truly deserve👏
Now in the end what shall I say'I cannot even say pls continue soon'me feeling so sad😭😭😭''
I have the satisfaction that though I couldn't comment from the first part, I am glad that I could catch this and be a part of it😊'.
Will catch u in ur next venture😉😃'until then
Take care😳'.