Pyar Vyar (fanfic) plz comment

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys i am starting my fanfic over again. Sorry just couldn't go on with my old one.
Characters:
Gunjan: sweet, innocent, hates fliratalichous boys and boys that try to act cool, wants to be a pediatrician, starting medical school
Mayank: smart, intelligent, doesn't care about girls that much and excellent in academics, wants to be a neurologist, and starting medical school
Samrat: cool, hot, cute, always behind girls yet focused in studies, wants to be a heart surgeon, starting medical school
Nupur: smart, beautiful, friendly, loud wants to be a pyshcian, starting medical school
Dia: smart, sexy, and always wants to be noticed and needs attention, wants to be a pediatrician, starting med. school
Uday: smart, thinks himself as cool, always flirts with girls, intelligent, wants to be a orthopedic, and is starting med. school
Part 1
Gunjan's House
Gunjan: papa, bas, ab me aur nahi kah sakti
Gunjan's dad: teek hai beta, ab me aur nahi kilaunga par bas ek aur paratha ka le
Gunjan: teek hai par ab nahi, aur waise bhi mujhe late ho raha hai to me ab chalthi hoon. bye papa love you
Gunjan's dad: bye love you too
Samrat's House
We see a man sleeping like a baby in his bed with a cute smile on his face, it is none other then Samrat.
Samrat's di: hey bhagwan, is ladke ka me kya karongi, samrat uth. aaj college nahi janna hai, phela din hai aur phir tu late hojayga. samrat uth.
Samrat: ok ok di i am up, aap ja ke nastha tayar kijiye me atha hoon.
DOWN STAIRS.
Samrat came down and was wearing a white hoody tshirt and blue jeans.
Samrat: wow di, yummy, aloo ke paratha with taanda taanda dhai yum.
Samrat's di: i know you love them so maine banaye thera liya. par ab jaldi kah aur college ki liye ja.
Samrat: lag ta hai ki aap ko college jaana chaiye considering you are pushing me to be in a hurry, anyway me chalta hoon bye love you
Samart's di: bye love you too.
Nupur's house
Nupur: Hey bhagwan, meri coat kaha gayi, yaar aaj phele din hai college ke liya aur me late na ho jauo.
Nupur's Mom: Nupur chal nastha kar le, nahi tho tu late hojaygi.
Nupur came into the kitchen with a shock.
Nupur: Maama ye aap ne banaya hai, ithna saara kahana.
Nupur's mom: maina to paratha, thepla, puri, dhokdha, aur kheer hi to banaya hai bus.
Nupur: bus ithna hi, kya mama aap bhi na anyway me ek parathat lek kar ja rahi hoon ok. bye mama love you
Nupur's mom: ar reh beta......chal bye love you too.
Dia's house
Dia: Ramu meri dress kaha he, mera juice kaha hai, mera hair driyer kaha hai, dekho agar tumne kam dhanse nahi kiya tho me tujhe nikal doongin is ghar se.
Ramu: bas mam sab me aaya
Ramu gave Dia her stuff and left.
Dia: Oh god wish me luck and some popularity in the school.
Dia left with her new BMW car.
Uday's House
Uday: 1, 2, 3, 4.....yea babes you look amazing.
Uday said as he looked into the mirror.
Uday lived in a bachlor's apartment and he loved it.
He took a shower, ate some breakfast and left to go to school.
To find out what happens to these students keep on reading PYAR VYAR!!
You can give suggestions if you'ld like!!!!! THANKS😊
hey guys only that many comments 😭 plzzzzzzz need more replys!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sabse pehle dil ki ghanti bajegiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i love your part plzzzzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice nd good do update the next part soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start 👏 update the next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey plz continue sooooooooon dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome FF! Pls continue soon!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy!
im liking the concept =)
do pm me for updates..
thxx =D
HiNaL

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