Kya Pyar Aisa B Ho Sakta Hai?? part-80+ note -175 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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dat was touching..

continue soon..!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ishnaki... its so good yaar... such an emotional one.. how can this armaan be so good yaar... u r just gr8... keep up the good work.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaar,I don't know how I appreciate ur writing skills.It's better4r u to move to bollywood or tellywood. U are exceptionaly goodin emotional parts.plz carry on.GOD bless u.
luv u. Take care.🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omgggggggggggggggg yaar kya thasu or emotional lins yaar ir ealy appreciate ur writtng skill yaar aisa lagta hai jaise seriouly ye true ho nd ths is true yaar bhut hota hai ye sab bt i lvd it soooooooooooo mch itws emotional,nd dnt u dar say tht we get bord it ws jt out of it yaar jst lvd it ar ki fnny lines awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ridz is soooooo sooooooooo lcky hv ar in her life wht h did os mch fr her wow yaar nd precap god serious tlk shanky nw wht gonna happn yaar ihope hanky maan jaye yaar or unki shaadi hoom dham se ho wth all happiness..............nw paddy also yeyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i am soooooooooooooooooooooo happppppppppppppppppppppy..........jst cnt wait fr dnxt prt
cont soooooooooooooooooooooooon as soooooon as possible
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Posted: 16 years ago
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MINDBLOWING.Acha yeh bata tuje ye sab idea's ate kaha se hai.I need to man awesome.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwww amazing.....
u write so well....
cont soon
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thanks a lot friends for all ur comments, it really empowers me a lot..... thanks a lot...

KYA PYAR AISA BHI HO SAKTA HAI

PART-11
DAYS: MON- SUN
TIME : between 9:00 p.m- 11:00 p.m


Recap: riddhima giving letter to padma?..

After sometime?

Armaan in car? calling chirag

A: hiii chirag? 29th nov date nikli hai shaadi ki, padma aunty se bhi maine baat kar li hai wo bhi khush hai, bas kal sabko bata dete hai, aur ab functions ki taiyari shuru kar dete hai, ritu ko kehna ki parso tak wo kaam kar de. Kal riddhima ko tumhare ghar chod dunga, uske samne bilkul bhi baat mat karna?. Bas ab hospital ja Raha hu?.. chal phir byee bas ab kal shaam ko milte hai?
haan duty ke baad jaunga ghar dekhne?

He reaches hospital?. Looking for riddhima? pages her

In fire escape Riddhima came..

Armaan hugs her?. Kya baat hai aaj to bahut muskura kar welcum ho raha hai.. darr nahi lag raha????

R: tum ho na saath darr kaisa?.. (hugs him back very tightly)

A: acha ek bad news doon??

R: kya??? (little worried)

A: tumhe 29th november ke baad mere ghar rehna hoga, hum dono ko ek dusre ko saari jindagi jhelna padega, aaj 12th nov ho gai hai?. bas 16 hi din bache hai aajadi ke, uske baad ye bakra halaal kar dia jayega ek bakri ke haatho?. (making a puppy face)

R: (not getting the point) saath rehna hoga matlab??? Hum dono bina shaadi ke??.

A: chee chee ridhima ye tum kya keh rahi ho, tum aisi baatein bolkar mera apmaan kar rahi ho?.

R: armaan kabhi to? (he cuts in between)

A: serious hu ridhima, par tum hi aisi gandi gandi baatein karke mera dhyan divert kar deti ho?

R: armaannnnn (fake anger)

A: ridhimaaa?.. acha baba.. ek to na tum meri baat nahi samajhti ho kabhi bhi? mai kehna chahta tha ki hamari shaadi 29th nov ko ho rahi hai?. ab samajh aaya aapko?????

R: kyaaa?.. sach bolo ( in high spirits and glad)

A: haan baba yehi puchne to gaya hua tha?

Ridhima out of happiness plants a kiss on his cheek?.

R: mai bahut bahut khush hu? I luv u?..

A: I luv u toooooo? jaan....
mujhe bas kal ke liye darr lag raha hai??

R: kyu????

A: bas yehi ki tum kahi kamjor na pad jao apne papa ke samne?.

R: mai kuch nahi keh sakti? kal dekhte hai kya hoga?..

A: haan kal dekhte hai??.. oe abhi saare kaha honge????

R: as usual canteen mai aur phir kisi baat par lad rahe honge?.

A: chalo.. canteen mai?

R: (without asking anything) chalo?

Canteen?

A and R: hii guyssss..

An,at,mu,ra: hiii?

At: mere bhai tu mere pass baith, mujhe tujhse bahut imp. Baaat karni hai?

A: (thinking are yaar kabhi to mujhe baksh diya kar, sits) boll champ?

At: (whispers) yaar tune ridhima ko kaise pataya tha???? Mujhe bhi bata de bhai.. anjali ko kaise pataun?.

A: atul abhi nahi agar anjie ko pata chal gaya to saara idea flopp ho jayega, baad mai bataunga ( wants to avoid him)?

At: haan tu theek keh raha hai?.

A: hey guys mujhe tumse bahut jaruri baat karni hai plz kal saare mujhe cafeteria mai 12:00 baje milna?.

Mu: oe aaj hi bata de?

A: aaj nahi aaj dr. keerti aur dr shubhankar nahi hai na isliye? (makes an excuse)

An: aisi kya baat hai???

A: kal pata chal jayega anjie?.

All in chorus okk?

After attending their duties everyone leaves??

While dropping riddhima at her house armaan gave a packet wrapped with gift paper

R: ye kisliye???

A: ye isliye ki aap kal ghar chod rahi hai? aur agar aapko yaad ho to humne ye decide kia tha ki tum aapne ghar se ek bhi cheez nahi lekar aaogi..

R: haan achi tarah yaad hai? to..

A: to kya tum isse khol kar to dekho yaar?

R: (opens it and was amazed to see red white combination suit, sandals, wrist watch) bahut sundar hai par?

A: ridhima mai chahta hu ki kal tum ye pehno? hope u understand?.

R: haan? (moist eye)

A: oe meri pani ki tanki.. plz abhi mujhe pyas nahi hai? ek bhund bhi na nikle?

R: (smiling with tears)

A: acha ab jao?

R: meri gudnite kissiii? kaha hai??? (in childish tone)

A: oh ho mera baby? (plants kissiii on her forehead)

Ridhima was trying to behave normal but in heart she was very worried?

(at riddima house,

padma was very normal as if nothing had happened, she was talking to riddhima very normally, riddhima thought that it may be due to everyone?s presence?. Unaware of the fact that armaan had come and had a talk with padma?)

10:00 pm

armaan and ridhima in their rooms, both are tense, they are not feeling sleepy at all wondering about next morning?. This was how their night passed?.


Next day-

7:00 am

anjali had gone for duty.. emergency case? nani, padma, shashank was sitting in their lobhi?. ( padma was worried ki pata nahi kya hoga aaj?.), ridhima came from her room, looking padma?.

N: aaj tu bahut achi lag rahi hai riddhi?

(knock at door? and armaan enters, touches feet of padma,shashank,nani? shashank expression changes? remembers his talk with padma and ridhima?)

S: (little rude) kahiye kaise aana hua dr armaan aapka subah subah?

A: sir aap sab se baat karni thi?

S: bolo..

Armaan looks at padma as if asking that u r with us na, padma blinks her eyes?.

S: bolo armaan?.

A: (without any intrruption, cuming on point closing her hands tight as to gain confidence, boosting himself) sir ridhima aur mai ek dusre se pyar karte hai aur shaadi karna chahta hai?.

S: ( getting angry) tumne socha hai tum kya bol rahe ho???

A: ji sir? hum shaadi karna chahte hai aapke aashirwaad se?.

S: shut up dr. armaan, just shut up?. Leave this house immediately?

A: sir plz, hum pyar karte hai ek dusre se?

S: ridhima tumse pyar nahi karti armaan, aur usse parso ladka dekhne aa rahe hai? now u may leave?.

A: (looks at ridhima asking her to speak but she was trembling, so he continues) par aap kyu uss ladke se uski shaadi karwana chahte hai jise wo chahti hi nahi?.

S: mai uska pita hun, mujhe pata hai wo kahan jayda khush rahegi?.

A: par wo khushi aapki beti ke chehre se naajar nahi aa rahi, aap samajh kyu nahi rahe ki uski khushi mere saath hai?.

S: tum aur khushi (give him a disgusted look) tum sirf problems badha sakte ho apne dosto ke liye kabhi unhe khushi nahi de sakte?

A: sir aapko bahut galat fehmi hai, mai unhe dur karna chahta hu?

S: ohh plz dr armaan I don?t want any clarifications?.

A: aap sun to lijiye?

S: ( red in anger) mujhe aapki koi baat nahi sun ni, yaha se chale jao?.

A: agar aapka yehi faisla hai to phir mai chala jata hun, ridhima ko lekar?

S: ridhima???

A: haan sir ridhima, humne shaadi karne ka faisla kar kiya hai aur mai ridhima ko lene aaya hu?

S: ridhima kahin nahi jayegi, wo tumse pyar hi nahi karti?

A: (little touch of rudenesss) karti hai par aapko najar kaise aayega, aapne apni aankho par galat fehmi ki patti jo bandh rakhi hai?

S: aap bhul rahe hai ki aap mere ghar par khade hai? iss se pehle mai kuch galat karu aapke saath, aap chale jao?

A: ridhima ko lekar hii jaunga
?.

S: are wo kya aapke saath jayegi, wo to aapke saath tak nahi khadi hai, ab to samajh jaiye ki wo aapse pyar nahi karti?

A: (unable to answer, looks at ridhima who is looking down, he turns with heavy heart making his way to door, not able to argue more as ridhima was not with him.. )
Shashank was happy.. padma didn?t understand what had happened??.
He was crying?. Armaan was crying?..


As it?s the need of story, I?ve to include these parts? Hope u are not bored and liked it?

KEEP READING

THANKS TO ALL

LOTS OF LUV

ISHANKI??

LOVE IS NOT WHAT YOU GET FROM SUMONE, IT?S WHAT YOU WANT TO GIVE TO SUMONE. YOU DON?T FIND IT BY SEEKING IT, YOU FIND IT WHEN YOU GIVE IT?.
Edited by ishanki - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
hey Ishanki I am first one to comment.From this u can make out how eagerly i wait 4r ur updates.Really very touching part. Plz make Armaan happy.Ican't see him in tears,it hurts me a lot. Hey seriously tell me MARRIAGE WILL CELEBRATE at its respective time na?I am SCARED.Finger cross. bye😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey, u left it on a mystery note...

continue soon..
waiting eagerly 4 ur next part..!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ishanki its too good yaar.... what will happen now??? i hope Ri will speak out atleast now.

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