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Posted: 16 years ago
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u guy's r amazing.4rm where u get ideas. plz cont. soon .can't wait & p.m me . plzzzzzzzzzzzzz. thanx👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks, thanks a ton for ur comments…. Ur comments encourage and help me a lot in making the story more real and attractive… thanks a lot once again, keep on giving me ur support……..
Dear friends after updating 4 parts I'll be posting rest of the parts on alternate days…..
Part-2
Next day:
Riddhima is getting ready for sanjeevani, standing in front of mirror she puts a small bindi on her forehead,putting 5-6 bangles in her hand, she goes to the kitchen and packs the tiffin for armaan. When she is leaving nani calls
Nani: kya baat hai riddhi aaj bindi kyu lagai hai aur ye tiffin
R: nani bindi samne padi thi to maine laga li, mai caf ka khana kha kha kar bore ho chuki hu to maine socha ki ab har roj mai ghar se tiffin bana kar lekar jaya karungi isliye… nani mai chalti hu mai late ho rahi hu… bye nani..
Nani: bye mera bacha, dhyan se jana
At sanjeevani
Nurse station
Dr. Keerti give duties to everyone and leaves
Armaan and riddhima looks each other and exchange smiles
A: riddhima aaj tum bahut achi lag rahi ho….
R: (in a teasing tone)koi nai baat nai hai mai har roj hi achi lagti hu……..
A: acha suno when ever u r free plz fire escape mai milna mujhe tumse baat karni hai
R: kuch special..
A: haan wo tabhi bataunga
R: ok…
They get back to work,
After doing her duty riddhima picks the tiffin and reaches fire escape
Armaan is still doing duty, so she sits down and closes her eyes…
After sum time armaan came, without making any noise he sats down puts riddhima face on his shoulder
A: kya soch rahi ho??????
R: kuch nahi…
A: tum apne papa ke bare mai soch rahi ho na………
R: armaan pata nahi kyu mujhe ek guilt jakad raha hai ki mai kaise apne papa ke against jaa sakti hun unhone ne bachpan se mujhe paala hai, har jidd puri kari hai aur mai unhe kya de rahi hu, actually mere mann mai ek ladai chal rahi hai…….. sahi ko lekar aur farz ko lekar……
Papa ne tumhe jan ne mai galti ki wo yaha galat the, maine tumhara saath isliye dia kyuki mai janti hu ki papa tumhe unn galtiyo ke liye like nahi karte jo tumne kabhi ki hi nahi aur unhone tumhe bolne ka mauka bhi nahi dia, ye papa ki galti hai isliye mann kehta hai ki maine bilkul theek kia tumhara saath dekar par farz kehta hai ki mai apne papa ko aise…..
A: (suddenly getting angry not understanding her pain… thinking majaak bana dia hai riddhima ne har cheez ka, kabhi mere saath kabhi papa ke saath, ab jab usne decide kar liya hai to phir wo papa ke bare mai kyu soch rahi hai)to ab kya karna hai, kya tum mujhe chodna chahti ho????
R: (looking at him unexpectedly) armaan…. He cuts in between
A: riddhima please tum ek side ho jao tum agar yuhi pareshaan rahogi to mujhe lagega ki tumne ye decision apni khushi se nahi lia, tum mere saath khush nahi ho aur maine hi tumhe tumhare papa se dur kia hai……(his pager rings, he leave fire escape)
Riddhima first getting angry at armaan's behaviour then controlling her anger thinks fighting is just a wastage of time
she needs to talk to armaan and make him understand that what she really thinks…..
She page msg to armaan after doing ur work plz meet me in F.E.
After reading msg armaan cum 2 f.e. without wasting time
A: bolo….
R: armaan mujhe tumse baat karni hai par mai jo bhi bolungi tum usme interrupt nahi karoge aur aaram se sunoge….is that ok
A: ok
R: armaan mai tumse bahut pyar karti hu aur tumhare saath rehne ka decision bhi mera hai…. Maine kaha ki mujhe guilt hai par sirf papa ke liye apne farz ko lekar ki mai unhe serve nahi kar paungi ek beti ke hone ka farz nahi nibha paungi, par mujhe apne pyar, decision aur papa ka saath chodkar tumhara saath dene ke liye na to mujhe koi guilt hai aur na hi koi doubt hai… aur aage jakar bhi mujhe koi guilt nahi hoga…
Armaan mujhe nahi lagta ki mere guilt mai rehne ki wajah galat hai ya mai ek side nahi hu wo mere pa hai, unhone mujhe 20 yrs tak paala hai, pyar dia hai har cheez ka matlab mai unse samjhi hu, wo 20 yrs mai ek din mai kaise bhula sakti hu kaise unse apna muh mod sakti hu …
Armaan agar tumhe aise hi gussa aata rahega to hamara rishta nahi nibh payega… mujhe ye guilt shayad marriage ke baad bhi rahega to kya tum tab bhi kahoge ki riddhima tum apne papa ke pass hi jao kya tum shaadi ke baad bhi mujhe aise hi chod doge…. Mera saath nahi doge
A: (speechless, wo janta tha ki riddhima job hi keh rahi hai sach hi to keh rahi hai, usse mentally stable, problem se dur karne ki jagah wo to usse chodne ki baat keh kar uski problems aur badha dega, wo to uska pyar hai agar wo uss se bhi dil ki baat nahi karegi to kiss se karegi)
R: we are getting married next month aur mujhe nahi pata kaun hamara saath dega aur kaun nahi, par mai bas itna janti hu ki hum dono ka saath hona jaruri hai, agar hum saath honge to har problem khud solve ho jayegi par agar hum saath hi aise ladenge ya gussa karenge to hamari problems aur bhad jayegi, mai ye tumse expect nahi karti ki tum mujhe samjho, meri aankhein padho aur samajh jao ki mere dill mai kya chal raha hai par haan mai itna jarur expect karti hu ki har problem mai hum dono ka saath ho,haatho mai haath ho…..
Armaan mai har situation se lad lungi par tumse kabhi nahi lad paungi, mai tut jati hun jab bhi tum mere saath nahi hote ur pata nahi kaha se strongness aa jati hai jab tum saath hote ho…. Armaan mai tumhare bina nahi jee sakti ek pal bhi nahi…. Par tumhara itna gussa bhi nahi tolerate kar sakti, mujhe pata hai tum mujhe bahut pyar karte ho par agar tum yuhi gussa ho jaoge to mujhe tumhare samne kabhi kabhi jhuta naatak karna padega ki sab kuch theek hai, aur jaha naatak aa jaye relation mai to wo rishta hi fake ban jata hai aur mai nahi chahti ki hamare rishte mai fake naam ki koi bhi cheez aaye….. bas jo hum actual hai wo hi rahein koi naatak nahi koi jhut nahi, bas sab kuch real ho aur wo tabhi ho sakta hai jab hum dono har cheez ko lekar ek dusre se open ho, har cheez bejhijhak ek dusre se share kar sake.. mai aapna sab kuch tumhare liye nahi apne liye chod rahi hu kyunki mai nahi jee sakti tumse dur hokar… kissi aur se shadi ke bare mai sochna to dur ki baat hai.. isliye tum ye sochna bhi mat ki tumhari wajah se mai apne papa se dur hui…
Aur ye jarur chahti hu ki agar kabhi mai future mai udas hu apne papa ki wajah se to tum agar mujhe samjha nahi sakte to mujhe akela chod dena par gussa mat hona… wo mere papa hai to unke bare mai sochna mai nahi chod sakti plz iss baat ko samjh jana…..
Ab kuch bolo bhi…
A: kya bolu.. tumne hi to mana kia tha ki bolna nahi hai…..(he was cursing himself for not understanding riddhima's feeling, how could he even think like that…. Riddhima kaise 20yrs ek din mai bhula degi.. wo kiss situation se nikal rahi hai ye bhi nahi socha.. bass apne bare mai socha. Mai kaise itna selfish ho sakta hu… uska saath dene ki jagah, usse samjhane ki jagah mai ussi par chila kar chala gaya how mean I'm… all the words of riddhima are true… agar mera aisa hi nature raha to wo mujhse hamesha darr jaya karegi aur mujhse kabhi kuch share bhi nahi karegi aur hamare relation mai hamesha khichaav hi rahega… wo mere liye sab chod kar aa rahi hai, apne papa ke against bhi jane ko taiyar ho gai hai aur agar mai uss par yu hi chilata rahunga to uss par kya beetegi.. kis ke pass jakar royegi.. har rishta to usne mere liye stake par laga dia hai aur kitna compromise karegi wo jo kuch bhi tha uske pass sab kuch to mere naam kar diya hai usne ab meri baari hai………..)
R: kya hua armaan???????
A: thanks a lot riddhima….
R: kis liye
A: waise mujhe sorry bolna chahiye tha par agar mai aaj bhi gussa na hota to shayad tum ye sab baatein mujhse na kehti aur mujhe kabhi apni galti ka realize nahi hota….. ab kabhi ye galti nahi hogi…. Maine itna deeply socha hi nahi…. Tumhari saari baatein theek hai riddhima… mai galat tha… mai shayad shelfish bhi ho gaya tha, tumhare part par to socha hi nahi ki tum kis situation se nikal rahi ho…. I'm sorry and I promise dis won't happen again… u r free tum sab kuch bejhijhak mujhse share kar sakti ho… mai tumhara saath hamesha dunga… kabhi akela nahi chodunga….
R: happily thanks armaan meri baatein samajhne ke liye…..
A: (naughtily)madam thanks kehne ki jarurat nahi hai…(bends down making the ghulaam pause so as to make riddhima smile) hum aapke gulaam hai aapki baatein sun na aur usse pura karna hamara farzzz hai
R: bass bass……..mai tumhare liye kuch layi hun
A: kya?????
R: (giving tiffin to him) ye tumhare liye….
A: oe hoye to patni ka farz abhi se nibhana shuru kar diya…
R: blushing and said bilkul
(they both smiles… atmosphere gets lighten)
A: (eating) basket agar aapki permission ho to ek baat kahu…
R: smiles and ask him to speak…
A: ab jab hamari shaadi ko ek mahina reh hi gaya hai to hume shopping shuru kar deni chahiye tumhe nahi lagta… kitni saari shopping karni hai….
R: haan mujhe to bahut saari shopping karni hai………
A: haaye meri pocket ka kya hoga……
R: armaan……..
A: ok ok to chalein dr. keerti se permission bhi to leni padegi…
R: chalo…
(Armaan getups and give riddhima his hands) chalo
A: riddhima ek kaam to reh hi gaya hume sabko batana bhi to hai hamare relation ke bare mai…
R: haan ye to sabse jayda jaruri hai nahi to jab inhe hamari shaadi ki news milegi to sabse pehle to hamara group hi sadme mai pahunch jayega… they both laugh…
armaan par unhe batayenge kaise?????
A,R pager rings
R: hum baad mai decide karte hai armaan its an emergency bye…
A: bye…
In evening……..
Riddhima is searching sumthing in her locker and suddenly caught by someone from behind…….. she said without looking armaan tum bhi na….
A: kaise pehchana ki mai hu..
R: aur koi hai nahi na aisi harkatein karne wala (hugging him)…
A: I luv you basket….
R: aur mai soch ke bataungi…
A: he hits her lovingly……..
R: acha kuch socha ki kaise batana hai sabko…
A: I think hints dene se koi faida nahi hai wo itne dumb hai ki kuch nahi samjhenge hume unhe directly hi batana padega ki hum ek dusre se pyar karte hai….
R: kya kahenge ki hiiiiiiii atul,di,rahul, muskaan hum ek dusre se pyar karte hai aur shaadi karna chahte hai ha haaaa haa….. wo isse hamara ko stupid sa prank samajh kar hasne lag jayenge.. so it's a very bad idea……
A: to phir hum unhe batane ki jagah dikha dete hai
R: kya??????
A: mere pass ek solid plan hai bas tum kal subah jaldi aa jana….
R: ok par plan kya hai…
A: kal subah riddhimaaaaaa……..
R: ok ab mujhe jana hai duty par…
A: raat ko mai wait karunga.. dono saath challenge…. Okk…
R: okk……. Now bye………
A: giving him flying kiss byeeeeeeeeeeee………..
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Part-3
As soon as armaan drops riddhima, he rushed towards home, he was very happy, his eyes were speaking his happiness, this is the time for which he has been waiting since long?. He mumbles Finally, his riddhima,his life is with me?? but at the same time he iss very nervous also because he has to make many many arrangements and time is very less?
He opened the locks of his house and pick out his cell,dials the number as though not want to waste a single minute?
A: hello, kasauli farmhouse????
Voice: haan kiss se baat karni hai???
A: hi princess, mai armaan bol raha hun?
V: ammy, mera bacha, kitne dino baad teri awaaz sun rahi hu, abni Bi ko to tu bhul hi gaya, kaisa hai tu???
A: aapko kaise bhul sakta hu bi??? Acha baaki baatein baad mai aap jaldi se apna boriya bistar band kar pehli flight se mere pass aa jao??
V: kya hua sab khariyat to hai na???
A: dariye mat sab kuch bahut acha hai, aapko bataunga to aap bhi khushi se jhoom uthengi?.
V: ab batayega bhi..
A: bi mai agle mahine shaadi kar raha hu riddhima se.. ab aapne hi mujhe paala hai aap hi meri maa ho to aapka yaha hona bahut jaruri hai??
V: (unbelievingly but happily) ammy ye tu kya keh raha hai.. itni jaldi?.
A: bas baki baatein yaha par bataunga aap bas jaldi se aa jao?.
V: haan ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai kal hi tere pass pahunch jaungi?
A: mai aapki booking yaha se karwa raha hun aur gaadi bhi bhej dunga aapko lene ke liye?.
V: theek hai ammy..
A: acha bi mai phone rakh raha hu, kal milte hai?.
As soon as he cuts the phone?. He starts making list in his mind for whom he have to call?. He is making a plan of giving lots and lots of surprises to riddhima after marriage?
He changes his clothes and ask ramu(his servant) to make a coffee for him?
Armaan takes out a piece of paper and start writing?.
White washes ,wood work ,light and water arrangements,
Aisa karta hun kal leave le leta hun aur inn sabka kaam nibtata hu
(actually armaan is leaving in PG at present, but after marriage he wants to shift in their house that is armaan and riddhima house?. He had taken a place few months ago and the house had already been constructed but after construction he had close that house ? but now he wants to turn that house into a sweet lovely home for her?. He actually wants to gift that sweet home to riddhima at their marriage occasion, so he started planning for that)
A: (suddenly) oh god! Kal to leave le hi nahi sakta? kal to humne sabko batana hai ab kya karu? aise to ek ek din waste hota rahega? abhi to bahut saari shopping bhi karni hai?. Kal mai half day le leta hunk al pehle ghar ka kaam karta hu aur parso ko hum shopping ke liye chalein jayenge? jumps haan ye theek rahega?.
Par mai akela ye sab nahi kar paunga mujhe kissi aur ki help leni padegi?.
Dials a number?. Hi yaar kaisa hai???? Kaha hai??? Kal mujhe mil sakta hai kuch batana hai??? Ok chal theek hai kal 12:00 baje mujhe mere naye ghar par mil jaiyo? uska address hai?. He gives his address then cut off the call
Then he again makes 3-4 calls for whitewashin, wood work etc etc??..
A: Chal ab so jata hun kal se bahut kaam karna padega?..
(he puts off the light)
alarm start ringing, it?s 6 o?clock, he puts off the alarm? he getups and streches and make his way towards bath room
sanjeevani
armaan eagerly waiting for riddhima in locker room?.
R: hiiiiiiiiiii??
A: hiiiiii itna late kyu ho gai???
R: tiffin bana rahi thi?. Tumne kal call kyu nahi ki???? Lagta hai jayda hi assar ho gaya hamari baaton ka???.
A: bilkul abhi se joru ka gulaam ban ne ki aadat daal raha hun taaki aage problem na aaye nahi to har roj jhadu padega?..
R: armaan mai marungi?.
A: par tumhare pass abhi jhadu nahi hai
Both laughs
A: acha sheesha lekar aayi ho???
R: haan ab to bata do ki kyu???
A: abhi pata chal jayega (he takes mirror from her and put it just above the riddhima?s locker) ab tum yaha aao pointing towards riddhima?.
Plan ye hai ki sabke aane ka time ho raha hai? hum changing room mai khade ho jate hai jaise hi koi yaha aayega sheeshe mai dikh jayega aur hum apni pyar bhari baatein shuru kar denge, jo bhi sunega pehle usse yakin nahi hoga par jab hume hug karte hue dekhega to shocked ho jayega aur aise hi sabke saath hoga? aur jab sabko pata chal jaye to tum kehna armaan maine kaha tha na ki sabko pata chal jayega matlab mujhe dantne ka naatak karna aur iss se pehle ki koi humse kuch puch paaye dr. keerti hume page kar degi? hai na bahut acha idea????
R: idea to theek hai par tum itne sure kaise ho ki ye idea kaam karega????
A: kyunki mai apne dosto ko bahut ache se janta hun na isliye sabke reactions pata hai kya honge?.
R: par armaan mujhe bahut awkward lag raha hai I mean wo pyar?. Baatein ? I mean?
A: (understanding) ok u just say I luv u too baaki mai sambhal lunga is that okkk??
R: haan?
A: chalo sabke aane ka time ho raha hai?..
Along with dr. shubhankar all the interns enter locker room,
A: are wah aaj to kismat bhi hamare saath hai, sab ek saath hi aa rahe hai, kaam aasan ho gaya....
A: (starts speaking loudly) mai tumse bahut pyar karta hun?.
Wait for their reaction all of them gets silent
A: happily mai tumhare bina nahi reh sakta basket?
At: are armaan basket ball se itna pyar karta hai ki wo uske bina nahi reh sakta..
Anjali,r,m gave him a look as if saying just shut ur mouth and listen to him?
A: I luv you basket, I want to marry you?. I luv you?. Riddhimaa??.
They all are shocked and even more shocked when they heard I luv you too armaan?
When they move forward they saw them hugging.. all mouths are opened?.
A: whispers abe saalo muh to band kar lo itne bade bade khole hai ki machar kya cockroach bhi ghus jaye?
R: shutaapp armaan??..
A: okkk, ab chalein?.
R: darr lag raha hai?
A: mera hath pakad lo darr apne aap dur ho jayega?.
R: smiles, blushing and slips her hand in to his?..
R: (looking them and in fake anger) armaan maine tumhe kaha tha na ki sabko pata chal jayega par tum sunte kaha ho??..
They all cum back in senses? in chorus: kya ho raha tha yahan???
R: kuch nahi di? kuch bhi to nahi?
A: (cuts her in between, in a very filmy tone) rehne do riddhima pyar kabhi chupaya nahi jata? and then move towards them haan hum dono ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai, to kya ho hua??? Kya Pyar karna paap hai??? He turns and put some drops of water on eyes.. again?. Kya hum pyar nahi kar sakte????? Ab tum sabne to apna apna pair dhund liya aur koi bacha nahi tha to hum dono aapas mai hi pyar karne lag gaye?.. bolo kya mai galat hum and riddhima is trying to control her laugh
At, ra,mu,sh: all are melting and said nahi kuch galat nahi hai par tum dono to hamesha ladte rehte the? aur ye pyar???????
A: aise to rahul muskaan bhi ladte the unhone to shaadi bhi kar li hai wo bhi bina bataye? humne to sirf pyar kia hai wo bhi bata dia?
At,ra,mu,sh: par?.. chalo anyways congratulations??.
A: thanks? (and then points towards anjie who is still quiet) anjie kya hua ???/
An: (little disappointed) riddhima tumne mujhe bhi nahi bataya?????
(riddhima looking at armaan as what to say)
A: anjie plz. Usse gussa mat karo maine hi usse mana kia tha tumhe na batane ke liye kyunki hum tumhe surprise dena chahte the (he himself not understanding what he is saying, bas jo muh mai aaya bol diya)
An: kaisa surprise??????
Armaan don?t know what to answer
R: di mai aapko reason baad mai batati hu (relaxing armaan that she will tackle now)
An: abhi kyu nahi????
R ( whispers in her ears) abhi yaha saare hai isliye??.
Announcement: all inters report at nurse station?.
Riddhima and armaan are relaxed now?
When all leave armaan happily hugs riddhima maine kaha tha na ki mera idea flopp ho hi nahi sakta.. acha hua dr. shubhankar bhi aa gaye the ab dr. keerti ko khud pata chal jayega??
R: haan aur di ko mai sambhal lungi
A:Acha mai aaj half day leave le raha hu par raat ko tumhe pick karne aaunga?..
R: par kyu????????
A: wo kissi dost se milna hai isliye??..
R: ok , ab chalein nahi to dr. keerti se bahut daant pad jayegi???.
A: ok?.
Armaan is now relaxed that everyone know about their relation?. Although he knew that his group will not spare him in future? they will keep on taunting them? yet he is happy because he also knew this that he alone can handle his group
He takes leave from dr. keerti????
Coming up: armaan instructing people, armaan- bii conversation, shopping and many more???
I again want to mention that this story is simple, it has problems but the problems that mainly happens in real life, no tragedies like entry of a villain,it includes things like how he designed house for riddhima, shopping means every small things because i think this will make the story more realistic, hope u like it.... it's a very simple, calm and cool story full of ever lasting love, passion??
Please do comment, as ur comments will add more sweetness in the story??
Part 4 will be updated tomorrow??
Edited by ishanki - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
please continue soon, you're doing a wonderful job.
also can you add me to your pm list and pm me whenever you update. thanks.
-mona
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiiiiiiii i'm rajni.

veryyyyyyyy nice story.... new concept........ i luv it.... plzzzzz update next part soon.... waiting eagerly........

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Posted: 16 years ago
#16

hiiiiiiiii

i've read all the three parts....... it sounds very interesting..... plz continue..... waiting for the next part

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderfull !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
while reading it was like really happening in front of me.U r right small moves make big difference in life. plz cont. soon and pm me whenever u update it .
thanx 4r ur pm
bye. Take care👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the pm
really luv the both part of ur story
I hope all the interns support AR in their marriage.....
waiting for ur next part eagerly......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its so cute... plz continue soon.
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Part-4

Armaan takes leave from dr. keerti

He was looking for riddhima to tell her that he is going?.

She was in general ward?

A: riddhima mai jara hun raat ko milta hun?.

R: ok armaan..

They both exchange flying kiss and leave

Armaan makes his way towards his sweet home?.

R:( she starts missing him, his gestures) abhi to 10 min bhi nahi hue armaan ko gaye hue aur agar aise hi raha to pura din to kya 1 ghanta nikalna bhi mushkil ho jayega? she mumbles nahi riddhima tum armaan ko miss nahi kar rahi ho concentrate on your work? nahi mai kar rahi hu?. Ye armaan bhi na dost se raat ko bhi to mil sakta tha?.Making a puppy face

(anjie enters general ward)

An: ab batao ki kya baat thi???

Riddhima getting a little nervous and then controlling her she said: di kaunsi baat

A: itni bholi mat bano?? tumne mujhe bataya kyu nahi ki armaan aur tum???

R: acha wo baat??. Diiii aap gussa mat ho mai batati hun? di wo actually (thinking) actually di mai wait kar rahi thi???..

An: matlab????

R: di aap to jante hi hai ki papa armaan se bahut gussa rehte hai aur armaan ki koi galti bhi nahi hoti?

An: haan to ??????( In a non convincing tone)

R: mujhe darr tha kahin aap papa ko na bata de isliye? to mai wait kar rahi thi ki kab unka gussa shant ho? aur jaise hi shaant ho jaye mai aap ko bata dun..

An: r u sure ki bas yehi reason tha????

R: haan di aapko to pata hai na ki mai aapse kuch nahi chupa sakti??..

An: (smile for once) acha meri chotti si bahen mujhse darr gait hi?????

R: (making a baby face) haan diiiiiiiii

An: ok don?t worry mai kisi ko kuch nahi batungi?? par tumhara ye chal kab se raha hai?..

R: (thought if she say 1 yr then surely a line of questions will be ready and she have to answer all of them?) di 1 weeee?? diiii 1 month??.

An: ( before she cud ask anything an pager rings) I?ve to go mai baad mai baat karti hu??

Riddhima feels relaxed??. Gud timings

It?s almost 12:15 armaan reaches and park his car?

carpenter,interior decorator etc? are waiting for him?.

A: sorry mai aane mai jara late ho gaya??? chalo kaam shuru karte hai?.

He opened his house?.

A: pehle tum sab ghar dekh lo phir kaam decide karte hai??..

After showing them house

A: ok to aap sabne ghar to dekh hi liya hoga?. dinesh(white washer) four rooms hai, sabse badiya texture hona chahiye har room mai alag alag colour? (thiking riddhima ko jayda dark colours pasand nahi hai so better would be cream colour with maroon texture in their room), iss kamre mai cream colour and maroon texture?.( he knows very well about riddhima?s choice so he told dinesh abt all the colours with textures??.)

Di: ok sir

A: dinesh ye kaam ek hafte mai nibta do?. 4-5 logo ko kaam par laga do aur ye kaam khatam kar do??

Di: ji sir?. Aap bilkul bhi tension na le?.

A:( points to carpenter) neeraj tu saara wood work karwa de jaldi se jaldi?. I mean saare darwaje, windows par sundar si carving aur polishing, cup boards tu hi banwaa de baki sofa set, bed, dining set mai market se le lunga unhe banwane ka to time hai nahi aur haan yaad aaya kitchen bhi tujhe complete karwani hai? modular kitchen? with all the facilities??. Jaldi bahut jaldi?..

Ne: par aapko itni kyu jaldi hai?????

A: isme next month ek mehmaan aane wala hai jo hamesha yahi rahega?.

Ne: (without making any further discussion) sir aap chinta mat kijiye 15 days ke andar aapka kaam pura ho jayega?..

A: mera kaam nahi? ghar ka kaam pura karna hai??.

All started laughing??

A: (now pointing towards interior decorator) aapko kitna time lag jayega iss ghar ki interior ke liye???

Pr: mujhe 1 week lagega, par jab tak white washes aur carving ka kaam nahi khatam ho jata mai apna kaam shuru nahi kar sakti??..

A: mujhe pata hai preeti, to aisa karte hai aap next week se apna kaam shuru kar dijiye?.. aisa interior karna hai ki sab dekhte hi reh jaye?.. then he instructs her abt the type of decoration she has to do in his house? she notes it in her diary?..

(thinks colours aur furniture riddhima ki pasand ka ho jayega aur interiors meri pasand ka aur mujhe uska taste bhi pata hai usse surely bahut pasand aayega sab kuch, he smiles) ok done?..

Pr: sir aap bilkul bhi fikar na karein mai aapko shikayat ka bilkul mauka nahi dungi sab kuch aapki pasand ka hoga?.. and I must say aapki choice bahut aachi hai? mai bhi bahut excited hun ye kaam karne ke liye kyunki bahut time ke baad bahut kuch naaya karne ko milega aur challenging bhi bahut hoga?? you don?t worry?.

A: thanks preeti?..

A:( points to rohit who is the master of PoP work) rohit aap sara pop ka kaam karwa dijiye, mai designs select karke aapko bata deta hun ki aapko kaha kaha ye kaam karna hai..

Ro: no need to worry sir, i?ll also complete my work in a week but I?ll start from next week as my workers are not here

A: ya sure but work should be completed in time?..

Ro: sure sir?

A: thanks a lot to all for cooperating with me to this extent??.

(Preeti,neeraj, rohit and dinesh are the most renowned persons of this city, their work is admired by all, just as their work their charges are also high?. But armaan don?t care about money as acc. to him ? ghar har roj nahi bante aur ek baar ache se paise kharch karke sundar si cheez ban jaye jiski sab tareef karein rather than ki tum haar saal thoda thoda kaam karwao jaise iss saal furniture lagwa liya, agle saal interiors?. He just hate these things, so now main things are done?. He is quiet relieved?.)

now he turns towards plumber and electrician?..

A: aap logo ko to apna kaam pata hi hai? aap apna kaam kal tak nibta dijiye.....

They in chorus: okkk??..

While he was instructing he heard a voice. Armaan??.

He turns moving towards him time mil gaya aapko aane ka???? It?s 1:00 clock??

V: aa to gaya na.. aur ye kya tareeka hua apne purane dosto se milne ka???

A: giving him a tight hug?

V: ye hui na baat?.

A: kaisa hai yaar?.. ritu kaisi hai aur teri beti???? Kya naam hai uska (yes u are right it?s chirag)

Ch: mai,meri beti aur meri biwi teeno theek hai??. Uska naam ritika hai?? waise tu yaha kar kya raha hai badi instructions dene mai laga hai???

A: dekh nahi raha ghar banwa raha hun??

Ch: (starts laughing)tune doctori chod ke ye kaam kab se shuru kar diya????

A: abhi tu inn baton ko chod mujhe teri help chahiye??

Ch: ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai tu bas hukum kar??.

A: actually maine yaha kaam to shuru karwa dia hai par mai yaha baar baar dekhne nahi aa sakta kynki mujhe abhi bahut kaam karna hai aur mujhe yaha se sanjeevani dur bhi pad jata hai??. Agar tujhe koi problem na ho to kya tu yahan par thoda sa dekh sakta hai? inn sabko instructions maine de di hai bas 2-3 baar yaha dekhna hai subah aur shaam ko mai dekh liya karunga???

Ch: haan mujhe koi problem nahi hai mera office bhi yaha se pass haito mai yaha par dekh liya karunga tu iski tension na le??. Par mujhe batayega ki ye sab kya ho raha hai?????

A: bas 5 min mai batata hu? pehle tu inn sabse mil le?..

Ch: ok?.

A: ye chirag hai, agar aapko kuch bhi problem ho to inhe bata dena??

Chorus: Ok sir?..

Ab aap sab apna kaam shuru kar dijiye??..

Armaan brings two stools and both of them sat down?..

A: tujhe riddhima yaad hai?..

Ch: haan. Sweet si?..

A: hum shaadi kar rahe hai aur shayad uske papa ke against?.

Ch: what??????? aur shayad ka kya matlab????

A: haan chirag then (he told him the whole story)?.

Ch: oh to aisi baat hai?.

A: haan?congrats nahi karega...

Ch: (little confused) ohh haan haan congratulations aur tu yaha ki tension mat le mai sambhal lunga?? chalo ab next month to phir dhoom dhadake se beetne wala hai??.

A: haan chirag?. Maine socha hai ki hum mandir mai shaadi nahi karenge

Ch: matlab???????

A: dekh shaadi life mai ek baar hoti hai to maine socha hai ki agar riddhima ke papa na mane to bhi hum saare traditions ke saath shaadi karenge aur aisi shaadi jo riddhima ke liye sirf khushiyan aur khushiyan hi layengi??. But sab kuch uske liye surprise hoga mai khud saare arrangements karwaunga?? sabke liye shaadi ek memorable day hota hai to mai hamari shaadi ko bhi riddhima ke liye sabse jayda memorable bana dunga taaki usse kisi bhi cheez ka kabhi dukh na ho??.. kabhi usse na lage ki wo dulhan nahi bani, uski shaadi ki album nahi hai, koi bhi riwaaz nahi hua?.. isliye saare functions honge, I mean ki shaadi se 10 din pehle jitney bhi traditions hote hai sab honge??. mai ek pal ke liye bhi apni riddhima ko nahi lagne dunga ki wo apne papa ke against jakar marriage kar rahi hai???.

Ch: (surprised totally by the words of armaan) mujhe to lagta hi nahi ki tu armaan hai?. Kaha wo mast armaan aur kaha ye itna caring aur samajhdaar armaan r u sure ki tu armaan hai????

A: abe maajak band kar saale??..

Ch: I?m serious. Tum bahut badal gaye ho?. Jaha pehle saare kehte the ki jo bhi ladki tere se shaadi karegi uski kismat bahut hi kharab hogi wahi aaj mai keh raha hu ki riddhima is very lucky?.. aur tu chinta mat kar sab kuch bahut badiya hoga aur riddhima bahut khush rahegi tere saath?.

A: par mujhe nahi pata ki kaun hamara saath dega?..

Ch: are hum to hai na aur hamara collg gang sabko invite karenge agar wo yaha aa gaye to kissi aur ki jarurat hi nahi padegi??. He laughs..

A: haan ye to tu theek keh raha hai?..

(Chirag gets a call)

Ch: sorry armaan, mai tumse kal milta hu jana padega it?s urgent

A: don?t b sorry, tu jaa mai bhi jata hu??.bii bhi aane wali hongi?

Ch: bii aa rahi hai???? Are wah pehle kyu nahi bataya ab to kal subah hi tere ghar aa jaunga

A: are yaar tera ghar hai jab marji aa jaiyo??

Ch: chal phir ok bye

A: byee??

Coming up: a-r conversation?..

Hope u guyzzz are not bored after reading this part as it doesn?t include a-r moments??

I want to throw light on each and every moment of armaan and riddhima?? what they had done for each other?..

Plzzzzzzzz??.. do comment as ur comments are the backbone of the story??..

Edited by ishanki - 16 years ago

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