Kya Pyar Aisa B Ho Sakta Hai?? part-80+ note -175 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

great update, and thank you for the pm. I really appreciate it :]

-mona
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great update! just caught up with the ff! love it! plz cont. soon! and can u PM me when u cont.?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
hiiiiiiiii friends.....
i'll be updating part-6 by thursday.....a very warm thanks for ur comments...
plz continue with ur comments....... i really want to know who is reading this love story.... and of coarse i've to make a list for invitations..... an invitation of this sweet couple marriage.... may be next week..... ya ur rite wedding bells going to ring....... so plzz plzzz comment..... hope u all are interested in one of the biggest dream marriage........
ya dream marriage because it can't happen in real........
keep reading.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Ishanki,
Will wait for Thurs eagerly now..include me in the invitation yaar....do not worry will get some gifts as well.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiIshanki, just luv u to giving us beautiful monents to share along with u.HEY!!!Plz invite me also in long awaited marriage I want to attend this 4m both sides .U must b find me greedy,so, I am.nevermind.plz pm me
take care .luv u 🥳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
heyy ishanki..
sorry for late reply... as usual great part.. nice armaan riddhima moments... and dont dare to skip the invitation of mine otherwise otherwise......... mai bin bulaye hi aa jaungi ha ha😆..... plzzz yaar part-6 aaj hi update kar do na...... plzzzz.... anyywayzz bye for now.... plzzz post next part soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for ur comments… plzzz do tell me my mistakes…. So here goes next part..

part-6

dr. shashank house

padma: riddhima kya hua????

R: maa wo..(thinking how to start)

P: ab bol bhi

R: maa mujhe aapse bahut jaruri baat karni hai akele mai… aap plzz kaam khatam karke mere room mai chaliye….

P: kuch serious hai kya(little worried)

R: aap chaliye to phir batati hu…

P: tu chal mai aati hu……

Riddhima changes her clothes, padma comes in..

P: ab bol kya baat hai….

R: maa aap baithiye to….

P: tujhe hua kya hai???? Kyu aisi behki behki baatein kar rahi hai?????

R: putting her head in padma's lap…. Maa ek baat puchu?????

P: (caressin her hair) haan beta….

R: maa aapko aarmaan kaisa lagta hai?????

P:(puzzled at this stupid question but answered her) haan acha doctor hai… par kyu???

R: (not answering her question) maa professionally nahi personally

P: par kyu???

R: maa aap jawab do na plzzzz….

P: (thinking a bit) bahut acha ladka hai, hassmukh, helping, caring hai sabka bahut dhyan rakhta hai… baaki tum uske saath jayda rehti ho to tumhe jayda pata hoga……

R: maa wo bahut acha hai phir papa usse like kyu nahi karte… wo usse hamesha daant te kyu rehte hai, wo to hamesha sabke liye acha hi karta hai??????

P: hua kya hai riddhima???? Mujhe khul kar bata, aise hi paheliyan bhujati rahegi to mujhe kuch samajh nahi aayega……..

R: maa wo armaan aur mai… maa mai armaan se… maa armaan mujhse… maa wo…(nervous what to say..)

P: haan tum aur armaan kya?????

R: kuch nahi maa… papa ke aane ka time ho raha hai…..

P: (smiling a bit) tum aur armaan ek dusre se bahut pyar karte ho naa????

R: (mixture of confused,blushing,surprised,feared eyes)looking down then she blinks her eyes as to say yes…

P: riddhima maine tujhe janam diya hai, teri har cheez ko samajhti hu… tera uski har baat ko dil se lagana, uska dhyan rakhna, usko kasauli se lana, bomb blast mai armaan ka tera saath dena, ye sab dosti mai nahi hota na… tumhare aur bhi to dost hai maine to nahi kissi ki ko itna possessive dekha ek dusre ke liye….. ye dosti nahi pyar hota hai riddhima bachee….

R: agar aapko pata tha to aapne pehle kyu nahi bataya mujhe…….

P: mai tumhare muh se sun na chahti thi agar mai tumse puchti to tum har baar ki tarah mana kar deti….

R:(blushing,relaxed and feeling very lite, she thanked armaan for his words, if he didn't suggest her to talk with her mom then she must be in pain at this time) to maa aapko bhi armaan pasand hai????

P: kissing her forehead, meri beti ki pasand kabhi bhi buri nahi ho sakti………

R: maa to aap papa se baat karngi na……

P: haan beta mai unhe jarur bataungi….

R: she hugs her, I luv you mom….

P: luv you too beta…

Armaan's P.G

Armaan told everything to S.B.

B: to ab kya socha hai tune????

A: bii riddhima mere saath hai…

B: par ek baar unke papa se to baat karke dekho kya pata wo maan hi jaye….

A: par pata nahi mujhe kyu aisa lagta hai ki wo bilkul nahi manenge kyunki jab wo 3 mahine mai nahi impress hue to 1 din mai wo kaise haan kar sakte hai hamari shaadi ke liye….

B: par ammy ek baar baat karne mai kya ja raha hai…..

A: haan wo riddhima aaj baat karegi.. kal sanjeevani mai pata chal hi jayega ki kya hua…

B: bas phir uske baad hum shaadi ki baat karenge pehle riddhima se baat kar le phir hum sochte hai ki kya karna hai…

A: theek hai, jaisa aap kahein bii….

Knock at door…. (chirag enters)

Ch: (touching feets of bi) bii aap bhi pareshaan ho gaye honge iski bak bak sunkar…

B: (laughing) kaisa hai aur yaha kab aaya???

Ch: bahut badiya hu bii 3 mahine pehle aaya tha yaha par……

(after talking abt families)

ch: bii aapko armaan ne sab kuch bata to diya hi hoga…. Kya socha hai???

B: filhaal to hum riddhima ka intezaar kar rahe hai jab wo kuch batayegi uske baad hum kuch sochenge….

A: chirag aisa kar parso Sunday hai aur hamara sanjeevani bhi off hai ritu ko leke yaha aaja pure din ke liye……. Phir baith kar sab plan kar lenge.. bol kya kehta hai????

Ch: gud idea….. mera bhi office off hoga parso ko………

A:gudd…..

(they keep on talking for sometime then chirag leaves)

shashank house:

after dinner.

P: mujhe aapse baat karni hai ……

(Riddhima was hiding behind the curtains as to listen the conversation between his mom and dad actually she was very happy thinking luck is favouring them a lot, pehle friends, phir maa, kitni aasani se sabne hamara relation accept kar liya, koi problem nahi hui, aur ab papa bhi maan hi jayenge..... so she was very happy....) par luck hamesha favour nahi karta aur aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki koi bhi pyar bina kisi problem ke apne anjaam tak pahunch jaye.....
S:( closes his file,and sits before padma) bolo…..

P: (directly says) riddhima aur armaan ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai…… armaan bahut acha ladka hai.. riddhima se bahut pyar bhi karta hai… usse bahut khush rakhega…. Kyu na hum unn dono ki shaadi karwa de…..

(actually padma was very sure that at any cost shashank will't reject this proposal as he himself had done love marriage so how cud he deny his daughter's love…. So she told him directly, )

S: (almost in a screaming tone) tumne ye socha bhi kaise????

Padma afraid at once and not believing her ears…. (riddhima as if falls from the height...)

S: (cums down) padma phir kabhi bhi ye mat sochna… mai armaan jaise ladke ko apni beti nahi de sakta…….

P: par..

S: maine kaha na iss bare mai phir koi baat nahi hogi…..

P: par riddhima armaan se bahut pyar karti hai….

S: ye pyar nahi infatuation hogi, thode din uss se dur rahegi khud usse bhul jayegi…. Mai agle hafte hi apne dost ko bula raha hu agar riddhima ko unhone pasand kar liya to saath ki saath iski shaadi karwa denge… mai bilkul nahi chahta ki armaan ka saaya bhi riddhima par pade……

P:( looking at him disbelievingly thinking how cud he be so rude, for the very first time she is seeing this face of shashank) par riddhima se to puch lo..

S: uss se kya puchna hai mai uska pita hu jo mai kahunga usse karna hoga…

Before padma cud speak riddhima enters…

R: papaa…(almost screaming)

Padma trying to control the situation: riddhima tum kab aayi aao baitho na…

R: Maa maine aap dono ki saari baatein sun li hai, (padma feels little embarassed), papa aapne to decision hi le liya mujhe to ek baar bolne ka mauka bhi nahi dia...

Papa mai armaan se bahut pyar karti hu aur uske alava to mai kissi aur ke bare mai soch bhi nahi sakti….. mai kissi aur se shaadi nahi kar sakti……

S: riddhima armaan acha ladka nahi hai….. tum kabhi uske saath khush nahi reh sakti…

R: (lower down her voice) papa mai usse bahut ache se janti hu plzz.. mujhe uss par pura bharosa hai… aap ko bahut saari mis understandings hui hai….

S: bache mujhe tumse jayda experience hai mujhe pata hai ki kaun tumhare liye sahi rahega aur kaun galat….

R: papa mai aapke experience ki kadar karti hu par mai armaan ko bhi janti hu papa….

S: (little annoyed ) riddhima mujhe pata hai ki tumhare liye kya sahi hai kya galat…

R: par papa aap kuch bhi bina jane kaise decision le sakte ho…..

S: mujhe uss ladke ke bare mai kuch jan ne ki koi dilchaspi nahi hai

R: par papa….

S: (He cuts in between.. and in anger) riddhima bas ye mera aakhiri faisla hai next week tumhe mere dost ka beta dekhne aayega that's it….

R: aur mai kisi aur se shaadi nahi kar sakti papa ye mera aakhiri faisla hai….

( he raised his hand to give her a tight slap but padma comes in between)

P: ye kya kar rahe hai aap??? Riddhima tum yaha se jao….

Riddhima rushes to her room and fall on bed crying very badly….

She makes a call to armaan…

A: hellooo….

Silence on other side..

A: hellooo.. riddhima … kuch to bolo….

R: crying…

A: kya hua??? Tum bol kyu nahi rahi…….

R: she just said armaan…..

A: (understanding that she is not well) tum 10 min ruko mai aa raha hun……

Before riddhima cud speak he cuts the call…….

Armaan bii hospital mai emergency hai shayad der ho jayegi aap so jana… and he almost running in his night clothes…

Ok that's it for today….

Coming up – 12 at night, armaan riddhima together at chirag's house….

Pleaseee……… keep on giving comments…….. i'll post part-7 on saturday.....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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twas really gud..!!😊

update soon..!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its too good yaar... now how will they fact this turmoil... hmmm.. but yaar plzzz un donon ko alag mat karna...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nicd part ...........please PM me................thanks .......................cont soon

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